Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique
#magic
Poems about magic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
A Gift
Good Morning to each of you. I went to bed last night without any gifts under the tree.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
#friendship
#happiness
#love
#magic
#support
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9 Comments
Some Nursery Rhymes For You

#dirty
#fiction
#magic
#rhyming
#sex
124 reads
6 Comments
~the du alchemist
viz the du alchemist
#admiration
#friendship
#love
#magic
#WritingPoetry
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Unwitched
Ablaze bewitching conjurers dance.
Enchantment flames gather, hex ignite.
Enchantment flames gather, hex ignite.
#curse
#fire
#magic
#pagan
#witches
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Incantations
Veiled, she sweeps back into view.
Conjured from thaumaturgist nights
the new moon in the old moon's lieu
has crescent gold for her last rites,
though lingering is not allowed
when her orbit has dates to keep,
behind clear skies, or cryptic cloud,
conducive to Morphean creep,
slowly...slewing...into...a...DREAM....
where sunlight off high castles bounce
into a laudanum lunar beam
and crater dragons lurk and pounce
in druidic charms of making...
another spell of love...awaking!
Conjured from thaumaturgist nights
the new moon in the old moon's lieu
has crescent gold for her last rites,
though lingering is not allowed
when her orbit has dates to keep,
behind clear skies, or cryptic cloud,
conducive to Morphean creep,
slowly...slewing...into...a...DREAM....
where sunlight off high castles bounce
into a laudanum lunar beam
and crater dragons lurk and pounce
in druidic charms of making...
another spell of love...awaking!
#magic
#pagan
233 reads
11 Comments
Meditrinalia

#lover
#magic
#mythology #pagan
#mythology #pagan
201 reads
6 Comments
Bring me the All Fathers eye(s)
Kiddo
Grammatically correct or not
These eyes gaze
over countless moons
Grammatically correct or not
These eyes gaze
over countless moons
#love
#magic
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2 Comments
malevolent
slipping in to the other world
I take a look around
peering into the souls of the restless
with intentions of reading their intent
malevolence or benevolent
I give the mischief makers free passage back the way they came
purifying my thoughts, I open my mind
inviting well intended spirits to approach
listening intently, I judge
sometimes not by word but feeling
they are all very polite
with exception, they know me
some come curses ready
slip the vexation, I will not submit
sublime feeling on the ether ...
I take a look around
peering into the souls of the restless
with intentions of reading their intent
malevolence or benevolent
I give the mischief makers free passage back the way they came
purifying my thoughts, I open my mind
inviting well intended spirits to approach
listening intently, I judge
sometimes not by word but feeling
they are all very polite
with exception, they know me
some come curses ready
slip the vexation, I will not submit
sublime feeling on the ether ...
#magic
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2 Comments
bittrersweet melody
bittersweet melody, sings inside me
lilting quietly, I sway with it
my sacred art, I feel too much
sanity in a lie, others appreciate this
intensity in a smile
painfully kept in
gentle hurt, when my deep need, is met with rejection
misfit of fate, when I come upon one like me
beautiful day, I have met such a kismet soul
only problem is, we ignite
touching darkness, disturbs my thougjts
tender feeling, being understood
I see her sometimes
coming together without carnage
the two of us together...
lilting quietly, I sway with it
my sacred art, I feel too much
sanity in a lie, others appreciate this
intensity in a smile
painfully kept in
gentle hurt, when my deep need, is met with rejection
misfit of fate, when I come upon one like me
beautiful day, I have met such a kismet soul
only problem is, we ignite
touching darkness, disturbs my thougjts
tender feeling, being understood
I see her sometimes
coming together without carnage
the two of us together...
#love
#magic
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On slicing a Kiwi Fruit
Like cracking a pebble and finding a fossil —
that no eyes have ever seen
there you were, unexpected —
a little green face gazing,
from the kitchen worktop.
My heart sighed,
seeing your pip eyes, beady, staring
knowing nothing of shape or colour;
Breakfast waited, while I stood
blinking at this sudden kiwi-creature,
tiny flat Martian,
helpless as a planet
without a mothering star;
I cradled you in my palm.
Silent
without whimper or wail,
did you exist before the cut? Would you exist ...
that no eyes have ever seen
there you were, unexpected —
a little green face gazing,
from the kitchen worktop.
My heart sighed,
seeing your pip eyes, beady, staring
knowing nothing of shape or colour;
Breakfast waited, while I stood
blinking at this sudden kiwi-creature,
tiny flat Martian,
helpless as a planet
without a mothering star;
I cradled you in my palm.
Silent
without whimper or wail,
did you exist before the cut? Would you exist ...
#childhood
#fairies
#food #magic
#food #magic
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Broken-record
I.
I wish I was a Witch
imbued through grace
beget by the knowledge of Truth
to combat ignorance
I'd proudly proclaim the title
bowing to Mother Nature
for gifting me the moniker
of so brave the women
—maiden, mother, and crone—
who suffered under religiosity
from pointy fingers
and judgmental tongues
condemning them to death
II.
...
I wish I was a Witch
imbued through grace
beget by the knowledge of Truth
to combat ignorance
I'd proudly proclaim the title
bowing to Mother Nature
for gifting me the moniker
of so brave the women
—maiden, mother, and crone—
who suffered under religiosity
from pointy fingers
and judgmental tongues
condemning them to death
II.
...
#magic
#pagan
#universe #witches
#universe #witches
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The Truth Fairy
Under the pillow, a tooth was placed.
A child waiting, all snug in haste.
But a different fairy, with wings so bright,
slipped into the room in the middle of the night.
Not the Tooth Fairy with glitter and cheer
but the Truth Fairy, solemn and near.
With a sigh, she whispered, “It’s time to reveal
the secrets and truths that life may conceal.”
In dreams the child was gently led
to scenes of truth, both hoped and dread.
A mirror showed friends who might betray
and promises broken along the way.
Eyes...
A child waiting, all snug in haste.
But a different fairy, with wings so bright,
slipped into the room in the middle of the night.
Not the Tooth Fairy with glitter and cheer
but the Truth Fairy, solemn and near.
With a sigh, she whispered, “It’s time to reveal
the secrets and truths that life may conceal.”
In dreams the child was gently led
to scenes of truth, both hoped and dread.
A mirror showed friends who might betray
and promises broken along the way.
Eyes...
#childhood
#fairies
#magic
#memories
#philosophical
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DU Poetry : Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique