Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique
#marriage
Poems about marriage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vows for a Second Marriage
We gather today under the vast canopy of the universe to celebrate a new commitment between Jennifer and Herald. They stand before us as two of creation's happenstance.
As we share the joy of their union, let us acknowledge the rich experiences that have shaped them. They bring with them memories of their childhood, education, and environment. Let us be honest and acknowledge that they also bring memories of lovers, treasured without regret, as they now embark on a journey to forge a new and deeper love together. Let us encourage them to be enthralled by each other’s beauty, to...
As we share the joy of their union, let us acknowledge the rich experiences that have shaped them. They bring with them memories of their childhood, education, and environment. Let us be honest and acknowledge that they also bring memories of lovers, treasured without regret, as they now embark on a journey to forge a new and deeper love together. Let us encourage them to be enthralled by each other’s beauty, to...
#love
#marriage
#memories
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Roadkill Haiku
If an ex is hit
by a truck, is that road-kill?
-- asking for a friend....
by a truck, is that road-kill?
-- asking for a friend....
#marriage
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old couple in a restaurant
she tucked her legs under the table
and said what do you fancy
you of course he said but never mind that now
I’m just so bloody hungry
and said what do you fancy
you of course he said but never mind that now
I’m just so bloody hungry
#aging
#food
#love #marriage
#love #marriage
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Connubiality
The male of the species stinks of pride
and that is just no way to go through life
when humility may just fetch a wife
whose thoracic glory can't be denied...
but of greater value is her rare mind
and a psyche with much to recommend
through the evolution of friend on friend
in the logistics of the marriage grind.
And just how might we place a value on that
when folks are so hung up on the dollar
as the major misery forestaller
in a man's search for where to hang his hat?
Fret no more about a lottery win
when a happy...
and that is just no way to go through life
when humility may just fetch a wife
whose thoracic glory can't be denied...
but of greater value is her rare mind
and a psyche with much to recommend
through the evolution of friend on friend
in the logistics of the marriage grind.
And just how might we place a value on that
when folks are so hung up on the dollar
as the major misery forestaller
in a man's search for where to hang his hat?
Fret no more about a lottery win
when a happy...
#marriage
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Another World Away
As April's fingers curled around the stem of her wine glass, a delicate dance of trepidation raced in her mind. The rich red liquid swirled, catching the light, and with each gentle sip, she felt the warmth of the wine spread through her, like a secret being whispered from her lips down to her core.
April was short, no more than 5-feet with dark shoulder-length hair parted to one side. She wore black-rimmed glasses that seemed a size too large for her face. Her face was clear and pale with hardly any makeup. She wore a full-sleeved knee-length dress that made her look like a...
April was short, no more than 5-feet with dark shoulder-length hair parted to one side. She wore black-rimmed glasses that seemed a size too large for her face. Her face was clear and pale with hardly any makeup. She wore a full-sleeved knee-length dress that made her look like a...
#betrayal
#Christian
#lust #marriage
#lust #marriage
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Always And Forever
#love
#lust
#marriage #passion
#marriage #passion
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Marriage of Elders
Here before us stand two souls, their hair glistening like threads of moonlight, each strand a testament to the knowledge and serenity earned through the years. Their voices, rich with the timbre of experience, echo the depths of life's embrace—joys and struggles of life formed into beautiful people still able to dance.
With love's fire yet untamed, as they join hands, we are reminded that the fire of love knows no age—it dances in the hearts of the young and the old with equal fervor. Their wisdom, a beacon of light, guides them in their journey together.
Tonight,...
With love's fire yet untamed, as they join hands, we are reminded that the fire of love knows no age—it dances in the hearts of the young and the old with equal fervor. Their wisdom, a beacon of light, guides them in their journey together.
Tonight,...
#aging
#love
#marriage
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COME TO ME NAKED
#erotic
#marriage
#respect
#romantic
#sex
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FOREPLAY IS AROUSING
Foreplay is arousing -
of heat not for dousing -
in the act of spousing
in marital housing.
of heat not for dousing -
in the act of spousing
in marital housing.
#erotic
#marriage
#seductive
#sensual
#sex
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Man
Man, the softness of your presence
like rain that awakens the aroma of the earth.
Your essence penetrates deeply
in the roots of my soul, nourishing.
The days are adorned by your scrumptious joy
where every moment shared is a feast for the spirit.
You are the warmth of the sun on winter days
a beacon guiding through the darkness.
You dwell in me not as a guest
but as an integral part of who I am.
Your smiles echo in my memories
drawing serene landscapes in my thoughts.
You are the calm in the chaos, the gentle...
like rain that awakens the aroma of the earth.
Your essence penetrates deeply
in the roots of my soul, nourishing.
The days are adorned by your scrumptious joy
where every moment shared is a feast for the spirit.
You are the warmth of the sun on winter days
a beacon guiding through the darkness.
You dwell in me not as a guest
but as an integral part of who I am.
Your smiles echo in my memories
drawing serene landscapes in my thoughts.
You are the calm in the chaos, the gentle...
#husband
#love
#marriage
#men
#mirror
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On The One Party Night Before The Wedding
Have I got a story for you!
While the rest of the
gang were splashing
around in the water,
Skylar turned towards
the bonfire on the beach.
She became shocked
at the sight of her fiancé
Ryan naked and probing
her maid of honor whose
name was Wilhelmina.
While the rest of the
gang were splashing
around in the water,
Skylar turned towards
the bonfire on the beach.
She became shocked
at the sight of her fiancé
Ryan naked and probing
her maid of honor whose
name was Wilhelmina.
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#marriage
#sex
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An eye for a tooth
After an intense game of Chutes & Ladders, Mary hailed victorious over Gary
As everyone knows, Gary is a huge sore loser
He also had one to many drinks that evening
Mary decided to showboat a bit
The showboating was in Gary's face
He didn't like this one bit
He told Mary to back off
She wouldn't listen
With an unexpected scream, Gary slugged her twice in the mouth, knocking a tooth out of her mouth
He then said, "See, you don't need that dentist visit after all. I helped you out."
Mary said crying and upset, "That wasn't the...
As everyone knows, Gary is a huge sore loser
He also had one to many drinks that evening
Mary decided to showboat a bit
The showboating was in Gary's face
He didn't like this one bit
He told Mary to back off
She wouldn't listen
With an unexpected scream, Gary slugged her twice in the mouth, knocking a tooth out of her mouth
He then said, "See, you don't need that dentist visit after all. I helped you out."
Mary said crying and upset, "That wasn't the...
#fiction
#horror
#marriage
#ShortStory
#violence
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DU Poetry : Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique