Poems About Lies Seeking Honest Critique
#lies
Poems about lies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 2:51pm
22nd Apr 2024 2:51pm
Ill take the blame
Ready to do the time
For a crime that isn't mine
Ill be fine
Ive spent many years confined
In a prison of my design
In my mind
The bleakest place youll find
The warden is most unkind
The verdict signed
Play out my failures then rewind
Want me to plead innocent I decline
Suffering is divine
Savor it like fine wine
To this sentence I resign
Pearls before swine
Wanna save me stop trying
You don't care so stop lying
No more crying
You're free as a bird so start flying
Your narrative...
For a crime that isn't mine
Ill be fine
Ive spent many years confined
In a prison of my design
In my mind
The bleakest place youll find
The warden is most unkind
The verdict signed
Play out my failures then rewind
Want me to plead innocent I decline
Suffering is divine
Savor it like fine wine
To this sentence I resign
Pearls before swine
Wanna save me stop trying
You don't care so stop lying
No more crying
You're free as a bird so start flying
Your narrative...
#apathy
#lies
#manipulation #MovingOn
#manipulation #MovingOn
50 reads
14 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 6:52pm
14th Apr 2024 6:52pm
Betrayal
winding in the energies, riding the winds
realizing my power I no longer withhold
letting it ride I right some wrongs
distant thunder the wind picks up speed
dispersing the dark building in me
ignoring my power thinking it wasn't manifesting anyway
with a nod to the festering hole in me
coming from the Onyx Kingdom I use calculation and wait
treachery is afoot
like my Father of all dominions I am listening
paying close attention to all his movements
because the devil is in the detail
and he whispers I'm missing...
realizing my power I no longer withhold
letting it ride I right some wrongs
distant thunder the wind picks up speed
dispersing the dark building in me
ignoring my power thinking it wasn't manifesting anyway
with a nod to the festering hole in me
coming from the Onyx Kingdom I use calculation and wait
treachery is afoot
like my Father of all dominions I am listening
paying close attention to all his movements
because the devil is in the detail
and he whispers I'm missing...
#lies
#betrayal
#curse
73 reads
4 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 6:05am
7th Apr 2024 6:05am
Delusional
I saw another woman in my dreams the other night.
Her pain soaks through my pillow
In phantom tears I cannot feel.
If this is how the tide must turn, set me free.
The paranoia grows tiresome.
Her pain soaks through my pillow
In phantom tears I cannot feel.
If this is how the tide must turn, set me free.
The paranoia grows tiresome.
#love
#lies
#betrayal
#dreams
#sleep
76 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 11:02pm
6th Apr 2024 11:02pm
Some needed justice
I hear a pig's radio outside my window
It's 2:30 am
I look out the window
I see a pig screaming in some youths face
I decide to crack the window open and I hear...,
"YOUR HAMMERED, TANKED, WASTED, BLASTED, SKUNKED, FRIED, LOADED, SLOSHED, WRECKED, TOASTED AND PIE-EYED!"
"I HAVE COMPLAINTS OF YOU DEFACING PROPERTY AND DISORDERLY CONDUCT!!"
"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF??!"
I couldn't hear the boy, he's talking to low
He couldn't be no more then 15
Pig says, "WHAT IT WASN'T YOU?!",...
It's 2:30 am
I look out the window
I see a pig screaming in some youths face
I decide to crack the window open and I hear...,
"YOUR HAMMERED, TANKED, WASTED, BLASTED, SKUNKED, FRIED, LOADED, SLOSHED, WRECKED, TOASTED AND PIE-EYED!"
"I HAVE COMPLAINTS OF YOU DEFACING PROPERTY AND DISORDERLY CONDUCT!!"
"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF??!"
I couldn't hear the boy, he's talking to low
He couldn't be no more then 15
Pig says, "WHAT IT WASN'T YOU?!",...
#lies
#corruption
#murder
#bullying
#uplifting
52 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Mar 2024 7:33pm
28th Mar 2024 7:33pm
Secrets Buried in their Assholes!
