Poems About Lies Seeking Honest Critique
#lies
Poems about lies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 10:13pm
31st Mar 2025 10:13pm
"The Chirping Witness"
Pinocchio, marionette of lies,
A painted smile, beneath a venomous guise.
He'd weave his tales, a silken, twisted thread,
While Cricket watched, his conscience, cold and dead.
Each fib a dagger, aimed at truth's frail heart,
He'd boast of feats, a masterful, deceptive art.
The strings would tighten, as the lies took hold,
And Cricket's song, grew weary, frail, and old.
He saw the puppet, rise to heights of shame,
A hollow shell, consumed by lust and fame.
He watched the victims, fall to their despair,
As Pinocchio,...
A painted smile, beneath a venomous guise.
He'd weave his tales, a silken, twisted thread,
While Cricket watched, his conscience, cold and dead.
Each fib a dagger, aimed at truth's frail heart,
He'd boast of feats, a masterful, deceptive art.
The strings would tighten, as the lies took hold,
And Cricket's song, grew weary, frail, and old.
He saw the puppet, rise to heights of shame,
A hollow shell, consumed by lust and fame.
He watched the victims, fall to their despair,
As Pinocchio,...
#curse
#dark
#horror
#lies
#nightmares
36 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 9:56pm
29th Mar 2025 9:56pm
The lying truth
I have lied through life
I've been caught dozens of times
My life's a facade
I've been caught dozens of times
My life's a facade
#hypocrisy
#lies
#senryu
45 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 11:35am
29th Mar 2025 11:35am
I'll sell her anything to get in her pants
She despises guys
She says they have brains in their cocks
She says that she can tell that I'm different
I'm going over to her house tonight to get in her pants and sell her the Brooklyn Bridge
She says they have brains in their cocks
She says that she can tell that I'm different
I'm going over to her house tonight to get in her pants and sell her the Brooklyn Bridge
#deception
#lies
#manipulation #sex
#manipulation #sex
72 reads
8 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 00:49am
28th Mar 2025 00:49am
I Assume
One day,
People will realize,
The joke.
That the women can't hide,
What the guys have done.
And all of them,
Are putting themselves at risk,
To just one person.
Because they thought friendship,
Would protect them.
But knowledge is more powerful,
Than friendship.
So, stop trying to hide behind women,
And own up to your shit.
People will realize,
The joke.
That the women can't hide,
What the guys have done.
And all of them,
Are putting themselves at risk,
To just one person.
Because they thought friendship,
Would protect them.
But knowledge is more powerful,
Than friendship.
So, stop trying to hide behind women,
And own up to your shit.
#lies
#manipulation
#TruthOfLife
77 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 11:19pm
26th Mar 2025 11:19pm
Lack of Curiosity
An inactive population is the key to government control
You pathetic humans rather watch someone's life on a smartphone
Than participate in your own
Mentally you feel helpless
Physically you wanna a give up
Government pricks price healthy food so high
Dollar stores sell you toxic stuff
They drug your food at your job
Mix hormones in kids lunches at school
Don't say no to the pill, it's good for you
Boys become men and grow up muscular
Short tempered and fucking dumb
Girls become women and develop these outrageous curves ...
You pathetic humans rather watch someone's life on a smartphone
Than participate in your own
Mentally you feel helpless
Physically you wanna a give up
Government pricks price healthy food so high
Dollar stores sell you toxic stuff
They drug your food at your job
Mix hormones in kids lunches at school
Don't say no to the pill, it's good for you
Boys become men and grow up muscular
Short tempered and fucking dumb
Girls become women and develop these outrageous curves ...
#corruption
#lies
#LifeStruggles
#manipulation
#politics
66 reads
12 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 1:03pm
23rd Mar 2025 1:03pm
Them
When the ugly people band together,
They actually feel like they're better.
But, you just watch them.
And mock them.
When the women band together,
And try to act like they're better,
I just let them.
