Poems About Rain by Top Critiquers
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Poems about rain by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PAR
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 3:22pm
18th Nov 2024 3:22pm
Complaint
Listening all night to the rain.
He stays locked in his brain.
Echoes of memories, a sweet pain.
Dreams wave in a silent chain.
Through the window, droplets strain.
Time blurs, feeling half-insane.
Soft whispers in a distant lane.
His heartbeats, a quick refrain.
The night deepens, grave's domain.
Midnight shadows, emotions drain.
Lonely teardrops, nothing to gain.
Yet his image still remains.
Love’s melody, a haunting plane.
Bound by sorrow, love and bane.
His soul calls out in vain.
...
He stays locked in his brain.
Echoes of memories, a sweet pain.
Dreams wave in a silent chain.
Through the window, droplets strain.
Time blurs, feeling half-insane.
Soft whispers in a distant lane.
His heartbeats, a quick refrain.
The night deepens, grave's domain.
Midnight shadows, emotions drain.
Lonely teardrops, nothing to gain.
Yet his image still remains.
Love’s melody, a haunting plane.
Bound by sorrow, love and bane.
His soul calls out in vain.
...
#art
#flowers
#healing
#night
#rain
51 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
21st Nov 2023 11:04pm
21st Nov 2023 11:04pm
primitive spirit
dance with me on a thundercloud
while the skies burst their seams
spin me across lightning bolts
as night spreads her wings
cobalt smudges bearing grudges
stomp the evening pale
leaving their darkened mark
as daylight meekly slips away
as flashes strobe through shadowed patches
touch my upturned face
kiss me
here
in the heart of the tempest
breathing deeply of my rapture
torn between the caution I've always practiced
and throwing myself to the wind
where gales wrap passion around...
while the skies burst their seams
spin me across lightning bolts
as night spreads her wings
cobalt smudges bearing grudges
stomp the evening pale
leaving their darkened mark
as daylight meekly slips away
as flashes strobe through shadowed patches
touch my upturned face
kiss me
here
in the heart of the tempest
breathing deeply of my rapture
torn between the caution I've always practiced
and throwing myself to the wind
where gales wrap passion around...
#rain
#storm
#dance
224 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 2:25pm
27th Dec 2024 2:25pm
~some night of a traversing highway chaos
the sweltering december hotness sun
consumes gritty astringent skinnish salts
in enormous gulping hunger of a famine
vacuuming emptiness, a fuming depression
of a puckering in sizzling hot desert, rises in
a rotting stench of bled out moulted maroons
scattered as a modern streaked out flash art
sprinkled with the sweaty deltaic tidal waves
in craving wide open rafflesia blooms in scents
of a pickled inner vascular.. severed as tidbits
..screams of an unquenchable insane violence
in firing passion burns to the...
consumes gritty astringent skinnish salts
in enormous gulping hunger of a famine
vacuuming emptiness, a fuming depression
of a puckering in sizzling hot desert, rises in
a rotting stench of bled out moulted maroons
scattered as a modern streaked out flash art
sprinkled with the sweaty deltaic tidal waves
in craving wide open rafflesia blooms in scents
of a pickled inner vascular.. severed as tidbits
..screams of an unquenchable insane violence
in firing passion burns to the...
#love
#night
#rain
#sensual
#sun
117 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 2:05am
14th Oct 2024 2:05am
What Is The Meaning Of Love
There are so many degrees of love, there is physical love, the passion that drives another to feel the heartbeats, relish in the presence of that special person, then there is emotional love, the love where you two bond, mind to mind, heart to heart, as strong friends between the opposite of sex may occur, yet never crossing the boundaries to engage physically, then there is mental love, ahh the cream of the crop for someone who is Sapiosexual, a love that connects the intellect of one’s mind, the adoration and gifts of muses who bestows the flattery of words, without the physical bonding...
#clouds
#love
#lover #rain
#lover #rain
333 reads
wallyroo92
Poem Published
24th Mar 2023 9:45pm
24th Mar 2023 9:45pm
Ode to Grey Skies
A Sonnet
I write to thee oh beautiful grey skies
Thou has blessed us with plenty of fine rain
Thine sight might be a pain to some sore eyes
Thus I pen this ode but not to complain
Every day thy clouds look a bit scary
Another storm forms filling us with dread
Local news makes us weary and wary
As downpours and floods are surging ahead
So I ask thee oh beautiful grey skies
Please listen to my pleas and humble rhyme
The drawn-out drought has come to a demise
We prayed for rain but not all at the same time
...
