Poems About Humankind Seeking Honest Critique
#humankind
PAR
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:57pm
24th Jan 2025 2:57pm
No Verbal Tense
In the twilight of day, where shadows stretch long,
you find yourself pondering, life's complex song.
The moon, a cheese wheel, rolls across the sky,
stars sprinkle the heavens, a cosmic pie.
Your thoughts wander, a kite in a hurricane,
pulled by the winds of whimsy and pain.
Cats sleep, their purrs a melody sweet,
dreams of catnip and mice at their feet.
You sip on your tea, a brew of contemplation,
steeping in moments of pure fascination.
Each sip a journey, a boat on life's river,
navigating currents that make your...
you find yourself pondering, life's complex song.
The moon, a cheese wheel, rolls across the sky,
stars sprinkle the heavens, a cosmic pie.
Your thoughts wander, a kite in a hurricane,
pulled by the winds of whimsy and pain.
Cats sleep, their purrs a melody sweet,
dreams of catnip and mice at their feet.
You sip on your tea, a brew of contemplation,
steeping in moments of pure fascination.
Each sip a journey, a boat on life's river,
navigating currents that make your...
#cats
#earth
#humankind
#universe
#WritingPoetry
51 reads
8 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:17pm
19th Jan 2025 2:17pm
Read or Die
Read these three books:
Frankenstein: A Modern Prometheus
Crime and Punishment
The Plague
and find out what kind of person you are!
Frankenstein: A Modern Prometheus
Crime and Punishment
The Plague
and find out what kind of person you are!
#humankind
56 reads
2 Comments
Lynxxey
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:06pm
19th Jan 2025 2:06pm
You suck
I hope that this finds you in the worst place
With zits and dead skin on your face
I want to send your kid a box of legos
And I hope you step on one everyday
Babies seem to cry when they’re around you
And pets don’t want to stay in the room
No amount of booze can make you attractive
And you make really bad tasting food
The word around town is you smell bad
I smelled you coming from 30 feet away
You have a bad haircut, and your style is shit
It offends everyone in every single way
With zits and dead skin on your face
I want to send your kid a box of legos
And I hope you step on one everyday
Babies seem to cry when they’re around you
And pets don’t want to stay in the room
No amount of booze can make you attractive
And you make really bad tasting food
The word around town is you smell bad
I smelled you coming from 30 feet away
You have a bad haircut, and your style is shit
It offends everyone in every single way
#funny
#humankind
62 reads
2 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 8:13pm
15th Jan 2025 8:13pm
Victim of the Situation
As I sit on the toilet and contemplate all those I shitted on
I have no regrets that the bastards are gone,
“Fuck ass men, mentally retarded children and trifling women
Now peacefully is how a motherfucka is livin,
“Some people ask what to me has sentimental value
My PlayStation 5 born on Christmas day because it’s considered brand new,
“It never disrespect me, brings shame or call me out of my name
At least I know one hundred percent it is all about the game,
“As long as the electricity continue to flow ...
I have no regrets that the bastards are gone,
“Fuck ass men, mentally retarded children and trifling women
Now peacefully is how a motherfucka is livin,
“Some people ask what to me has sentimental value
My PlayStation 5 born on Christmas day because it’s considered brand new,
“It never disrespect me, brings shame or call me out of my name
At least I know one hundred percent it is all about the game,
“As long as the electricity continue to flow ...
#humankind
72 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 11:07am
15th Jan 2025 11:07am
I
All
women
I loved are
dead and gone
does it however make
me an emotional serial killer
!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
women
I loved are
dead and gone
does it however make
me an emotional serial killer
!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
#emotional
#humankind
#love
#murder
#silence
72 reads
6 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:45pm
11th Jan 2025 3:45pm
Transformers!! The Woke is About to Die
#humankind
46 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:12pm
11th Jan 2025 2:12pm
CENTER OF BALANCE
It's true that in this life we may never truly know what someone else, is going through in there own personal life. FOR example we all have a moment of a want and need of a helping hand from time to time ⌚ For sure it cost you nothing to have a good heart ❤️ and even a deeper spiritual soul 🙏 to connect on a positive level of energy and strength and understanding. For we all need that equal level of the center of balance of life and love. ❤️ THAT will affect us in ways that we may never truly understand, but that's alright to need and want not that...
