Poems About Music Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about music seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:07pm
Yesterday 11:07pm
Singing in the Rain of Tears
Miranda
Fruits crown her laughter,
Rhythms bloom in vibrant hues
Carmen sways through life.
Sumak
Voice of mountains soar,
Ancient echoes fill the air
Yma's song transcends.
Maria
Voice like a tempest,
Passion pierces through the soul
Callas reigns supreme.
Rodrigues
Fado’s voice takes flight,
Soulful tides of sorrow swell
Amália endures.
Berberian
Avant-garde takes flight,
Cathy's voice bends worlds to art
Boundless, bold,...
Fruits crown her laughter,
Rhythms bloom in vibrant hues
Carmen sways through life.
Sumak
Voice of mountains soar,
Ancient echoes fill the air
Yma's song transcends.
Maria
Voice like a tempest,
Passion pierces through the soul
Callas reigns supreme.
Rodrigues
Fado’s voice takes flight,
Soulful tides of sorrow swell
Amália endures.
Berberian
Avant-garde takes flight,
Cathy's voice bends worlds to art
Boundless, bold,...
#art
#happiness
#music
#spiritual
#women
32 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 10:22am
11th Apr 2025 10:22am
A Vision of Metal
Long long ago before I became a SCATTERBRAIN watching EVIL DEAD movies repeatedly, I was ACCUSED of VIOLENCE on HALLOWS EVE. The DIRTY ROTTEN IMBECILES (D.R.I.) who always needed an ATTITUDE ADJUSTMENT lived near the WATCHTOWER. They agreed with my METHOD OF DESTRUCTION (M.O.D.). We were SICK OF IT ALL, POSSESSED in bringing this faction down to their knees. A CORROSION OF CONFORMITY was happening in our towns and on our streets. If any DEFIANCE came their way, you were FORBIDDEN to enter their SACRED REICH. There needed to be LETHAL AGGRESSION. A FORCED ENTRY into their METAL CHURCH. We knew...
#dystopian
#music
#peace
#scifi
#war
48 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 9:49pm
9th Apr 2025 9:49pm
Song Lyrics inspired by Muse Xx
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
In love
I gave you
Vodka
Lime
Mind
Grime
Out of time
Thought
Caught
Haute
Wrought
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
Make you mine
Even if ....
You're going prime
Medium
Rare
I stare
I don't care
Catch me
Report me
Slash me
Cash me
Flash me
It's a dare
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
In love
I gave you
Vodka
Lime
Mind
Grime
Out of time
Thought
Caught
Haute
Wrought
I want 2
Save you
Enslave you
Bathe you
Make you mine
Even if ....
You're going prime
Medium
Rare
I stare
I don't care
Catch me
Report me
Slash me
Cash me
Flash me
It's a dare
#crush
#lover
#lyrics
#music
#PopCulture
95 reads
23 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 3:40am
7th Apr 2025 3:40am
Velvet Knight
I wanted to be a better musician
But my insecurities had me frozen
I wanted to prove to myself that I was just a good
By my fear was making a fool out of myself
So I practiced and practiced and practiced
It got to the point that I could feel each pulse
Each rudiment felt like it was in slow motion
My skill had reached a new height
But still there was more to learn
It was when a group of us wanted to audition
That I again froze
I knew I had it in me
Just maybe
But now I’ll just never know
Instead I picked...
But my insecurities had me frozen
I wanted to prove to myself that I was just a good
By my fear was making a fool out of myself
So I practiced and practiced and practiced
It got to the point that I could feel each pulse
Each rudiment felt like it was in slow motion
My skill had reached a new height
But still there was more to learn
It was when a group of us wanted to audition
That I again froze
I knew I had it in me
Just maybe
But now I’ll just never know
Instead I picked...
#memories
#music
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#WritingPoetry
51 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 8:00pm
6th Apr 2025 8:00pm
~a letter of love...
(an inspired love lyrical from the fav ever #ActorVijay song link below .. from 1995 Tamil film Deva)
https://youtu.be/hxMKi90d7V8?feature=shared
1.
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
in those shape of words
had sent myself to you…
my love… love me
my love… love me
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
2.
my dear, the soil you walk
your path of foot… i will
revere...
https://youtu.be/hxMKi90d7V8?feature=shared
1.
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
in those shape of words
had sent myself to you…
my love… love me
my love… love me
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
2.
my dear, the soil you walk
your path of foot… i will
revere...
#admiration
#inspirational
#love
#music
#spiritual
92 reads
6 Comments
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 11:36pm
3rd Apr 2025 11:36pm
Union City Blues, what is a boy to do? collab with Poet Speak
There was something about Debbie
Her ripped tops
No bra
Pert nipples
Angelic voice
Punk salvation
Warhol elevation
Sold out arenas
All of us guys lusting
Not getting
But taking a Debbie look alike
Behind the bar
Fantasies
Hardons
Hand jobs from Sheila who had cheap beer breath
While Debbie drank good champagne
Would I ever dare
to whisper my name
across your shoulder blades,
too young to understand
the promise between your thighs
why there was a groin throb which ached?
