Poems About Nature Seeking Honest Critique
#nature
Poems about nature seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
bloom
the day awoke me slowly
with her vibrant vibrations, she lured me out of the sleepiness, of dreams
swaying in her energy, I open my eyes and look around me
trees utter wisdom
flowers in their beds, shook the dew from their dozy heads
slowly opening to the sunshine
while the day began her lessons for the day
shyness came to behold, the dawn
late for class, her mother admonished
the world is interactive, be kind to her she'll be kind to you
gentle understanding between a child and her mother
spark the child's imagination ...
with her vibrant vibrations, she lured me out of the sleepiness, of dreams
swaying in her energy, I open my eyes and look around me
trees utter wisdom
flowers in their beds, shook the dew from their dozy heads
slowly opening to the sunshine
while the day began her lessons for the day
shyness came to behold, the dawn
late for class, her mother admonished
the world is interactive, be kind to her she'll be kind to you
gentle understanding between a child and her mother
spark the child's imagination ...
#flowers
#nature
#trees
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More Than Nature
Give up on what is alien
It doesn't fill the void, falls flat
An error-filled comedian
Faults in our green- evil machine
My conscience is a three piece suit
A convenience amidst my flaws
The cerebral mask comes unglues
A victim displayed on your walls
Using darkness as perspective
Serving "black" when I meant "open"
A world which isn't adaptive
Muted on meadows of asphalt
Trees are meek, economical
Trading bark for symbols theatrical.
It doesn't fill the void, falls flat
An error-filled comedian
Faults in our green- evil machine
My conscience is a three piece suit
A convenience amidst my flaws
The cerebral mask comes unglues
A victim displayed on your walls
Using darkness as perspective
Serving "black" when I meant "open"
A world which isn't adaptive
Muted on meadows of asphalt
Trees are meek, economical
Trading bark for symbols theatrical.
#dark
#nature
#spiritual #universe
#spiritual #universe
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Foggy Morning
The weight of the air
Refreshing cool
Calming,
Like a blanket
Busy sounds of the early morning city,
softened
Breathing heavy air
thick with moisture
Soft light
Sky a diffuse pink
sunrise through the fog.
Refreshing cool
Calming,
Like a blanket
Busy sounds of the early morning city,
softened
Breathing heavy air
thick with moisture
Soft light
Sky a diffuse pink
sunrise through the fog.
#nature
#peace
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Fran the Blue Whale
Fran the blue whale
Known to locals and tourists
Reaches 180 decibel
Bigger than a T Rex or a brontosaurus
Didn’t know she had vocal fry
Same as my girlfriend a human
They use the “fry”
To put it in the pan
She uses it for something very different
Big blue whale like a small mountain
She’s 5’2 maybe 135 lbs
Shows that we are more same than different
Big blue whale deep in the ocean
Known to locals and tourists
Reaches 180 decibel
Bigger than a T Rex or a brontosaurus
Didn’t know she had vocal fry
Same as my girlfriend a human
They use the “fry”
To put it in the pan
She uses it for something very different
Big blue whale like a small mountain
She’s 5’2 maybe 135 lbs
Shows that we are more same than different
Big blue whale deep in the ocean
#evolution
#nature
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Full Moon Resurrection
Under the night veil
your white light reveals
the creatures that emerge in the dark
When I called the rite
it fills my soul with hate and fire
into the dark with pagan pleasures
take me with you to infinity
far from human decay
Infernal night by night
majestic
in the shadows
reborn
The beast is coming for the ritual
starving for blood and flesh
you always present hidden witness
exalting the face of the executioner
your white light reveals
the creatures that emerge in the dark
When I called the rite
it fills my soul with hate and fire
into the dark with pagan pleasures
take me with you to infinity
far from human decay
Infernal night by night
majestic
in the shadows
reborn
The beast is coming for the ritual
starving for blood and flesh
you always present hidden witness
exalting the face of the executioner
#dark
#moon
#nature
#night
#spiritual
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Wind haiku sonnet
The wind whispers past
it flows as it does daily
a song synced as one
Music in the trees
sense the melodies within
they play on and on
Moment of stillness
the message is always there
go see for yourself
Nature wastes no time
the sacredness includes you
the same as all life
Look up to see the mirror
every being reflects you
it flows as it does daily
a song synced as one
Music in the trees
sense the melodies within
they play on and on
Moment of stillness
the message is always there
go see for yourself
Nature wastes no time
the sacredness includes you
the same as all life
Look up to see the mirror
every being reflects you
#haiku
#nature
#SelfReflection
#universe
#wind
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Obelisks
Wintry tears drip deep
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
into icy, dark waters
The stream is endless,
as she came to me in the form of paradise
As I envisioned
I made a decision
Wisdom floats
as infinity awaits
#nature
#utopia
#water
#winter
#wisdom
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Bears
In the dense forests, bears roam curiously,
their heavy paws tread softly.
