Poems About Heroin Seeking Honest Critique
#heroin
Poems about heroin seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Jun 2019 7:06am
8th Jun 2019 7:06am
midnights of the chemically altered
#love
#BDSM
#heroin #addiction
#heroin #addiction
777 reads
6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
23rd May 2019 8:09pm
23rd May 2019 8:09pm
Preparation for the Pilgrimage To The After-World
Advance Life for Death....
Forward Death in Life....
There's no escape, & "really"
no tragedy to it all, other than
our flimsy projections of a
fairy'tale "life after death".
All great shit for mr. monkey'mind
to play wit, sometimes jumping
up'n'down, sometimes a circular
motion, scorned as if monk'mind
was not a product of me own buzz'brain
on display at the insurrection feast
for good men of limited color and
[exterior] motivation.
Wee been culled from the same crew,
so...
Forward Death in Life....
There's no escape, & "really"
no tragedy to it all, other than
our flimsy projections of a
fairy'tale "life after death".
All great shit for mr. monkey'mind
to play wit, sometimes jumping
up'n'down, sometimes a circular
motion, scorned as if monk'mind
was not a product of me own buzz'brain
on display at the insurrection feast
for good men of limited color and
[exterior] motivation.
Wee been culled from the same crew,
so...
#men
#murder
#heroin
#heroic
#masculinity
635 reads
6 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
29th Apr 2019 2:10am
29th Apr 2019 2:10am
Hard Break-up with Heroin
Bend me but don't break me god
I've been afraid of moving on
This addiction took me places
I don't want to remember, nah
One was never enough
Fucking over the ones I love
Wondering when it will all end
When did it begin and would it even help me to know?
Crushing it all up to powder
Suck it all up; silence devours
As I am losing my power
For heroin, I am the coward
That was then and this now
50+ days in I take no bow
I'm in it for the long haul
If I fall I will end up dead
Come so...
I've been afraid of moving on
This addiction took me places
I don't want to remember, nah
One was never enough
Fucking over the ones I love
Wondering when it will all end
When did it begin and would it even help me to know?
Crushing it all up to powder
Suck it all up; silence devours
As I am losing my power
For heroin, I am the coward
That was then and this now
50+ days in I take no bow
I'm in it for the long haul
If I fall I will end up dead
Come so...
#LifeStruggles
#heroin
#addiction
#LifeChangingMoment
#healing
1119 reads
9 Comments
Streetlamp10
Poem Published
13th Mar 2019 8:39pm
13th Mar 2019 8:39pm
Dead folks
Every heart got a different story
We are heroes from our own glory
Mind has colorful thoughts
There is no Battle
Just show me some part of you and I will show some part of me
We will walk hand in hand till we set each other free
We are heroes from our own glory
Mind has colorful thoughts
There is no Battle
Just show me some part of you and I will show some part of me
We will walk hand in hand till we set each other free
#heroin
592 reads
0 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
10th Mar 2019 9:31pm
10th Mar 2019 9:31pm
Letter to my addiction
My ignorance of your purpose has caused great suffering. I felt you to be a parasite feasting on my life and happiness.The more i hated you, the more you grew. The more i have fought you, the more you have bound me. The more i denied you, the louder your voice became. The calls of your endless appetite became my master.
As i sit with you in awareness, the delusion of seperation evaporates. Only in this light may i find what is true.
On my path, you are my greatest teacher. I need you in the same way you need me for there is no me without you, and no you without me. ...
As i sit with you in awareness, the delusion of seperation evaporates. Only in this light may i find what is true.
On my path, you are my greatest teacher. I need you in the same way you need me for there is no me without you, and no you without me. ...
#addiction
#SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery
#drugs
#heroin
1164 reads
10 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
27th Feb 2019 11:09pm
27th Feb 2019 11:09pm
Void (instrumental by Mors)
Poison on the self
Looking for no help
Went and took it off the shelf
Substitute, oxy is a bitch
Karma coming can I stop it
Can I switch respawn as something different
Imma switch hitter
Twisted up a freak spitta
Grind I let it leak
Leather sweet my mind raw waiting
No more dope for my vein
Eyes stained oscillating
Faded cross-pollinate
Mindscape strays
Dripping down the hallway
Looking like I may never make it
-
Now I'm on it
Whatcha wishing never stop it
Let it...
Looking for no help
Went and took it off the shelf
Substitute, oxy is a bitch
Karma coming can I stop it
Can I switch respawn as something different
Imma switch hitter
Twisted up a freak spitta
Grind I let it leak
Leather sweet my mind raw waiting
No more dope for my vein
Eyes stained oscillating
Faded cross-pollinate
Mindscape strays
Dripping down the hallway
Looking like I may never make it
-
Now I'm on it
Whatcha wishing never stop it
Let it...
#heroin
#addiction
#SelfDiscovery #healing
#SelfDiscovery #healing
927 reads
10 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
5th Feb 2019 2:47pm
5th Feb 2019 2:47pm
Victim of Nothing, I am a Survivor (instrumental by Mors)
I could give this all up fall in love with a new life
Got a new view of a new tribe
What did I do to deserve this new life
looking back percs in petty sacks
Off white china in .1 packs
Point of all this is I took it the max
Could this one book keep me from the casket
God my life has been so tragic
Never enough
Never felt love like I did from the dub
Took it and run like I'm never coming back god
Never looking back on it living in the past, nah Imma let it go
Let it all go I'm a new individual ...
