Poems About the Moon Seeking Honest Critique
#moon
Poems about the moon seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Ballad Of The Moon
I hear the moon singing a tune.
All very soon,in my head.
In my thoughts,in my bed.
I shined brightly with the light of the sun.
Warm and cozy.
As the moon sang her song.
The moon will sing for me.
She will glow brightly.
And set us free.
She loves us,just like the sun.
Orange,yellow in the night.
An eternal nightlight.
Shiny,bright moonlight.
And all it takes is a full moon.
To feel the bliss,happy,hopeful.
And you feel swoon.
I hear the moon singing a song.
And...
All very soon,in my head.
In my thoughts,in my bed.
I shined brightly with the light of the sun.
Warm and cozy.
As the moon sang her song.
The moon will sing for me.
She will glow brightly.
And set us free.
She loves us,just like the sun.
Orange,yellow in the night.
An eternal nightlight.
Shiny,bright moonlight.
And all it takes is a full moon.
To feel the bliss,happy,hopeful.
And you feel swoon.
I hear the moon singing a song.
And...
#moon
#night
#nature
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Nocturnal Tranquility...
Tucked within the Blue Ridge tapestry,
I watched, with passion, as skies of sun
and indigo kissed day goodbye.
Droplets of dew fell from the ether
to then be carried upon a chaotic zephyr
while I bundled around the fire.
As hues of muted grey painted the sky,
the moon made its debut in a pale,
yet supple form; granting the slightest mångata atop the liquid mirth.
As the cosmos embraced the lake from
the expanse of its astral plane,
I played voyeur; wrapped up in their moonlight reverie, and thoroughly
enjoying the cold, yet...
I watched, with passion, as skies of sun
and indigo kissed day goodbye.
Droplets of dew fell from the ether
to then be carried upon a chaotic zephyr
while I bundled around the fire.
As hues of muted grey painted the sky,
the moon made its debut in a pale,
yet supple form; granting the slightest mångata atop the liquid mirth.
As the cosmos embraced the lake from
the expanse of its astral plane,
I played voyeur; wrapped up in their moonlight reverie, and thoroughly
enjoying the cold, yet...
#night
#water
#mountains
#moon
#peace
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Canonical Hours
So often sought in twilit skies
are the arcane secrets there
when that luminous flux applies
to the billow surge it must share
with lunar lumens at their peak
and stars and planets in the mix
to play a cloudy hide and seek
as if a writhing bag of tricks
ruled the moonrise roost of beams
in threshold vermicelli waves
overlapping cumulous streams
cascading through the freshest graves
to squirm in some composting meat
long past the matins on repeat
for martyrdom at every turn,
in undercroft...or welkin churn!
are the arcane secrets there
when that luminous flux applies
to the billow surge it must share
with lunar lumens at their peak
and stars and planets in the mix
to play a cloudy hide and seek
as if a writhing bag of tricks
ruled the moonrise roost of beams
in threshold vermicelli waves
overlapping cumulous streams
cascading through the freshest graves
to squirm in some composting meat
long past the matins on repeat
for martyrdom at every turn,
in undercroft...or welkin churn!
#moon
#clouds
#mythology
#LifeCycle
#pagan
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Her Ghost
You were walking through the woods.
At night,searching,wearing your boots.
Trees all around you,no life to be found.
You walk a bit more on the muddy ground.
Suddenly,you hear a howl from a hound far away.
You froze in place,not sure what to say.
You expected a wolf,but found a girl instead.
Dark,blue eyes and you began to flee.
But you bumped into a nearby tree.
You looked behind you,thinking you are free.
As you fell on the ground,you saw her face.
She smiled at you and held out her hand in grace.
She helps...
At night,searching,wearing your boots.
Trees all around you,no life to be found.
You walk a bit more on the muddy ground.
Suddenly,you hear a howl from a hound far away.
You froze in place,not sure what to say.
You expected a wolf,but found a girl instead.
Dark,blue eyes and you began to flee.
But you bumped into a nearby tree.
You looked behind you,thinking you are free.
As you fell on the ground,you saw her face.
She smiled at you and held out her hand in grace.
She helps...
#moon
#night
#shadows
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Star Wars
The stars are aligned with my soul,
Mars as my fingernails,
Read this brail,
We seek and tell the truth,
Venus like a belt, this loop,
Is seldomly moved,
Neptunes a lace, placed inside the loops of my shoes like snakes when they move,
My heart,
Races hard,
Mars is my guard, come marvel and march with me,
Walk quickly to saturn,
Eclipsed to the masses this glyph,
Like a lantern burning pictures to ashes,
Risk is all i have,
My eyes on venus,
Rise like creases in jeans im neat what it seems,
We speak wit a meaning,...
Mars as my fingernails,
Read this brail,
We seek and tell the truth,
Venus like a belt, this loop,
Is seldomly moved,
Neptunes a lace, placed inside the loops of my shoes like snakes when they move,
My heart,
Races hard,
Mars is my guard, come marvel and march with me,
Walk quickly to saturn,
Eclipsed to the masses this glyph,
Like a lantern burning pictures to ashes,
Risk is all i have,
My eyes on venus,
Rise like creases in jeans im neat what it seems,
We speak wit a meaning,...