#friendship
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
60 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:09am
11th Jan 2025 3:09am
One
tumblimg through eternity I look through time
assailents of friction rise and fall
sinister attention stirs, my head whips around
eyes glare into the void
designated misfortune, fated disorder
lends to the chaos in the cosmos
destructive forces spin
the wind pushes with it's brutality
heaven breathes fire
and the ground quakes
hailstorm it leaves me shaken
the elements mix
and life sprouts
needed growth happens
hearts and souls expand
political giants are brought down
something hums in the...
assailents of friction rise and fall
sinister attention stirs, my head whips around
eyes glare into the void
designated misfortune, fated disorder
lends to the chaos in the cosmos
destructive forces spin
the wind pushes with it's brutality
heaven breathes fire
and the ground quakes
hailstorm it leaves me shaken
the elements mix
and life sprouts
needed growth happens
hearts and souls expand
political giants are brought down
something hums in the...
#earth
#fire
#humankind
83 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 9:51pm
9th Jan 2025 9:51pm
A Wasteland of Emptiness
There is a wind blowing inside us, thru a wasteland of emptiness
Without the possibility of germinating to fulfill our potential
Our nothingness is an internal vacuum with an insatiable appetite
A black hole at our core, threatening to suck everything else in
Our lives are essentially hollow, lacking inner strength and vigor
We seem to have lost our insides somewhere
Our guts have been removed and discarded or lost
The void within gives a painful, drawn feeling to our faces
We know that we are doomed creatures, fighting hopelessly for...
Without the possibility of germinating to fulfill our potential
Our nothingness is an internal vacuum with an insatiable appetite
A black hole at our core, threatening to suck everything else in
Our lives are essentially hollow, lacking inner strength and vigor
We seem to have lost our insides somewhere
Our guts have been removed and discarded or lost
The void within gives a painful, drawn feeling to our faces
We know that we are doomed creatures, fighting hopelessly for...
#emptiness
#humankind
#LifeStruggles
89 reads
9 Comments
WritingRaven
Zippy
Zippy
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 9:31pm
9th Jan 2025 9:31pm
I Resolve
I resolve to make some resolutions this year.
Yes, I must find time to buckle down and do it.
Now then….losing weight..that’s the big one.
Think I need to resolve to clear the fridge too.
So I’ll settle down to polish off all the food
that’s built up over the week.
So I have already fulfilled my second resolution!
I’ll save the first for next year
Yes, I must find time to buckle down and do it.
Now then….losing weight..that’s the big one.
Think I need to resolve to clear the fridge too.
So I’ll settle down to polish off all the food
that’s built up over the week.
So I have already fulfilled my second resolution!
I’ll save the first for next year
#humankind
#women
73 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 5:58pm
3rd Jan 2025 5:58pm
scars
the January skies are
scarred by winter
the smiles of children
are scarred by an unknown
future
lights go dim scarred by
the approaching night
life is scarred by
living
people
like snowflakes
all different
and like the snowflake
unaware of its own
beauty
but fully trapped
by its scars
scarred by winter
the smiles of children
are scarred by an unknown
future
lights go dim scarred by
the approaching night
life is scarred by
living
people
like snowflakes
all different
and like the snowflake
unaware of its own
beauty
but fully trapped
by its scars
#humankind
83 reads
5 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 1:29pm
3rd Jan 2025 1:29pm
Love of Women
I’m a man who has loved many women. I've come to understand that the allure of romance is not just in the merging of two beings, but in the celebration of our profound differences. It's a dance of understanding and mystery, where the space between us is both a challenge and an invitation.
The women I've known have taught me that love is an art—an appreciation for the 'other.' Their distinct laughter, the stories etched in the lines of their bodies, and the way they see the world with eyes that have witnessed what mine have not—all draw me in, time and time again. It's as if their...
The women I've known have taught me that love is an art—an appreciation for the 'other.' Their distinct laughter, the stories etched in the lines of their bodies, and the way they see the world with eyes that have witnessed what mine have not—all draw me in, time and time again. It's as if their...
#humankind
#love
#sex #spiritual
#sex #spiritual
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