Poems About Healing Seeking Honest Critique
#healing
Poems about healing seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Baldwin
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 12:41pm
21st Apr 2025 12:41pm
when will it come?
I fight against succumbing to impatience
for a hard display
of solid buoyant evidence
of glad recovery from my stroke’s
dulling of my limbs
that threatens my composure every day
They are, I feel,
when valuating morning comes
too slight, too far away.
And I am daily left unsatisfied and drained
And so I ask, “How long will I refrain,
sustain my will,
in light of this unsubtle bleakening,
from giving in
and then admitting that I am undone?”.
for a hard display
of solid buoyant evidence
of glad recovery from my stroke’s
dulling of my limbs
that threatens my composure every day
They are, I feel,
when valuating morning comes
too slight, too far away.
And I am daily left unsatisfied and drained
And so I ask, “How long will I refrain,
sustain my will,
in light of this unsubtle bleakening,
from giving in
and then admitting that I am undone?”.
#healing
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 1:41pm
20th Apr 2025 1:41pm
As a woman
As a woman who has been blessed with her own strength and courage and perseverance, where does your true strength come from, deep within you as you go through somethings that are out of your own control. As a woman that has been blessed, with the ability to adapt to your situations always, figuring a way out to make life better for those around you. 💗 FOR since the beginning of time, as a strong woman it was only you and your faith that held the family truly together as one. As a woman that sometimes, have to wear a mask as a disguise, to hide your weeping eyes when it seems...
#determination
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
75 reads
2 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 12:09pm
6th Apr 2025 12:09pm
Fallow
Consider the field that stretches out ahead;
you say that nothing has grown there for years
and that might be true,
but NOTHING has been wasted.
Not time,
not energy,
not opportunity.
The land that has been left to stand,
fallow,
is full of fertile soil
and rich with promise for the future.
Let me help you pull out the weeds
and plant the field well.
Nurture it with love and care;
water and light and good food.
Have patience and hope,
then wait to see what is going to grow.
you say that nothing has grown there for years
and that might be true,
but NOTHING has been wasted.
Not time,
not energy,
not opportunity.
The land that has been left to stand,
fallow,
is full of fertile soil
and rich with promise for the future.
Let me help you pull out the weeds
and plant the field well.
Nurture it with love and care;
water and light and good food.
Have patience and hope,
then wait to see what is going to grow.
#healing
#hope
#nature
63 reads
2 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 00:27am
6th Apr 2025 00:27am
THE PATH AHEAD I CHOOSE TO TAKE (Sat., 4-5-2025, 12:00pm, Palm Springs, California)
this moment too
in timeless time
beyond
all it isn t
as with all things
in life
and this world
indeed nonetheless
still very simply
is
as it is
left on my own
for months and years
at a time
in my life s
journey
with no one else
present
to share it
all with
indeed at times
has left me feeling
so very alone
in this world
increasingly
growing more blind
indeed i know
i should still
feel grateful
for...
in timeless time
beyond
all it isn t
as with all things
in life
and this world
indeed nonetheless
still very simply
is
as it is
left on my own
for months and years
at a time
in my life s
journey
with no one else
present
to share it
all with
indeed at times
has left me feeling
so very alone
in this world
increasingly
growing more blind
indeed i know
i should still
feel grateful
for...
#acceptance
#healing
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:52pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:52pm
Severed
It’s a new day, so my heart rises like the sun
It’s another moment of peace, before the yearning
Now, clouds have covered morning light
Just as you invade the crevices of my psyche
Shall I turn away? Shall I close the blinds?
I’m blinded by the rays that pierce the lace lined curtains… ruby red, like my lips you’ve come to know
I am swept away when your skin touches mine
I am the lost treasure of the sea, before it sinks
And I am indeed falling
Drowning in your arms
And begging to breathe
I thought it was the air from your...
It’s another moment of peace, before the yearning
Now, clouds have covered morning light
Just as you invade the crevices of my psyche
Shall I turn away? Shall I close the blinds?
I’m blinded by the rays that pierce the lace lined curtains… ruby red, like my lips you’ve come to know
I am swept away when your skin touches mine
I am the lost treasure of the sea, before it sinks
And I am indeed falling
Drowning in your arms
And begging to breathe
I thought it was the air from your...
