Poems About Rain Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about rain seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 11:43pm
1st Sep 2024 11:43pm
Rain on Water
Somewhere where it rains
is my hidden lifetime
where I'm comforted by cool flow
not hot stagnant air
i don't care
if I've been there before
I need to wake up to a new dream
where there is more
a foreign shore
where i breathe
with an ocean
kissed by raindrops
until it can't possibly be loved
any more
moonrise
covers her in a blanket of silver
I slip inside
and sleep
so deep
cresting waves and falling
breathing out to sea
breathing back to shore
is my hidden lifetime
where I'm comforted by cool flow
not hot stagnant air
i don't care
if I've been there before
I need to wake up to a new dream
where there is more
a foreign shore
where i breathe
with an ocean
kissed by raindrops
until it can't possibly be loved
any more
moonrise
covers her in a blanket of silver
I slip inside
and sleep
so deep
cresting waves and falling
breathing out to sea
breathing back to shore
#moon
#rain
#sea #StreamOfConsciousness
#sea #StreamOfConsciousness
210 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Aug 2024 12:26pm
25th Aug 2024 12:26pm
Let the rain be me
Girl I know the sun has gone
the clouds have come here all along
rain is your only friend
this storm never ends
I know that winter has a lonely sting
But winter soon gives way to spring
rain is falling tender
life begins with all it's splendor
I know your skies are dark & grey
and the rain comes down all day
rain can be fresh & sweet as I know you are
if you take my hand we'll travel through the stars
Rain is falling tender eternally
Let the rain be me
the clouds have come here all along
rain is your only friend
this storm never ends
I know that winter has a lonely sting
But winter soon gives way to spring
rain is falling tender
life begins with all it's splendor
I know your skies are dark & grey
and the rain comes down all day
rain can be fresh & sweet as I know you are
if you take my hand we'll travel through the stars
Rain is falling tender eternally
Let the rain be me
#lyrics
#motivational
#rain
#rhyming
#sadness
163 reads
8 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 4:50pm
4th Aug 2024 4:50pm
Desiccated
burning outside in
breathing in satanic dust
how I long for rain
pelting me with cold life force
hydrating my soul
breathing in satanic dust
how I long for rain
pelting me with cold life force
hydrating my soul
#desert
#rain
#tanka
119 reads
9 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 10:14pm
29th Jul 2024 10:14pm
Sacred Moon
when I look up at the heavens
the moon, like a
sacramental bread
held up in the sky
with the divine hands,
beckoning me for a
spiritual communion
Let me consume you, O moon
sanctify me with your
holy rays;
redeem me from my sins,
for I'm a sinner
You are the body
of the divine...
Let in this Eucharistic union
the rain falls like the wine
and cleanses me with its sanctity;
You stay in me forever
and I in you...
for I am a sinner;
consecrate me,
O moon...
the moon, like a
sacramental bread
held up in the sky
with the divine hands,
beckoning me for a
spiritual communion
Let me consume you, O moon
sanctify me with your
holy rays;
redeem me from my sins,
for I'm a sinner
You are the body
of the divine...
Let in this Eucharistic union
the rain falls like the wine
and cleanses me with its sanctity;
You stay in me forever
and I in you...
for I am a sinner;
consecrate me,
O moon...
#moon
#nature
#rain
#redemption
#spiritual
292 reads
10 Comments
ShaienneMachale
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 6:41pm
28th Jul 2024 6:41pm
Anticipation
I can look into the sky and notice rain unfallen
I can feel shifts in energy, a miserable calling
When you hurt, I can feel it from forever away
When you snap, it has power to ruin my day
I can sense when the feelings have begun to cease
When I can’t seem to meet your most basic of needs
My chest tightens painfully when things go awry
My only coping skill is to shelter and cry
I’ve been trying forever, I don’t possess the skills
I don’t know what to do, I don’t know how to heal
But I’m tired of running, it’s not healthy to cower ...
I can feel shifts in energy, a miserable calling
When you hurt, I can feel it from forever away
When you snap, it has power to ruin my day
I can sense when the feelings have begun to cease
When I can’t seem to meet your most basic of needs
My chest tightens painfully when things go awry
My only coping skill is to shelter and cry
I’ve been trying forever, I don’t possess the skills
I don’t know what to do, I don’t know how to heal
But I’m tired of running, it’s not healthy to cower ...
#anxiety
#earth
#LifeAsAWriter
#rain
#spiritual
120 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
7th Jul 2024 8:56pm
7th Jul 2024 8:56pm
beryllium
In the center of a hurricane there is absolute peace and
quiet. There is no safer place than in the center of the will
of God.”—Corrie Ten Boom
her kiss was not the dew at dawn,
her rouge no golden hue;
the spirit of the gentle faun
found here no xanadu.
she raped the wealth of pleasant lands,
havocked the caribbleau,
life’s peace accord, torn, in her hands,
her winds a wild tableau.
pillaging roofs and trees and boats,
her anger made a stew,
transporting pigs and cows and goats
far from their...
quiet. There is no safer place than in the center of the will
of God.”—Corrie Ten Boom
her kiss was not the dew at dawn,
her rouge no golden hue;
the spirit of the gentle faun
found here no xanadu.
she raped the wealth of pleasant lands,
havocked the caribbleau,
life’s peace accord, torn, in her hands,
her winds a wild tableau.
pillaging roofs and trees and boats,
her anger made a stew,
transporting pigs and cows and goats
far from their...