#lies
#corruption
#politics
#America
#rhyming
36 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Mar 2024 12:28pm
27th Mar 2024 12:28pm
Spineless Rat
There's nothing I would do for you
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your girlfriend too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your legs!
Your nose is deep up corporate ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to urinate all over
...
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your girlfriend too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your legs!
Your nose is deep up corporate ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to urinate all over
...
#anger
#lies
#greed
#respect
#SelfWorth
99 reads
12 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 11:14pm
25th Mar 2024 11:14pm
Piece of cake
Oh, don't worry, my dear,
poems are used to fake
our orgasms, all around.
poems are used to fake
our orgasms, all around.
#lies
#orgasm
54 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Mar 2024 1:23am
24th Mar 2024 1:23am
f#ck the web
the internet is bollocks,
it doesn’t spread knowledge;
but like eighteenth century
pamphleteers
it promotes lies,
racism, paranoia and riots,
it really is bollocks,
he cries !
it doesn’t spread knowledge;
but like eighteenth century
pamphleteers
it promotes lies,
racism, paranoia and riots,
it really is bollocks,
he cries !
#lies
52 reads
3 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 11:49pm
21st Mar 2024 11:49pm
Dog Choler
Never to give it all a second thought
MAGA goes kicking and screaming
in denial of all their scheming
even after they've all been caught
and pled guilty before the judges,
the cameras, the people, and the papers,
about all of their scams and capers,
and their baseless cacafuego grudges.
But we are not the shod to be rode rough!
WE THE PEOPLE...have had E-fucking-nuff
from the cacafuego nexus of loss
promising bloodbath revenge if they win
and no way up in their policy spin.
MAGA goes kicking and screaming
in denial of all their scheming
even after they've all been caught
and pled guilty before the judges,
the cameras, the people, and the papers,
about all of their scams and capers,
and their baseless cacafuego grudges.
But we are not the shod to be rode rough!
WE THE PEOPLE...have had E-fucking-nuff
from the cacafuego nexus of loss
promising bloodbath revenge if they win
and no way up in their policy spin.
#hate
#lies
#greed
64 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Mar 2024 11:36pm
12th Mar 2024 11:36pm
The Calamity of Misfortune
The longest year,
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deceit
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deceit
#lies
#betrayal
#war
#manipulation
#deception
90 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 12:56pm
11th Mar 2024 12:56pm
Polar Opposites
The mainstreams news — the NY Times, the Washington Post, USA Today, the New Yorker, the Atlantic, MSNBC, CNN, Fox, ABC, NBC, CBS — simply stopped reporting the news and repeated whatever the fascist Pharma state told them to say.
All knowledge production industries stopped producing knowledge and fell in line to produce fascism, misery, and death to enrich the ruling class. It is as if the Enlightenment and the revolutions (scientific, political, and social) of the last two hundred and fifty years never happened.
The political left became the authoritarian right as they...
All knowledge production industries stopped producing knowledge and fell in line to produce fascism, misery, and death to enrich the ruling class. It is as if the Enlightenment and the revolutions (scientific, political, and social) of the last two hundred and fifty years never happened.
The political left became the authoritarian right as they...
#lies
#corruption
#politics
#greed
#manipulation
80 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 3:32am
10th Mar 2024 3:32am
Sociopathic Maneuvers
I'll always greet you with penetrating charm
Truthful & sincere, I mean you no harm
Always remorseful & full of empathy
Respectful, with a loving tendency
I'll always apologize, a very strong storyteller
A hero with high morals, I'm one heck of a feller
Never to pretend on what I like or love
Accurate to everything listed above
I'm your vision of insanity,
what I want I will always get
No scheming here is your only bet
Truthful & sincere, I mean you no harm
Always remorseful & full of empathy
Respectful, with a loving tendency
I'll always apologize, a very strong storyteller
A hero with high morals, I'm one heck of a feller
Never to pretend on what I like or love
Accurate to everything listed above
I'm your vision of insanity,
what I want I will always get
No scheming here is your only bet
#lies
#rhyming
#MentalHealth #honesty
#MentalHealth #honesty
70 reads
13 Comments
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