Poems About Hurt Seeking Honest Critique
#hurt
Poems about hurt seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Weather Man
Some of us see the rain,
more than the sunshine.
And I mean, really, that’s fine..
eventually you learn to appreciate it.
I’ve learned to dance between the drops,
as well as I’ve learned to cry in it.
but like the flowers and trees
I grow, I thrive in it.
Seeds sprouting
after endless tears have watered them.
i just have to give them time, don’t bother them..
from despair true beauty can grow
little did I know
that you’d come along
with arms so strong
you picked me up when i was falling apart;
a new feeling of...
more than the sunshine.
And I mean, really, that’s fine..
eventually you learn to appreciate it.
I’ve learned to dance between the drops,
as well as I’ve learned to cry in it.
but like the flowers and trees
I grow, I thrive in it.
Seeds sprouting
after endless tears have watered them.
i just have to give them time, don’t bother them..
from despair true beauty can grow
little did I know
that you’d come along
with arms so strong
you picked me up when i was falling apart;
a new feeling of...
#love
#LifeStruggles
#UnrequitedLove #hurt
#UnrequitedLove #hurt
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Dirk finding out
#romantic
#BDSM
#vampires
#respect
#hurt
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My shattered heart
I scoop the shattered pieces between my hands.
Little shards sometimes snap and penetrate into the gaps between my fingers as I kneel on the floor.
I've performed the task many times before but it's easy to lose fragments amongst the dirt and debris.
I work carefully, every piece missing is a sliver lost in me.
Impossible to fix, but kindness and sunlight, and being alone for some time, it won't be the same design but it should work alright.
I'll still try.
Little shards sometimes snap and penetrate into the gaps between my fingers as I kneel on the floor.
I've performed the task many times before but it's easy to lose fragments amongst the dirt and debris.
I work carefully, every piece missing is a sliver lost in me.
Impossible to fix, but kindness and sunlight, and being alone for some time, it won't be the same design but it should work alright.
I'll still try.
#hurt
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Senseless Violence
Thirty plus years ago I was watching the local news. One of the main stories was of a young man aged 20 being murdered. Not by a criminal, or his friends, but by the police.
The boy who had mental issues was running around the apartment with two knives pointed at his chest yelling, “I’M GOING TO KILL MYSELF; I’M GOING TO KILL MYSELF!!” The boy’s father calls the police explaining that my boy wants to kill himself. The police arrive. They have five officers arrive at the scene. The boy became agitated when the police arrived. He climbed out of the window and onto a fire escape. The...
The boy who had mental issues was running around the apartment with two knives pointed at his chest yelling, “I’M GOING TO KILL MYSELF; I’M GOING TO KILL MYSELF!!” The boy’s father calls the police explaining that my boy wants to kill himself. The police arrive. They have five officers arrive at the scene. The boy became agitated when the police arrived. He climbed out of the window and onto a fire escape. The...
#sadness
#anger
#grief #hurt
#grief #hurt
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A Moment Of Halse And Betrayal
Bruce was sitting at his desk, looking at
his watch and wondering what was taking
his future bride Susan so long before he
let himself walk over to her apartment
where he caught her in a naked embrace with Brad.
his watch and wondering what was taking
his future bride Susan so long before he
let himself walk over to her apartment
where he caught her in a naked embrace with Brad.
#corruption
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
#hurt
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DOOMED
#sex
#death
#emptiness
#FeelingTrapped
#hurt
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The beginning
#lust
#BDSM
#vampires
#suffering
#hurt
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I Wish You Are Here To Share This With Me Again
While the
sun sets, she
would still
be sitting alone
on that one beach and
missing her murdered
husband
with all of
her heart.
sun sets, she
would still
be sitting alone
on that one beach and
missing her murdered
husband
with all of
her heart.
#death
#beach
#fiction
#lover
#hurt
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and so on
My brain still struggles
to find the reasons why
My soul that knows all
sends glimpses of your vibe
If I'm the only one that feels it,
screw it, just never mind
But I swear I almost
touch you during the night
I told the universe
we are already together
Our soul's eye caresses
each other from beyond
Of course this lifetime right here
won't last forever
I'll search of you in my next one
and my next one
and so on.
to find the reasons why
My soul that knows all
sends glimpses of your vibe
If I'm the only one that feels it,
screw it, just never mind
But I swear I almost
touch you during the night
I told the universe
we are already together
Our soul's eye caresses
each other from beyond
Of course this lifetime right here
won't last forever
I'll search of you in my next one
and my next one
and so on.
#love
#hurt
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Thimble
in the darkroom
on a camel's hump
I found fingers
moving around the parts
hidden
dark fingers
that pierce the skin
and open paths
in pubic hair
gonads cracked
under the weight of fingers
victims cowered
of precognitive fear
thin fingers
hard life
like a thimble
running oily
in the folds of the skin
silent almonds
on glandular surface
disjointed fingers
complex fingers
grind the groin
in the darkness of the caves
in the animals' maw
fingers chew
swallow and ruminate...
on a camel's hump
I found fingers
moving around the parts
hidden
dark fingers
that pierce the skin
and open paths
in pubic hair
gonads cracked
under the weight of fingers
victims cowered
of precognitive fear
thin fingers
hard life
like a thimble
running oily
in the folds of the skin
silent almonds
on glandular surface
disjointed fingers
complex fingers
grind the groin
in the darkness of the caves
in the animals' maw
fingers chew
swallow and ruminate...
#LifeStruggles
#mirror
#sensual
#hurt
#obsession
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What One Should Not See At A Friend's Christmas Party
Steven
walked over
to get
a better look at
the Christmas tree and
becomes shocked at the
sight of
his daughter
naked.
walked over
to get
a better look at
the Christmas tree and
becomes shocked at the
sight of
his daughter
naked.
#Christmas
#fiction
#sensual
#daughter
#hurt
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Trying To Fit In
I was walking down the street.
With friends and people I meet.
I could hear laughter.
I could hear chatter.
But I wasn't a part of it.
I got closer,trying to join.
But something felt different.
Even though I'm among my peers.
I feel different.
Like I am from another planet,another species.
Hoping,that somebody will join.
As if I am far different.
Even though,I'm not.
I'm a human being.
So why do I feel like this?
I feel myself slipping away.
My soul wandering away,but my body...
With friends and people I meet.
I could hear laughter.
I could hear chatter.
But I wasn't a part of it.
I got closer,trying to join.
But something felt different.
Even though I'm among my peers.
I feel different.
Like I am from another planet,another species.
Hoping,that somebody will join.
As if I am far different.
Even though,I'm not.
I'm a human being.
So why do I feel like this?
I feel myself slipping away.
My soul wandering away,but my body...
#hope
#friendship
#hurt
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DU Poetry : Poems About Hurt Seeking Honest Critique