Poems About Passion Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about passion seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
XiaoLong
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 4:19am
21st Feb 2025 4:19am
Alluring
a face hidden by a mobile phone mask,
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
#dreams
#passion
#romantic #sexy
#romantic #sexy
58 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 11:23pm
20th Feb 2025 11:23pm
Desperate for you
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sexy
#temptation
178 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 2:23pm
20th Feb 2025 2:23pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #2
In twilight's embrace, bats take to the sky,
Silent wings whisper, 'neath moon's gentle eye,
Sunflowers sleep, while stars pass by.
Nocturnal ballet, bats in shadowed flight,
Sunflowers bask in daylight's bright might,
Their worlds apart, yet both bring delight.
Bats seek the night, where darkness unfolds,
Sunflowers chase the sun's gleaming gold,
Opposite rhythms, love stories told.
Echoes in the night, bats' songs unheard,
Sunflowers sway to the sun's every word,
Contrasting lives, love's magic stirred....
Silent wings whisper, 'neath moon's gentle eye,
Sunflowers sleep, while stars pass by.
Nocturnal ballet, bats in shadowed flight,
Sunflowers bask in daylight's bright might,
Their worlds apart, yet both bring delight.
Bats seek the night, where darkness unfolds,
Sunflowers chase the sun's gleaming gold,
Opposite rhythms, love stories told.
Echoes in the night, bats' songs unheard,
Sunflowers sway to the sun's every word,
Contrasting lives, love's magic stirred....
#dreams
#erotic
#love
#lust
#passion
75 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 11:40am
20th Feb 2025 11:40am
Jump My Bone
#cars
#lust
#orgasm
#passion
#rhyming
147 reads
12 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 00:02am
20th Feb 2025 00:02am
All the gear no idea
#erotic
#lover
#passion
#sex
#temptation
138 reads
2 Comments
xinaskirt
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 10:30pm
19th Feb 2025 10:30pm
Torn apart, full moon...Part 1
#abuse
#conflict
#lust
#passion
#moon
150 reads
15 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 11:32am
19th Feb 2025 11:32am
almost forgotten languages on the surface of a stone
I spent the night with my fingers buried
on some keys, damn typewriter,
they don't speak my language.
I have an old alphabet and you probably
never seen a carrier pigeon...
I struggle with these meaningless words,
out of context, code words
that try to signify love, desire, oblivion.
What about the numbers?
Ah, those malevolent signifiers of time,
of space and how many fingers we have then,
on each hand, how many times they touch
every year of your time, every letter of your name...
Each phase of the moon.
...
on some keys, damn typewriter,
they don't speak my language.
I have an old alphabet and you probably
never seen a carrier pigeon...
I struggle with these meaningless words,
out of context, code words
that try to signify love, desire, oblivion.
What about the numbers?
Ah, those malevolent signifiers of time,
of space and how many fingers we have then,
on each hand, how many times they touch
every year of your time, every letter of your name...
Each phase of the moon.
...
#love
#passion
#PowerOfWords
#redemption
#romantic
63 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 12:19pm
18th Feb 2025 12:19pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #1
In twilight waters jellyfish glide,
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights...
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights...
#crush
#love
#lust
#passion
#romantic
66 reads
14 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 00:06am
18th Feb 2025 00:06am
Kisses
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
217 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 7:03pm
17th Feb 2025 7:03pm
KOALA ME
#erotic
#orgasm
#passion #seductive
#passion #seductive
130 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 11:59pm
15th Feb 2025 11:59pm
Slice of heaven
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sensual
#sexy
228 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 6:42pm
15th Feb 2025 6:42pm
MILE HIGH CLUB
#erotic
#passion
#sex
#temptation
#travel
126 reads
1 Comment
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