Poems About Heaven Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about heaven seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 12:03pm
14th Aug 2024 12:03pm
Sol's Regent
O Uriel, thou Regent of the Sun's bright flame,
In Heaven’s court, thy radiance doth shine,
With wings of gold, thou dost bear His name,
And guard the light with countenance divine
Thy gaze doth pierce the shadows dark and deep,
Where wicked foes in trembling fear abide,
Thy sword of fire doth all in justice keep,
As thou dost lead with Heaven’s light as guide
O blazing star, thy brilliance none may veil,
Thy glory in the heavens none can bind,
Through thee, the light of God shall ne’er grow pale,
For in thy...
In Heaven’s court, thy radiance doth shine,
With wings of gold, thou dost bear His name,
And guard the light with countenance divine
Thy gaze doth pierce the shadows dark and deep,
Where wicked foes in trembling fear abide,
Thy sword of fire doth all in justice keep,
As thou dost lead with Heaven’s light as guide
O blazing star, thy brilliance none may veil,
Thy glory in the heavens none can bind,
Through thee, the light of God shall ne’er grow pale,
For in thy...
#angels
#Christian
#heaven
#religion
#rhyming
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
7th Aug 2024 10:25pm
7th Aug 2024 10:25pm
That Which Guards What Cannot Be Reclaimed
In Eden's gate, where once pure bliss did reign,
Now stands a guard, with visage fierce and plain.
Archangel Gabriel, with sword of flame,
Doth bar the path, where none may stake their claim.
His eyes, like stars, with piercing light doth gleam,
And none may pass, nor even dare to dream.
The sword he wields, in fire’s eternal blaze,
Cuts through the night, in bright and deadly haze.
A sacred charge, this garden to defend,
From mortal hands that seek their fall to mend.
Yet dark it seems, this hallowed, guarded place, ...
Now stands a guard, with visage fierce and plain.
Archangel Gabriel, with sword of flame,
Doth bar the path, where none may stake their claim.
His eyes, like stars, with piercing light doth gleam,
And none may pass, nor even dare to dream.
The sword he wields, in fire’s eternal blaze,
Cuts through the night, in bright and deadly haze.
A sacred charge, this garden to defend,
From mortal hands that seek their fall to mend.
Yet dark it seems, this hallowed, guarded place, ...
#angels
#Christian
#heaven
#religion
#rhyming
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Dreamer4ever1979
Poem Published
7th Aug 2024 10:50am
7th Aug 2024 10:50am
When Spirit Takes Me Home(Lyric)
When spirit takes me home!
Straight into the clouds.... high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into your arms...true loves comfort.... pain forever ends.
When spirit takes me home.
I'm staring at those stars again.
Amazed by the wonder.... knowing your love is out there.
I can't help but think.... about the day.... when I enter and sing!!!
When spirit takes me home!
Straight into the clouds...high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into yours...
Straight into the clouds.... high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into your arms...true loves comfort.... pain forever ends.
When spirit takes me home.
I'm staring at those stars again.
Amazed by the wonder.... knowing your love is out there.
I can't help but think.... about the day.... when I enter and sing!!!
When spirit takes me home!
Straight into the clouds...high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into yours...
#Christian
#God
#heaven
#love
#relationships
149 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
6th Aug 2024 10:10pm
6th Aug 2024 10:10pm
The Dark Between Hells
In realms 'twixt hells where shadows deep do dwell,
A place forsaken, ne'er by light adorned,
There lies a darkness darker than e'en Hell,
Where souls lament, by Heaven's grace forsworn.
No fiery pit, nor brimstone's searing flare,
But void eternal, still and void of sound,
Where echoes of despair do fill the air,
And restless spirits wander, lost, unbound.
In this abyss, 'twixt realms of doom and sin,
No hope doth shine, nor mercy doth descend,
For here the damned, their endless...
A place forsaken, ne'er by light adorned,
There lies a darkness darker than e'en Hell,
Where souls lament, by Heaven's grace forsworn.
No fiery pit, nor brimstone's searing flare,
But void eternal, still and void of sound,
Where echoes of despair do fill the air,
And restless spirits wander, lost, unbound.
In this abyss, 'twixt realms of doom and sin,
No hope doth shine, nor mercy doth descend,
For here the damned, their endless...
#heaven
#hell
#narrative
#religion
#WilliamShakespeare
127 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Jul 2024 10:08pm
31st Jul 2024 10:08pm
Elysium
Mourning air whispering over me
You were all mine seven months ago
I was denied entry
Elysium
Will I see you again?
Each day of mine is closing without light
Where will I rest my head for my eternity?
You were all mine seven months ago
I was denied entry
Elysium
Will I see you again?
Each day of mine is closing without light
Where will I rest my head for my eternity?
#death
#heaven
#hell
#peace
#silence
142 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 2:33pm
14th Jun 2024 2:33pm
Mystical In My Walk
Veiled within a dark green shade, the forest alternates shadow and light,
playing with truth and myth, awakening the sylvan spirit to come alive,
and share the light of the truth.......the tiny smallest movement is caught
inside a thiik forest, when a bird alights, when a beetle cracks a weed.
an empty space where the sounds travel fast between the trees, and
the sight, is somehow left out, to enhance the hearing reception...
The pines are mute save of a suspicious breath that comes from
the adjacent mountain...
playing with truth and myth, awakening the sylvan spirit to come alive,
and share the light of the truth.......the tiny smallest movement is caught
inside a thiik forest, when a bird alights, when a beetle cracks a weed.
an empty space where the sounds travel fast between the trees, and
the sight, is somehow left out, to enhance the hearing reception...
