Poems About Healing Seeking Honest Critique
#healing
Poems about healing seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Alviola
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 8:19pm
15th Apr 2024 8:19pm
Savior Dog
She cocks her head and stares,
offers a paw in the air,
The paw is a word, the stare
a question, when the liquor
is drunk unchilled, they will stare
In the coldness of covid,
the paws comforted, rescued
our souls, the whip of the tail
delighted, near and nudging,
ears keen to woes and worries
she flops down beside me, her
bottom up, and demands the rub,
near and nudging, she stares when
I stop, we healed when we stroked
petted bathed nuzzled fed
she...
offers a paw in the air,
The paw is a word, the stare
a question, when the liquor
is drunk unchilled, they will stare
In the coldness of covid,
the paws comforted, rescued
our souls, the whip of the tail
delighted, near and nudging,
ears keen to woes and worries
she flops down beside me, her
bottom up, and demands the rub,
near and nudging, she stares when
I stop, we healed when we stroked
petted bathed nuzzled fed
she...
#sadness
#love
#animals
#healing
#pandemic
46 reads
7 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 1:06am
12th Apr 2024 1:06am
TIME FLIES AS DO I (11-9-1995; Galveston Island, Texas)
it seems
the later i stay up
each night
the faster time
flys by
insomnia slings me
again and again
centrifugally
like a nocturnal throw of the dice
through a lopsided
elliptical orbit
increasingly further
around and beyond
all common sense and logic
beyond sleep s central
restorative processing experience
into the alchemical digestive enzymes
of tomorrow morning s
now fast approaching
first light
as i sail through these dark slippery...
the later i stay up
each night
the faster time
flys by
insomnia slings me
again and again
centrifugally
like a nocturnal throw of the dice
through a lopsided
elliptical orbit
increasingly further
around and beyond
all common sense and logic
beyond sleep s central
restorative processing experience
into the alchemical digestive enzymes
of tomorrow morning s
now fast approaching
first light
as i sail through these dark slippery...
#spiritual
#insomnia
#healing
#disability
#cancer
35 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 8:10pm
11th Apr 2024 8:10pm
The Best Way To Relieve All That Stress
Jack came home to see
Susan naked with Derek
humping her hard from behind.
Susan told Jack that
Derek said it was the best
way to relieve all that stress.
Susan naked with Derek
humping her hard from behind.
Susan told Jack that
Derek said it was the best
way to relieve all that stress.
#friendship
#home
#fiction
#sensual
#healing
108 reads
0 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 1:29am
11th Apr 2024 1:29am
AT LONG AWAITED REAWAKENED BLISSFUL LAST (2:00am,6-7-2001, Galveston Island, Texas)
eternal waiting
outer darkness inner light
sweet forgiveness deep insight
love s labor soul s plight
life lessons fight or flight
acceptance or denial
egocentricless mind and heart
still can t escape
paradoxical soul
painful beauty fearful love
hopeless faith selfless cause
blind hearts visionary spirits
blocked emotions open feelings
all suffering loss and gain
destiny s question journey s answer
life teeming with experiential meaning
struggling like an unseen river
over...
outer darkness inner light
sweet forgiveness deep insight
love s labor soul s plight
life lessons fight or flight
acceptance or denial
egocentricless mind and heart
still can t escape
paradoxical soul
painful beauty fearful love
hopeless faith selfless cause
blind hearts visionary spirits
blocked emotions open feelings
all suffering loss and gain
destiny s question journey s answer
life teeming with experiential meaning
struggling like an unseen river
over...
#inspirational
#LifeChangingMoment
#uplifting
#healing
#wisdom
34 reads
0 Comments
mel44
Melgar
Melgar
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 7:44pm
6th Apr 2024 7:44pm
Mother
Assuredly I struggled
in the days when I was young
not knowing at the time
life’s education had begun
My mother taught respect
compassion and responsibility
her influence invaluable
precious, her gift of sensibility
Strong in her convictions
as I rarely followed rules
learning from mistakes
she provided the tools
Never passing judgement
loved with her whole heart
a trait I did acquire
coveted now that we’re apart
Losing her when young
tragic watching her go
truly grateful for her...
in the days when I was young
not knowing at the time
life’s education had begun
My mother taught respect
compassion and responsibility
her influence invaluable
precious, her gift of sensibility
Strong in her convictions
as I rarely followed rules
learning from mistakes
she provided the tools
Never passing judgement
loved with her whole heart
a trait I did acquire
coveted now that we’re apart
Losing her when young
tragic watching her go
truly grateful for her...
