Poems About Learning Seeking Honest Critique
#learning
Poems about learning seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LunaGreyhawk
Jenn_Leigh
Jenn_Leigh
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 5:16am
11th Nov 2024 5:16am
Bone Broth
Sometimes you’ve got to die
and somehow go on living;
plant a thriving summer garden
where winter buried your heart.
Fertilize the soil with your sorrows,
composted into lessons learned,
seasons weathered with experiences,
love tended to and abandoned;
how it all withers until it is watered
with compassion and fed perspective.
Knowing that long hours spent
under the light of truth of oneself
were worth the knowing,
and being known in equal measure.
And one day your heart, pruned
will be ripe for love and joy...
and somehow go on living;
plant a thriving summer garden
where winter buried your heart.
Fertilize the soil with your sorrows,
composted into lessons learned,
seasons weathered with experiences,
love tended to and abandoned;
how it all withers until it is watered
with compassion and fed perspective.
Knowing that long hours spent
under the light of truth of oneself
were worth the knowing,
and being known in equal measure.
And one day your heart, pruned
will be ripe for love and joy...
#death
#grief
#learning #LifeCycle
#learning #LifeCycle
118 reads
2 Comments
CircleDanceSquared
AlyssaJane96
AlyssaJane96
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 11:42pm
10th Nov 2024 11:42pm
Duality
Fear and Love are sisters
They live across the hall
Love tells Fear to come and play
But Fear ignores her calls
Then one day Fear hears her sister
Scream help I’m about to fall
She runs and reaches out her hand
Eyes filling up with tears
Hold on I got you Love and I’ll always be right here
Fear and Love are sisters
And sometimes they will fight
But Fear teaches Love to take it easy
And Love shows Fear that everything will be alright
They live across the hall
Love tells Fear to come and play
But Fear ignores her calls
Then one day Fear hears her sister
Scream help I’m about to fall
She runs and reaches out her hand
Eyes filling up with tears
Hold on I got you Love and I’ll always be right here
Fear and Love are sisters
And sometimes they will fight
But Fear teaches Love to take it easy
And Love shows Fear that everything will be alright
#family
#fear
#healing
#learning
#love
142 reads
1 Comment
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 10:25am
4th Nov 2024 10:25am
Student Teacher Poem
Sorry madam, I can’t you follow
Don’t move son, I’ll come to your row.
I can’t understand a word from your mouth
Next time I’ll bring my PC and a mouse.
English makes me look stupid and ill at ease
Well then, I’ll teach you English in Chinese.
Teacher, teacher I have lost my book
Never, ever instead use your face book.
Blessed having connexion in our classroom
A pity! for your smart phone you have no room.
Studies, homework and revision yet, not ready for the exam
Sacrifice...
Don’t move son, I’ll come to your row.
I can’t understand a word from your mouth
Next time I’ll bring my PC and a mouse.
English makes me look stupid and ill at ease
Well then, I’ll teach you English in Chinese.
Teacher, teacher I have lost my book
Never, ever instead use your face book.
Blessed having connexion in our classroom
A pity! for your smart phone you have no room.
Studies, homework and revision yet, not ready for the exam
Sacrifice...
#learning
#motivational
#success #uplifting
#success #uplifting
121 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 3:04pm
26th Oct 2024 3:04pm
THE NEXT GENERATION X
As I look around me now and I see 👁️👁️ the changes before my own life. I begin to wonder what would it be like, for the next generation of our own children's and grand children's life and lives. 🤨 For truthfully are they prepared for the future that awaits them, and their own life. YET learning having to maneuver through, the chaos and the dramatic changes. BEFORE there own struggles. 😔 For sure it's here now in this life we as adults and protesters, have to learn to teach and prepare them to truly, understand that there will be struggles. THAT...
#determination
#learning
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
83 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 3:44pm
23rd Oct 2024 3:44pm
Growth
This year has been a weird one
Fell far beyond my tree
No longer know which words to use
To sum it up you see
I thought I’d felt it all before
But really I knew nowt
I thought I’d heard it all before
Those words I no longer shout
It seems that there are many more
Lessons still to learn
Many more experiences
To feel before I’m grown
Fell far beyond my tree
No longer know which words to use
To sum it up you see
I thought I’d felt it all before
But really I knew nowt
I thought I’d heard it all before
Those words I no longer shout
It seems that there are many more
Lessons still to learn
Many more experiences
To feel before I’m grown
#confessional
#learning
#PersonalGrowth #SelfReflection
#PersonalGrowth #SelfReflection
144 reads
1 Comment
Duice
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 8:55pm
22nd Oct 2024 8:55pm
Miss understood (Part 1)
I’m not for [ everybody ]
not everyone comprehends innuendo [ here ]
In hindsight I wrote intuition in [ frustration ]
let me speak to be absolutely [ clear: ]
Don’t just listen for How in my [ words ]
listen close to What intellect is in its [ meaning ]
I don’t speak circles to [ entertain ]
I speak in Braille for the [ gleaning ]
Envision in binary patterns as felt [ repetition ]
rationalize bumps and breaks to [ devour ]
You heard 50 shades of [ grey ]
I discern sweet from [ sour ]
Its...
