Poems About Heaven by Top Critiquers
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Poems about heaven by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 5:30am
4th Oct 2024 5:30am
Foolish Pride
Racing against this thing called time
When I was young thought I had forever
Taking everyday life with a grain of salt
Risking it all for the sake of being clever
Once the moment passes it’s likely gone
Precious memories forgotten and lost
Waking up underneath this blistered dawn
Death covers me within the morning frost
Don’t wanna say goodbye to those I love
Tame this sorrow that flows deep inside
She holds my hand while speaking softly
Washing away sin nestled in foolish pride
When I was young thought I had forever
Taking everyday life with a grain of salt
Risking it all for the sake of being clever
Once the moment passes it’s likely gone
Precious memories forgotten and lost
Waking up underneath this blistered dawn
Death covers me within the morning frost
Don’t wanna say goodbye to those I love
Tame this sorrow that flows deep inside
She holds my hand while speaking softly
Washing away sin nestled in foolish pride
#heaven
188 reads
20 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 10:27pm
21st Feb 2025 10:27pm
Crystal Winter Sky
The day moves so slowly
Frozen in it's breath
Sun goes down so lonely
In the distant frosty west
Cold, malevolent winds are blowing
All hope has gone away
While fading life is flowing
Into a wintry, snowy haze
Icicles frozen in time
A snow angel spreads her wings to fly
Church bells and gongs chime
Hands reach out into a crystal winter sky
Frozen in it's breath
Sun goes down so lonely
In the distant frosty west
Cold, malevolent winds are blowing
All hope has gone away
While fading life is flowing
Into a wintry, snowy haze
Icicles frozen in time
A snow angel spreads her wings to fly
Church bells and gongs chime
Hands reach out into a crystal winter sky
#heaven
#nature
#rhyming
#spiritual
#winter
97 reads
14 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th Jan 2021 10:21pm
11th Jan 2021 10:21pm
HAVE YOU EVER TRULY WONDERED
Though I walk through the valley of death I shall not walk alone nor shall, I fear what is waiting at the end as I am never alone with the most highest spiritual soul. By my side as I walk through the shadows of the darkness that surrounds, which is known as the unknown which is called the dead of the night. For there were times when I became weak even got down on my knees, as there were times when I felt so all afraid and alone with ME MYSELF AND I. But not once did I give up on finding the inner strength, and courage to walk and stand against all that stood against ME. For they say it takes...
#utopia
#heaven
#hell
511 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
21st Nov 2018 3:35am
21st Nov 2018 3:35am
Astrophilia
Magnetized since birth
I've recognized the mirrored
reflection within myself
My solar plexus -
that many pointed star
of nerves whispers:
As long as you live
you will never forget
your celestial truth
Nor, as Stardust
will you ever doubt
your eventual return
~
I've recognized the mirrored
reflection within myself
My solar plexus -
that many pointed star
of nerves whispers:
As long as you live
you will never forget
your celestial truth
Nor, as Stardust
will you ever doubt
your eventual return
~
#universe
#stars
#heaven
#astronomy
#spiritual
1109 reads
20 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 5:57pm
12th Jan 2025 5:57pm
Across the Land
For even on the highway to hell,
no redemption is found.
The detour leads deeper
where shadows confound.
No solace, no escape,
just eternal descent
Into the abyss
where suffering is sent.
no redemption is found.
The detour leads deeper
where shadows confound.
No solace, no escape,
just eternal descent
Into the abyss
where suffering is sent.
#angels
#dark
#despair
#heaven
#hell
82 reads
8 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 4:51pm
25th Nov 2024 4:51pm
Evil Is My Name
Evil is the mind of the saints, resurrected.
666 is my name; untainted.
Alone at the top, but acquainted,
With all the suffering souls,
The evil of the bottomless pit.
Know me and know my name.
I am here for the fame.
Follow me to the promised land.
Marry me to your reign.
Our power will be seen on a world stage.
Come together
Let's multiply.
666 is my name; untainted.
Alone at the top, but acquainted,
With all the suffering souls,
The evil of the bottomless pit.
Know me and know my name.
I am here for the fame.
Follow me to the promised land.
Marry me to your reign.
Our power will be seen on a world stage.
Come together
Let's multiply.