#spiritual
#learning
#healing
#PersonalGrowth
#NaPoWriMo2024
66 reads
3 Comments
mel44
Melgar
Melgar
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 8:13pm
3rd Apr 2024 8:13pm
Awakened by Truth
Blinded, woeful, soul asleep
poignant denial, heavy and deep
stagnant in place since early youth
impotent to see the inalienable truth
consuming lethal mead, hopelessly
disregard for austere potency
consequent effects, grievous loss
burning bridges not meant to cross
uninspired, remaining still
dull and stale, becoming ill
drowning, decaying, almost dead
hanging on by just one thread
…
Praying for a revelation
awakened by truth, a manifestation
allergic reaction,...
poignant denial, heavy and deep
stagnant in place since early youth
impotent to see the inalienable truth
consuming lethal mead, hopelessly
disregard for austere potency
consequent effects, grievous loss
burning bridges not meant to cross
uninspired, remaining still
dull and stale, becoming ill
drowning, decaying, almost dead
hanging on by just one thread
…
Praying for a revelation
awakened by truth, a manifestation
allergic reaction,...
#alcohol
#healing
#NaPoWriMo2024
68 reads
3 Comments
Lantern_Core
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 7:38pm
21st Mar 2024 7:38pm
Lost
I feel lost without you
Left alone in a hospital room
with just the memory of you
and the proof of our love in
my arms...
You were the love of my life
the rock that I could lean on
now I'm left with a face that
reminds me of you and a
severe lack of sleep...
There is no one to blame but fate
But how will I explain that to him?
When one life enters
another one flees...
I was never meant to make this journey alone
though you did leave me with a piece of you...
I miss you...
Left alone in a hospital room
with just the memory of you
and the proof of our love in
my arms...
You were the love of my life
the rock that I could lean on
now I'm left with a face that
reminds me of you and a
severe lack of sleep...
There is no one to blame but fate
But how will I explain that to him?
When one life enters
another one flees...
I was never meant to make this journey alone
though you did leave me with a piece of you...
I miss you...
#heartbroken
#morning
#TimeHeals
#acceptance
#healing
195 reads
15 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 1:57pm
21st Mar 2024 1:57pm
I'm Still Healing
I'm trying hard to be
The best me I can be
Have a little empathy for me
I have so many scars
Due to my tumultuous past
I'm still healing from my
Caretakers misdeeds
It's taken me so long
To learn to love myself as I am
To truly believe I am enough
But now I know I can
Life has never been easy
I just go with the flow now
Please don't criticize me
I'm taking baby steps
To get where I was meant to be
My progress is rather slow
But it moves so steadily
I may have a long way to go
Just...
The best me I can be
Have a little empathy for me
I have so many scars
Due to my tumultuous past
I'm still healing from my
Caretakers misdeeds
It's taken me so long
To learn to love myself as I am
To truly believe I am enough
But now I know I can
Life has never been easy
I just go with the flow now
Please don't criticize me
I'm taking baby steps
To get where I was meant to be
My progress is rather slow
But it moves so steadily
I may have a long way to go
Just...
#hope
#LifeChangingMoment
#healing
105 reads
8 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
19th Mar 2024 1:04am
19th Mar 2024 1:04am
HAMMOCK STRINGS (4-17-1994; Galveston Island Texas)n a
spring birds sing
wind chimes ring
a sleepy breeze
comes over me
as i cocoon myself away
so effortlessly disconnected
from timeless hours
especially when
i need to most
now peacefully cradled
so weightlessly away
i drift suspended
in all these tranquil
hammock strings
which have recently
become
a sudden
healing necessity
in my life
especially when
i need them most
in which
i sail...
wind chimes ring
a sleepy breeze
comes over me
as i cocoon myself away
so effortlessly disconnected
from timeless hours
especially when
i need to most
now peacefully cradled
so weightlessly away
i drift suspended
in all these tranquil
hammock strings
which have recently
become
a sudden
healing necessity
in my life
especially when
i need them most
in which
i sail...
#inspirational
#peace
#gratitude
#support
#healing
83 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 2:13pm
6th Mar 2024 2:13pm
Haiku #18
I miss missing you
and so you could disappear
for a certain time
and so you could disappear
for a certain time
#ILoveYou
#redemption
#MovingOn
#IMissYou
#healing
94 reads
2 Comments
hornyshakespeare
Poem Published
28th Feb 2024 11:16pm
28th Feb 2024 11:16pm
The Two Horny Kinsmen
Two souls
Each from different brethren
Intertwined into one
Through all that is unholy
Yet feels so divine
Motivated by burning desire
Free to release the ghosts of the past
By words parting their gentle lips
Just like one parts another's pouch
"Free me"
"Free me"
"Free me"
They say home is where the heart is
But theirs' is between their thighs
Marked by soft kisses and etching of thy name
Dampness rolls down one's lap
"Did you cum" the other asks
"No because...
Each from different brethren
Intertwined into one
Through all that is unholy
Yet feels so divine
Motivated by burning desire
Free to release the ghosts of the past
By words parting their gentle lips
Just like one parts another's pouch
"Free me"
"Free me"
"Free me"
They say home is where the heart is
But theirs' is between their thighs
Marked by soft kisses and etching of thy name
Dampness rolls down one's lap
"Did you cum" the other asks
"No because...
#erotic
#healing
134 reads
3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 6:48pm
27th Feb 2024 6:48pm
Duels and Duets
#politics
#funny
#MentalHealth #healing
#MentalHealth #healing
52 reads
2 Comments
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