Poems About Humankind Seeking Honest Critique
#humankind
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 8:59pm
4th Oct 2024 8:59pm
Such as life
A roller coaster of lies
Such as life
Yet we continue to find something
To fill the void
The void being either loneliness,
Confusion or maybe delusion
We have wants and needs
And it often leads us to greed
Perhaps, I ought to get off this ride
Such as life
Yet we continue to find something
To fill the void
The void being either loneliness,
Confusion or maybe delusion
We have wants and needs
And it often leads us to greed
Perhaps, I ought to get off this ride
#humankind
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 10:58am
1st Oct 2024 10:58am
Chapter of the Chilled
I’m always on a pussy, paper and power mission
That’s why haters, bitches and hoes I’m always dissin,
“Disrespect is forever followed by me knocking out teeth
Because a motherfucka will learn I’m not only the commander but the chief,
“From the murky waters I attack like a savage alligator
Kept at a distance like a clit unable to handle no more from a vibrator,
“Having the bitch wide-eyed and looking at the phone
Breathing hard and trying to recuperate, because the feeling was to strong,
“But she will remain pussy wide...
That’s why haters, bitches and hoes I’m always dissin,
“Disrespect is forever followed by me knocking out teeth
Because a motherfucka will learn I’m not only the commander but the chief,
“From the murky waters I attack like a savage alligator
Kept at a distance like a clit unable to handle no more from a vibrator,
“Having the bitch wide-eyed and looking at the phone
Breathing hard and trying to recuperate, because the feeling was to strong,
“But she will remain pussy wide...
#humankind
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Naajir
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 7:04pm
30th Sep 2024 7:04pm
The Abominate
He stalks along the fringes of the Sub-conscious
Walking in comfort along the Bed of Coals
that is your Soul
Waiting for your eyes to close....
To depose you of your Sovereignty
Hate-seeking in the darkness
Looking to harness the despicable you
Ride your E-motions like a Pale White Horse
Stray you off course...cavity-strip you of common remorse
Dump you in Limbo's Lost and Found
While He drags your Avatar along that long Green Mile
Leave you used up with a broken smile
As a new addition to His...
Walking in comfort along the Bed of Coals
that is your Soul
Waiting for your eyes to close....
To depose you of your Sovereignty
Hate-seeking in the darkness
Looking to harness the despicable you
Ride your E-motions like a Pale White Horse
Stray you off course...cavity-strip you of common remorse
Dump you in Limbo's Lost and Found
While He drags your Avatar along that long Green Mile
Leave you used up with a broken smile
As a new addition to His...
#dark
#monsters
#spiritual
#humankind
#ghosts
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5 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 3:47pm
29th Sep 2024 3:47pm
Placeless Places
Want to live in the placeless places
Want to exist when words can’t replace what you feel
A look in an instant conveys just exactly what I’m talking about
No words will replace the thoughts I send to you
Living in the placeless places feel free no past or present
In the in between is heaven on earth
no words spent just a look that knows
placeless places living in between
In the in between is where the love grows
in the between in our inner desires
no words needed its a look that...
Want to exist when words can’t replace what you feel
A look in an instant conveys just exactly what I’m talking about
No words will replace the thoughts I send to you
Living in the placeless places feel free no past or present
In the in between is heaven on earth
no words spent just a look that knows
placeless places living in between
In the in between is where the love grows
in the between in our inner desires
no words needed its a look that...
#humankind
#inspirational
#motivational
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oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 5:16pm
28th Sep 2024 5:16pm
Machine don’t feel(especially.001 percent)
Machine don’t feel(especially .001 percent)
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute
Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and sows seeds of anger
Get angry...
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute
Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and sows seeds of anger
Get angry...
#dystopian
#greed
#humankind #money
#humankind #money
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 1:53am
27th Sep 2024 1:53am
Imposter
Evil lurks, with God's disgrace.
Heaven weeps, as tears lead chase.
Under moon lite nights, and days unbound.
The Devil yearns, hear his wailing howls.
Understand, the prays unturned.
Like summer breeze, on skin that burns.
Find the bliss, from foreign gates.
Miss led trails, and venomous snakes.
Half bitten apples, that knowledge taints.
Robbed by Eve, where Time forsakes.
Notes of lies, that mortals make.
Tunes of tongues, for life will ache.
Heaven weeps, as tears lead chase.
Under moon lite nights, and days unbound.
The Devil yearns, hear his wailing howls.
Understand, the prays unturned.
Like summer breeze, on skin that burns.
Find the bliss, from foreign gates.
Miss led trails, and venomous snakes.
Half bitten apples, that knowledge taints.
Robbed by Eve, where Time forsakes.
Notes of lies, that mortals make.
Tunes of tongues, for life will ache.
#humankind
#LifeStruggles
#love #misunderstood
#love #misunderstood
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 6:32pm
26th Sep 2024 6:32pm
Photographs, a collaborative diptych
These two poems represent a collaboration with a sleeping DU member, who spends his spare time writing on the sole of his slipper with a biro. The first poem is mine, the second is his.