not everyone comprehends innuendo [ here ]
In hindsight I wrote intuition in [ frustration ]
let me speak to be absolutely [ clear: ]
Don’t just listen for How in my [ words ]
listen close to What intellect is in its [ meaning ]
I don’t speak circles to [ entertain ]
I speak in Braille for the [ gleaning ]
Envision in binary patterns as felt [ repetition ]
rationalize bumps and breaks to [ devour ]
You heard 50 shades of [ grey ]
I discern sweet from [ sour ]
Its...
#confusion
#frustration
#learning
#misunderstood
#wisdom
309 reads
10 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 6:28pm
22nd Oct 2024 6:28pm
Ask Me
I want you to ask.
What's my favorite color?
What's my favorite food?
Who is my favorite artist?
I want you to ask me why.
Why do I love this painting?
Why do I listen to this song?
Why are you my favorite color?
Please, examine me.
Learn me.
Feel me.
Ask me.
I want my being to be
completely mapped out and
rewritten over
and over
As you memorize the answers,
only to ask me again,
just in case they have
changed.
All of this because
I simply...
What's my favorite color?
What's my favorite food?
Who is my favorite artist?
I want you to ask me why.
Why do I love this painting?
Why do I listen to this song?
Why are you my favorite color?
Please, examine me.
Learn me.
Feel me.
Ask me.
I want my being to be
completely mapped out and
rewritten over
and over
As you memorize the answers,
only to ask me again,
just in case they have
changed.
All of this because
I simply...
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#learning
#love
164 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 3:26am
7th Oct 2024 3:26am
Promoting General Welfare
Knowing nothing of axiomatic things
Trads claim liberals are always at fault
while slavishly revering mad kings
and their authoritarian gestalt,
so much so they think they own liberty
and the bluest skies where her nature thrives
from sea to crude oil polluted sea
tainting all but aristocratic lives
as they crush that old American dream
where the effort of the poorest old slob
to live out their years as those dreams may deem
without being dependent on a job
that never had respect for any dreams...
that didn't exploit...
Trads claim liberals are always at fault
while slavishly revering mad kings
and their authoritarian gestalt,
so much so they think they own liberty
and the bluest skies where her nature thrives
from sea to crude oil polluted sea
tainting all but aristocratic lives
as they crush that old American dream
where the effort of the poorest old slob
to live out their years as those dreams may deem
without being dependent on a job
that never had respect for any dreams...
that didn't exploit...
#freedom
#HumanRights
#learning
#LifeGoals
#morality
117 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 11:19pm
5th Oct 2024 11:19pm
Indictment
Observable stupidity,
implausibly denied,
only supports cupidity
when logic isn't tried.
They think no one will give a shit;
no challenge will be made
by citizens who lack the wit
and drink their Kool-Aid.
Much witness bearing is a load
of falsehood and intent
by mountebanks who mean to goad
with humbug argument.
Therefore we use self-evidence,
observable in act,
to clearly see who will dispense...
reality from fact.
implausibly denied,
only supports cupidity
when logic isn't tried.
They think no one will give a shit;
no challenge will be made
by citizens who lack the wit
and drink their Kool-Aid.
Much witness bearing is a load
of falsehood and intent
by mountebanks who mean to goad
with humbug argument.
Therefore we use self-evidence,
observable in act,
to clearly see who will dispense...
reality from fact.
#courage
#honesty
#learning #morality
#learning #morality
118 reads
10 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 1:07am
1st Oct 2024 1:07am
the cost of beauty
to understand,
appreciate
beauty
one must not
fear looking
into the abyss
every now and
again
appreciate
beauty
one must not
fear looking
into the abyss
every now and
again
#acceptance
#learning
#risk
133 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 4:06pm
11th Sep 2024 4:06pm
Back to Regular Programming
Minimalism
New Art
Painted Chopsticks
Use what you have …
New Art
Painted Chopsticks
Use what you have …
#art
#identity
#learning
#meditation
#PersonalGrowth
222 reads
22 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 8:50pm
8th Sep 2024 8:50pm
Take Two!
#learning
#motivational
#porn
#sex
#wisdom
262 reads
2 Comments
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