Poems About Hurt by Top Critiquers
#hurt
Poems about hurt by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
12th Feb 2024 8:39pm
12th Feb 2024 8:39pm
MAGA Paleolithicus
They were an undiscovered type of ape
living among us in truck stops and bars
where there was no acceptable escape
from substance abuse and loud guitars,
and thus they had no complete trains of thought
to mollify the beast in beasty mode
where pride soon saw that they remained untaught
except for using congress as a commode
rather than for tutored parlance, as meant,
and so turbulence ruled MAGA hearts,
so much so, that the jargon which they spent
made less sense...
living among us in truck stops and bars
where there was no acceptable escape
from substance abuse and loud guitars,
and thus they had no complete trains of thought
to mollify the beast in beasty mode
where pride soon saw that they remained untaught
except for using congress as a commode
rather than for tutored parlance, as meant,
and so turbulence ruled MAGA hearts,
so much so, that the jargon which they spent
made less sense...
#grief
#despair
#hurt
233 reads
17 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 9:00pm
29th Dec 2021 9:00pm
Ravish me with poetry
You hurt me with words,
more furious day by day
Come on, violate me with poetry!
Verses of my soul!
Come on, devote a few more lines,
Tie me tight to the bed!
For this, listen, there is always time
For this I will not be ...
Come on, just a few more lines,
I really love your torture,
the whip of your verses
Ravish me with poetry
more furious day by day
Come on, violate me with poetry!
Verses of my soul!
Come on, devote a few more lines,
Tie me tight to the bed!
For this, listen, there is always time
For this I will not be ...
Come on, just a few more lines,
I really love your torture,
the whip of your verses
Ravish me with poetry
#love
#WritingPoetry
#hurt
972 reads
49 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
14th Jun 2017 5:25pm
14th Jun 2017 5:25pm
Marooned
the words don’t flow
as freely as they used to
my muse has left me
i tried to write
about my sorrow
i can’t...
it’s too painful
besides that...
no one knows
what it feels like
to lose everything
to have nothing
he knows...
four years of...
as freely as they used to
my muse has left me
i tried to write
about my sorrow
i can’t...
it’s too painful
besides that...
no one knows
what it feels like
to lose everything
to have nothing
he knows...
four years of...
#grief
#hurt
1162 reads
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
4th Feb 2020 6:46am
4th Feb 2020 6:46am
Help me
My mind is my enemy.
I cant stop remembering.
The past, the present
Thats all i think.
Nothing wont let me,
Draw a blank.
Im not where i thought id be
Alone with all my misery
Please help,
Im just suffering.
I wish i couldnt feel anything.
I cant stop remembering.
The past, the present
Thats all i think.
Nothing wont let me,
Draw a blank.
Im not where i thought id be
Alone with all my misery
Please help,
Im just suffering.
I wish i couldnt feel anything.
#hurt
695 reads
7 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 10:39pm
21st Apr 2024 10:39pm
Aching through Eternity
Aching through eternity.
How can you feel so heavy
yet so empty?
Simultaneously.
Stone lead hearts
and soul black holes.
Trees ache for the riot
of supple leaves.
Aching wants
are not aching needs
I acutely ache for the return of me.
Empty deny's aching to be full.
My heavy thoughts dream
of veins of empty peace.
Nature's beauty aches to be.
Every single ache,
is a different want and a
different need.
How can you feel so heavy
yet so empty?
Simultaneously.
Stone lead hearts
and soul black holes.
Trees ache for the riot
of supple leaves.
Aching wants
are not aching needs
I acutely ache for the return of me.
Empty deny's aching to be full.
My heavy thoughts dream
of veins of empty peace.
Nature's beauty aches to be.
Every single ache,
is a different want and a
different need.
#hurt
#nature
208 reads
17 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 4:15am
1st Mar 2024 4:15am
Burned
Sunday afternoon
is horrible
the sun is shining
friends are calling
but with your ADHD
lesson plans take a long time
and you're two weeks behind on grading
and of yeah
you have three test administrator training modules to do
you have housework to finish too
you're trying to do it quickly
steam is billowing
from your new electric kettle
a cup of ginger tea
will be soothing
mind on anything
but the present moment
you reach for an upper cupboard
too close to the billowing...
is horrible
the sun is shining
friends are calling
but with your ADHD
lesson plans take a long time
and you're two weeks behind on grading
and of yeah
you have three test administrator training modules to do
you have housework to finish too
you're trying to do it quickly
steam is billowing
from your new electric kettle
a cup of ginger tea
will be soothing
mind on anything
but the present moment
you reach for an upper cupboard
too close to the billowing...
#hurt
188 reads
9 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
12th Sep 2019 3:52am
12th Sep 2019 3:52am
The Feeling of Lost
I watched another sun come up
And another sun has set
As shadows lengthen into the night
But nights no darker than the day
And my life
Both good and bad
Lies wasted in the stain
The feeling of lost
Which cradles me now in emptiness
And for what?
For saying I wanted to be kissed as if this was our last breath
For wanting to be part of us
And not a me and you
For wanting warmth and not just a body
Lying beside me in the bed
*
...
And another sun has set
As shadows lengthen into the night
But nights no darker than the day
And my life
Both good and bad
Lies wasted in the stain
The feeling of lost
Which cradles me now in emptiness
And for what?
For saying I wanted to be kissed as if this was our last breath
For wanting to be part of us
And not a me and you
For wanting warmth and not just a body
Lying beside me in the bed
*
...
#relationships
#breakup
#MovingOn #hurt
#MovingOn #hurt
676 reads
6 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 6:07am
29th Sep 2024 6:07am
Sir
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic #hurt
#erotic #hurt
446 reads
20 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2023 7:13am
2nd Aug 2023 7:13am
latest version of love
for sale
at the heart-breaker shop
my purple heart
at the heart-breaker shop
my purple heart
#love
#hurt
271 reads
11 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st Oct 2023 00:57am
31st Oct 2023 00:57am
let’s not go out
harder to walk than it used to
be easy going into town holds few attractions for me now, I would
rather stay in tonight
be easy going into town holds few attractions for me now, I would
rather stay in tonight
#hurt
154 reads
1 Comment
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 5:07am
1st Jan 2025 5:07am
new year (same issues)
here
it is,
a brand
new year,
and
unfortunately
i carried
with me
now
the same
pain that
i had
hoped
to leave
behind
with the
old year.
it is,
a brand
new year,
and
unfortunately
i carried
with me
now
the same
pain that
i had
hoped
to leave
behind
with the
old year.
#disability
#hurt
#illness
#vulnerability
#weakness
116 reads
4 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 10:31pm
9th Feb 2025 10:31pm
you're just a stain, not a picture
You walk in
get under my skin
come on, manipulate me, boy
My soul still crawls with the memories
of when you tried to take a bite
how did I taste, boy?
was it fucking worth it?
how does shame feel, now, boy?
has it been so long you forgot?
Did you want to break me?
(I think you wanted to break me)
'cause you didn't break me
I've been murdered
by more skilled lovers than you
and your memory is more
of a shit stain
than a tortured work of art
You walk in
get under my skin ...
get under my skin
come on, manipulate me, boy
My soul still crawls with the memories
of when you tried to take a bite
how did I taste, boy?
was it fucking worth it?
how does shame feel, now, boy?
has it been so long you forgot?
Did you want to break me?
(I think you wanted to break me)
'cause you didn't break me
I've been murdered
by more skilled lovers than you
and your memory is more
of a shit stain
than a tortured work of art
You walk in
get under my skin ...
#anger
#betrayal
#hurt
140 reads
5 Comments
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