Ancient survival rituals.
Marked trees, scratched bark, sustenance.
They move with grace despite their size.
Instincts honed over millennia.
Mothers protecting their young, teaching them to fish,
climbing, seeking shelter.
But the world is changing,
the forests are becoming thinner,
the ice is melting,
the seasons are changing,
their habitats are shrinking,
food sources are dwindling,
invisible borders are approaching, ...
their heavy paws tread softly.
Ancient survival rituals.
Marked trees, scratched bark, sustenance.
They move with grace despite their size.
Instincts honed over millennia.
Mothers protecting their young, teaching them to fish,
climbing, seeking shelter.
But the world is changing,
the forests are becoming thinner,
the ice is melting,
the seasons are changing,
their habitats are shrinking,
food sources are dwindling,
invisible borders are approaching, ...
#animals
#culture
#faith
#nature
#spiritual
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Three Insights
Behold the lines of faded legacy
Behold the lure of false integrity
May your body be held as church
Linking sanctuary of mind
To birth memory in urge
Teething on your hearts golden shine
Behold the dreary glare of consequence
Behold the deepest gallows in essence
Before your bridge crosses over
Intersect the ledge and return
Endure your failures hereafter
Gliding seamless like a winged wyrm
Behold the fissure of lost potential
Behold those serpent fields celestial
Rage against the onyx black...
Behold the lure of false integrity
May your body be held as church
Linking sanctuary of mind
To birth memory in urge
Teething on your hearts golden shine
Behold the dreary glare of consequence
Behold the deepest gallows in essence
Before your bridge crosses over
Intersect the ledge and return
Endure your failures hereafter
Gliding seamless like a winged wyrm
Behold the fissure of lost potential
Behold those serpent fields celestial
Rage against the onyx black...
#MentalHealth
#nature
#SelfReflection #spiritual
#SelfReflection #spiritual
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By the water...
I'm not gonna drown myself...
the sun is going down...
the guy who gave me a ride...
is pitching a tent for us -
I'm fucking him for the ride.
I just came down here to piss..
Not drown myself.
I only tried that once.
Figured I'd finish what...
my Mom once started!
I got too scared. Flashback.
He's calling me. Tent's up!
We didn't exchange names.
Body fluids are enough -
fair trade for the ride.
I'll probably just lay there.
I walked miles today.
I'm tired. I'll play dead.
Or, I could...
the sun is going down...
the guy who gave me a ride...
is pitching a tent for us -
I'm fucking him for the ride.
I just came down here to piss..
Not drown myself.
I only tried that once.
Figured I'd finish what...
my Mom once started!
I got too scared. Flashback.
He's calling me. Tent's up!
We didn't exchange names.
Body fluids are enough -
fair trade for the ride.
I'll probably just lay there.
I walked miles today.
I'm tired. I'll play dead.
Or, I could...
#dirty
#nature
#sex #water
#sex #water
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5 Comments
Question!!!
Do y'all believe in speciesism? I didn't even know it was a concept. I know the majority of readers of this post will be non vegetarians and I heard two pov's- their lifestyle, their choice and second that it's a simple concept where we're hurting and eating animals. What do y'all think? It should be a concept or is it an annoying truth?
#animals
#nature
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The Masks Of The Deep
They say the pacific ocean is clean.
On the surface,it does redeem.
Whales,sharks as people fish.
The water looked nice and clean.
Like no evil has been there at all.
Like it was always clean.
And it never had its one big fall.
Like a fish does swim and a crab crawl.
We enjoy the sights of all kinds of fish.
Some endangered ,too.
The surface of the water looked clean.
But the human eye it does fool.
Because deep down,the ocean can be dark.
If you just swim deep.
And your sanity,you try to keep.
...
On the surface,it does redeem.
Whales,sharks as people fish.
The water looked nice and clean.
Like no evil has been there at all.
Like it was always clean.
And it never had its one big fall.
Like a fish does swim and a crab crawl.
We enjoy the sights of all kinds of fish.
Some endangered ,too.
The surface of the water looked clean.
But the human eye it does fool.
Because deep down,the ocean can be dark.
If you just swim deep.
And your sanity,you try to keep.
...
#flowers
#nature
#sadness #water
#sadness #water
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DU Poetry : Poems About Nature Seeking Honest Critique