Poems About Masculinity Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about masculinity seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Wh1skeySwagger
Swagger
Swagger
Poem Published
5th Jan 2020 3:29am
5th Jan 2020 3:29am
Since You Asked
A dreamer
A lover
Loyal to the core
A sheep Dog
A warrior
Still fighting the war
Lingering in my head
Those demons buried deep
Seeping from locked boxes
And stealing my sleep
A friend
An enemy
Which one is up to you
A lion
A pit bull
Holding on 'til I am through
I have trouble letting in
And even more letting go
Protector to those close
Nightmare to my foes
A person
A human
Trying...
A lover
Loyal to the core
A sheep Dog
A warrior
Still fighting the war
Lingering in my head
Those demons buried deep
Seeping from locked boxes
And stealing my sleep
A friend
An enemy
Which one is up to you
A lion
A pit bull
Holding on 'til I am through
I have trouble letting in
And even more letting go
Protector to those close
Nightmare to my foes
A person
A human
Trying...
#identity
#myself
#masculinity
758 reads
12 Comments
Demonikmc
Poem Published
30th Dec 2019 8:39am
30th Dec 2019 8:39am
Wipeout
#children
#teens
#heroic #masculinity
#heroic #masculinity
440 reads
0 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2019 11:55pm
3rd Dec 2019 11:55pm
Locker room rules (shut the f**kin door)
His genitals tucked out of view,
slowly his hand reached his hip,
they were all sure that they knew,
leaning in he puckered his lips.
Slowly his hand reached his hip,
they were all sure that they knew,
leaning in he puckered his lips,
the boys formed an orderly queue.
They were all sure that they knew,
leaning in he puckered his lips,
the boys formed an orderly queue,
he spun not feeling the kicks.
Leaning in he puckered his lips,
the boys formed an orderly queue,
he spun not feeling the kicks,
took...
slowly his hand reached his hip,
they were all sure that they knew,
leaning in he puckered his lips.
Slowly his hand reached his hip,
they were all sure that they knew,
leaning in he puckered his lips,
the boys formed an orderly queue.
They were all sure that they knew,
leaning in he puckered his lips,
the boys formed an orderly queue,
he spun not feeling the kicks.
Leaning in he puckered his lips,
the boys formed an orderly queue,
he spun not feeling the kicks,
took...
#TruthOfLife
#masculinity
428 reads
0 Comments
LokiOfLiterati
Poem Published
24th Nov 2019 10:34pm
24th Nov 2019 10:34pm
Pages torn from a hustler's journal: 1
What’s the real payday challenge is coming back to work again but you don’t see it unless you can see the paycheck as your golden handcuff. Every time you get paid you get convinced to come back and do someone else’s bidding, build up someone else’s company, serve someone else’s paradigm and be a cog in someone else’s design. Maybe there’s the hope of greater reward, some chain of value that you’ll ascend as you climb the ladder of merit and skill. But climbing the ladder of merit and skill means you’re more capable of doing whatever the fuck needs to be done, which you can do for yourself,...
#money
#LifeCycle
#confusion
#SelfDiscovery
#masculinity
562 reads
4 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
15th Nov 2019 4:56pm
15th Nov 2019 4:56pm
Presiding Misogyny
#men
#sex
#dirty #masculinity
#dirty #masculinity
742 reads
6 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
24th Sep 2019 1:58pm
24th Sep 2019 1:58pm
Rules for Good Men As Taught Through the Ages
no matter the current zeitgeist
a good man holds his tears
'cause ain't no pain can't be walked off
and a man, he's got to man up
and shake it off
and keep moving
'cause a good man is a man and ain't no goddamn sissy
and no matter how good or bad she is
a good man puts her first --
gives his place on the last boat to a woman he don't know
dirties his clothes and hands changing her tire on the way to work
gives her his coat in coldest winter
and holds his temper while she rages
and holds the door if she'll let him ...
a good man holds his tears
'cause ain't no pain can't be walked off
and a man, he's got to man up
and shake it off
and keep moving
'cause a good man is a man and ain't no goddamn sissy
and no matter how good or bad she is
a good man puts her first --
gives his place on the last boat to a woman he don't know
dirties his clothes and hands changing her tire on the way to work
gives her his coat in coldest winter
and holds his temper while she rages
and holds the door if she'll let him ...
#faith
#fate
#morality #masculinity
#morality #masculinity
441 reads
3 Comments
LokiOfLiterati
Poem Published
24th Sep 2019 5:51am
24th Sep 2019 5:51am
Gendered
Men and women are different and as well they’re supposed to be. Mother Nature designed us to be complementary to each other so that greater whole could be elevated. Humanity is a gigantic super-organism, requiring of polarity to shift its morass into the crevices of evolutionary pressure. Extreme awareness and extreme ownership. The most valuable contribution to humanity a man or woman can make is to be a man or woman, to be all of them as a man or woman. The natural order of nature and the universe has cause preceding effect, men leading women, predator feeding off prey, night following day....
