Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique
#marriage
Poems about marriage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SACRED PAIR
#marriage
#rhyming
#sex
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Billiard Ball #1
She's waiting on line at a grocery store
She's buying a few items for dinner tonight
When she pulled out her wallet, she dropped her billiard ball she carries with her at all times
It was rolling away
The number on it was "1"
This was from a pool table she had many many years ago
She kept it because it symbolizes a time in her life
Her husband was a very very nasty and abusive man
There were numerous times she was violently attacked & raped
Many times their daughter witnessed this abuse
One time in...
She's buying a few items for dinner tonight
When she pulled out her wallet, she dropped her billiard ball she carries with her at all times
It was rolling away
The number on it was "1"
This was from a pool table she had many many years ago
She kept it because it symbolizes a time in her life
Her husband was a very very nasty and abusive man
There were numerous times she was violently attacked & raped
Many times their daughter witnessed this abuse
One time in...
#abuse
#fiction
#marriage
#ShortStory
#violence
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STRENGTH COMES FROM WITHIN
They say that GOD, gives you no more than we can stand as he gives to his most, strongest soldiers no more than they can stand and tolerate. THE deepness of the pain that one has to learn, to deal with going through the chemotherapy. Yet the fact it goes to the deepness of the damage, that somehow slowly begins to rip into the skin of your flesh. As it attacks you mentally emotionally and physically and spiritually. For I say all this to say this 🙏 for all purpose it's important that we take better care of our health, and to get tested for CANCER. AS well for one will never know what...
#family
#LifeCycle
#marriage
#memories
#StreamOfConsciousness
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My Sensational Charlotte,
You are the nymph, with an amazon heart,
who bears my soul through the nightmare path
of all my myopic melancholy...
whereby slack Cupid no more nocks a dart.
Stupid Cupid; the pony with one trick;
ever and anon only offering
the phlogisticated lust logistics
of a mortal man with a high strung dick...
A tensioned instrument...doomed to ruin...
like the classical columns of Delphic mount;
haughty omphalos of the male mind
seeking the beauty it must debut in...
even as it crumbles in its quest
at...
who bears my soul through the nightmare path
of all my myopic melancholy...
whereby slack Cupid no more nocks a dart.
Stupid Cupid; the pony with one trick;
ever and anon only offering
the phlogisticated lust logistics
of a mortal man with a high strung dick...
A tensioned instrument...doomed to ruin...
like the classical columns of Delphic mount;
haughty omphalos of the male mind
seeking the beauty it must debut in...
even as it crumbles in its quest
at...
#marriage
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The Perfect Crime
They were married for a very long time
Minimal love for one another
Both daydreamed about the perfect crime.
A poor swimmer she was at best
He thought of submerging her deep
An expeditious agonizing death.
He enjoyed her cooking and anything she made
She thought of poisoning his food
Wild Mushrooms, drain cleaners or a can of raid.
One day they went walking on the beach
The ocean was violent
Waves crashing within an arms reach
She made a picnic basket full of joy
Pie, sandwiches and soda
She said to...
Minimal love for one another
Both daydreamed about the perfect crime.
A poor swimmer she was at best
He thought of submerging her deep
An expeditious agonizing death.
He enjoyed her cooking and anything she made
She thought of poisoning his food
Wild Mushrooms, drain cleaners or a can of raid.
One day they went walking on the beach
The ocean was violent
Waves crashing within an arms reach
She made a picnic basket full of joy
Pie, sandwiches and soda
She said to...
#death
#food
#marriage
#rhyming
#tragedy
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Catheterization
How freely swing once studly cocks
through arcs of newfound impotence.
Once kings of cum precipitance
now dangling like spent Christmas socks
whose love must now be far beyond
the caliber of bursting loads
and all tumescence which forebodes
those viscid darts her beauty...spawned...
before reverse insertion stress
where implantation shouldn't be
due to how Cupid has to pee
when his bladder begins to press
even as his crotch is wrecked...
because he had his prostate checked.
through arcs of newfound impotence.
