Poems About Holidays Seeking Honest Critique
#holiday
Poems about holidays seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SAINT-TROPEZ
Let's fly away
to Saint-Tropez
where one can be
beside the sea,
on a beach where
one can go bare,
or topless be
in bikini
bottoms that are
so "Ooh-la-la!"
in skimpiness
so sun can bless,
with much more tan
to wow your man,
the skin that be
on your body.
to Saint-Tropez
where one can be
beside the sea,
on a beach where
one can go bare,
or topless be
in bikini
bottoms that are
so "Ooh-la-la!"
in skimpiness
so sun can bless,
with much more tan
to wow your man,
the skin that be
on your body.
#beach
#holiday
#rhyming
151 reads
1 Comment
Gambling's Fun Until You Lose
Neil Anblomi of Italy took a trip to Las Vegas and sent some letters back home in 1994. His letters telling loved ones his tales of American adventure. One letter told them he had a win of $2,500.00 on roulette. Another was about seeing Wayne Newton live, enjoying the performance immensely. In a postcard to his mother, he talked about how exhausting gambling could be, but told her not to worry. "I am sensible, so I won't blow my savings." He told her of his plans to see the Grand Canyon by helicopter and maybe buy a ticket to a magic show. On August 1st, 1994, Anblomi threw himself...
#addiction
#fiction
#holiday
#ShortStory
#suicide
132 reads
6 Comments
NOTHING DOING
#erotic
#holiday
#rhyming #sex
#rhyming #sex
173 reads
2 Comments
THE NOVELTY
The novelty
of nudity
tempts one to strip
for taking dip,
when it's so hot
clothing feels not
necessary
on the body.
Especially
when others be
doing the same
so free of shame,
like first couple
in the Bible,
though not all be
shaped precisely.
of nudity
tempts one to strip
for taking dip,
when it's so hot
clothing feels not
necessary
on the body.
Especially
when others be
doing the same
so free of shame,
like first couple
in the Bible,
though not all be
shaped precisely.
#beach
#holiday
#rhyming
114 reads
3 Comments
FUN IN THE SUN, EVERYONE
Fun in the sun,
everyone!
The fogeys shun,
clothes be undone.
Sun cream slapped on,
let's naked run,
beach balls be spun,
skinny-dips done!
Get brown-as-bun
tans all-in-one.
Take pics to stun
folks back in Clun!
everyone!
The fogeys shun,
clothes be undone.
Sun cream slapped on,
let's naked run,
beach balls be spun,
skinny-dips done!
Get brown-as-bun
tans all-in-one.
Take pics to stun
folks back in Clun!
#beach
#funny
#holiday #rhyming
#holiday #rhyming
113 reads
0 Comments
NIPPLES CREST
#erotic
#holiday
#rhyming #sex
#rhyming #sex
220 reads
0 Comments
Warning, You're A Moron
While vacationing at the Sandy Balls holiday center in England in 2010, 9 year old Watson Herbusch aimed a toy dart gun at himself, fired & died. He choked to death when the dart became lodged in his throat!
#children
#death
#holiday
#ignorance
#satirical
111 reads
9 Comments
What We Saw At The Beach On The Fourth Of July
Hannah's spotted
wearing a patriotic
bikini.
wearing a patriotic
bikini.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#holiday
139 reads
0 Comments
Run of the mill BBQ
Hey my friend
What's up?
Thanks for having me & my wife over for a Memorial Day BBQ
By the way, where is your wife?
"Oh she's in the closet, gagged, raped & beaten to death
Where's the dog?
"Cooking right now in the oven"
Where's the kids?
"Timmy's in the ice box, he's for dessert"
"Willy's partially in the BBQ cooking right now"
"Oh and Billy, he's buried behind the shed"
Hope you have an appetite!!
What's up?
Thanks for having me & my wife over for a Memorial Day BBQ
By the way, where is your wife?
"Oh she's in the closet, gagged, raped & beaten to death
Where's the dog?
"Cooking right now in the oven"
Where's the kids?
"Timmy's in the ice box, he's for dessert"
"Willy's partially in the BBQ cooking right now"
"Oh and Billy, he's buried behind the shed"
Hope you have an appetite!!
#family
#food
#holiday
#horror
#murder
104 reads
2 Comments
Housekeeping
#holiday
#sex
141 reads
2 Comments
Waterfall encounter
#holiday
#lust
#sex
186 reads
4 Comments
MAKING LOVE ON THE RAMPARTS
#holiday
#rhyming
#sex
143 reads
1 Comment
DU Poetry : Poems About Holidays Seeking Honest Critique