Human Remains
We returned to the house
a time after
and mowed the lawn
and painted where
the paint had started to peel.
And somewhere in the process
we found photographs of how they looked
when they were young
and their home hadn't yet become
a mausoleum.
She wore pink crinoline on special occasions
and he wore moccasins. ...
Human Remains
We returned to the house
a time after
and mowed the lawn
and painted where
the paint had started to peel.
And somewhere in the process
we found photographs of how they looked
when they were young
and their home hadn't yet become
a mausoleum.
She wore pink crinoline on special occasions
and he wore moccasins. ...
#humankind
#LifeCycle
#loneliness #memories
#loneliness #memories
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Abracadabra
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 7:19pm
22nd Sep 2024 7:19pm
End Times
https://tinyurl.com/42jtznsx
It rained in the desert
until the waters ran high
and washed away sand
for centuries dry
deeper than mountains
a city appeared...
It rained in the desert
until the waters ran high
and washed away sand
for centuries dry
deeper than mountains
a city appeared...
#earth
#environment
#humankind #unicorns
#humankind #unicorns
66 reads
6 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 2:48pm
21st Sep 2024 2:48pm
Occupation Living
For long painful hours mama had to work that pussy muscle
Then for my first breath I had to hustle,
“Covered in blood from head to toe, screaming in frustration
A byproduct of her suckin and constant fuckin,
“She did her part now it is time for me to do mine
That is why on life’s ass I’m always on the grind,
“Getting it in where a motherfucka can get in
Either through love, hate or unspeakable sin,
“I’m always heading down a road that should not be traveled
Now my heart and soul like a noose is coming unraveled, ...
Then for my first breath I had to hustle,
“Covered in blood from head to toe, screaming in frustration
A byproduct of her suckin and constant fuckin,
“She did her part now it is time for me to do mine
That is why on life’s ass I’m always on the grind,
“Getting it in where a motherfucka can get in
Either through love, hate or unspeakable sin,
“I’m always heading down a road that should not be traveled
Now my heart and soul like a noose is coming unraveled, ...
#humankind
62 reads
4 Comments
AaHarvey
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 6:58pm
18th Sep 2024 6:58pm
0 - Unfinished poetry 11
We know
The thoughts we think run around our heads,
They try to make us not forget,
So we remember all that which came before.
Our guiding light towards a better shore.
And as we arrive we climb to our feet,
And in our souls we hope to meet
A gracious soul, so worn and old, so knowledgeable.
So wise we know that we were meant to teach and learn.
Since night became and the sun began to burn,
We have known for years we need to yearn.
(C)2019 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
The thoughts we think run around our heads,
They try to make us not forget,
So we remember all that which came before.
Our guiding light towards a better shore.
And as we arrive we climb to our feet,
And in our souls we hope to meet
A gracious soul, so worn and old, so knowledgeable.
So wise we know that we were meant to teach and learn.
Since night became and the sun began to burn,
We have known for years we need to yearn.
(C)2019 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
#humankind
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 11:39am
12th Sep 2024 11:39am
Black Rain of the Wet Maze
Women will cheat on a good man and remain faithful to one in prison
Just backward bitch shit is how these foul ho’s are livin,
“With skank attitudes like their pussy they will never be a winner
Always the leftover sides and never the full dinner,
“But the real bitch shit is from the fake bitch motherfucker
From birth his ass should have stayed vacationing up in his mother,
“Battling the placenta and that demonic unwashed funk
So life would not be disgraced by a pussy-hearted punk,
“Or the children still living at home...
Just backward bitch shit is how these foul ho’s are livin,
“With skank attitudes like their pussy they will never be a winner
Always the leftover sides and never the full dinner,
“But the real bitch shit is from the fake bitch motherfucker
From birth his ass should have stayed vacationing up in his mother,
“Battling the placenta and that demonic unwashed funk
So life would not be disgraced by a pussy-hearted punk,
“Or the children still living at home...
#humankind
102 reads
6 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 8:27pm
6th Sep 2024 8:27pm
Kamala’s Birth
Like the border she can’t keep her legs closed
That is why America is getting fucked like two-dollar ho’s,
“Straight raw or with a busted illegal rubber
And Kamala knows the world thinks of America as a stupid motherfucker,
“The military cannot make their quota and is transgender weak
If a war with China and Russia kicks off America may last a good week,
“If she wins the presidency then it will be the United States of California
And for the identity of America. Nice fucking knowing ya’,
“Remember, she said ‘I will not...
That is why America is getting fucked like two-dollar ho’s,
“Straight raw or with a busted illegal rubber
And Kamala knows the world thinks of America as a stupid motherfucker,
“The military cannot make their quota and is transgender weak
If a war with China and Russia kicks off America may last a good week,
“If she wins the presidency then it will be the United States of California
And for the identity of America. Nice fucking knowing ya’,
“Remember, she said ‘I will not...
#humankind
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11 Comments
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