#God
#heaven
#religion #spiritual
#religion #spiritual
150 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 4:48pm
3rd May 2024 4:48pm
Maw
for the darkness inside you conceal
you can't see the grey matter in your mind
grey means a dead brain
pink means you still have a choice
call your public defender call ghost busters
I will not ask you to suffer above what you insulted me with
blaming me and mine and making them suffer
you are highly intelligent hold onto your pride no matter what you think you see
hold onto your anger and pain it may someday serve you well
let me introduce myself I won't call you son though I remember you in my dreams
I haven't forgotten your plight and I am...
you can't see the grey matter in your mind
grey means a dead brain
pink means you still have a choice
call your public defender call ghost busters
I will not ask you to suffer above what you insulted me with
blaming me and mine and making them suffer
you are highly intelligent hold onto your pride no matter what you think you see
hold onto your anger and pain it may someday serve you well
let me introduce myself I won't call you son though I remember you in my dreams
I haven't forgotten your plight and I am...
#dark
#heaven
#hell
178 reads
0 Comments
MrBlack
Mr Black
Mr Black
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 3:47am
17th Feb 2025 3:47am
After Death
(Verse 1)
The light extinguished, a final, hollow breath,
Cold steel embrace, the chilling kiss of death.
No silver lining, no pearly gates above,
Just endless blackness, devoid of any love.
They told you stories, of heaven's golden shore,
But lies are whispers, and truth will always roar.
(Pre-Chorus)
The body's rotting, beneath the frozen ground,
But something stirs, a horrifying sound.
A twisted echo, of every wicked deed,
A harvest sown, from every planted seed.
(Chorus -
Death! It's not the ending, it's the...
The light extinguished, a final, hollow breath,
Cold steel embrace, the chilling kiss of death.
No silver lining, no pearly gates above,
Just endless blackness, devoid of any love.
They told you stories, of heaven's golden shore,
But lies are whispers, and truth will always roar.
(Pre-Chorus)
The body's rotting, beneath the frozen ground,
But something stirs, a horrifying sound.
A twisted echo, of every wicked deed,
A harvest sown, from every planted seed.
(Chorus -
Death! It's not the ending, it's the...
#dark
#death
#heaven
#hell
#religion
149 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 7:27pm
15th Apr 2024 7:27pm
Ironia
Sun glossed white puffed sky.
Ironic imaginings.
Poised to darkly die.
Ironic imaginings.
Poised to darkly die.
#dreams
#death
#clouds #heaven
#clouds #heaven
217 reads
17 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
5th Jun 2024 1:35am
5th Jun 2024 1:35am
Snowflake Heaven
His mama probably told him not to ever fuck a white girl
But that did not stop him, he still let them in his world,
“Throughout his life he became addicted to the black man’s kryptonite
Giving them that BBC deep into the heat of the night,
“When he became more famous his coon ass said that he wasn’t black
The motherfucka needed to look at his skin to realize that was a false fact,
“Like his NFL career he should run that shit back
But one thing for sure hate from his murder trial did not cut no slack,
...
But that did not stop him, he still let them in his world,
“Throughout his life he became addicted to the black man’s kryptonite
Giving them that BBC deep into the heat of the night,
“When he became more famous his coon ass said that he wasn’t black
The motherfucka needed to look at his skin to realize that was a false fact,
“Like his NFL career he should run that shit back
But one thing for sure hate from his murder trial did not cut no slack,
...
#forgiveness
#heaven
252 reads
10 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 1:00am
11th Sep 2024 1:00am
anxiety in the city
and as I walk down
the street
they
ignore me, I say,
the only thing we have in common,
apart from
our common humanity,
of course,
is that
we’re strangers,
and all that entails,
the inherent
dangers ..
the street
they
ignore me, I say,
the only thing we have in common,
apart from
our common humanity,
of course,
is that
we’re strangers,
and all that entails,
the inherent
dangers ..
#heaven
#hell
#utopia
133 reads
3 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
29th Sep 2019 7:00pm
29th Sep 2019 7:00pm
It's Quiet Now
It’s quiet now
Here
Where waters lap among the reeds
I can hear myself think
And a hundred impossible flights of fancy are possible
Here at the laver
Before the temple of God
- the fire pops –
And smoke stirred by a vagrant breeze
Ascends like incense
Bearing my thoughts like pristine prayers
Heavenward to Nature’s God
Alone at twilight
Til nearby song birds sing
And I look across nature into the eternity
Nature's changing face reveals
And I wait ‘tween the promise and the dream
Here
Where waters lap among the reeds
I can hear myself think
And a hundred impossible flights of fancy are possible
Here at the laver
Before the temple of God
- the fire pops –
And smoke stirred by a vagrant breeze
Ascends like incense
Bearing my thoughts like pristine prayers
Heavenward to Nature’s God
Alone at twilight
Til nearby song birds sing
And I look across nature into the eternity
Nature's changing face reveals
And I wait ‘tween the promise and the dream
#nature
#heaven
#meditation #healing
#meditation #healing
709 reads
12 Comments
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