Poems About Happiness Seeking Honest Critique
#happiness
Poems about happiness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 10:49am
22nd Dec 2024 10:49am
Painting
I pick up my brush.
And I don't paint in a rush.
I begin to paint a rosy bush.
Roses,covered in thorns.
I paint a lively,blue sky.
And bumblebees,birds that begin to fly.
Maybe an ocean,a cloud that cry.
With soothing sounds of rain.
I'll paint myself and I won't feel any pain.
Maybe a rainbow on the other side.
And color palette in which I take pride.
Let's paint ourselves together like a work of art.
Because things have been rough and we worked hard.
Let us paint us on a stage far away from home.
A...
And I don't paint in a rush.
I begin to paint a rosy bush.
Roses,covered in thorns.
I paint a lively,blue sky.
And bumblebees,birds that begin to fly.
Maybe an ocean,a cloud that cry.
With soothing sounds of rain.
I'll paint myself and I won't feel any pain.
Maybe a rainbow on the other side.
And color palette in which I take pride.
Let's paint ourselves together like a work of art.
Because things have been rough and we worked hard.
Let us paint us on a stage far away from home.
A...
#art
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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Elusive
Phillip Knox
Phillip Knox
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 2:33am
22nd Dec 2024 2:33am
Nights in Shades of Red
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
206 reads
6 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 1:12pm
21st Dec 2024 1:12pm
The Honeyed Quest in haiku
Whispers on the breeze
a meadow’s heart starts fading,
nectar crown grows dim.
Golden fields tremble,
petals bow to coming drought,
bees hum tales of fear.
Small Melis takes flight,
a spark against looming dusk,
her heart pure as light.
Through the grand forest’s shade,
ants hoard crystals sharp as glass
she gifts royal gold.
Sap glows soft and sweet,
they share a feast, unity
woven in their dance.
The lilies’ mirror,
rippling fears in darkened waves
“Small, yet I am strong.” ...
a meadow’s heart starts fading,
nectar crown grows dim.
Golden fields tremble,
petals bow to coming drought,
bees hum tales of fear.
Small Melis takes flight,
a spark against looming dusk,
her heart pure as light.
Through the grand forest’s shade,
ants hoard crystals sharp as glass
she gifts royal gold.
Sap glows soft and sweet,
they share a feast, unity
woven in their dance.
The lilies’ mirror,
rippling fears in darkened waves
“Small, yet I am strong.” ...
#happiness
#LifeStruggles
#nature
25 reads
0 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 6:59am
21st Dec 2024 6:59am
You're touch
I pushed everyone away and you're still here
When i need to reach out you're always near
You're better than I am that's for sure
You got a heart so clean and pure
When its dark you bring the light
You bring the day to my end my night
I'm sorry how I can be at times
You deserve better than my whimpers and whines
I love you i need you I want you to stay
You're all I have dont go away
You understand me and that means so much
All I need in life is the feel of you're touch
When i need to reach out you're always near
You're better than I am that's for sure
You got a heart so clean and pure
When its dark you bring the light
You bring the day to my end my night
I'm sorry how I can be at times
You deserve better than my whimpers and whines
I love you i need you I want you to stay
You're all I have dont go away
You understand me and that means so much
All I need in life is the feel of you're touch
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness #love
#happiness #love
74 reads
0 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:30pm
20th Dec 2024 11:30pm
Oh to feel Alive
I want to feel alive
What good is it to live
When somedays it's just as easy to shrivel up and die
I want to feel alive
I want to be molded into the likes of the statue of David and bare my nakedness to the world
With a body that I see as modelesque, love handles, extra fat and all
Letting all of my insecurities and setbacks desolve
I want to feel alive
Show my inner and outer scars to the world
Relish in my imperfections
Walk away from every care in the world and strut on a runway, where those who truly love me are in...
What good is it to live
When somedays it's just as easy to shrivel up and die
I want to feel alive
I want to be molded into the likes of the statue of David and bare my nakedness to the world
With a body that I see as modelesque, love handles, extra fat and all
Letting all of my insecurities and setbacks desolve
I want to feel alive
Show my inner and outer scars to the world
Relish in my imperfections
Walk away from every care in the world and strut on a runway, where those who truly love me are in...
#courage
#happiness
#inspirational #uplifting
#inspirational #uplifting
158 reads
8 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 5:13pm
20th Dec 2024 5:13pm
Harry and Meghan's Happy Holidays Greetings!
By Stanley Collymore
people in the USA have been saying
"Happy Holidays" since then 1860s.
Try looking up the history of the
phrase instead of guessing about it or else asininely literally implementing into it your
own quite stupid, and racist assumptions;
and basically specifically so, because the
technology is essentially clearly evidently
used by Harry and Meghan! What a really
crude bunch of absolute losers, and very
discernibly also literally pathetic morons
you...
people in the USA have been saying
"Happy Holidays" since then 1860s.
Try looking up the history of the
phrase instead of guessing about it or else asininely literally implementing into it your
own quite stupid, and racist assumptions;
and basically specifically so, because the
technology is essentially clearly evidently
used by Harry and Meghan! What a really
crude bunch of absolute losers, and very
discernibly also literally pathetic morons
you...