#women
#men
#politics
#humankind
#masculinity
380 reads
2 Comments
LokiOfLiterati
Poem Published
7th Sep 2019 4:11am
7th Sep 2019 4:11am
Contrast
Slaving and sandbagging hard / Some days all I crave is a willing opponent, open space and a mouthguard / Other times it's rifling through archaic codices / Biting through lace bodices / Every caper graces my Odyssey / With hands touching my heart I breathe / When Loki of Literati drops naughty oddities / Cross between algorithm unlock-by-key / And spitting forbidden prophecy / Submitting the missing odds / Don’t model what I foretell / Just as well ego swells / When cats get educated but never learn to take the L / Spellbound hellhounds / I swore when I fell up / I’d swell my melon on...
#strength
#inspirational
#LifeGoals
#sacrifice
#masculinity
384 reads
4 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
1st Sep 2019 2:09pm
1st Sep 2019 2:09pm
Maturation Castration
Maturation castration spreading across the nation
Unrelentingly transmitting chants on every station
Frustration elevating 'cause my eyes are wide open
As I focus on the hocus pocus that we're all token
There are many broken boys pretending to be men
If we don't break this cycle then it will never end
They continually send the men on trips upstate
O.G.'s are being locked away at alarming rates
Society berates him for not being there for his son
Or daughters who already shopping at Forever 21
Sons are picking up the guns,...
Unrelentingly transmitting chants on every station
Frustration elevating 'cause my eyes are wide open
As I focus on the hocus pocus that we're all token
There are many broken boys pretending to be men
If we don't break this cycle then it will never end
They continually send the men on trips upstate
O.G.'s are being locked away at alarming rates
Society berates him for not being there for his son
Or daughters who already shopping at Forever 21
Sons are picking up the guns,...
#prison
#masculinity
376 reads
1 Comment
imogeequeen
Poem Published
20th Aug 2019 9:32am
20th Aug 2019 9:32am
A Man's Place
I am a strong woman
Standing tall
Take no shit
None at all
Six foot tall
In your face
Bold and brash
Know your place
Men of force
Sleazy dancers
Try with force
My pistol answers
My sensual side
Way down south
Only I will decide what
Goes in my mouth
If your one of those men
Egotistically cock sure
I will cut you down
As a man immature
Only gentlemen
Need apply
For the lovin
I supply
But hear me now
If you mistreat
I'll fuck you...
Standing tall
Take no shit
None at all
Six foot tall
In your face
Bold and brash
Know your place
Men of force
Sleazy dancers
Try with force
My pistol answers
My sensual side
Way down south
Only I will decide what
Goes in my mouth
If your one of those men
Egotistically cock sure
I will cut you down
As a man immature
Only gentlemen
Need apply
For the lovin
I supply
But hear me now
If you mistreat
I'll fuck you...
#men
#sex
#masculinity
664 reads
11 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
18th Aug 2019 2:33am
18th Aug 2019 2:33am
Man-I-cure
On the ends the digits five on each
For me they hold such preciousness
The conductors of our life
To lift the cup the erotic and the pure
That finger finger touch
Don't push that cuticle away
For each moon is saying stay
Be with the smile of my caress
A butterfly with winds so soft
The down of skin when clothes have dropped
Red quivers lips the silent gasp
Of extacy within your grasp
And hope that point will last and last and last
Drew out what you would freely give
A beckon to that inner place
The palmistry of...
For me they hold such preciousness
The conductors of our life
To lift the cup the erotic and the pure
That finger finger touch
Don't push that cuticle away
For each moon is saying stay
Be with the smile of my caress
A butterfly with winds so soft
The down of skin when clothes have dropped
Red quivers lips the silent gasp
Of extacy within your grasp
And hope that point will last and last and last
Drew out what you would freely give
A beckon to that inner place
The palmistry of...
#lust
#sexy
#masculinity
509 reads
0 Comments
LostGirl18
Poem Published
15th Aug 2019 00:22am
15th Aug 2019 00:22am
About last night.
He drinks at the bar
every single day
A thin, Indian man
who looks my way
His hair is a messy pepper grey
I’m very sure
he hopes I’ll ask him to pay
I take a sip of my wine
he says, “Girl, you look fine.”
The hours pass
we share a few laughs
I sit in his grasp
where he wants me to stay
every single day
A thin, Indian man
who looks my way
His hair is a messy pepper grey
I’m very sure
he hopes I’ll ask him to pay
I take a sip of my wine
he says, “Girl, you look fine.”
The hours pass
we share a few laughs
I sit in his grasp
where he wants me to stay
#men
#masculinity
756 reads
19 Comments
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