Poems About Hurt Seeking Honest Critique
#hurt
Poems about hurt seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:07am
Yesterday 1:07am
Broken heart
Broken heart
Has you opened up your hands, I lay in them my fractured heart, now in many pieces it was whole once at the start
Whole on that fateful day, when it was full of joy and hope, then she dashed it on such stormy rocks but I managed to move on and cope
Slowly I rebuilt my heart, then I learned to trust again, helped by those around me, I got passed my fear and pain
Slowly like a emerging butterfly I began to spread my wings, there support gave me flight and all the joys that brings
But sadly I flew to high like Icarus I got...
Has you opened up your hands, I lay in them my fractured heart, now in many pieces it was whole once at the start
Whole on that fateful day, when it was full of joy and hope, then she dashed it on such stormy rocks but I managed to move on and cope
Slowly I rebuilt my heart, then I learned to trust again, helped by those around me, I got passed my fear and pain
Slowly like a emerging butterfly I began to spread my wings, there support gave me flight and all the joys that brings
But sadly I flew to high like Icarus I got...
#love
#loneliness
#hurt
50 reads
2 Comments
SoloFives
Poem Published
28th Mar 2023 11:54pm
28th Mar 2023 11:54pm
m33t m3 out w3st
Can you feel that vibe?
Everyone around me is not my side
I think I saw a neighbor just call the fives
No question
Now I'm stressing
Where can these bodies
Before the cops arrive
Right when I tossed a leg
I heard a car in the drive way
Then I ran to meet him outside
Shake hands and say hi
Then, excuse me officer Tim
"Yes?"
Well, it's spring clean time
Everything it took
For me to think things twice
Before I cut ties
I Promise they had to go
They look better as patio furniture
Some are...
Everyone around me is not my side
I think I saw a neighbor just call the fives
No question
Now I'm stressing
Where can these bodies
Before the cops arrive
Right when I tossed a leg
I heard a car in the drive way
Then I ran to meet him outside
Shake hands and say hi
Then, excuse me officer Tim
"Yes?"
Well, it's spring clean time
Everything it took
For me to think things twice
Before I cut ties
I Promise they had to go
They look better as patio furniture
Some are...
#loneliness
#rejection
#abuse
#hurt
#bittersweet
33 reads
2 Comments
Sugar-Britches2
Poem Published
27th Mar 2023 2:46pm
27th Mar 2023 2:46pm
What I Want
Standing before me as the
embodiment of perfection
you ask me rhetorically
what I want, like you didn't
know...
You know what I want
You've always known
You know that I want to
Penetrate your very soul
You know that I want to
Be so close to you that
Our skin melds together
Into a single being of
Ecstasy
You know that I want to
Be filled with a fit of rage
Because we can't physically
Be closer to one another
You know that I want to
Feel the gut wrenching ...
embodiment of perfection
you ask me rhetorically
what I want, like you didn't
know...
You know what I want
You've always known
You know that I want to
Penetrate your very soul
You know that I want to
Be so close to you that
Our skin melds together
Into a single being of
Ecstasy
You know that I want to
Be filled with a fit of rage
Because we can't physically
Be closer to one another
You know that I want to
Feel the gut wrenching ...
#love
#lust
#erotic
#food
#hurt
146 reads
7 Comments
MsRockyJackson
Poem Published
25th Mar 2023 2:30pm
25th Mar 2023 2:30pm
I’ll Never Forget You
We had our good times,
We had our bad times.
We were two imperfect people that found each other at an imperfect moment.
When we first met we were two geeky teenagers that bonded over poetry and soon became best friends.
Even when we both went our separate ways;
You went off to college at nineteen and me at seventeen I had already graduated from high school and was in love with my first love till after a year we split up and I been through a few dead end relationships that weren’t exactly all that till we started to talk again and next thing you know who would’ve...
We had our bad times.
We were two imperfect people that found each other at an imperfect moment.
When we first met we were two geeky teenagers that bonded over poetry and soon became best friends.
Even when we both went our separate ways;
You went off to college at nineteen and me at seventeen I had already graduated from high school and was in love with my first love till after a year we split up and I been through a few dead end relationships that weren’t exactly all that till we started to talk again and next thing you know who would’ve...
#love
#depression
#LifeStruggles
#confessional
#hurt
78 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Mar 2023 00:15am
24th Mar 2023 00:15am
walking shtick
some way down the street I suddenly think I can’t do this
hurts
hurts
#hurt
36 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2023 2:00am
23rd Mar 2023 2:00am
she kills pretty things
she kills pretty
things...
the birth of breath
in the flowers of
the morning
the Vivaldi of birds
singing from the
tree
the sun shining
down on a glittering
field of broken
glass
she kills pretty
things
like pulling the wings
off of moths in the
bedroom at midnight
by candle light
roses shiver in
terror
cats become
liquid and pour
into tiny spaces
to hide
love escapes out
the backdoor
but there is no ...
things...
the birth of breath
in the flowers of
the morning
the Vivaldi of birds
singing from the
tree
the sun shining
down on a glittering
field of broken
glass
she kills pretty
things
like pulling the wings
off of moths in the
bedroom at midnight
by candle light
roses shiver in
terror
cats become
liquid and pour
into tiny spaces
to hide
love escapes out
the backdoor
but there is no ...
