Heartbroken by Top Critiquers Poems
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heartbroken by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Maybe gone forever
She'll tell you that he left her
I say he just left
She'll tell you that he belonged to her
I say that's pretty ridiculous
She says he'll be completely lost without her
Well I don't know about that
I'm talking about her Miniature Schnauzer
I don't know what the hell you were thinking of....
I say he just left
She'll tell you that he belonged to her
I say that's pretty ridiculous
She says he'll be completely lost without her
Well I don't know about that
I'm talking about her Miniature Schnauzer
I don't know what the hell you were thinking of....
#heartbroken
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Unable To Forget
I had a vision of her walking across heaven
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
#heartbroken
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21 Comments
Never Was
Why can’t we be friends anymore
Do you believe this is the best
Why can't I let this rest
We were close, but not now
You chose
Did you choose right?
I can't fight
for something that I already lost
I should have known better.
These types of friendships
Never last
Never understood that
I’m just not meant for that
Can’t cry tears that dried
Like a dead well with no water inside
Did I see something that never was
Hoping that this will work just because
I’m done
You won
no need to hit pause ...
Do you believe this is the best
Why can't I let this rest
We were close, but not now
You chose
Did you choose right?
I can't fight
for something that I already lost
I should have known better.
These types of friendships
Never last
Never understood that
I’m just not meant for that
Can’t cry tears that dried
Like a dead well with no water inside
Did I see something that never was
Hoping that this will work just because
I’m done
You won
no need to hit pause ...
#heartbroken
#sadness
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22 Comments
To The Girl With Pretty Eyes
You had dreams
You thought you could be somethin’
But you never will
Undressed to thrill
Keep your smile
While all your dreams are killed
Mouth closed
Legs open
Now we're talkin’
Pretty eyes
Pretty face
Know your place
Forget your dreams
Things never change
What's on your mind don't count
What's in it don't matter much
You already broke the golden rule
Let them look but don't touch
Don't touch
Don't touch
Keep your mouth closed
Legs open
Now...
You thought you could be somethin’
But you never will
Undressed to thrill
Keep your smile
While all your dreams are killed
Mouth closed
Legs open
Now we're talkin’
Pretty eyes
Pretty face
Know your place
Forget your dreams
Things never change
What's on your mind don't count
What's in it don't matter much
You already broke the golden rule
Let them look but don't touch
Don't touch
Don't touch
Keep your mouth closed
Legs open
Now...
#heartbroken
#lyrics
#sadness #sex
#sadness #sex
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insulted rain~with the talented Indie
intrepid need insults my intelligence
and I succumb to the grief it causes
inside a raging storm of feeling
angry lust insinuates love elsewhere
such a grand feeling
to be titled so
when it usually brings devastating pain
soul stitches threatening to unravel, our love on the line
hurtful knowledge, to love is to hurt
thoughts of us, keep plaguing me
memories of days in the sun
laughing, you're my best friend
Would you recognise my true face
if you could see the scathing aura of my pain?
Or would you call...
and I succumb to the grief it causes
inside a raging storm of feeling
angry lust insinuates love elsewhere
such a grand feeling
to be titled so
when it usually brings devastating pain
soul stitches threatening to unravel, our love on the line
hurtful knowledge, to love is to hurt
thoughts of us, keep plaguing me
memories of days in the sun
laughing, you're my best friend
Would you recognise my true face
if you could see the scathing aura of my pain?
Or would you call...
#heartbroken
#love
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6 Comments
A Love Story
Love ferociously.
Just don't attach.
It's attachment that causes the pain, not the love.It's the desire to own,to keep, that waters the seeds and feeds the weeds of our own discontent.Our own broken heart.
How stupid are we?
Go ahead attach, attach to anything and when detachment arrives we will ache for days,weeks, months and years.Our lives will dissolve in a torrent of tears.We couldn't see that our attachment was stronger than our love.
We are all stupid!
Love, true love, never can and never will be taken from us, even if the...
Just don't attach.