The pines are mute save of a suspicious breath that comes from
the adjacent mountain...
#earth
#emotions
#heaven
#inspirational
#utopia
184 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 10:58am
12th Jun 2024 10:58am
Babylon
Gate of the gods.
Where the girls weep alone.
Eros disregards,
The unwelcome vermin.
Hoards of like mind,
Create towers of stone.
Building blocks of righteousness,
All the way home.
Never say what they think.
Just working as one.
A team of creators,
Invading heaven.
Don't let God know.
Don't let him see.
He'll scatter your thoughts,
Languages and family.
He'll tear down your tower.
And label it blaspheme.
He'll punish until you cower.
For even the thought of heresy.
You'll...
Where the girls weep alone.
Eros disregards,
The unwelcome vermin.
Hoards of like mind,
Create towers of stone.
Building blocks of righteousness,
All the way home.
Never say what they think.
Just working as one.
A team of creators,
Invading heaven.
Don't let God know.
Don't let him see.
He'll scatter your thoughts,
Languages and family.
He'll tear down your tower.
And label it blaspheme.
He'll punish until you cower.
For even the thought of heresy.
You'll...
#gothic
#heaven
#wisdom
220 reads
10 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
5th Jun 2024 1:35am
5th Jun 2024 1:35am
Snowflake Heaven
His mama probably told him not to ever fuck a white girl
But that did not stop him, he still let them in his world,
“Throughout his life he became addicted to the black man’s kryptonite
Giving them that BBC deep into the heat of the night,
“When he became more famous his coon ass said that he wasn’t black
The motherfucka needed to look at his skin to realize that was a false fact,
“Like his NFL career he should run that shit back
But one thing for sure hate from his murder trial did not cut no slack,
...
But that did not stop him, he still let them in his world,
“Throughout his life he became addicted to the black man’s kryptonite
Giving them that BBC deep into the heat of the night,
“When he became more famous his coon ass said that he wasn’t black
The motherfucka needed to look at his skin to realize that was a false fact,
“Like his NFL career he should run that shit back
But one thing for sure hate from his murder trial did not cut no slack,
...
#forgiveness
#heaven
258 reads
10 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 5:17pm
4th Jun 2024 5:17pm
From The Pastures Of Heaven
nature has words to speak
the quill his secrets leak
the hidden truth to seek
heal the heart that is sick
it's so quiet where i safely sit
betwenn the rocks and the trees
i near where i hear the bleat
it's so calm where i write
the town is remotely far
I feel close to Heaven's light
it is so mild where i tread
the shepherds track is soft
pastoral vibrations in my head
where herbs and stones abound
crickets and grasshoppers alike
nature is teeming with life around
...
the quill his secrets leak
the hidden truth to seek
heal the heart that is sick
it's so quiet where i safely sit
betwenn the rocks and the trees
i near where i hear the bleat
it's so calm where i write
the town is remotely far
I feel close to Heaven's light
it is so mild where i tread
the shepherds track is soft
pastoral vibrations in my head
where herbs and stones abound
crickets and grasshoppers alike
nature is teeming with life around
...
#earth
#heaven
#inspirational
#motivational
#utopia
158 reads
7 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
25th May 2024 12:11pm
25th May 2024 12:11pm
Mystical Elightenment
Flat and vast, the dormant hills sleep in the mist
They stretch wide their flanks on every earthy inch
Where the wheat fields and furrows, both exist
And back beyond the flat lines, rise gigantic rocks
******
From the rocky hills, whence i stand watching
The view makes the time a one moment extending
Lengthy and slow and the hush ever existing
With a white noise, constant murmur in the back
******
The mountain's height challenge the blue firmament
From an upper view, their crests graze the sky's face ...
They stretch wide their flanks on every earthy inch
Where the wheat fields and furrows, both exist
And back beyond the flat lines, rise gigantic rocks
******
From the rocky hills, whence i stand watching
The view makes the time a one moment extending
Lengthy and slow and the hush ever existing
With a white noise, constant murmur in the back
******
The mountain's height challenge the blue firmament
From an upper view, their crests graze the sky's face ...
#heaven
#morality
#philosophical
#religion
#utopia
166 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th May 2024 10:37pm
6th May 2024 10:37pm
Weary Eyes
Mourning air humming over me
You were all mine seven months ago
I was denied entry
Elysium
Will I see you again?
Each day of mine is closing without light
Where will I rest my head for my eternity?
You were all mine seven months ago
I was denied entry
Elysium
Will I see you again?
Each day of mine is closing without light
Where will I rest my head for my eternity?
#death
#heaven
#hell
#peace
#silence
152 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 4:48pm
3rd May 2024 4:48pm
Maw
for the darkness inside you conceal
you can't see the grey matter in your mind
grey means a dead brain
pink means you still have a choice
call your public defender call ghost busters
I will not ask you to suffer above what you insulted me with
blaming me and mine and making them suffer
you are highly intelligent hold onto your pride no matter what you think you see
hold onto your anger and pain it may someday serve you well
let me introduce myself I won't call you son though I remember you in my dreams
I haven't forgotten your plight and I am...
you can't see the grey matter in your mind
grey means a dead brain
pink means you still have a choice
call your public defender call ghost busters
I will not ask you to suffer above what you insulted me with
blaming me and mine and making them suffer
you are highly intelligent hold onto your pride no matter what you think you see
hold onto your anger and pain it may someday serve you well
let me introduce myself I won't call you son though I remember you in my dreams
I haven't forgotten your plight and I am...
#dark
#heaven
#hell
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