Poems About Jealousy Seeking Honest Critique
#jealousy
oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 5:30am
12th Dec 2024 5:30am
Cruel Ones
The cruel ones don’t let u up when you r down
The cruel ones don’t let u up
When you r down
Sit and smile at your misery
They sit and smile at my misery
Cruel ones won’t let u up
When ur down
Rip and pull at your heartstrings
Don’t feel…anything
They rip and pull
And u feel real small…Like you’re 2 foot tall
The cruel ones don’t let u up
When u r down
Till a time comes when you don’t care
And leave it all behind
Drop these feelings of being down
And these clowns...
The cruel ones don’t let u up
When you r down
Sit and smile at your misery
They sit and smile at my misery
Cruel ones won’t let u up
When ur down
Rip and pull at your heartstrings
Don’t feel…anything
They rip and pull
And u feel real small…Like you’re 2 foot tall
The cruel ones don’t let u up
When u r down
Till a time comes when you don’t care
And leave it all behind
Drop these feelings of being down
And these clowns...
#fear
#hate
#jealousy #oppression
#jealousy #oppression
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:28am
11th Dec 2024 7:28am
I am glad you want me
I am glad you want me
Ally
To be your friend
Maybe forever
I will be fine with it
I don't want you to think
That I am a hopeless case
I am trying my best
Taking care of me
Because there is nobody
Else who will take care of me
And I am quite able to do it
Also I am now in my senior years
And I just love to live in my
Senior years
I had lost some of my hearing
That is why
I need to use my hearing aid
I already got used to it
I already have some cataract
On my left eye
Also I need glasses for...
Ally
To be your friend
Maybe forever
I will be fine with it
I don't want you to think
That I am a hopeless case
I am trying my best
Taking care of me
Because there is nobody
Else who will take care of me
And I am quite able to do it
Also I am now in my senior years
And I just love to live in my
Senior years
I had lost some of my hearing
That is why
I need to use my hearing aid
I already got used to it
I already have some cataract
On my left eye
Also I need glasses for...
#anxiety
#disappointment
#fear
#jealousy
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:27am
11th Dec 2024 7:27am
Smart up
Smart up
Friends
Don't tell me
What time I should
Be home every night
Because I am no longer
A child
And you all are treating me
Like a child
I am now one adult
I have freedom in my life
So I Iive my life the way I want
Every single day
I don't care of what you think
I also have my style of clothes
And my style of clothes
Are second hand clothes
They also looks good on me
You tell me that I am cheap
Yes I am cheap
Friends
Don't tell me
What time I should
Be home every night
Because I am no longer
A child
And you all are treating me
Like a child
I am now one adult
I have freedom in my life
So I Iive my life the way I want
Every single day
I don't care of what you think
I also have my style of clothes
And my style of clothes
Are second hand clothes
They also looks good on me
You tell me that I am cheap
Yes I am cheap
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
#regret
#rejection
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PAR
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:53am
10th Dec 2024 10:53am
Arachne
In the silence of the ancient grove,
we bow with humble hearts and minds
honoring the eight-legged delicate weave
their webs a testament to nature's craft.
Through the stillness whispers of their lore
threads of existence crossing patterns
in their presence we find harmony
balanced in the cycle of life’s design.
Oh gentle spirits of the eight legs
we celebrate your ceaseless toil
crafting wonders in the air between breaths
your webs the stars of earthly skies.
Beneath the moon's serene glow
your...
we bow with humble hearts and minds
honoring the eight-legged delicate weave
their webs a testament to nature's craft.
Through the stillness whispers of their lore
threads of existence crossing patterns
in their presence we find harmony
balanced in the cycle of life’s design.
Oh gentle spirits of the eight legs
we celebrate your ceaseless toil
crafting wonders in the air between breaths
your webs the stars of earthly skies.
Beneath the moon's serene glow
your...
#jealousy
#mythology
#nature
#spiritual
#wisdom
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 1:10am
4th Dec 2024 1:10am
If you come back now
If you come back now
You will make my day
Dear Father
Because I am always
Worrying too much about me
My Father
I also worry about my health
Constantly
I want to improve my health
I still go for my shot of ozanpike
Every Friday morning
I inject the ozanpike on my tummy
I am slowly getting used to it
Also every month I take my shoot
Of abilify on my hip
The ozampike cuts my appetite and keeps
My weight down
Yes father I am so fat still
I am dying to lose weight
AND I know it is harder to lose weight ...
You will make my day
Dear Father
Because I am always
Worrying too much about me
My Father
I also worry about my health
Constantly
I want to improve my health
I still go for my shot of ozanpike
Every Friday morning
I inject the ozanpike on my tummy
I am slowly getting used to it
Also every month I take my shoot
Of abilify on my hip
The ozampike cuts my appetite and keeps
My weight down
Yes father I am so fat still
I am dying to lose weight
AND I know it is harder to lose weight ...
#anger
#despair
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#jealousy
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 1:13pm
3rd Dec 2024 1:13pm
Anastasia and Drizella
In the dim lit corners of their grand estate
Sinderellas stepsisters reveled in hate
Anastasia and Drizella with hearts so cold
Their cruelty a story dark and bold
Locked in an attic her spirit confined
Whispers of the wind her only kind
Each night they stripped her of her pride
In shadows her tears she couldn't hide
Scrubbing floors til her hands were raw
Their laughter echoed from down the hall
Within her heart a fire burned bright
Planning her escape into the night
Escape from her evil step...