Got a new view of a new tribe
What did I do to deserve this new life
looking back percs in petty sacks
Off white china in .1 packs
Point of all this is I took it the max
Could this one book keep me from the casket
God my life has been so tragic
Never enough
Never felt love like I did from the dub
Took it and run like I'm never coming back god
Never looking back on it living in the past, nah Imma let it go
Let it all go I'm a new individual ...
#identity
#heroin
#addiction
#SelfDiscovery
#healing
1054 reads
0 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2019 8:00pm
2nd Feb 2019 8:00pm
No Victim or Martyr
Never unfortunate
Circumstance goes her way
She gotta bounce off hate
to keep on loving through the day
But then came a land mine
As if that wasn't enough
then came the black hounds
And then the caroling mob sang this to me;
"Try the little woman as a witch
Don't you wait up for a verdict
Get the fags bundled for the break of dawn
This one is as guilty as it gets"
She says to you and to me
I'm no martyr victim here
Don't wait up for my verdict
I plan to get up and flee
Yeah, I'm getting...
Circumstance goes her way
She gotta bounce off hate
to keep on loving through the day
But then came a land mine
As if that wasn't enough
then came the black hounds
And then the caroling mob sang this to me;
"Try the little woman as a witch
Don't you wait up for a verdict
Get the fags bundled for the break of dawn
This one is as guilty as it gets"
She says to you and to me
I'm no martyr victim here
Don't wait up for my verdict
I plan to get up and flee
Yeah, I'm getting...
#courage
#heroin
#escape
555 reads
2 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
6th Jan 2019 7:05pm
6th Jan 2019 7:05pm
monsters_save_themselves
This is my decision shit
Sending all the sentences
Senseless sunk in sentiment
I said I just might let it in
This is my never quit
Solo on it might write again
bitch I make moves
pull up, drop, no parachute
Passive off aggression on
Pass you off no I'm at one
Stuffing I'm ready to bust at the tongue
I button and run with the sound of the drums
Push through that and I push through this
Run up my number my conscious can't quit
Looking for something different I wander
Pondering my options on how to...
Sending all the sentences
Senseless sunk in sentiment
I said I just might let it in
This is my never quit
Solo on it might write again
bitch I make moves
pull up, drop, no parachute
Passive off aggression on
Pass you off no I'm at one
Stuffing I'm ready to bust at the tongue
I button and run with the sound of the drums
Push through that and I push through this
Run up my number my conscious can't quit
Looking for something different I wander
Pondering my options on how to...
#heroin
#addiction
#SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery
#healing
1013 reads
4 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2019 4:25am
2nd Jan 2019 4:25am
Back at day 1
I am back here again
A comfortable pain
Heroin, call it by name
It doesn't matter what I want
it doesn't matter what I say
The only thing that matters is the action I take
They won't remember my intentions
My smile will fade
The only thing that matters is the action I take
I want to live
I want to thrive
I want to give
I don't want to die
This trap
wrapped in aluminium foil
wants me back
wants me in toil
Patterns...
A comfortable pain
Heroin, call it by name
It doesn't matter what I want
it doesn't matter what I say
The only thing that matters is the action I take
They won't remember my intentions
My smile will fade
The only thing that matters is the action I take
I want to live
I want to thrive
I want to give
I don't want to die
This trap
wrapped in aluminium foil
wants me back
wants me in toil
Patterns...
#heroin
#addiction
987 reads
9 Comments
gazellemon
Bradley J
Bradley J
Poem Published
29th Dec 2018 2:50am
29th Dec 2018 2:50am
Noose (instrumental by Mors)
Movie film, I fit the script
Who be him, I groove that hit
Watch it fall in place around me
Slip the noose I wear it proudly
Locked and loaded
Lots to show and I should really go with it
Stop n slowed a moving ghost
I truly know I'm losing it
Shut me down - stainin' crown
Creep and crawl around my cuts
Beat me down I be around
Substance suffer not enough
I am sick -burn my wick all up
You think I give a fuck
You'd be wrong
I'll take fall and fold into the deeper darkness
Trenches of...
Who be him, I groove that hit
Watch it fall in place around me
Slip the noose I wear it proudly
Locked and loaded
Lots to show and I should really go with it
Stop n slowed a moving ghost
I truly know I'm losing it
Shut me down - stainin' crown
Creep and crawl around my cuts
Beat me down I be around
Substance suffer not enough
I am sick -burn my wick all up
You think I give a fuck
You'd be wrong
I'll take fall and fold into the deeper darkness
Trenches of...
#dark
#SelfHarm
#heroin #addiction
#heroin #addiction
955 reads
6 Comments
dntlokatmeimbroken
Poem Published
18th Nov 2018 2:59am
18th Nov 2018 2:59am
the fix
#depression
#drugs
#heroin
#addiction
#emptiness
1131 reads
5 Comments
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