I write to thee oh beautiful grey skies
Thou has blessed us with plenty of fine rain
Thine sight might be a pain to some sore eyes
Thus I pen this ode but not to complain
Every day thy clouds look a bit scary
Another storm forms filling us with dread
Local news makes us weary and wary
As downpours and floods are surging ahead
So I ask thee oh beautiful grey skies
Please listen to my pleas and humble rhyme
The drawn-out drought has come to a demise
We prayed for rain but not all at the same time
...
#sky
#rain
#storm #sonnet
#storm #sonnet
228 reads
6 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
25th Oct 2019 5:27am
25th Oct 2019 5:27am
Gloom
gray skies summon pain
emptiness comes welling up
hunker down and pray
emptiness comes welling up
hunker down and pray
#depression
#rain
#spiritual
597 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 00:26am
24th Jan 2025 00:26am
how about I just sit here nice and quiet
old bloke in the bar says
I can’t go home in this weather, not with
my chest and this cough
but the publican replies
sorry mate, we’re closing
up and you can’t stay here all night
aye, says the old bloke, it’s
a conundrum, right enough ..
I can’t go home in this weather, not with
my chest and this cough
but the publican replies
sorry mate, we’re closing
up and you can’t stay here all night
aye, says the old bloke, it’s
a conundrum, right enough ..
#alcohol
#fear
#rain
#storm
#wind
38 reads
2 Comments
Metropolis
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 6:10pm
25th Jan 2025 6:10pm
My Spanish Seductora
I shall always remember
sweet Sophia from Spain,
in a backless, red dress that fit so tight.
In an erotic fandango, with passion intertwined,
on that romantic, rainy night,
over me, she swayed in a
seductive lover's dance.
Now, with the falling of
a warm, salvaje rain,
over me, my umbrella
entwines with the wind,
up and down, side to side,
bringing back the memory
of that rainy night.
sweet Sophia from Spain,
in a backless, red dress that fit so tight.
In an erotic fandango, with passion intertwined,
on that romantic, rainy night,
over me, she swayed in a
seductive lover's dance.
Now, with the falling of
a warm, salvaje rain,
over me, my umbrella
entwines with the wind,
up and down, side to side,
bringing back the memory
of that rainy night.
#erotic
#rain
#sex
84 reads
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 1:51am
16th Dec 2024 1:51am
retribution
these storms
held back
by
the sun,
wanting
nothing more
than
to give
all of its
retribution,
where
nothing
is safe,
where
nothing
is pure,
taking the
comfort away
from
the masses,
and replace
it all
with fear.
held back
by
the sun,
wanting
nothing more
than
to give
all of its
retribution,
where
nothing
is safe,
where
nothing
is pure,
taking the
comfort away
from
the masses,
and replace
it all
with fear.
#nature
#rain
#sky
#storm
#wind
71 reads
4 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 6:36am
19th Oct 2024 6:36am
F the Sun
Evil carcinogenic ball in the sky
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as...
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as...
#frustration
#rain
#sun
110 reads
8 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 7:05pm
28th Nov 2024 7:05pm
Raindrops
Raindrops
Mellow sprinkles
Silky soothing kisses
Softly balming wilted petals
Sky’s tears
Mellow sprinkles
Silky soothing kisses
Softly balming wilted petals
Sky’s tears
#rain
#cinquain
97 reads
InDreamz
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 10:14pm
29th Jul 2024 10:14pm
Sacred Moon
when I look up at the heavens
the moon, like a
sacramental bread
held up in the sky
with the divine hands,
beckoning me for a
spiritual communion
Let me consume you, O moon
sanctify me with your
holy rays;
redeem me from my sins,
for I'm a sinner
You are the body
of the divine...
Let in this Eucharistic union
the rain falls like the wine
and cleanses me with its sanctity;
You stay in me forever
and I in you...
for I am a sinner;
consecrate me,
O moon...
the moon, like a
sacramental bread
held up in the sky
with the divine hands,
beckoning me for a
spiritual communion
Let me consume you, O moon
sanctify me with your
holy rays;
redeem me from my sins,
for I'm a sinner
You are the body
of the divine...
Let in this Eucharistic union
the rain falls like the wine
and cleanses me with its sanctity;
You stay in me forever
and I in you...
for I am a sinner;
consecrate me,
O moon...
#moon
#nature
#rain
#redemption
#spiritual
275 reads
10 Comments
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