Poems About Happiness Seeking Honest Critique
#happiness
Poems about happiness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
My Beautiful Butterfly
From the deepness of my thoughts to the very deepness of my heart, for it's true that you have become that very Beautiful Butterfly. THAT I saw upon at a time, when I notice that a change is about to come into my life. For sure that was a sign, from up above to really change my world around. For the very betterment of amazing things to come to fulfill my dreams. Come true to finally have what I've been looking for all my life as it was you. That beautiful butterfly 🦋 a beautiful butterfly as a disguise, to bring the deepness of my thoughts of love and happiness come alive. AS I've...
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#redemption
#TimeHeals
103 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 2:48am
13th Mar 2025 2:48am
Special Birthday Message For PoetSpeak...
Stop acting the slut
Wantin' plenty of smut
You might be in luck
If you fancy a fuck
Don't be a schmuck
Rolling in muck
Ending up stuck
Cos you might wanna suck
Hickory dickory dock
The mouse needed some cock
The clock struck twelve
Oh what the hell
Are you up for that fuck?
Happy Birthday Spunky!
Wantin' plenty of smut
You might be in luck
If you fancy a fuck
Don't be a schmuck
Rolling in muck
Ending up stuck
Cos you might wanna suck
Hickory dickory dock
The mouse needed some cock
The clock struck twelve
Oh what the hell
Are you up for that fuck?
Happy Birthday Spunky!
#admiration
#happiness
#gratitude #respect
#gratitude #respect
166 reads
21 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 1:55am
13th Mar 2025 1:55am
Ode to the Doggies
Bow Wow...
Ruff Ruff...
tell me to sit
i will
tell me to roll over
i will
tell me to stay...i will
throw my ball here or there
i will fetch it for you
a thousand times
pet me,rub my belly,kiss my head
i will follow you anywhere,
sit and wait for you everyday,
jump up and down
whenever i see you
tail wag and butt shake
and go round and round
i will love you forever
Bow Wow,
Ruff Ruff...
Ruff Ruff...
tell me to sit
i will
tell me to roll over
i will
tell me to stay...i will
throw my ball here or there
i will fetch it for you
a thousand times
pet me,rub my belly,kiss my head
i will follow you anywhere,
sit and wait for you everyday,
jump up and down
whenever i see you
tail wag and butt shake
and go round and round
i will love you forever
Bow Wow,
Ruff Ruff...
#happiness
#love
57 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 1:47am
12th Mar 2025 1:47am
We got each other
I GOT YOU AND YOU GOT ME 👏Through the process of us being able to share our thoughts and insight, and spiritual subconsciousness of our love and awareness of the awakening, what is happening between us. I regret nothing of our paths crossing through this journey of us, for sure it's necessary to understand that, it's you who has changed my life, for the betterment of my own life. For just when I thought that I would never meet someone like you, and find the love of my own life there you appeared in plain seeth of my life and eyes 👁️👁️ YET I wonder, about...
#happiness
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#uplifting
126 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 11:13pm
11th Mar 2025 11:13pm
A peaceful journey
A beginning with no end for this magical journey and travel and walk that we took together as one, for sure we had our usual ups and downs but yet we believed that we were to meet at the crossroads of our lives. For sure we are still going strong, even as time slowly passes by as we exchange thoughts and insight and dreams. For sure they say that no one is sent to you by chance or accident, as we were distant to be lovers for life. For it's true that we had all the things that we ever wanted to live or lives, yet it's when we reach that stage in our lives, that none of what we had really...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
102 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 10:43pm
11th Mar 2025 10:43pm
The Doors - The End - 1967
Knowing things always get to an end
I felt like putting a record to play loud:
Art - Supernatural Fairy Tales - 1967
Knowing things always get all loud
I felt like putting a record to an end:
Spooky Tooth - Sunshine Help Me - 1968
I felt like putting a record
I felt like putting
I felt...