#universe
#moon
#stars
#evolution
#astronomy
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Selenolatry
When the moon is new and can nowhere be seen
close your eyes for a rose and gold colored dream
as a midnight mind interphase go between...
beam to lunar beam!
Then think of all the lust upon which they fell
in deep time evolution mating routine
to hone, forevermore, passion's greatest spell...
perfectly serene!
Therein lay eons of intertidal force
pounding away on myriad tropic slopes
in ageless hydrodynamic intercourse
showing us the ropes;
demonstrating the oscillations of love
by...
close your eyes for a rose and gold colored dream
as a midnight mind interphase go between...
beam to lunar beam!
Then think of all the lust upon which they fell
in deep time evolution mating routine
to hone, forevermore, passion's greatest spell...
perfectly serene!
Therein lay eons of intertidal force
pounding away on myriad tropic slopes
in ageless hydrodynamic intercourse
showing us the ropes;
demonstrating the oscillations of love
by...
#love
#moon
#night
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Haiku #15
The full moon shines
Reflects in the calm water
Crows are silent
Reflects in the calm water
Crows are silent
#birds
#moon
#night
#water
#nature
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The Harvest
Set not too quickly, oh dangling moon,
for we need effect of your soothing beams.
Treat the raging apes to some subtle tune
that lulls them into tranquilizing dreams.
With backlit nimbus, set care adrift,
to be marooned on some distant shore
or lodge it tightly in some comet’s rift
that it might not be found… forevermore.
Gild with ease the spheres where music plays.
Such overtures are all too lacking
at our clumsy earthbound soirees
where good taste has, of late, been slacking.
Oh, host that ennead, before you...
for we need effect of your soothing beams.
Treat the raging apes to some subtle tune
that lulls them into tranquilizing dreams.
With backlit nimbus, set care adrift,
to be marooned on some distant shore
or lodge it tightly in some comet’s rift
that it might not be found… forevermore.
Gild with ease the spheres where music plays.
Such overtures are all too lacking
at our clumsy earthbound soirees
where good taste has, of late, been slacking.
Oh, host that ennead, before you...
#moon
#sky
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The Call of The Wild
The quarter moon greets this first night of June
and in between some screens of breeze-borne cloud
it weakly teases out a nearby croon
that would make the most fervent canine proud.
Oh, call to the pack mighty neighbor hound!
Surrender to that lunar seduction
with your finest lycanthropian sound
And never spoil it with reduction!
Curse not yourself with thoughts of tranquil sleep
for the villagers must be made aware,
that tides during a quarter moon are neap...
or...of human sleep a dog just doesn't care!
...
and in between some screens of breeze-borne cloud
it weakly teases out a nearby croon
that would make the most fervent canine proud.
Oh, call to the pack mighty neighbor hound!
Surrender to that lunar seduction
with your finest lycanthropian sound
And never spoil it with reduction!
Curse not yourself with thoughts of tranquil sleep
for the villagers must be made aware,
that tides during a quarter moon are neap...
or...of human sleep a dog just doesn't care!
...
#moon
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4 Comments
Impossible Things
Like dipping my feet into a golden sunset
Or drinking the moon from a silver straw
I like to do impossible things
Or drinking the moon from a silver straw
I like to do impossible things
#sun
#moon
#stars
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Taciturn Lover
I confessed my secrets to the moon.
I spoke them softly as pages turn
in a book, their words overlapping on top
of one another, the way two lovers
whisper in each others ears. Lips tickling
with a trail of shivers left behind hot breath
on pale milky skin bathed in the moon's glow.
Leaves rustle excitedly as they listen
to the susurrus of the wind passing.
Crickets rub their lace wings together
in syncopation with the cicada’s tymbal.
Shutter bugs burst in...
I spoke them softly as pages turn
in a book, their words overlapping on top
of one another, the way two lovers
whisper in each others ears. Lips tickling
with a trail of shivers left behind hot breath
on pale milky skin bathed in the moon's glow.
Leaves rustle excitedly as they listen
to the susurrus of the wind passing.
Crickets rub their lace wings together
in syncopation with the cicada’s tymbal.
Shutter bugs burst in...
#love
#moon
#night #nature
#night #nature
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Selene
The moon, a radiant crescent,
A watcher in the night's ascent.
She casts her softness, a gentle glow,
With her ethereal light's gentle flow.
She witnesses the lovers' embrace,
Silhouettes fading in the hazy space.
Dreamers spinning their fantasies,
And poets crafting intricate pleas.
She understands their joys and woes,
Each soul she tenderly bestows,
Her presence brings a calming peace,
To those who yearn for sweet release.
A companion in the shadows deep,
A beacon of hope in the night's keep.
A puzzle...
A watcher in the night's ascent.
She casts her softness, a gentle glow,
With her ethereal light's gentle flow.
She witnesses the lovers' embrace,
Silhouettes fading in the hazy space.
Dreamers spinning their fantasies,
And poets crafting intricate pleas.
She understands their joys and woes,
Each soul she tenderly bestows,
Her presence brings a calming peace,
To those who yearn for sweet release.
A companion in the shadows deep,
A beacon of hope in the night's keep.
A puzzle...
#moon
#lover
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Moon Seeking Honest Critique