Poems About Men Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about men seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
17th Jan 2024 8:22pm
17th Jan 2024 8:22pm
Deep Inside
When you are inside a woman it is actually being inside another
With her having the title of sister, auntie, daughter, grandmother or mother,
“A personal gift given at that special moment just for you
To become oneness and bonded especially if she is someone new,
It is an honor to be chosen and welcomed into her inner embrace
To travel to that wonderland so enjoy being within that magical place,
“Respect the journey, because she might not even respect herself
And if you notice, do not sexually indulge try to provide some form...
With her having the title of sister, auntie, daughter, grandmother or mother,
“A personal gift given at that special moment just for you
To become oneness and bonded especially if she is someone new,
It is an honor to be chosen and welcomed into her inner embrace
To travel to that wonderland so enjoy being within that magical place,
“Respect the journey, because she might not even respect herself
And if you notice, do not sexually indulge try to provide some form...
#women
#men
#sex
389 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 11:25pm
16th Jan 2024 11:25pm
Women Ask Men to Scoot Over
Usually it's in bed
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
#women
#men
#dialogue
#sleep
#PowerOfWords
258 reads
26 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 8:42pm
16th Jan 2024 8:42pm
No Sleep
If the only way I have to keep a woman is by my checkbook
Then when she walks away in gold digger disgust all I can do is look,
“No sleepless night coming my way or my soul is shook
The only thing I will miss is her sucking dick and the meals she cook,
“I call it profitable addition, because of common sense subtraction
Because bitches with attitudes and bullshit always give me a negative reaction,
“Having them scream ‘fuck you CS’ and calling me a gay-ass bitch
A ho’s opinion, because I will never be a recipient of a penetrating dick, ...
Then when she walks away in gold digger disgust all I can do is look,
“No sleepless night coming my way or my soul is shook
The only thing I will miss is her sucking dick and the meals she cook,
“I call it profitable addition, because of common sense subtraction
Because bitches with attitudes and bullshit always give me a negative reaction,
“Having them scream ‘fuck you CS’ and calling me a gay-ass bitch
A ho’s opinion, because I will never be a recipient of a penetrating dick, ...
#women
#men
282 reads
5 Comments
KeithEdwardBaucum1
Poem Published
24th Dec 2023 11:26am
24th Dec 2023 11:26am
LUST AND GREED
LUST AND GREED
Wearing a veil of evil they gather together in darkness to join in unholy matrimony Greed and Lust. A union of sin with evil grins the groom and bride exchanged vows.
GREED: "I promise to lay riches at your feet and put power in your hands."
LUST: "I promise to fulfill all of your sexual desires. "
By the powers invested in evil the groom and bride kissed.
Written by: Keith Edward Baucum
Wearing a veil of evil they gather together in darkness to join in unholy matrimony Greed and Lust. A union of sin with evil grins the groom and bride exchanged vows.
GREED: "I promise to lay riches at your feet and put power in your hands."
LUST: "I promise to fulfill all of your sexual desires. "
By the powers invested in evil the groom and bride kissed.
Written by: Keith Edward Baucum
#women
#men
#humankind
141 reads
0 Comments
Oslynray
Rosalyn
Rosalyn
Poem Published
16th Dec 2023 11:53am
16th Dec 2023 11:53am
She’s Mine
She’s Mine
It’s been a few months
But I know she still misses me
I know she hasn’t moved on yet
…we’ve got way too much history.
She says she doesn’t wanna see me:
Blocked me on everything…
But ima make a way, you see…
I’m not giving up that easily.
Doesn’t wanna be with me.
Thinks she’ll find someone else??
I can’t even stand that thought…
It literally pains me in my chest…
Even though I’m not ready yet…
And don’t know if I’ll really ever be…
One things for sure…
One things for certain…
Ima...
It’s been a few months
But I know she still misses me
I know she hasn’t moved on yet
…we’ve got way too much history.
She says she doesn’t wanna see me:
Blocked me on everything…
But ima make a way, you see…
I’m not giving up that easily.
Doesn’t wanna be with me.
Thinks she’ll find someone else??
I can’t even stand that thought…
It literally pains me in my chest…
Even though I’m not ready yet…
And don’t know if I’ll really ever be…
One things for sure…
One things for certain…
Ima...
#love
#men
#breakup
321 reads
3 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
13th Dec 2023 2:44pm
13th Dec 2023 2:44pm
The Stutterer and the Blind Man
Mr. Walters is speaking to Mr. Forbes and he is stuttering.
Mr. Forbes is blind, so he relies much on his hearing.
