Poems About Motherhood Seeking Honest Critique
#motherhood
Poems about motherhood seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Having His Child
When my eyes came to rest on his firming heat
I knew my lips would follow.
His manhood hung confidently while gaining girth,
and I imagined the pleasures he must have shared.
When I knelt and tasted the saltiness of his wife's tears,
I knew I would have his child.
I knew my lips would follow.
His manhood hung confidently while gaining girth,
and I imagined the pleasures he must have shared.
When I knelt and tasted the saltiness of his wife's tears,
I knew I would have his child.
#motherhood
#marriage
#sex #betrayal
#sex #betrayal
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My Oracle Sacred Rites Of The Placenta (Part I of Part II)
Unto life that has been given unto the womb, a sacred connection between the divine, intermission of growth and development from embryo to a fetus, to the deliverance of man child or woman child into the enlightenment from the mythical of passage from the Heavens to Earth, in exile from the darkness unto the light of Eve’s disobedience manifested by life and death.
I will ask level-minded intellects a question, what are the gifts we get from the universe, when we are without guidance, blind eyes as looking through the world with the innocent of a childlike’s perceptions.
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I will ask level-minded intellects a question, what are the gifts we get from the universe, when we are without guidance, blind eyes as looking through the world with the innocent of a childlike’s perceptions.
...
#birth
#motherhood
#feminism #philosophical
#feminism #philosophical
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The Sun Has Returned
The sun has returned
I welcome its light and warmth
My heart melts at the life that came from me, and invigorates me
My house is now a home again
A part of my soul has been extended into other beings of light
Is… is this a dream?
I never thought I’d feel so… complete
Blissful, content, alive…
The sun has returned, and I’m eager to bask in its light.
I welcome its light and warmth
My heart melts at the life that came from me, and invigorates me
My house is now a home again
A part of my soul has been extended into other beings of light
Is… is this a dream?
I never thought I’d feel so… complete
Blissful, content, alive…
The sun has returned, and I’m eager to bask in its light.
#happiness
#love
#children
#motherhood
#family
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depth of love
soulmates
are a match
made in heaven
~
then we learn
to love
.
children
are the love
made in heaven
~
and we try to
comprehend
the depth
of it
are a match
made in heaven
~
then we learn
to love
.
children
are the love
made in heaven
~
and we try to
comprehend
the depth
of it
#love
#children
#parent
#motherhood
#fatherhood
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Lines...from long ago
I fancied the thing with which we begat
those two fine lads we held so dear.
Yet, written as vulgar, is your lovely twat.
But...the dictionary...is wrong...I fear.
This reputational status seems clear,
and thus I think the topic needs more chat.
Yes! l well concluded, with much thought, and beer...
that I will always fancy the thing with which you begat
those many, many months of looking fat...
and you endured the condition with good cheer.
Then, in your rocking chair, with you, they sat...
those two fine...
those two fine lads we held so dear.
Yet, written as vulgar, is your lovely twat.
But...the dictionary...is wrong...I fear.
This reputational status seems clear,
and thus I think the topic needs more chat.
Yes! l well concluded, with much thought, and beer...
that I will always fancy the thing with which you begat
those many, many months of looking fat...
and you endured the condition with good cheer.
Then, in your rocking chair, with you, they sat...
those two fine...
#children
#motherhood
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I Am You're Mother
I am YOUR Mother
Your flesh and blood, your family,
And like no other,
Until they bury me 6 foot deep,
No matter what the future holds,
And even know you just began to grow,
Just know you'll always have your mother.
Now Please understand
why I had to let you go
Pain was deep, he was hurting me,
and I was scared for you
hes not the man I once knew..
Now the damage is done,
I never wanted things to work out this way,
My little ones,
how...
Your flesh and blood, your family,
And like no other,
Until they bury me 6 foot deep,
No matter what the future holds,
And even know you just began to grow,
Just know you'll always have your mother.
Now Please understand
why I had to let you go
Pain was deep, he was hurting me,
and I was scared for you
hes not the man I once knew..
Now the damage is done,
I never wanted things to work out this way,
My little ones,
how...
#children
#motherhood
#family #IMissYou
#family #IMissYou
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Mother's Question
There was no time for pausing.
We were young animals following innate urgings
with little understanding.
Our edges blurred and melted through as
we gave ourselves to desires both pure and timeless.
When we became one flesh in celebration of our ancient sacraments,
our beauty grew beyond the sum of its parts.
As our songs neared their climax, I heard my mother’s voice ask,
“Are you ready to give yourself wholly to another?”