#sadness
#hurt
61 reads
4 Comments
Her
Poem Published
14th Mar 2023 10:36am
14th Mar 2023 10:36am
Letting Go
It doesn’t mean
That I am giving up
My heart still holds yours
I want your love back
But the pain
You inflicted
Cracked my resolve to stay
Your smile faded
And my hand withdrew
But my heart
Continues to embrace yours
That I am giving up
My heart still holds yours
I want your love back
But the pain
You inflicted
Cracked my resolve to stay
Your smile faded
And my hand withdrew
But my heart
Continues to embrace yours
#boyfriend
#heartbroken
#breakup
#emotional
#hurt
125 reads
6 Comments
misterrerun
Poem Published
12th Mar 2023 9:43am
12th Mar 2023 9:43am
The night sky is just a charred world
Last night
We decided to alter
the collision course that
tends to always reset itself
(it did not.)
I yanked you from stale inertia
Your mouth singed mine
as a star bled light
somewhere
(it still is.)
We abandoned civility
because love never
needs a prison
(it is enough.)
As you stripped me of my lies
I tore your garb, chewed
your ribcage
(I heard the plaintive song.)
I bit your heart
and spat
Vesuvius
Last night
I lifted you,...
We decided to alter
the collision course that
tends to always reset itself
(it did not.)
I yanked you from stale inertia
Your mouth singed mine
as a star bled light
somewhere
(it still is.)
We abandoned civility
because love never
needs a prison
(it is enough.)
As you stripped me of my lies
I tore your garb, chewed
your ribcage
(I heard the plaintive song.)
I bit your heart
and spat
Vesuvius
Last night
I lifted you,...
#love
#grief
#lover
#nostalgia
#hurt
67 reads
2 Comments
QuietlyOutspoken
Poem Published
10th Mar 2023 1:56am
10th Mar 2023 1:56am
Inferiority Complex
It’s spring again
And you’re out every night
With your new friends
You’re all coated in same skin
I don’t know how I thought
I could ever fit in
Let’s go back to when
The snow kept us inside
I’ve always been told
They’re not better than me
But that’s not how it seems
I want to know what they’re talking about
They make me feel like I’m missing out
I spend everyday alone in my house
While they’re running all over town
But they all say they want my life
I’m not allowed to want to...
And you’re out every night
With your new friends
You’re all coated in same skin
I don’t know how I thought
I could ever fit in
Let’s go back to when
The snow kept us inside
I’ve always been told
They’re not better than me
But that’s not how it seems
I want to know what they’re talking about
They make me feel like I’m missing out
I spend everyday alone in my house
While they’re running all over town
But they all say they want my life
I’m not allowed to want to...
#betrayal
#despair
#hurt
80 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
5th Mar 2023 5:23pm
5th Mar 2023 5:23pm
I Won't Cry Again
If I can’t hold you closely, I’ll embrace no one else.
I don’t ever want to feel the heartbeat of another girl.
How I wish you could hear the pounding of my heart.
If you won’t kiss me, I’ll live without sweet kisses.
Darling, these lips of mine will touch no other lips.
I don’t want to kiss and caress anyone but you.
I won’t lose these feelings for you as time goes by.
You won’t be mine, but I don’t want another girl.
I can’t love someone else while I’m in love with you.
The moment I saw you, I wanted to steal your heart. ...
I don’t ever want to feel the heartbeat of another girl.
How I wish you could hear the pounding of my heart.
If you won’t kiss me, I’ll live without sweet kisses.
Darling, these lips of mine will touch no other lips.
I don’t want to kiss and caress anyone but you.
I won’t lose these feelings for you as time goes by.
You won’t be mine, but I don’t want another girl.
I can’t love someone else while I’m in love with you.
The moment I saw you, I wanted to steal your heart. ...
#love
#girlfriend
#heartbroken
#hurt
#emotions
120 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2023 2:10pm
2nd Mar 2023 2:10pm
What She Caught Him Doing Behind Her Back
While climbing out of
the pool, Susan looked
at her husband fool
around til her best
friend which made her mad.
the pool, Susan looked
at her husband fool
around til her best
friend which made her mad.
#BestFriend
#marriage
#corruption
#fiction
#hurt
38 reads
2 Comments
kaislibrary
Poem Published
24th Feb 2023 3:55am
24th Feb 2023 3:55am
House Fire
I've always had a fear of fire,
the way it sets flame to whatever it touches,
it's ability to turn anything to ash,
the thought of it terrified me.
at least it did.
my perspective of fire changed when I met you,
you were an open flame,
one that I fell in love with,
your flame was bigger than me,
it controlled me.
the heat that radiated off it was invisible,
I chose for it to be that way.
I gave you room to grow,.
I provided you with oxygen,
while you spent your time setting fire to whatever laid between us. ...
the way it sets flame to whatever it touches,
it's ability to turn anything to ash,
the thought of it terrified me.
at least it did.
my perspective of fire changed when I met you,
you were an open flame,
one that I fell in love with,
your flame was bigger than me,
it controlled me.
the heat that radiated off it was invisible,
I chose for it to be that way.
I gave you room to grow,.
I provided you with oxygen,
while you spent your time setting fire to whatever laid between us. ...
#abuse
#emotional
#hurt
112 reads
2 Comments
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