Poems About Humankind Seeking Honest Critique
#humankind
PAR
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:21pm
Yesterday 1:21pm
Hypertrichosis and cola
Phimosis,
cirrhosis or
osteoporosis,
however,
a nevermoredyingosis
is the main disease.
Bursitis,
sinusitis or
rhinitis,
just like that,
the completestupidititis
is the endemic disease.
cirrhosis or
osteoporosis,
however,
a nevermoredyingosis
is the main disease.
Bursitis,
sinusitis or
rhinitis,
just like that,
the completestupidititis
is the endemic disease.
#humankind
#illness
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth
#politics
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7 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 3:14pm
11th Feb 2025 3:14pm
humanity
my soul hurt, I could feel my brothers and sisters ache
it was like a constant pain that throbbed in the background
and I carry it year in and out
a heaviness of feeling that I could put down for a moment
then it was yoked to my soul again
every cut, every burn, callous words and injustices
when a being hurt I hurt with them
anxiety would build and the pressure would start
such a powerful feeling, being connected to these old souls
I bear their burden with them
never seeing their faces but knowing their pain intimately ...
it was like a constant pain that throbbed in the background
and I carry it year in and out
a heaviness of feeling that I could put down for a moment
then it was yoked to my soul again
every cut, every burn, callous words and injustices
when a being hurt I hurt with them
anxiety would build and the pressure would start
such a powerful feeling, being connected to these old souls
I bear their burden with them
never seeing their faces but knowing their pain intimately ...
#humankind
#love
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7 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 3:47pm
6th Feb 2025 3:47pm
broken
tender understanding, I am breaking
broken pieces being battered by a mighty wind
an empath feeling the groans of others
I feel each strike like it's my own body
fears hunt my mind while I sleep
we are in the hands of something larger than ourselves
connecting on the air I shelter those I can
with my voice shout against injustice
if I were to dwell on it, I would blow away as ash
leaving little help to those who surround me
with quiet courage I hold onto the good
the dark is always willing to talk
to take me...
broken pieces being battered by a mighty wind
an empath feeling the groans of others
I feel each strike like it's my own body
fears hunt my mind while I sleep
we are in the hands of something larger than ourselves
connecting on the air I shelter those I can
with my voice shout against injustice
if I were to dwell on it, I would blow away as ash
leaving little help to those who surround me
with quiet courage I hold onto the good
the dark is always willing to talk
to take me...
#humankind
#love
56 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 3:21pm
6th Feb 2025 3:21pm
cherish
little hope in expression of dreams
to live in the light of exploration
reaching heights unseen
in my mind rise
it is with great desire I reach out
delving into spirit of the unknown
sacred art in understanding
to live is to grow
secret faith is to listen
to whipering souls with knowledge
sanctifying my body in all I do
simple pleasures are embraced
and I realize life is good
not to be taken for granted
breathe into the day inspiration
and be filled on the wonderments the world has to offer ...
to live in the light of exploration
reaching heights unseen
in my mind rise
it is with great desire I reach out
delving into spirit of the unknown
sacred art in understanding
to live is to grow
secret faith is to listen
to whipering souls with knowledge
sanctifying my body in all I do
simple pleasures are embraced
and I realize life is good
not to be taken for granted
breathe into the day inspiration
and be filled on the wonderments the world has to offer ...
#beauty
#humankind
#love #spiritual
#love #spiritual
80 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 12:44pm
5th Feb 2025 12:44pm
The misadventures of a lone ranger
A lost man wakes alone,
a relentless mighty knight fighting old soldiers
underneath the broken bridge
of Landscape.
He never thought they could hurt him.
He never foresaw the gang bang coming.
All those men were taking advantage of his body.
Many swords of attack penetrate his back.
He's been able to take them so many times
that I felt the urge to rhyme on it
like my pen is on fire.
