Poems About Lies Seeking Honest Critique
#lies
Poems about lies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
Truth or Death?
I despise that blunt honesty shit
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
#betrayal
#honesty
#lies #TruthOfLife
#lies #TruthOfLife
90 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:28pm
18th Dec 2024 10:28pm
Maga Hats made in China
Maga hats made in China
How about I grab you by the pussy(cat)
But you’re all in you swallow my bullshit
I tried insurrection but now I’m in the Election
Cries and screams from the outer rings
Now I’m a Liar back in the West Wing
Tell you he’ll fight for you but look out
Turn around it’s no one but billionaires
Yes u wake up early to feed the family
Something so foreign but it comes up Orange
How about I grab you by the pussy(cat)
But you’re all in you swallow my bullshit
I tried insurrection but now I’m in the Election
Cries and screams from the outer rings
Now I’m a Liar back in the West Wing
Tell you he’ll fight for you but look out
Turn around it’s no one but billionaires
Yes u wake up early to feed the family
Something so foreign but it comes up Orange
#deception
#greed
#lies
63 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:20pm
18th Dec 2024 10:20pm
End of the Month
End of the month
Money is too tight
Scrape together all I have
Hoping it’s enough to pay the rent
But I walk around in a red hat
And I have t shirts and flags
Fake billionaire sweats orange off his skin
Selling his faithful on his lies
Send me money they’re persecuting me and you
Fake culture wars not really
But I need more money to keep this lie going
I’m being indicted for you
I did the crime but it’s you loser who will pay for me
Build the wall that falls down
Grifting on the highest...
Money is too tight
Scrape together all I have
Hoping it’s enough to pay the rent
But I walk around in a red hat
And I have t shirts and flags
Fake billionaire sweats orange off his skin
Selling his faithful on his lies
Send me money they’re persecuting me and you
Fake culture wars not really
But I need more money to keep this lie going
I’m being indicted for you
I did the crime but it’s you loser who will pay for me
Build the wall that falls down
Grifting on the highest...
#lies
#politics
36 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:31am
18th Dec 2024 10:31am
Orange Jesus
Orange Jesus will save us
From what I don’t know but he’ll tell you
Immigrants like our forefathers that made
The Great Green Lady hold a torch
Give me your poor your tired your hungry
That’s been our Brand way before trump
But Orange Jesus will save us from what I don’t know
Get to the punch bowl at the party
Buts it’s only Orange Kool Aid
Make you feel above them but it’s just nightmare
How many friendships and families broken
Because some worship the Orange king ...
From what I don’t know but he’ll tell you
Immigrants like our forefathers that made
The Great Green Lady hold a torch
Give me your poor your tired your hungry
That’s been our Brand way before trump
But Orange Jesus will save us from what I don’t know
Get to the punch bowl at the party
Buts it’s only Orange Kool Aid
Make you feel above them but it’s just nightmare
How many friendships and families broken
Because some worship the Orange king ...
#greed
#lies
#politics
48 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 1:36am
16th Dec 2024 1:36am
Guilty Of…
Lay down the sentence
Guilty of who I am
Why pry into my daily life
A little flower looked at like poison
So I’m not who you are
Who are you to judge me
Still living in this world
Im not going away better accept me or
Live your life who you are
Why can’t I be just like you
We want the same things
Being loved and greeted
Secure in who I am
Why does that trouble you
Im just a Indian among lost pilgrims
You say patriot I say you’re full of shit
Swim in the swamp...
Guilty of who I am
Why pry into my daily life
A little flower looked at like poison
So I’m not who you are
Who are you to judge me
Still living in this world
Im not going away better accept me or
Live your life who you are
Why can’t I be just like you
We want the same things
Being loved and greeted
Secure in who I am
Why does that trouble you
Im just a Indian among lost pilgrims
You say patriot I say you’re full of shit
Swim in the swamp...
#anger
#lies
#politics
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:55am
15th Dec 2024 3:55am
Truth Stands Above
Truth stands above
Step by step inch by inch
Noose tightening around my neck
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Feel the pressure
Closing in tight as a vice
World around me is sinking in
Step to the Lord to argue my case
My lies leave me nothing
but blank thoughts
Don’t have a leg to stand on
My urge is to rage on
Spouting falsities
Hope it sets me free
How about some distraction
To play on my fiction
Earth is flat
Mars is blue
Anything to...
Step by step inch by inch
Noose tightening around my neck
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Feel the pressure
Closing in tight as a vice
World around me is sinking in
Step to the Lord to argue my case
My lies leave me nothing
but blank thoughts
Don’t have a leg to stand on
My urge is to rage on
Spouting falsities
Hope it sets me free
How about some distraction
To play on my fiction
Earth is flat
Mars is blue
Anything to...
