Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique
#marriage
Poems about marriage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Carol Went Looking For Greg
Carol went looking for Greg.
They were supposed to get married today.
He's found humping chicks on the beach.
She ran away while crying.
They were supposed to get married today.
He's found humping chicks on the beach.
She ran away while crying.
#beach
#betrayal
#fiction
#marriage
#sex
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Awkward Anniversary
Celebrated for over thirty
years
flowers, gifts, cake, candles, and song
now moved out, moving on
estranged are we
after sharing our lives for so long
nearly a third of a ce
ntury
Now that she's gone but not not gone
our dissolution not carved in stone
still she visits our home
bonding with our adult kids,
living under my roof
toward me silent and aloof
pretending I'm invisible
Happy birthday to the lady,
formerly known as sweetheart.
years
flowers, gifts, cake, candles, and song
now moved out, moving on
estranged are we
after sharing our lives for so long
nearly a third of a ce
ntury
Now that she's gone but not not gone
our dissolution not carved in stone
still she visits our home
bonding with our adult kids,
living under my roof
toward me silent and aloof
pretending I'm invisible
Happy birthday to the lady,
formerly known as sweetheart.
#breakup
#marriage
#separation
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Marriage Stuff
We come and go
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
#love
#marriage
#philosophical
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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She loves the taste of scrotum

#dirty
#food
#marriage
#orgasm
#wife
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And They're Not Even Married Yet
What's wrong with Kristanna yesterday?
You remember Patrick's bachelor party. Right, Sally?
It was at Caesars Palace.
Bingo. Anyway, she caught him with Heidi.
The groom humping her maid of honor?!
You remember Patrick's bachelor party. Right, Sally?
It was at Caesars Palace.
Bingo. Anyway, she caught him with Heidi.
The groom humping her maid of honor?!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#marriage
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Why Is The Wedding Off?
Why is the wedding off?
Sarah had done something behind Josh's back.
What would that be, David?
You remember the Hustler Club?
Sure. We had Josh's bachelor party there.
Where Sarah is the... entertainment?
Could you be more specific?
Lynda said Sarah did it for money.
And Josh went ballistic anyway?
You got that right, Roy.
That's just freaking great. Any more goodies?
Sarah's dad promised Josh something.
A job at that electronics firm. Right?
Not anymore... after what Sarah had pulled.
Sarah had done something behind Josh's back.
What would that be, David?
You remember the Hustler Club?
Sure. We had Josh's bachelor party there.
Where Sarah is the... entertainment?
Could you be more specific?
Lynda said Sarah did it for money.
And Josh went ballistic anyway?
You got that right, Roy.
That's just freaking great. Any more goodies?
Sarah's dad promised Josh something.
A job at that electronics firm. Right?
Not anymore... after what Sarah had pulled.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#marriage
#sex
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Nitid Together
I'd like to fly a mylar kite
of argent spar and silken string
in lunar zenith moonbeam flight
and watch its tinsel tail fling
a scintillation here and there
upon a clear and breezy night
of scintillation friendly air
astir in angel wing delight.
And by such a heaven as this
hearts would sigh in midsummer bliss
or seek another balmy kiss
in some romantic genesis...
where rekindled honeymoon love,
might scintillate...more than above!
of argent spar and silken string
in lunar zenith moonbeam flight
and watch its tinsel tail fling
a scintillation here and there
upon a clear and breezy night
of scintillation friendly air
astir in angel wing delight.
And by such a heaven as this
hearts would sigh in midsummer bliss
or seek another balmy kiss
in some romantic genesis...
where rekindled honeymoon love,
might scintillate...more than above!
#marriage
#moon
#sky #wind
#sky #wind
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A Vow of Devotion - for a friend's marriage ceremony
In the hush of this cherished night,
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
#marriage
#nature
#sex
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marriage
they were having a row
what do you take me for
ever, he said, and you can take me
as you find me
not so clever
I won’t disagree anymore
but we need to get married
right now ..
what do you take me for
ever, he said, and you can take me
as you find me
not so clever
I won’t disagree anymore
but we need to get married
right now ..
#marriage
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Love and War
How are we so far apart in this bed?
Sleeping with venom in our hearts
Tension fills the room when we’re together
It’s love and war between us
Since when did we become enemies?
Fighting on opposite sides
Two atomic bombs ready to explode
The battle line was drawn when the arguments lingered long after malicious words were spewed
Like a gunshot what’s said can’t be taken back
The wound stays hidden under layers of resentment
Building like mold until it festers over the foundation we’ve made
What remains is similar to a war torn...
Sleeping with venom in our hearts
Tension fills the room when we’re together
It’s love and war between us
Since when did we become enemies?
Fighting on opposite sides
Two atomic bombs ready to explode
The battle line was drawn when the arguments lingered long after malicious words were spewed
Like a gunshot what’s said can’t be taken back
The wound stays hidden under layers of resentment
Building like mold until it festers over the foundation we’ve made
What remains is similar to a war torn...
#anger
#conflict
#marriage #sadness
#marriage #sadness
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Reality is a curse
Will you catch me this time if I fall?
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times, I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
the dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
your support has become a hindrance
the last several times, I hit bottom real hard
I'm trying desperately to release the demons
it isn't easy when your neglected without assistance
you've said you loved me and you know that I love you
is it a lie?
i need you now, more then ever before
please, be by my side
we said years back through thick & thin
bonded together we'll always win
the dream is crumbling
reality is a curse
#addiction
#love
#marriage #support
#marriage #support
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THE RING
Perfect gift for a special one
Not at random for just ANY ONE
An indestructible expression
of eternal ascension
Fitting for loved ones, lovers or between friends
Band of eternal circle with neither flaw nor end.
Round and round – no corners to turn
Infinite lessons, yet, still left to learn
As all within the circle closer become
Venturing hidden corners still to come
Hearts all beat and join as one.
Perfect expression of an infinite love
Between loved ones or friends joined above
Perfect emblem of an...
Not at random for just ANY ONE
An indestructible expression
of eternal ascension
Fitting for loved ones, lovers or between friends
Band of eternal circle with neither flaw nor end.
Round and round – no corners to turn
Infinite lessons, yet, still left to learn
As all within the circle closer become
Venturing hidden corners still to come
Hearts all beat and join as one.
Perfect expression of an infinite love
Between loved ones or friends joined above
Perfect emblem of an...
#BestFriend
#FirstLove
#friendship
#lover
#marriage
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