As I searched for a response, my lover’s trembling told me
her question had already been answered.
We were young animals following innate urgings
with little understanding.
Our edges blurred and melted through as
we gave ourselves to desires both pure and timeless.
When we became one flesh in celebration of our ancient sacraments,
our beauty grew beyond the sum of its parts.
As our songs neared their climax, I heard my mother’s voice ask,
“Are you ready to give yourself wholly to another?”
As I searched for a response, my lover’s trembling told me
her question had already been answered.
#love
#motherhood
#sex
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Midnight Lullaby
My midnight sun, you are the light in the abyss
You shine brighter than the galaxies and their ancient stars
I thank God every night for granting me my greatest wish
To bring you into the world and hold you in my arms.
-
My sweet child, there is wisdom in your gaze
Your pure essence brings a cleansing to the world
Let the cosmic light cleanse you of this earthly pain
Feel it sink into your skin and your soft curls.
-
Hush now, I will dry all your tears
While I draw breath, you will not lack in anything
Our hearts beat as one when we...
You shine brighter than the galaxies and their ancient stars
I thank God every night for granting me my greatest wish
To bring you into the world and hold you in my arms.
-
My sweet child, there is wisdom in your gaze
Your pure essence brings a cleansing to the world
Let the cosmic light cleanse you of this earthly pain
Feel it sink into your skin and your soft curls.
-
Hush now, I will dry all your tears
While I draw breath, you will not lack in anything
Our hearts beat as one when we...
#love
#children
#motherhood #rhyming
#motherhood #rhyming
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womb eater
a disease eating the womb
itching in your blood
crawling into the cracks
of your broken reflection
motherhood is craving
wrapping bandages against
a nonexistent wound
telling yourself it's okay
i'll be your pretty girl
that is something i can be
all that i am good for
my body will kill me soon
wilted ovaries, i can't
carry on this bloodline
i would never willingly
give someone this skin
i can't be a mother
itching in your blood
crawling into the cracks
of your broken reflection
motherhood is craving
wrapping bandages against
a nonexistent wound
telling yourself it's okay
i'll be your pretty girl
that is something i can be
all that i am good for
my body will kill me soon
wilted ovaries, i can't
carry on this bloodline
i would never willingly
give someone this skin
i can't be a mother
#motherhood
#transgender
#GenderDysphoria
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Mother's Majesty
Your wombs provided us with shelter
As y'all prepared to become mothers
Cultivators of seeds implanted by man
Lifetime suppliers of helping hands
Demands upon you must weigh a ton
Doesn't matter if daughter or son
You're one in a million and we love you so
To whom much is given; you know how the saying goes
You take life's blows as you raise us up
When feeling empty, you pour from another cup
Your sup serves up sustenance for the soul
To exalt your magnificence is today's goal
Tolls can be hefty on the roads...
As y'all prepared to become mothers
Cultivators of seeds implanted by man
Lifetime suppliers of helping hands
Demands upon you must weigh a ton
Doesn't matter if daughter or son
You're one in a million and we love you so
To whom much is given; you know how the saying goes
You take life's blows as you raise us up
When feeling empty, you pour from another cup
Your sup serves up sustenance for the soul
To exalt your magnificence is today's goal
Tolls can be hefty on the roads...
#motherhood
#MothersDay
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Terrified
No matter how well things are going,
I cannot be happy
while one of you isn't.
I cannot be happy
while one of you isn't.
#teens
#motherhood
#MentalHealth #daughter
#MentalHealth #daughter
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All my love, Max.
Sometimes I fear I am ruining you, that the way I am bringing you up isn't good enough; That I, am not good enough.
I am trying so hard, mi vida; I am raising you up from nothing but ash and gentle kisses,
And sometimes I just have to stop and marvel at the smart little girl you are growing into,
And remind myself that I am doing my best.
You may not have been born from me; your flesh, and blood is not mine; you did not arise from a rib bone, nor were you sculpted from clay and ash.
But you will always be mine; my little girl, and my little love.
They...
I am trying so hard, mi vida; I am raising you up from nothing but ash and gentle kisses,
And sometimes I just have to stop and marvel at the smart little girl you are growing into,
And remind myself that I am doing my best.
You may not have been born from me; your flesh, and blood is not mine; you did not arise from a rib bone, nor were you sculpted from clay and ash.
But you will always be mine; my little girl, and my little love.
They...
#motherhood
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DU Poetry : Poems About Motherhood Seeking Honest Critique