#healing
#love
#MovingOn
#myself
#obsession
88 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 1:44am
26th Mar 2025 1:44am
It's a sad day
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ it's a sad day that there will not be a DUP no more after 5-12-2025 😔 For me I truly enjoyed my time on the site, for sure when I signed up for DUP I can say it's been great for me as it let me express my thoughts and insight and imagination for during my time on here I've meet a lot of good people's that I admired as they encourage me as they inspire me to be able to express my thoughts and talents of unspoken words ✍️ for being here was like family among friends who were writers and artists sometimes being...
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#motivational
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
90 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 9:25pm
17th Mar 2025 9:25pm
Beheaded Poem
I beheaded a poem
For you... my rhyme
I cleaned its insides
I took off its eyes
For not having to bear
The humidity of the tears
I blew the letters up...
I threw the letters down
I washed the poem clean
I've let the scales dry
So I could do a helmet
To avoid beheading...
For you... my rhyme
I cleaned its insides
I took off its eyes
For not having to bear
The humidity of the tears
I blew the letters up...
I threw the letters down
I washed the poem clean
I've let the scales dry
So I could do a helmet
To avoid beheading...
#forgiveness
#healing
#heartbroken
#heaven
#hurt
106 reads
6 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 7:12am
16th Mar 2025 7:12am
Confessions of a Dying Reality
This fear I hold onto so dear,
Blocks my eyes I can't see the road clear,
I feel it but I know it ain't mine,
Generations of conviction made it shine.
Struggling to create my own domain,
Travelling into the unknown,
Receiving codes hard to decipher,
I'm piercing my heart with a sharp knife.
These dreams make me question my identity,
I feel like a demon among men,
I feel like an angel in my own den,
I've realized i do not exist.
What i perceive is illusory,
With judgements that...
Blocks my eyes I can't see the road clear,
I feel it but I know it ain't mine,
Generations of conviction made it shine.
Struggling to create my own domain,
Travelling into the unknown,
Receiving codes hard to decipher,
I'm piercing my heart with a sharp knife.
These dreams make me question my identity,
I feel like a demon among men,
I feel like an angel in my own den,
I've realized i do not exist.
What i perceive is illusory,
With judgements that...
#acceptance
#confessional
#healing
#learning
#MovingOn
99 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 1:47am
12th Mar 2025 1:47am
We got each other
I GOT YOU AND YOU GOT ME 👏Through the process of us being able to share our thoughts and insight, and spiritual subconsciousness of our love and awareness of the awakening, what is happening between us. I regret nothing of our paths crossing through this journey of us, for sure it's necessary to understand that, it's you who has changed my life, for the betterment of my own life. For just when I thought that I would never meet someone like you, and find the love of my own life there you appeared in plain seeth of my life and eyes 👁️👁️ YET I wonder, about...
#happiness
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#uplifting
138 reads
0 Comments
dumdum10100
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 8:17am
11th Mar 2025 8:17am
The darkness in light
You who knew my heart so true, with its dues,
and the pain ensued; or trials of youth.
The new cauterized wounds forced me to sooth,
an aching soul that knew nothing but blues.
An end from this man’s constant self abuse,
or perhaps it’s reliance on vermouth.
Even though i want a feeling of ruth,
I've felt my feelings might have been obtuse.
And from the darkness you showed me heaven.
A new found light to wash my body;
perhaps, I've reached the peak of Mt. Evans,
or my flesh has formed a fit so gaudy.
Clock hand’s strike...
and the pain ensued; or trials of youth.
The new cauterized wounds forced me to sooth,
an aching soul that knew nothing but blues.
An end from this man’s constant self abuse,
or perhaps it’s reliance on vermouth.
Even though i want a feeling of ruth,
I've felt my feelings might have been obtuse.
And from the darkness you showed me heaven.
A new found light to wash my body;
perhaps, I've reached the peak of Mt. Evans,
or my flesh has formed a fit so gaudy.
Clock hand’s strike...
#healing
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0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 8:48pm
6th Mar 2025 8:48pm
fight
I've been in icu for fifteen days with v fib I'm fighting my way back no more drugs
#healing
153 reads
15 Comments
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
GARDEN OF EXCUSES
Place a fence around the Garden of Excuses for habits
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
#determination
#dreams
#escape
#happiness
#healing
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DU Poetry : Poems About Healing Seeking Honest Critique