It's attachment that causes the pain, not the love.It's the desire to own,to keep, that waters the seeds and feeds the weeds of our own discontent.Our own broken heart.
How stupid are we?
Go ahead attach, attach to anything and when detachment arrives we will ache for days,weeks, months and years.Our lives will dissolve in a torrent of tears.We couldn't see that our attachment was stronger than our love.
We are all stupid!
Love, true love, never can and never will be taken from us, even if the...
#heartbroken
#love
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11 Comments
The 'day before yesterday'
Wed, Jul 21
I normally hate decision making days.. When bad things are destined to happen..
On this date..
This death..
I'll remember till my last breathe..
It'll cost me 60 days to eat the dates by sunset..
Here I got subject with so many predicates
When did I write this?..
We only have 'today', 'tomorrow', and 'yesterday'..
But I have another day
So disturbed..
Consciously defaulted..
His name? I asked..
Who? They asked me in return..
The boy. He had a name..
I replied
...
I normally hate decision making days.. When bad things are destined to happen..
On this date..
This death..
I'll remember till my last breathe..
It'll cost me 60 days to eat the dates by sunset..
Here I got subject with so many predicates
When did I write this?..
We only have 'today', 'tomorrow', and 'yesterday'..
But I have another day
So disturbed..
Consciously defaulted..
His name? I asked..
Who? They asked me in return..
The boy. He had a name..
I replied
...
#anxiety
#regret
#loneliness
#heartbroken
#apathy
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2 Comments
it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
it may not always be so; these stone
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it...
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it...
#sadness
#love
#heartbroken #lover
#heartbroken #lover
1035 reads
20 Comments
My Diamond Rock
Do you know what it means to be able to find that someone, who has changed your life around, for the betterment of life itself. For have you ever had that someone, who gets you and really understands, what you had been through most of your entire life. For sure have you ever had someone, who can finish your train and sentences of thoughts word for word. For how many of us who did have the opportunity, to find someone who became a shining example of real, love and support and encouragement. TO be able to share with you a love that is true. But it was you to afraid to face the truth, that...
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#kindness
#love
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0 Comments
Anchoring Eyes
My soul sky is cobalt tonight.
Dormant thoughts now clamoring
for life.
Love.
So heart throbbing and heart thrashing,
heart pounding and then shattering.
Worth the joyous battering.
Love.
Awakening the hearts sleepy trance.
Feel the rapture of the soul wind.
Swirling with sweet vengeance.
To end is to begin.
Love
I dive deep into his anchoring eyes.
Turquoise with some veins of hazel.
What he said
He was able.
Able to inhabit my core,
forever more.
Dormant thoughts now clamoring
for life.
Love.
So heart throbbing and heart thrashing,
heart pounding and then shattering.
Worth the joyous battering.
Love.
Awakening the hearts sleepy trance.
Feel the rapture of the soul wind.
Swirling with sweet vengeance.
To end is to begin.
Love
I dive deep into his anchoring eyes.
Turquoise with some veins of hazel.
What he said
He was able.
Able to inhabit my core,
forever more.
#heartbroken
#love
#memories
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8 Comments
Red Light
Girls chance, dark nights
Men glance, red lights
Walk by, car stop
Eye spy, knee drop
Cheap thrill, money seek
Bitter pill, turn cheek
Nights out, morning comes
Doubts shout, pimp runs
Men glance, red lights
Walk by, car stop
Eye spy, knee drop
Cheap thrill, money seek
Bitter pill, turn cheek
Nights out, morning comes
Doubts shout, pimp runs
#despair
#heartbroken
#sadness
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My Saudade
the pendulum swings
the metronome moves
my heart bleeds for you
my anarchist artist
missing us, and
all what once was
passion destruction
maybe just an illusion
yearning for intimacy
i suppress my urge
preventing myself
from calling you
...
the metronome moves
my heart bleeds for you
my anarchist artist
missing us, and
all what once was
passion destruction
maybe just an illusion
yearning for intimacy
i suppress my urge
preventing myself
from calling you
...
#heartbroken
#love
819 reads
20 Comments
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