Once kings of cum precipitance
now dangling like spent Christmas socks
whose love must now be far beyond
the caliber of bursting loads
and all tumescence which forebodes
those viscid darts her beauty...spawned...
before reverse insertion stress
where implantation shouldn't be
due to how Cupid has to pee
when his bladder begins to press
even as his crotch is wrecked...
because he had his prostate checked.
#crush
#marriage
#sex
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I Guess Wishes Do Come True
They've been married for years
Both nearing 50 years of age
They despise each other more then they love
Many times they argue or fight, it's over petty things
They come together in the evening to watch some TV
Then it's off to bed
Most of their life it's the same old thing
Last night was like many other nights
The TV was turned on
He was looking for a film to watch
The last day or so, the air was cool outside
Instead of turning the air condition on, he decided to open the window halfway
He loved the feeling of that crisp,...
Both nearing 50 years of age
They despise each other more then they love
Many times they argue or fight, it's over petty things
They come together in the evening to watch some TV
Then it's off to bed
Most of their life it's the same old thing
Last night was like many other nights
The TV was turned on
He was looking for a film to watch
The last day or so, the air was cool outside
Instead of turning the air condition on, he decided to open the window halfway
He loved the feeling of that crisp,...
#anger
#conflict
#dreams
#hate
#marriage
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Easier to turn away
Why don't you read me
Can't you see I'm not happy
Go on, ignore me
Can't you see I'm not happy
Go on, ignore me
#haiku
#marriage
#relationships #sadness
#relationships #sadness
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Wedding Ceremony for a Friend
Presider: You may now say your vows to one another, affirming your individual wills in the presence of these witnesses.
Angela: Let the paths that have led us to this moment be recognized as sacred to our own narratives. In the name of our personal gods—reason, passion, and liberty—I vow to honor our union as a testament to our individual journeys and shared future.
Dan: In the presence of these witnesses, I pledge myself to you. Forsaking all others, I commit to the pursuit of our mutual happiness, fulfillment, and the exploration of life's carnal and intellectual...
Angela: Let the paths that have led us to this moment be recognized as sacred to our own narratives. In the name of our personal gods—reason, passion, and liberty—I vow to honor our union as a testament to our individual journeys and shared future.
Dan: In the presence of these witnesses, I pledge myself to you. Forsaking all others, I commit to the pursuit of our mutual happiness, fulfillment, and the exploration of life's carnal and intellectual...
#marriage
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Forsaking All Others
Forsaking All Others
Their handmade gifts were given in fear and joy
by young souls filled with lust and hope for a future.
Oh, what pleasures they found in the use of these gifts!
As imperfect hearts broke over time, they found pleasure in
giving and receiving freely, but now come to a
place of commitment, sealed in in vows of fidelity.
But the camera seems to have caught the hesitance she feels.
Even in this moment of celebration her heart hints at discontent
and she wonderers if one love is enough for bigness of...
Their handmade gifts were given in fear and joy
by young souls filled with lust and hope for a future.
Oh, what pleasures they found in the use of these gifts!
As imperfect hearts broke over time, they found pleasure in
giving and receiving freely, but now come to a
place of commitment, sealed in in vows of fidelity.
But the camera seems to have caught the hesitance she feels.
Even in this moment of celebration her heart hints at discontent
and she wonderers if one love is enough for bigness of...
#lust
#marriage
#sex
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Still, She Smiles
She smiles silently from his bedside table like
a shrine to the woman who grounds his life.
Her face is that of a wife and mother who has
known hardships and illness but continued to love.
She smiles silently from his bedside table
as the sound of our bodies fill the room.
Can she know it is body against body again and again.
Does she hear the soft shuffling of sheets
and muffled whispers of a woman she’s never met?
I’m afraid to speak, certain that she will hear.
Still, she smiles.
a shrine to the woman who grounds his life.
Her face is that of a wife and mother who has
known hardships and illness but continued to love.
She smiles silently from his bedside table
as the sound of our bodies fill the room.
Can she know it is body against body again and again.
Does she hear the soft shuffling of sheets
and muffled whispers of a woman she’s never met?
I’m afraid to speak, certain that she will hear.
Still, she smiles.
#betrayal
#lust
#marriage
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Lady in Red
#lust
#marriage
#sex
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DU Poetry : Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique