Poems About Jealousy Seeking Honest Critique
#jealousy
Wannabe_batman
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 11:58am
30th Mar 2025 11:58am
Life is unfair, yet a gift.
Life is unfair yet a gift:-
Some die of thirst whilst others drown to death, a person in prison feels free whilst someone in a land of flower beds seeks freedom.
The ones on top say but they aren't really humble,
The eyes of children are filled with tears as they see their dreams crumble.
Oh! I see. Oh! I see,that life is unfair yet a gift.
Oh! I see. Oh! I see, some die of hunger whilst others are sound asleep.
Sometimes I think to stair at the abyss hoping it will stair back,
But when I do...
I am the one who stairs back .
Oh i see ... Oh...
Some die of thirst whilst others drown to death, a person in prison feels free whilst someone in a land of flower beds seeks freedom.
The ones on top say but they aren't really humble,
The eyes of children are filled with tears as they see their dreams crumble.
Oh! I see. Oh! I see,that life is unfair yet a gift.
Oh! I see. Oh! I see, some die of hunger whilst others are sound asleep.
Sometimes I think to stair at the abyss hoping it will stair back,
But when I do...
I am the one who stairs back .
Oh i see ... Oh...
#denial
#despair
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 12:11pm
22nd Mar 2025 12:11pm
In the city of sorrows
In the city of sorrows
Is where we see so much
Racism
Against
Men and women
In the city of sorrows
There are so much injustice
Against people
The black people are the
Blue color worker
And they earn less money than
The white people
Is where we see so much
Racism
Against
Men and women
In the city of sorrows
There are so much injustice
Against people
The black people are the
Blue color worker
And they earn less money than
The white people
#anxiety
#denial
#despair
#disappointment
#jealousy
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 00:05am
3rd Mar 2025 00:05am
I can't feel it
I can't feel it
That I am going on
To my manic state
I know that I am
Starting to be angry at people
I know that people starting to
Avoid me
Because they also feel hurt
They also are afraid that I
Can do something bad to them
I am trying very hard to control
My anger
That is something that I must do
Urgent
Also, I am not getting a proper
Sleep
The truth is that I need my full
Sleep every day
Now I know that my mind is foggy
I am also afraid that I could lose
My friends
And become alone...
That I am going on
To my manic state
I know that I am
Starting to be angry at people
I know that people starting to
Avoid me
Because they also feel hurt
They also are afraid that I
Can do something bad to them
I am trying very hard to control
My anger
That is something that I must do
Urgent
Also, I am not getting a proper
Sleep
The truth is that I need my full
Sleep every day
Now I know that my mind is foggy
I am also afraid that I could lose
My friends
And become alone...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 1:47am
28th Feb 2025 1:47am
Cry Baby
Cry baby bitch
Did you get your fix?
Now I'm the evil witch.
Ill leave you in a ditch.
Dont try to block their view.
I look so much better than you.
They find me no matter what you do.
I'm an open door they can come through.
But my sight is locked.
On scum I'll always block.
That tried to walk the way I walk.
And lied everytime they talked.
You screwed your own friend.
Trying to get between me and him.
But there are so many of them.
That will fight for me until the end.
Don't try to be nice...
Did you get your fix?
Now I'm the evil witch.
Ill leave you in a ditch.
Dont try to block their view.
I look so much better than you.
They find me no matter what you do.
I'm an open door they can come through.
But my sight is locked.
On scum I'll always block.
That tried to walk the way I walk.
And lied everytime they talked.
You screwed your own friend.
Trying to get between me and him.
But there are so many of them.
That will fight for me until the end.
Don't try to be nice...
#betrayal
#hypocrisy
#jealousy
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jenny_way
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 6:15pm
21st Feb 2025 6:15pm
Born to Be Less
Gifted. One of a kind.
She rises on her own in the blink of an eye.
So pretty, she makes the average feel insecure.
You can’t believe she’s cruel—
she’s the best granddaughter of all.
Don’t pretend it’s not true, because I know—
she’s your pride, and I’m just her shadow.
I guess I can’t call her stupid;
she did things I wish I could have done.
Staring at her pictures, I feel sick about my life.
What went wrong with me?
Why couldn’t I end up
where she has?
Don’t feed me bullshit like “everyone’s unique in their own...
She rises on her own in the blink of an eye.
So pretty, she makes the average feel insecure.
You can’t believe she’s cruel—
she’s the best granddaughter of all.
Don’t pretend it’s not true, because I know—
she’s your pride, and I’m just her shadow.
I guess I can’t call her stupid;
she did things I wish I could have done.
Staring at her pictures, I feel sick about my life.
What went wrong with me?
Why couldn’t I end up
where she has?
Don’t feed me bullshit like “everyone’s unique in their own...