#environment
#rain
#storm
#water
#wind
165 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 11:15am
21st Jun 2024 11:15am
Before Covering Her Up
Michael looked outside
and saw that Nancy enjoys
dancing naked when
it rains before covering
her up with a warm blanket.
and saw that Nancy enjoys
dancing naked when
it rains before covering
her up with a warm blanket.
#fiction
#home
#rain
#sensual
#tanka
220 reads
2 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 5:03am
4th Jun 2024 5:03am
LATE NIGHT STEALTHY RAINFALL'S PASSING HEALING SONG (somewhere around 1989; San Diego, California)
some faint steady
rhythmic sound
gently rouses me from my sleep
here at three a m
compelling me to get up out of bed
with eyes still partially closed
to go to my nearest window
where to my hypnogogic
pleasantly surprised delight
i unexpectedly discovered
then irresistibly chose to linger
to more deeply savor
listening to the steady
primal cleansing hypnotic sound
of a stealthily passing
late night coastal storm s
trance like pouring rainfall
dreamlike...
rhythmic sound
gently rouses me from my sleep
here at three a m
compelling me to get up out of bed
with eyes still partially closed
to go to my nearest window
where to my hypnogogic
pleasantly surprised delight
i unexpectedly discovered
then irresistibly chose to linger
to more deeply savor
listening to the steady
primal cleansing hypnotic sound
of a stealthily passing
late night coastal storm s
trance like pouring rainfall
dreamlike...
#memories
#nature
#night
#rain
#spiritual
151 reads
0 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
30th May 2024 00:51am
30th May 2024 00:51am
LITTLE WET FEET (4-28-1988; walking in the rain at the AZALEA TRAIL PARK, near Fickle Hill, Arcata, California)
as i walk listening
to thoughts that come and go
thoughts which take
brief refuge
from this sudden
unexpected
gentle falling rain s
delicate delight
as it s countless
little wet feet
dance so lightly
so sweetly
so intimately here
upon my joyously receptive face
their happy free dance
of life itself
and upon the leaves
of all these naked
green plants and trees
everywhere here
surrounding me ...
to thoughts that come and go
thoughts which take
brief refuge
from this sudden
unexpected
gentle falling rain s
delicate delight
as it s countless
little wet feet
dance so lightly
so sweetly
so intimately here
upon my joyously receptive face
their happy free dance
of life itself
and upon the leaves
of all these naked
green plants and trees
everywhere here
surrounding me ...
#gratitude
#healing
#nature
#rain
#uplifting
135 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
27th May 2024 7:39pm
27th May 2024 7:39pm
blow me away
you are such a crazy butterfly
flying around and around all the flowers...
nectar on your lips.
nectar in your pores.
nectar in everything in you.
open wings,
windows side by side,
light curtains.
nectar on the windows,
in your wings,
uncovered.
you are a butterfly and I...
I'm flying around you...
flowers that wait, crazy!
flying around and around all the flowers...
nectar on your lips.
nectar in your pores.
nectar in everything in you.
open wings,
windows side by side,
light curtains.
nectar on the windows,
in your wings,
uncovered.
you are a butterfly and I...
I'm flying around you...
flowers that wait, crazy!
#butterfly
#passion
#rain
#storm
#wind
154 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
24th May 2024 8:56pm
24th May 2024 8:56pm
When The Small Rivers Overflow
In the deep little valley i live
centered within mountain hills
in winter the rivers flow
the flood brings lethal chill
The winters are no more boon
the summers too; no less heat
seasons frequently do overlap
they can, even in one day meet
An eerie area, an oddity spot
where today's sheep is morrow's wolf
and the morning is sunny and hot
the ev'ning turns cold like tomb
When morning is sweaty and dull
the afternoon is stormy and...
centered within mountain hills
in winter the rivers flow
the flood brings lethal chill
The winters are no more boon
the summers too; no less heat
seasons frequently do overlap
they can, even in one day meet
An eerie area, an oddity spot
where today's sheep is morrow's wolf
and the morning is sunny and hot
the ev'ning turns cold like tomb
When morning is sweaty and dull
the afternoon is stormy and...
#rain
#storm
#wind
166 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th May 2024 7:35pm
19th May 2024 7:35pm
Infamous colorless raincoat
Left with someone
in unison steps,
Silhouettes merged at nightfall...
colorless like your raincoat.
Echoes of shared laughter,
common memories,
fade into mist of a time that runs away.
Walk now in chosen solitude,
a return, a secret under lock and key.
The horizon keeps its silence
and the wind whispers stories with no dates.
He took with him secrets and silences
and the promise of a return that fades away.
In his chest he carries the weight of never,
and in the soul, the mark of a...
in unison steps,
Silhouettes merged at nightfall...
colorless like your raincoat.
Echoes of shared laughter,
common memories,
fade into mist of a time that runs away.
Walk now in chosen solitude,
a return, a secret under lock and key.
The horizon keeps its silence
and the wind whispers stories with no dates.
He took with him secrets and silences
and the promise of a return that fades away.
In his chest he carries the weight of never,
and in the soul, the mark of a...
#anxiety
#dark
#rain
#sadness
#separation
165 reads
9 Comments
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