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#respect
#strength
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tating
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:45pm
20th Dec 2024 4:45pm
The Touch
The touch of a sinner
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
#happiness
#romantic
213 reads
8 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:26pm
20th Dec 2024 4:26pm
Exist
Exist
The pages fall off the calendar
As the leaves go from green to red then gold
My existence has lost all meaning
Unless I exist in bed next to you
The softness of your skin draws me in
Makes me want to give my burning love to you
When you’re away my spirit decays
And it doesn’t return until I lay my eyes upon you
In between I just resist but I can’t exist alone
The pages fall off the calendar
As the leaves go from green to red then gold
My existence has lost all meaning
Unless I exist in bed next to you
The softness of your skin draws me in
Makes me want to give my burning love to you
When you’re away my spirit decays
And it doesn’t return until I lay my eyes upon you
In between I just resist but I can’t exist alone
#happiness
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 10:53am
17th Dec 2024 10:53am
Musical Dimension
To me,music can be used to travel.
To lands far away.
Mysteries,unravel.
And we play it as begin to travel.
We travel to a magical land.
A gate covered by magic.
Where you say the magic words.
And escape anything tragic with a tap.
A click,or a snap.
If you just sing the magic words.
You'll travel new worlds.
And unravel the mysteries of life.
Listen,headphones on and thrive.
As you watch the glowing moon at night.
Maybe you'll go to a concern tonight.
And music,magic will take flight. ...
To lands far away.
Mysteries,unravel.
And we play it as begin to travel.
We travel to a magical land.
A gate covered by magic.
Where you say the magic words.
And escape anything tragic with a tap.
A click,or a snap.
If you just sing the magic words.
You'll travel new worlds.
And unravel the mysteries of life.
Listen,headphones on and thrive.
As you watch the glowing moon at night.
Maybe you'll go to a concern tonight.
And music,magic will take flight. ...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational #uplifting
#inspirational #uplifting
60 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 12:20pm
15th Dec 2024 12:20pm
Gumdrops falling like rain
Falling from the sky
A shower of gum drops
It burns the tongue so sweetly
So chewy, so gooey – it reminds me to never give up my dreams
AIM HIGH! And climb the giant turd called life!
I wanna go where the acid gumdrops come from
You may want to value my ideas
Life is for living and death is for dying
So make like a gumdrop and flap away flying
Wait a minute... Are you paying attention to me?
Probably not!
Hey! I asked you a question!
Are you paying attention to me?
That's better
Now listen up here...
ACID!...
A shower of gum drops
It burns the tongue so sweetly
So chewy, so gooey – it reminds me to never give up my dreams
AIM HIGH! And climb the giant turd called life!
I wanna go where the acid gumdrops come from
You may want to value my ideas
Life is for living and death is for dying
So make like a gumdrop and flap away flying
Wait a minute... Are you paying attention to me?
Probably not!
Hey! I asked you a question!
Are you paying attention to me?
That's better
Now listen up here...
ACID!...
#drugs
#happiness
#inspirational
#LifeChangingMoment
#satirical
57 reads
4 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 10:48am
15th Dec 2024 10:48am
Sweets
I still remember the scent.
Of chocolate,wet cement.
When I was still a child.
And all of the pain was mild.
I remember the scent of pastries.
With cream and chocolate chips.
I remember her cookies.
So good,you would lick your lips.
And maybe homemade,vanilla cake.
That you and your family would make.
Maybe the scent and taste of caramel.
If only I could remember the smell.
I would have a fairytale to tell.
One day,I will also try to bake.
Maybe while painting an ethereal lake.
I will...
Of chocolate,wet cement.
When I was still a child.
And all of the pain was mild.
I remember the scent of pastries.
With cream and chocolate chips.
I remember her cookies.
So good,you would lick your lips.
And maybe homemade,vanilla cake.
That you and your family would make.
Maybe the scent and taste of caramel.
If only I could remember the smell.
I would have a fairytale to tell.
One day,I will also try to bake.
Maybe while painting an ethereal lake.
I will...
#happiness
#hope
#memories
#nostalgia
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 10:47am
14th Dec 2024 10:47am
The Diamond Tree
One day,you were walking home at night.
In the storm,with no fright.
Something was sparkling in the sky.
But not just the stars.
You find something far away.
That looks like it will never decay.
It resembled a tree.
With diamonds on it,that will set you free.
Maybe it was all in your head.
Maybe it was an illusion,a threat.
But when you followed the thread.
You became amazed.
With diamonds so shiny,you became dreamy and dazed.
Your feelings were happy,amazed.
With your fascination unphased.
...
In the storm,with no fright.
Something was sparkling in the sky.
But not just the stars.
You find something far away.
That looks like it will never decay.
It resembled a tree.
With diamonds on it,that will set you free.
Maybe it was all in your head.
Maybe it was an illusion,a threat.
But when you followed the thread.
You became amazed.
With diamonds so shiny,you became dreamy and dazed.
Your feelings were happy,amazed.
With your fascination unphased.
...
#dreams
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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