I felt like putting a record to play loud:
Art - Supernatural Fairy Tales - 1967
Knowing things always get all loud
I felt like putting a record to an end:
Spooky Tooth - Sunshine Help Me - 1968
I felt like putting a record
I felt like putting
I felt...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#happiness
#kindness #music
#kindness #music
144 reads
9 Comments
Francineuwera
Francine75
Francine75
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 9:13pm
10th Mar 2025 9:13pm
The sweetest Journey
It was a whisper from my own heart,
telling me that it can’t be a Saturday for bed,
yet I did’t have much time to think about it.
I found myself into the bus sitting beside a stranger,
and all he said first was that am too big,
ohh God this person wants to end my day before it starts,
within a short moment I forgot everything,
cause the journey was worthy the patience.
Looking on the side I saw white space,
not a pure white but cloudy like,
ohh wow wait is that water?!!
yeah it was a lake.
It was my first time to see it with...
telling me that it can’t be a Saturday for bed,
yet I did’t have much time to think about it.
I found myself into the bus sitting beside a stranger,
and all he said first was that am too big,
ohh God this person wants to end my day before it starts,
within a short moment I forgot everything,
cause the journey was worthy the patience.
Looking on the side I saw white space,
not a pure white but cloudy like,
ohh wow wait is that water?!!
yeah it was a lake.
It was my first time to see it with...
#happiness
75 reads
2 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 2:11am
10th Mar 2025 2:11am
Happy Is As Happy Does...
Sunsets
the sound of the ocean
a breeze through the trees
a good strong hug
a brand new box of chocolates
fresh bed sheets
fresh morning dew
falling in love
a full moon
an ice cold mug of beer
walking in the summer rain
a Big $ winning loto ticket
Mickey and Minnie Mouse
music
life
et cetera, et cetera...
the sound of the ocean
a breeze through the trees
a good strong hug
a brand new box of chocolates
fresh bed sheets
fresh morning dew
falling in love
a full moon
an ice cold mug of beer
walking in the summer rain
a Big $ winning loto ticket
Mickey and Minnie Mouse
music
life
et cetera, et cetera...
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
73 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 5:33pm
9th Mar 2025 5:33pm
Less is Happiness
As if I should care
The less I can understand
Makes me feel joyful
The less I can understand
Makes me feel joyful
#happiness
#ignorance
#senryu
127 reads
16 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 2:56am
8th Mar 2025 2:56am
Crying During Crazy on You
There are a bunch of songs by Heart
I don't particularly like
How Can I Get You Alone
sounds like a bank commercial
The Dog and the Butterfly
is dopey and boring
Alone
is too repetitive for me
But the Heart songs I like...
Well, I really heart those Heart songs
I'm mad for Magic Man,
and crazy for Crazy on You
Our seats are super steep
in the basketball arena
Our backs are literally against the wall
in the very last row.
Looking down
makes me quietly queasy.
And it's a work night ...
I don't particularly like
How Can I Get You Alone
sounds like a bank commercial
The Dog and the Butterfly
is dopey and boring
Alone
is too repetitive for me
But the Heart songs I like...
Well, I really heart those Heart songs
I'm mad for Magic Man,
and crazy for Crazy on You
Our seats are super steep
in the basketball arena
Our backs are literally against the wall
in the very last row.
Looking down
makes me quietly queasy.
And it's a work night ...
#happiness
#music
151 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 11:33am
7th Mar 2025 11:33am
Imagine
If Lennon was here,
Would he still minister peace?
Our world's in danger
Would he still minister peace?
Our world's in danger
#earth
#happiness
#music
#peace
#senryu
105 reads
10 Comments
Cyndi_Moone
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
5th Mar 2025 6:44pm
GARDEN OF EXCUSES
Place a fence around the Garden of Excuses for habits
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
To ward off the strays: dogs, foxes and rabbits
That nibble on our fruited seeds and vegetation
Ruining the livestock of our generation.
Don’t allow the rabbits near the carrots
Nor the little foxes near the parrots!
Shun them away from the garden
‘Lest they ruin the garden without pardon!
Your betrayal has no pardon
As you allowed my heart to harden
I created a comfortable cradle
Never knowing it would be fatal!
...
#determination
#dreams
#escape
#happiness
#healing
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