I know their intentions.
When someone disappears,
And I still know they're here,
Do they know I've caught them?
Ill throw them in a coffin.
All of these ears still couldn't hear,
My fake coughing,
Laughing at their convention.
Always needing attention.
Hide! While you...
They actually feel like they're better.
But, you just watch them.
And mock them.
When the women band together,
And try to act like they're better,
I just let them.
I know their intentions.
When someone disappears,
And I still know they're here,
Do they know I've caught them?
Ill throw them in a coffin.
All of these ears still couldn't hear,
My fake coughing,
Laughing at their convention.
Always needing attention.
Hide! While you...
#dark
#lies
#secrets #TruthOfLife
#secrets #TruthOfLife
106 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 10:33am
13th Mar 2025 10:33am
You're Really What?!
#confessional
#fiction
#ignorance
#lies
#lover
123 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 2:10pm
6th Mar 2025 2:10pm
Truths we would like to hear
How refreshing would it be if we heard a politician say:
I don't believe in God and I don't believe in the protection and welfare of our citizens, their health & their safety
I plan on placing my friends in executive positions
I will pocket what funds I can get away with, but see that the rest is spent on my election
You will have no voice in my decisions any more then you ever had
You will have to accept my judgement, which you will have no choice
If I succeed in fooling the public, the public will have themselves to blame...
I don't believe in God and I don't believe in the protection and welfare of our citizens, their health & their safety
I plan on placing my friends in executive positions
I will pocket what funds I can get away with, but see that the rest is spent on my election
You will have no voice in my decisions any more then you ever had
You will have to accept my judgement, which you will have no choice
If I succeed in fooling the public, the public will have themselves to blame...
#corruption
#deception
#greed
#lies
#manipulation
125 reads
14 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 11:37am
3rd Mar 2025 11:37am
Close to the Edge...
Fear
used by many
to make many
Greed
used by many
to hurt many
Stupidity
used by many
to let many
close to the edge
down by the river
the sky is falling
Jesse James used a gun...
used by many
to make many
Greed
used by many
to hurt many
Stupidity
used by many
to let many
close to the edge
down by the river
the sky is falling
Jesse James used a gun...
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
95 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 10:58am
3rd Mar 2025 10:58am
Experimental
When one Looks
At the Human cattle
Forced
To board the Trains
One must Understand
History
Fucking tells You
IT was a whole lot more
Then a mere race
You are All
Lab rats
You chose to play
You Let us be
And we Continue
To play
At the Human cattle
Forced
To board the Trains
One must Understand
History
Fucking tells You
IT was a whole lot more
Then a mere race
You are All
Lab rats
You chose to play
You Let us be
And we Continue
To play
#betrayal
#deception
#honesty
#lies
#TruthOfLife
126 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
Upper-Class Low-Life
There's nothing I would do for you
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#lies
138 reads
16 Comments
3Y3S-THVT-S33
Electra
Electra
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 5:59pm
24th Feb 2025 5:59pm
I run from gentle hands. II
I run from gentle hands
They pry you open
Examine every secret locked in your bones
They claim it's love, but you feel utterly exposed
I run from gentle hands
They say you'll only feel a pinch
As they slip, and your mouth is stitched
Gentle hands grip me harder than
Hard course hands I find sharp knives in
Gentle hands bind you, claiming you're too wild
These same gentle hands crucified the perfect child
I run from gentle hands
Because gentle hands don't gently understand
They pry you open
Examine every secret locked in your bones
They claim it's love, but you feel utterly exposed
I run from gentle hands
They say you'll only feel a pinch
As they slip, and your mouth is stitched
Gentle hands grip me harder than
Hard course hands I find sharp knives in
Gentle hands bind you, claiming you're too wild
These same gentle hands crucified the perfect child
I run from gentle hands
Because gentle hands don't gently understand
#abuse
#despair
#escape
#lies
#misunderstood
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1 Comment
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