Poems About Masculinity Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about masculinity seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
19th Jul 2019 7:39am
19th Jul 2019 7:39am
Misogyny
#men
#sex
#dirty #masculinity
#dirty #masculinity
516 reads
7 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2019 7:15pm
3rd Jul 2019 7:15pm
THE GUSHER
Not long after
We landed in that bed
We struck liquid gold
I’ve never built a tower faster
It’s a gusher
Ladies and gentlemen
And I will ram that rod
Up and down
Until there’s nothing left—
You can count on that!
We landed in that bed
We struck liquid gold
I’ve never built a tower faster
It’s a gusher
Ladies and gentlemen
And I will ram that rod
Up and down
Until there’s nothing left—
You can count on that!
#metaphor
#masculinity
402 reads
1 Comment
David_Macleod
14397816
14397816
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2019 7:18am
3rd Jul 2019 7:18am
Gender Issues (Haikus 15.0)
1. Crying
the men who shed tears
are weak and not to be trusted
or so I was taught
2. Alcohol
the men who don't drink
are iffeminite fairies
or so I was taught
3. Fighting
the men who don't fight
are simply yellow cowards
or so I was taught
4. Reading
the men who read books
up their own arse, the need punched
or so I was taught
5. Writing
men who write poetry
take it in the ass or mouth
or so I was taught
6. Acting
men who...
the men who shed tears
are weak and not to be trusted
or so I was taught
2. Alcohol
the men who don't drink
are iffeminite fairies
or so I was taught
3. Fighting
the men who don't fight
are simply yellow cowards
or so I was taught
4. Reading
the men who read books
up their own arse, the need punched
or so I was taught
5. Writing
men who write poetry
take it in the ass or mouth
or so I was taught
6. Acting
men who...
#men
#lies
#hypocrisy #masculinity
#hypocrisy #masculinity
433 reads
6 Comments
Demonkingfrommalab
Poem Published
10th Jun 2019 7:23pm
10th Jun 2019 7:23pm
Manhood
Someone once told me that a man shouldn't cry
That his worst demeanour should be read as 'wry'
Always sure of his next step in mind
Unabated by forces of any kind
Certainty, of every second's transmutable tendency
Steady as a rock ,Immune to any shock
Moving on forward ,looking over shoulders
The path to trod on,as far as the horizon,should have no boulders
That someone never told me how to face my fears
But just to bite out the pain and swallow my tears
That...
That his worst demeanour should be read as 'wry'
Always sure of his next step in mind
Unabated by forces of any kind
Certainty, of every second's transmutable tendency
Steady as a rock ,Immune to any shock
Moving on forward ,looking over shoulders
The path to trod on,as far as the horizon,should have no boulders
That someone never told me how to face my fears
But just to bite out the pain and swallow my tears
That...
#identity
#freedom
#masculinity
480 reads
6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
23rd May 2019 8:09pm
23rd May 2019 8:09pm
Preparation for the Pilgrimage To The After-World
Advance Life for Death....
Forward Death in Life....
There's no escape, & "really"
no tragedy to it all, other than
our flimsy projections of a
fairy'tale "life after death".
All great shit for mr. monkey'mind
to play wit, sometimes jumping
up'n'down, sometimes a circular
motion, scorned as if monk'mind
was not a product of me own buzz'brain
on display at the insurrection feast
for good men of limited color and
[exterior] motivation.
Wee been culled from the same crew,
so...
Forward Death in Life....
There's no escape, & "really"
no tragedy to it all, other than
our flimsy projections of a
fairy'tale "life after death".
All great shit for mr. monkey'mind
to play wit, sometimes jumping
up'n'down, sometimes a circular
motion, scorned as if monk'mind
was not a product of me own buzz'brain
on display at the insurrection feast
for good men of limited color and
[exterior] motivation.
Wee been culled from the same crew,
so...
#men
#murder
#heroin
#heroic
#masculinity
599 reads
6 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
25th Oct 2017 4:07am
25th Oct 2017 4:07am
America Has Been Neutered
Men used to be into guns and rifles.
(The Pilgrims used to carry muskets to church.).
Men used to have military heroes as their models..
They were knowledgable about military history.
But now its considered a form of "freedom" to be feminine (gay).
As men are giving up our military knowledge and guns,
our federal gov't is likewise cutting way back on our nuclear arsenal.
And like nobody even notices, certainly not the news media.
A male dog that is neutered is still male but can't perform.
Likewise, as we cut back on our nuclear arsenal, ...
(The Pilgrims used to carry muskets to church.).
Men used to have military heroes as their models..
They were knowledgable about military history.
But now its considered a form of "freedom" to be feminine (gay).
As men are giving up our military knowledge and guns,
our federal gov't is likewise cutting way back on our nuclear arsenal.
And like nobody even notices, certainly not the news media.
A male dog that is neutered is still male but can't perform.
Likewise, as we cut back on our nuclear arsenal, ...
#men
#masculinity
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0 Comments
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