#abuse
#humankind
#violence
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4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 3:49am
31st Jan 2025 3:49am
legit
I've been feeling claustrophobic, I mean like static inside my body
internally reaching out to touch the sky
my soul longs to fly
take a breath and take flight
nothing hindering me
changing the vibe on the airs
because lately it's been frantic
fanatical, got me fearing war
getting all kinds of noise from the left and right
my fears are legit
my heart swells, then fails me
watching the plight of the Earth
humanity is hurting
animals are suffering
everyday on the net I'm left crying
my empathy...
internally reaching out to touch the sky
my soul longs to fly
take a breath and take flight
nothing hindering me
changing the vibe on the airs
because lately it's been frantic
fanatical, got me fearing war
getting all kinds of noise from the left and right
my fears are legit
my heart swells, then fails me
watching the plight of the Earth
humanity is hurting
animals are suffering
everyday on the net I'm left crying
my empathy...
#animals
#earth
#humankind
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4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:57pm
24th Jan 2025 2:57pm
No Verbal Tense
In the twilight of day, where shadows stretch long,
you find yourself pondering, life's complex song.
The moon, a cheese wheel, rolls across the sky,
stars sprinkle the heavens, a cosmic pie.
Your thoughts wander, a kite in a hurricane,
pulled by the winds of whimsy and pain.
Cats sleep, their purrs a melody sweet,
dreams of catnip and mice at their feet.
You sip on your tea, a brew of contemplation,
steeping in moments of pure fascination.
Each sip a journey, a boat on life's river,
navigating currents that make your...
you find yourself pondering, life's complex song.
The moon, a cheese wheel, rolls across the sky,
stars sprinkle the heavens, a cosmic pie.
Your thoughts wander, a kite in a hurricane,
pulled by the winds of whimsy and pain.
Cats sleep, their purrs a melody sweet,
dreams of catnip and mice at their feet.
You sip on your tea, a brew of contemplation,
steeping in moments of pure fascination.
Each sip a journey, a boat on life's river,
navigating currents that make your...
#cats
#earth
#humankind
#universe
#WritingPoetry
77 reads
8 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:17pm
19th Jan 2025 2:17pm
Read or Die
Read these three books:
Frankenstein: A Modern Prometheus
Crime and Punishment
The Plague
and find out what kind of person you are!
Frankenstein: A Modern Prometheus
Crime and Punishment
The Plague
and find out what kind of person you are!
#humankind
67 reads
2 Comments
Lynxxey
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:06pm
19th Jan 2025 2:06pm
You suck
I hope that this finds you in the worst place
With zits and dead skin on your face
I want to send your kid a box of legos
And I hope you step on one everyday
Babies seem to cry when they’re around you
And pets don’t want to stay in the room
No amount of booze can make you attractive
And you make really bad tasting food
The word around town is you smell bad
I smelled you coming from 30 feet away
You have a bad haircut, and your style is shit
It offends everyone in every single way
With zits and dead skin on your face
I want to send your kid a box of legos
And I hope you step on one everyday
Babies seem to cry when they’re around you
And pets don’t want to stay in the room
No amount of booze can make you attractive
And you make really bad tasting food
The word around town is you smell bad
I smelled you coming from 30 feet away
You have a bad haircut, and your style is shit
It offends everyone in every single way
#funny
#humankind
67 reads
2 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 8:13pm
15th Jan 2025 8:13pm
Victim of the Situation
As I sit on the toilet and contemplate all those I shitted on
I have no regrets that the bastards are gone,
“Fuck ass men, mentally retarded children and trifling women
Now peacefully is how a motherfucka is livin,
“Some people ask what to me has sentimental value
My PlayStation 5 born on Christmas day because it’s considered brand new,
“It never disrespect me, brings shame or call me out of my name
At least I know one hundred percent it is all about the game,
“As long as the electricity continue to flow ...
I have no regrets that the bastards are gone,
“Fuck ass men, mentally retarded children and trifling women
Now peacefully is how a motherfucka is livin,
“Some people ask what to me has sentimental value
My PlayStation 5 born on Christmas day because it’s considered brand new,
“It never disrespect me, brings shame or call me out of my name
At least I know one hundred percent it is all about the game,
“As long as the electricity continue to flow ...
#humankind
99 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 11:07am
15th Jan 2025 11:07am
I
All
women
I loved are
dead and gone
does it however make
me an emotional serial killer
!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
women
I loved are
dead and gone
does it however make
me an emotional serial killer
!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
#emotional
#humankind
#love
#murder
#silence
79 reads
6 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:45pm
11th Jan 2025 3:45pm
Transformers!! The Woke is About to Die
#humankind
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4 Comments
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