He cannot clearly hear what Mr. Walters is saying.
“Is someone talking to me?” Mr. Forbes asked.
Someone who is standing nearby replies, “Yes, sir.”
“What is he speaking, Spanish or French?” He asked.
Mr. Forbes is blind, so he relies much on his hearing.
He cannot clearly hear what Mr. Walters is saying.
“Is someone talking to me?” Mr. Forbes asked.
Someone who is standing nearby replies, “Yes, sir.”
“What is he speaking, Spanish or French?” He asked.
#men
#funny
#disability
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
13th Dec 2023 2:42pm
13th Dec 2023 2:42pm
Mr. Gray and Mr. Nairn
Boss: “Mr. Nairn, how much is your taxi fare, sir?”
Employee: “Fifteen hundred dollars, sir.”
Boss: “Fifteen hundred dollars!”
Employee: “Yes, Mr. Gray, fifteen hundred dollars.”
Boss: “Isn’t that price criminal?”
Employee: “Fifteen hundred dollars, sir.”
Boss: “Fifteen hundred dollars!”
Employee: “Yes, Mr. Gray, fifteen hundred dollars.”
Boss: “Isn’t that price criminal?”
#men
#funny
#money
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Redamancer
Poem Published
27th Nov 2023 8:19pm
27th Nov 2023 8:19pm
Glowing
#love
#men
#gay
#erotic
#sensual
338 reads
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Nov 2023 7:31pm
27th Nov 2023 7:31pm
LGBTQ Propaganda Poetry
A certain social media platform supports LGBTQ propaganda poems.
I wonder if it also supports anti-LGBTQ poems and free speech.
A gay poet wrote, “You don’t fall in love with the gender, you fall in love with the person.”
This author does not have accurate knowledge of the subject.
I will not pull my punches, I say that line is a heap of garbage with a stench.
An intelligent person would not invent such nonsensical reasoning.
In fact, no individual exists without an identifiable gender.
The mind cannot give a person a gender of his or her choice. ...
I wonder if it also supports anti-LGBTQ poems and free speech.
A gay poet wrote, “You don’t fall in love with the gender, you fall in love with the person.”
This author does not have accurate knowledge of the subject.
I will not pull my punches, I say that line is a heap of garbage with a stench.
An intelligent person would not invent such nonsensical reasoning.
In fact, no individual exists without an identifiable gender.
The mind cannot give a person a gender of his or her choice. ...
#WritingPoetry
#love
#women
#men
#LGBT
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Wordsmith
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 7:17pm
19th Nov 2023 7:17pm
Men
Amazing men
Ever-blazing men
They go through dens
To meet those ends
Yes, I tread with classic men
Men who defend... those with less
Not them... who lay in bed
Till the clock struck ten
No, not every men
Just friendly men
Cos' men with messy heads......
I don't trend with them
I'm talking non-breaking men
Not lazyish men
Men whose hench....
's to fend off fiendish fiend
Ever-blazing men
They go through dens
To meet those ends
Yes, I tread with classic men
Men who defend... those with less
Not them... who lay in bed
Till the clock struck ten
No, not every men
Just friendly men
Cos' men with messy heads......
I don't trend with them
I'm talking non-breaking men
Not lazyish men
Men whose hench....
's to fend off fiendish fiend
#strength
#men
#friendship
#respect
#responsibility
159 reads
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mysteriouslady
Poem Published
7th Oct 2023 4:07am
7th Oct 2023 4:07am
Vik~Queens.....(Viking men in delirium)
Behind every powerful King,
stands an ever more powerful Queen
That bond, never to be broken
She is his only path
to his personal destiny
to be forever in united bliss
Yet he takes her for granted
Only selling his seed for those that spread
He will soon learn
His actions are not of those within how you "father"
but within those you teach, as you act
and the mother, The Queen, that is the most important role of them all...
For without her
the children would be run crazy
and the King would...
stands an ever more powerful Queen
That bond, never to be broken
She is his only path
to his personal destiny
to be forever in united bliss
Yet he takes her for granted
Only selling his seed for those that spread
He will soon learn
His actions are not of those within how you "father"
but within those you teach, as you act
and the mother, The Queen, that is the most important role of them all...
For without her
the children would be run crazy
and the King would...
#women
#men
#power
301 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2023 2:05am
2nd Oct 2023 2:05am
The Reason Why He Touched The Dial
Marty became so sick and
tired of listening to those old
songs on his dad's radio.
tired of listening to those old
songs on his dad's radio.
#father
#men
#cars
#music
#fiction
184 reads
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