...
Her ripped tops
No bra
Pert nipples
Angelic voice
Punk salvation
Warhol elevation
Sold out arenas
All of us guys lusting
Not getting
But taking a Debbie look alike
Behind the bar
Fantasies
Hardons
Hand jobs from Sheila who had cheap beer breath
While Debbie drank good champagne
Would I ever dare
to whisper my name
across your shoulder blades,
too young to understand
the promise between your thighs
why there was a groin throb which ached?
...
#music
105 reads
3 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 11:05am
3rd Apr 2025 11:05am
Playing The Piano
The piano's keys made a noise.
That sounded like a lullaby,a voice.
As the hand went through the piano.
And it played their own song.
The melody was serene.
Peaceful,and very long.
Everyone clapped as they began to play.
Everybody listened and began to sway.
May I play with you,if I may?
Or hear your song someday?
Figures began to dance in your mind.
Your stress disappear as you unwind.
And the music became images,illusions.
Real,or in your head.
They become stories,that people will tell when you are...
That sounded like a lullaby,a voice.
As the hand went through the piano.
And it played their own song.
The melody was serene.
Peaceful,and very long.
Everyone clapped as they began to play.
Everybody listened and began to sway.
May I play with you,if I may?
Or hear your song someday?
Figures began to dance in your mind.
Your stress disappear as you unwind.
And the music became images,illusions.
Real,or in your head.
They become stories,that people will tell when you are...
#dance
#happiness
#hope
#music
#uplifting
25 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 9:39pm
2nd Apr 2025 9:39pm
~ “cooooOOOOO-woo-woo-woo”
https://youtu.be/JwvuiTedQgw?feature=shared
starts in monotone
of just the beats of a heart
a humbly stylish pull off
from the retro disco times
comes the cynosure..
your incessantly spaced~ paced
shrilly cooooOOOOO-woo-woo-woo
(repeats in infinite refrains)
as if many one worded precis writing
of your lengthening ever poetic discourse..
wooing calls of...
starts in monotone
of just the beats of a heart
a humbly stylish pull off
from the retro disco times
comes the cynosure..
your incessantly spaced~ paced
shrilly cooooOOOOO-woo-woo-woo
(repeats in infinite refrains)
as if many one worded precis writing
of your lengthening ever poetic discourse..
wooing calls of...
#birds
#inspirational
#love
#music
#peace
95 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 12:04pm
2nd Apr 2025 12:04pm
The Guy On The Drums
The guy on the drums
was my brother. He
enjoyed the perks of
rock stardom until he
enjoyed the one known
as drugs too much.
was my brother. He
enjoyed the perks of
rock stardom until he
enjoyed the one known
as drugs too much.
#death
#dialogue
#drugs
#fiction
#music
52 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 6:50am
1st Apr 2025 6:50am
Lost...Somewhere in Time
Those late night tunes can get us lost
Somewhere in time
When the mind wanders into some forgotten places
Reliving moments briefly
As if they were just yesterday
Them lyrics can turn back the clock
And unlock memories
The details are ghostly caresses on the mind’s eye
Longing for just tiny piece
Just to ease the ache
The melodies can surge an energy
A restless fantasy revived
When “could have beens” burn like whiskey straight up
Going down smooth
To make the yearning numb
These songs can take you...
Somewhere in time
When the mind wanders into some forgotten places
Reliving moments briefly
As if they were just yesterday
Them lyrics can turn back the clock
And unlock memories
The details are ghostly caresses on the mind’s eye
Longing for just tiny piece
Just to ease the ache
The melodies can surge an energy
A restless fantasy revived
When “could have beens” burn like whiskey straight up
Going down smooth
To make the yearning numb
These songs can take you...
#memories
#music
#nostalgia #WritingPoetry
#nostalgia #WritingPoetry
89 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 11:25am
31st Mar 2025 11:25am
Glad To Have You In The Band
You're doing so great
on that guitar, Babe.
Your dad... the former
Aerosmith lead singer...
had taught you good.
on that guitar, Babe.
Your dad... the former
Aerosmith lead singer...
had taught you good.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#music
56 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 6:05am
29th Mar 2025 6:05am
Argonne Rebels
Go, you Rebels!
The summers of youth are a distant memory
Hot days under the sun
Endless rehearsals
Drill after drill
But at night under the stadium lights
The screams and applause from the crowds
Had an electric energy
Oh those must’ve been some glorious days
There is an echo that travels throughout time
The wall of sound from brass
The thunder of drums
Flags waving in the wind
Rifles tossed in the air
But what reverberates aside from the music and sight
More than the color and pageantry
Is the...
The summers of youth are a distant memory
Hot days under the sun
Endless rehearsals
Drill after drill
But at night under the stadium lights
The screams and applause from the crowds
Had an electric energy
Oh those must’ve been some glorious days
There is an echo that travels throughout time
The wall of sound from brass
The thunder of drums
Flags waving in the wind
Rifles tossed in the air
But what reverberates aside from the music and sight
More than the color and pageantry
Is the...
#art
#family
#friendship
#music
#tradition
94 reads
6 Comments
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