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
The Truth Will f**k You Dry
If you could disappear, I'd be a happy man
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
#angels
#CallToAction
#dark
#hate
#lies
127 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 10:45am
11th Dec 2024 10:45am
False Friends
False pictures around my face
False hands around my place
Can't breathe behind this haze
No, this isn't some temporary phase
Enemy or friend
To fall or to stand
Can you tell me when does it end?
Your smiling means to hate
Same words from the same tape
Lying and fake
It's plain to see, but hard to take
Going over the thin ice
Before you speak think twice
You rape my mind with lies
Read the novel, Lord of the Flies
It's kicking me in my head
It's driving me fuckin' mad
I can't believe...
False hands around my place
Can't breathe behind this haze
No, this isn't some temporary phase
Enemy or friend
To fall or to stand
Can you tell me when does it end?
Your smiling means to hate
Same words from the same tape
Lying and fake
It's plain to see, but hard to take
Going over the thin ice
Before you speak think twice
You rape my mind with lies
Read the novel, Lord of the Flies
It's kicking me in my head
It's driving me fuckin' mad
I can't believe...
#anger
#betrayal
#friendship #lies
#friendship #lies
99 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:30am
10th Dec 2024 10:30am
Abandoned Liberty
Persistent
With her cold feet forced
Her bland eyes stare
You and I won’t comprehend
Her soul bound by custom
Despotism her pain
Demeanor, dull and dreary
Disown their desolate ways
Forsaken by their faith
Traditions and tyranny
Beliefs, brutality
Mutilation and misery
Suppressed by their sect
Heartbreak and hardships
Subject to suffer
Accused and abused
She’s dressed up but covered
With nowhere to go
Her eyes tell a story
You’ll never know
Her hurt caused by creed ...
With her cold feet forced
Her bland eyes stare
You and I won’t comprehend
Her soul bound by custom
Despotism her pain
Demeanor, dull and dreary
Disown their desolate ways
Forsaken by their faith
Traditions and tyranny
Beliefs, brutality
Mutilation and misery
Suppressed by their sect
Heartbreak and hardships
Subject to suffer
Accused and abused
She’s dressed up but covered
With nowhere to go
Her eyes tell a story
You’ll never know
Her hurt caused by creed ...
#freedom
#hurt
#lies
#LifeStruggles
#respect
90 reads
8 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 1:16am
6th Dec 2024 1:16am
Insurrection Election
Insurrection to win an election
In times passed down a country tries for freedom
Give me tired and poor whatever the Green Lady says
Escaped from tyranny and monarchy
Spilled some tea into the Boston Harbor
Hopped on a horse said one if land two by sea
Crossed the Delaware in frigid conditions
Just to say we stand free among ourselves
Pen on parchment we declare we’re free men and women and we were born of immigrants
Civil wars and atomic bombs didn’t change us
We still breath to live free and...
In times passed down a country tries for freedom
Give me tired and poor whatever the Green Lady says
Escaped from tyranny and monarchy
Spilled some tea into the Boston Harbor
Hopped on a horse said one if land two by sea
Crossed the Delaware in frigid conditions
Just to say we stand free among ourselves
Pen on parchment we declare we’re free men and women and we were born of immigrants
Civil wars and atomic bombs didn’t change us
We still breath to live free and...
#anger
#lies
#politics
79 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 9:27pm
5th Dec 2024 9:27pm
Bro-sencrantz and Shill-denstern
The mind gets boggled awful hard
when folks do stupid things,
like hoist with their own petard
outrageous votes for kings.
Bombs away, sirs, in your own boots,
to step in your own deuce,
but progress seeks far better routes...
where dipshits just vamoose!
when folks do stupid things,
like hoist with their own petard
outrageous votes for kings.
Bombs away, sirs, in your own boots,
to step in your own deuce,
but progress seeks far better routes...
where dipshits just vamoose!
#CallToAction
#lies
#manipulation #tragedy
#manipulation #tragedy
121 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 10:57am
5th Dec 2024 10:57am
God told me to skin you alive
What stupid passage in some book makes you think
You’re given dominion over everyone on Earth
Seeping arrogance all over the lives you ruin
Fickle condescending grossly inflated toxic scum
I would kill you in an instant given the chance
You’ve damned our future for the sake of something not alive
You have your self needs, and I need to make you pay
Just remember Mussolini, hung and gutted in the streets
I would see you tortured for your crimes against us all
It still wouldn’t be enough if it lasted a thousand years
I don’t...
You’re given dominion over everyone on Earth
Seeping arrogance all over the lives you ruin
Fickle condescending grossly inflated toxic scum
I would kill you in an instant given the chance
You’ve damned our future for the sake of something not alive
You have your self needs, and I need to make you pay
Just remember Mussolini, hung and gutted in the streets
I would see you tortured for your crimes against us all
It still wouldn’t be enough if it lasted a thousand years
I don’t...
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
#manipulation
#religion
83 reads
6 Comments
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