Sinderellas stepsisters reveled in hate
Anastasia and Drizella with hearts so cold
Their cruelty a story dark and bold
Locked in an attic her spirit confined
Whispers of the wind her only kind
Each night they stripped her of her pride
In shadows her tears she couldn't hide
Scrubbing floors til her hands were raw
Their laughter echoed from down the hall
Within her heart a fire burned bright
Planning her escape into the night
Escape from her evil step...
#despair
#jealousy
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NP_NP
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 4:53pm
2nd Dec 2024 4:53pm
Hate Me
I know it drives you crazy,
Searching, trying to find the reason why you hate me.
I've seen it time and time again—
Someone fixates on a person like me,
Keeping record of all that I do,
Trying to undo their nemesis, every syllable.
So I say, stop—don’t go down this road,
For it will drive you mad.
I am creation!
I am all the flaws you see in yourself.
Deep down, you know it’s not really me that undoes you.
I sit in the fire you try to hide—
The rage, the depression, the jealousy.
I am all the emotions you deny. ...
Searching, trying to find the reason why you hate me.
I've seen it time and time again—
Someone fixates on a person like me,
Keeping record of all that I do,
Trying to undo their nemesis, every syllable.
So I say, stop—don’t go down this road,
For it will drive you mad.
I am creation!
I am all the flaws you see in yourself.
Deep down, you know it’s not really me that undoes you.
I sit in the fire you try to hide—
The rage, the depression, the jealousy.
I am all the emotions you deny. ...
#anger
#hate
#identity
#jealousy
#PersonalGrowth
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 3:09am
26th Nov 2024 3:09am
catty
talking to the room I introduce myself
it becomes quiet for a moment
then the glances become darts
and I can feel them
the catty gossips
they work their side of the room
while I rule mine
sweet smiles are given all around
but there is no crueller smile than that of a woman
it will shrivel your balls
especially if you're attracted
don't look, don't act
the girls will gather
and pick the object of your stare apart
it can be vicious
if she's pretty and innocent
she will be taken in by the group ...
it becomes quiet for a moment
then the glances become darts
and I can feel them
the catty gossips
they work their side of the room
while I rule mine
sweet smiles are given all around
but there is no crueller smile than that of a woman
it will shrivel your balls
especially if you're attracted
don't look, don't act
the girls will gather
and pick the object of your stare apart
it can be vicious
if she's pretty and innocent
she will be taken in by the group ...
#jealousy
#love
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 00:59am
25th Nov 2024 00:59am
Some people
Are a nature lover
And every single
Day they go for
A hiking
In the forest
Also it is much cooler
In the forest
Then in the sun
Also It was
Our master
That had made
The forest for us
There are also
People that goes
Camping over night
With their camping tent
Also they cook
There meals
Outside in the
Nature
They make a wood fire
Also they boil the water
To cook their food
Sometimes they will
Make some soup
For them to have
For dinner
After dinner
They will...
And every single
Day they go for
A hiking
In the forest
Also it is much cooler
In the forest
Then in the sun
Also It was
Our master
That had made
The forest for us
There are also
People that goes
Camping over night
With their camping tent
Also they cook
There meals
Outside in the
Nature
They make a wood fire
Also they boil the water
To cook their food
Sometimes they will
Make some soup
For them to have
For dinner
After dinner
They will...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#frustration
#jealousy
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:17pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:17pm
Estarei con tigo
Estarei con tigo
My friend
Every single day
Supporting you daily
That is not a lie
We are both good friends
And we have
The same believes
I can't hardly believe that
Also we treat each other with respect
We never once mistreat each other
Because that would be the wrong thing to do
And we don't deserve that
We need to work on our friendship
Because I want it to last a long time
We would be lost in the world
If we didn't had each other
My friend
Every single day
Supporting you daily
That is not a lie
We are both good friends
And we have
The same believes
I can't hardly believe that
Also we treat each other with respect
We never once mistreat each other
Because that would be the wrong thing to do
And we don't deserve that
We need to work on our friendship
Because I want it to last a long time
We would be lost in the world
If we didn't had each other
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#jealousy
#loneliness
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Onyxceila
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 3:31am
20th Nov 2024 3:31am
Sincerely Dr. Jekyll
I can feel this rage boiling,
Bubbling to the top.
I can feel it catching fire,
Gathering heat nonstop.
Trampled on, belittled, and used,
With pain and anger suppression fused,
Cap to bottle where pressure grew.
A rageful burst ignites a flame,
A violent urge inside creates
An urgent need to purge what’s sane.
So I tipped the ladle and poured my pain,
Into molds I cast from shame,
Where molten bone is cooled with haste
To form the blackest glass to claws and fangs.
From iron ladle, fall tears like viscous...
Bubbling to the top.
I can feel it catching fire,
Gathering heat nonstop.
Trampled on, belittled, and used,
With pain and anger suppression fused,
Cap to bottle where pressure grew.
A rageful burst ignites a flame,
A violent urge inside creates
An urgent need to purge what’s sane.
So I tipped the ladle and poured my pain,
Into molds I cast from shame,
Where molten bone is cooled with haste
To form the blackest glass to claws and fangs.
From iron ladle, fall tears like viscous...
#dark
#hate
#jealousy #monsters
#jealousy #monsters
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 7:23pm
17th Nov 2024 7:23pm
Show me the place
Show me the place
Where you are going
To burry me the day I die
I hope I don't die young
Because I am planning to live
A long time
Here on earth
Also I don't want to think about
That
So please don't mention anything
About death to me
Where you are going
To burry me the day I die
I hope I don't die young
Because I am planning to live
A long time
Here on earth
Also I don't want to think about
That
So please don't mention anything
About death to me
#anxiety
#jealousy
#regret
#rejection
#sadness
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