#jealousy
#LifeStruggles
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 1:56pm
16th Feb 2025 1:56pm
Father will be there
Father will be there
To heal me from my sickness
Any time today
Father will be there
And put me to sleep
This night
I need that badly
Father will be there
To pray together with me
Before I go to sleep
We will pray for the countries that
Are in war
Also, we are going to pray
For us both
Father, you know me well
You can always trust me
I will never let you down
Because you hate
To be let down
Father, I will treat you respect
Also, I don't make promises
To you that I can't keep
I am...
To heal me from my sickness
Any time today
Father will be there
And put me to sleep
This night
I need that badly
Father will be there
To pray together with me
Before I go to sleep
We will pray for the countries that
Are in war
Also, we are going to pray
For us both
Father, you know me well
You can always trust me
I will never let you down
Because you hate
To be let down
Father, I will treat you respect
Also, I don't make promises
To you that I can't keep
I am...
#bittersweet
#fear
#jealousy
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 1:54pm
16th Feb 2025 1:54pm
Polvo Brazileiro
I am also proud
To belong to the
Polvo Brazileiro
Also many years when
I was born one Brazilian
Polvo
I lived in São Paulo
I had been robed while walking
In the street of São Paulo
And it is not safe to walking in São Paulo
You also could be killed in the street in São Paulo
Also in São Paulo you can't drive you car with you
Window open
I never liked living in São Paulo
When I was just a teenager
I moved out of São Paulo
To Canada
I love living in Canada
At least it is safe to walk on the streets ...
To belong to the
Polvo Brazileiro
Also many years when
I was born one Brazilian
Polvo
I lived in São Paulo
I had been robed while walking
In the street of São Paulo
And it is not safe to walking in São Paulo
You also could be killed in the street in São Paulo
Also in São Paulo you can't drive you car with you
Window open
I never liked living in São Paulo
When I was just a teenager
I moved out of São Paulo
To Canada
I love living in Canada
At least it is safe to walk on the streets ...
#emptiness
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
It is so hard to live without you my father
It is so hard to live without you
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:25pm
7th Feb 2025 10:25pm
I am waking up now
I am waking up
Now
The time is 8:00 am
I am starting to get ready
For the day
First I am shaving my
Face the old fashion away
It is very hard to do
I have to do it
Slowly
If I do it fast
I will cut my face
It takes me 20 minutes
To shave
When it is over
I will go into my shower
And have a shower
When my shower is over
I will turn the shower off
Then I will dry my body
With a bath towel
Now is the time for me
To get dress
In to my casual clothes
I will put my pajama and my ...
Now
The time is 8:00 am
I am starting to get ready
For the day
First I am shaving my
Face the old fashion away
It is very hard to do
I have to do it
Slowly
If I do it fast
I will cut my face
It takes me 20 minutes
To shave
When it is over
I will go into my shower
And have a shower
When my shower is over
I will turn the shower off
Then I will dry my body
With a bath towel
Now is the time for me
To get dress
In to my casual clothes
I will put my pajama and my ...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:38am
7th Feb 2025 1:38am
Cómo Foi?
Cómo Foi?
This beautiful sunny day
During the Summer
It was a very hot day
For us
That made us
Sweat like pigs
Nonstop
The only way to get
Relief from this hot day
Is to go to the beach
Where it is cooler
We will have to swim
For a few minutes
Then when we come out
We will feel relieved
Cómo Foi?
I was the only one
Who had taken a look
At the blue sky
With white clouds
Also, I didn't see any sign
Of rain in the sky
Now this day was coming to
An end
We saw the sun going...
This beautiful sunny day
During the Summer
It was a very hot day
For us
That made us
Sweat like pigs
Nonstop
The only way to get
Relief from this hot day
Is to go to the beach
Where it is cooler
We will have to swim
For a few minutes
Then when we come out
We will feel relieved
Cómo Foi?
I was the only one
Who had taken a look
At the blue sky
With white clouds
Also, I didn't see any sign
Of rain in the sky
Now this day was coming to
An end
We saw the sun going...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
Don't go around
Don't go around
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#rejection
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 1:52am
4th Feb 2025 1:52am
I am not dreaming anymore at night
I am not dreaming anymore
At night
Because there are
Nothing left for me to dream
At the moment
And that is the truth
When I sleep at night I sleep
Like a log
I never get up in the middle of the night
I also hear myself breathing nonstop
I need to get 8 hours of sleep
I can't function without sleep
My father
When I wake up in the morning
I am always waking up tired
My dear God
I would love to go back to bed
And sleep a few hours
But if I do that I won't sleep at night
Also, I am not a morning person...
At night
Because there are
Nothing left for me to dream
At the moment
And that is the truth
When I sleep at night I sleep
Like a log
I never get up in the middle of the night
I also hear myself breathing nonstop
I need to get 8 hours of sleep
I can't function without sleep
My father
When I wake up in the morning
I am always waking up tired
My dear God
I would love to go back to bed
And sleep a few hours
But if I do that I won't sleep at night
Also, I am not a morning person...
#anxiety
#denial
#despair
#heartbroken
#jealousy
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