Poems About Lies Seeking Honest Critique
#lies
Poems about lies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 00:56am
6th Feb 2025 00:56am
Necropolis-a-lago
As suspected, Bibi was in cahoots,
with global conservatives that include
the genocide jingo MAGA galoots
jonesing for Mediterranean crude.
Where now are the cries of "Genocide Joe"?
Now that Trump reveals the master plan
of Levantine resorts with oil below
at the beckon call of the master man...
arms akimbo over the smoking bones
of countless families for each guilty dude,
which no holocaust ghost likely condones,
as they know too well the cost of a feud...
a lesson lost on MAGA ambition ...
with global conservatives that include
the genocide jingo MAGA galoots
jonesing for Mediterranean crude.
Where now are the cries of "Genocide Joe"?
Now that Trump reveals the master plan
of Levantine resorts with oil below
at the beckon call of the master man...
arms akimbo over the smoking bones
of countless families for each guilty dude,
which no holocaust ghost likely condones,
as they know too well the cost of a feud...
a lesson lost on MAGA ambition ...
#curse
#evil
#hate
#lies
#sacrifice
54 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 7:44pm
5th Feb 2025 7:44pm
It is YOU I Admire
It is YOU who I admire
I praise you for being a scumbag since you were a kid
You never took into account all the wrong doings you have done to people
The love that you gave has left it's mark on numerous "loved ones" that trusted you
Your affection has been an infection to most girls you've fucked
The enjoyment you looked at with high value has left many scarred for life
Perfection is what you strive for, manipulating and taking advantage of others...shame on you
Appreciation is what you'll never find amongst people
You have no redeeming...
I praise you for being a scumbag since you were a kid
You never took into account all the wrong doings you have done to people
The love that you gave has left it's mark on numerous "loved ones" that trusted you
Your affection has been an infection to most girls you've fucked
The enjoyment you looked at with high value has left many scarred for life
Perfection is what you strive for, manipulating and taking advantage of others...shame on you
Appreciation is what you'll never find amongst people
You have no redeeming...
#anger
#hate
#lies
#manipulation
#identity
80 reads
13 Comments
drone
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 8:42am
5th Feb 2025 8:42am
Lizard Minded. Capitalism
It is said
It is only
Moral Capitalism
That can save
Our way of life
That we know
Or we will be
Forever Chained
To the Lizard Minded
Capitalism
We Suffer From
Today
It is only
Moral Capitalism
That can save
Our way of life
That we know
Or we will be
Forever Chained
To the Lizard Minded
Capitalism
We Suffer From
Today
#betrayal
#deception
#honesty
#lies
#TruthOfLife
39 reads
0 Comments
Rachelleundrgrd
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 5:15am
5th Feb 2025 5:15am
Time: Love’s Lie
Time
traces imperceptible lines
porcelain ducks
frozen in glacial melt
devours everything
silently stealthily
advancing or circling
origami swans whirlpooling in air
Is it love or a lie
dawdling here in the blackhole
of time tick-tocking away
at least that is what the cuckoo
clock would have us believe.
R.
traces imperceptible lines
porcelain ducks
frozen in glacial melt
devours everything
silently stealthily
advancing or circling
origami swans whirlpooling in air
Is it love or a lie
dawdling here in the blackhole
of time tick-tocking away
at least that is what the cuckoo
clock would have us believe.
R.
#birds
#lies
#love #science
#love #science
74 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 10:41am
3rd Feb 2025 10:41am
Don't Stop Knowing Nothing
Don't!
Don't believe what you see
Stop!
Stop believing what you read
Knowing!
Knowing that I aint you and you aint me
Nothing!
Nothing you know will set you free
Don't believe what you see
Stop!
Stop believing what you read
Knowing!
Knowing that I aint you and you aint me
Nothing!
Nothing you know will set you free
#lies
#minimalist
#philosophical
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
84 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 12:08pm
2nd Feb 2025 12:08pm
Before it's too late
#abuse
#betrayal
#DomesticViolence
#lies
#relationships
50 reads
14 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 4:56am
30th Jan 2025 4:56am
Toxic Crazy Baby
I have happened upon
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
#betrayal
#curse
#deception
#lies
#love
69 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 00:43am
29th Jan 2025 00:43am
unexplainable draw
Beneath the surface
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
#anger
#emotional
#hypocrisy
#lies
#passion
95 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 9:11pm
28th Jan 2025 9:11pm
emotional suction
love´s is not a lie
it's an origami cuckoo
catched by the whirlpool
of a porcelain blackhole
it's an origami cuckoo
catched by the whirlpool
of a porcelain blackhole
#emptiness
#lies
#lust
#mirror
#passion
73 reads
17 Comments
Yousef_Alfil
Yousef Alfil
Yousef Alfil
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 6:28pm
22nd Jan 2025 6:28pm
MINE IS A GEN-Z
Mine is a Gen-Z,
A Gen-Z full of people who are bruised,
Dressed up in new love, but inside all used.
We hurt each other in search of relief,
And peace? Peace is finding someone who is new.
Mine is a Gen-Z,
A Gen-Z that believes in vengeance,
Tangled in some modern curse,
A cycle that we cannot escape.
Love isn't whole, but shattered fragments
That cut deeper with each attempt to heal.
Mine is a Gen-Z,
A Gen-Z that craves love, yet terrified to fall.
“Single, but happy, we say; still, our bodies say...
A Gen-Z full of people who are bruised,
Dressed up in new love, but inside all used.
We hurt each other in search of relief,
And peace? Peace is finding someone who is new.
Mine is a Gen-Z,
A Gen-Z that believes in vengeance,
Tangled in some modern curse,
A cycle that we cannot escape.
Love isn't whole, but shattered fragments
That cut deeper with each attempt to heal.
Mine is a Gen-Z,
A Gen-Z that craves love, yet terrified to fall.
“Single, but happy, we say; still, our bodies say...
#escape
#lies
#manipulation
#sadness
#teens
48 reads
0 Comments
OccultCatalyst
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 1:13am
21st Jan 2025 1:13am
Even Fire Is In Jest
From the depths of shadow,
I rise, unchained,
A tempest burning in veins,
An echo of stars undone.
Lust and longing,
Ashes and flame,
A symphony of chaos,
Screaming my name.
I am the void,
I am the spark,
In the stillness of the abyss,
I ignite the dark.
But here I’m still burning, alive, on the inside,
So I bathe myself in the murk, in the rot,
The plague come forth like a wave recessing the tide,
Infecting my mind like a virus invoking this blasphemous blood clot.
A shadow of a memory; a fading...
I rise, unchained,
A tempest burning in veins,
An echo of stars undone.
Lust and longing,
Ashes and flame,
A symphony of chaos,
Screaming my name.
I am the void,
I am the spark,
In the stillness of the abyss,
I ignite the dark.
But here I’m still burning, alive, on the inside,
So I bathe myself in the murk, in the rot,
The plague come forth like a wave recessing the tide,
Infecting my mind like a virus invoking this blasphemous blood clot.
A shadow of a memory; a fading...
#faith
#lies
#sacrifice
#silence
#suffering
78 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
Be aware, look out!
A job worth doing is a job worth doing well, so they say
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
#betrayal
#lies
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
72 reads
16 Comments
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