Poems About Happiness Seeking Honest Critique
#happiness
Poems about happiness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Kementic1
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 3:53pm
22nd Mar 2025 3:53pm
Give U My Love
I am so sorry
My tongue won't play it's part
wish you could to listen my heart
I was hooked from the start
you are both beautiful and smart
when you run to the mini-mart
it feels like years of being apart
my emotions are so strong
i think about you all day long
I want to give you my love
it's all I have been dreaming of
(repeat)
I wake up everyday
about you to the Lord i pray
hoping you will feel the same way
and forever together we...
My tongue won't play it's part
wish you could to listen my heart
I was hooked from the start
you are both beautiful and smart
when you run to the mini-mart
it feels like years of being apart
my emotions are so strong
i think about you all day long
I want to give you my love
it's all I have been dreaming of
(repeat)
I wake up everyday
about you to the Lord i pray
hoping you will feel the same way
and forever together we...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#hope
#love
95 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 8:41pm
21st Mar 2025 8:41pm
Whispers of dreams
From the deepness of the heart it will always be the strongest desire for the heart, 💕 for sure even when we are far away the deepness of the mind and heart, will have a connection that runs deeper than deep. For the love can be felt like the beat of the drums, from a far away place that will be embracing your thoughts, and insight and feelings. Beyond your wildest dreams pass your imagination to dream, about the deepness of the love that you two shared as one. For it's like the silent whispers, that only lovers can hear as it relates to echos, from the deepness of your mind and heart...
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
90 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 5:27pm
20th Mar 2025 5:27pm
Savannah dreams
Something languid
rolls through
blue skies
while cumulus clouds
dig rails in my mind
A shoeless man in
Forsythe park
plays a Bob Marley
gospel medley
on a guitar with
surfer stickers
as pairs of
Junior WASPs
court on a
checkered blankets
And his polo is just so,
And her pink bow
and blond hair fall
like shampoo commercials
I smile
and watch the way a
woman in a red wig
twists balloons into animals
while the fountains
run post-parade green
...
rolls through
blue skies
while cumulus clouds
dig rails in my mind
A shoeless man in
Forsythe park
plays a Bob Marley
gospel medley
on a guitar with
surfer stickers
as pairs of
Junior WASPs
court on a
checkered blankets
And his polo is just so,
And her pink bow
and blond hair fall
like shampoo commercials
I smile
and watch the way a
woman in a red wig
twists balloons into animals
while the fountains
run post-parade green
...
#happiness
#IMissYou
163 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 12:29pm
19th Mar 2025 12:29pm
A little Spoof on How Will I know By Whitney Houston
Oh take me, I need you
Can't seem to want enough
Look into my eyes
take me in the back of your truck
How will I know if he really wants me?
I really swear my clit has a heartbeat
I fall in lust whenever we meet
I'm asking you 'cause you know about these things
How will I know if he's longing for me?
I try to phone but I can’t dial (can't speak)
Falling in lust is so bittersweet
This hunger strong, why do I feel weak?
Oh, take me, I'm shaking
Really need you near me now, uh-huh
Said...
Can't seem to want enough
Look into my eyes
take me in the back of your truck
How will I know if he really wants me?
I really swear my clit has a heartbeat
I fall in lust whenever we meet
I'm asking you 'cause you know about these things
How will I know if he's longing for me?
I try to phone but I can’t dial (can't speak)
Falling in lust is so bittersweet
This hunger strong, why do I feel weak?
Oh, take me, I'm shaking
Really need you near me now, uh-huh
Said...
#happiness
206 reads
13 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 9:51pm
16th Mar 2025 9:51pm
Don't Worry...B Happy
Happiness comes in colors
just like monkeys in a barrel
blue,orange,green,red,yellow and purple
open it up
spread it around.
Take my arm, i'll take yours
give a smile
give a hug
jump up and down
fun and enjoyable
It's a Barrel of Monkeys...
Don't Break the Chain ♥
just like monkeys in a barrel
blue,orange,green,red,yellow and purple
open it up
spread it around.
Take my arm, i'll take yours
give a smile
give a hug
jump up and down
fun and enjoyable
It's a Barrel of Monkeys...
Don't Break the Chain ♥
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
72 reads
5 Comments
caveat
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 3:53am
15th Mar 2025 3:53am
it's sunday morning, my coffee is ready and the biscuits are done
squinting eye at the
acridity of
blonde roast (laugh it up.
brunettes have proven
tasteless)
my grandmother's lecture
on staples replays. when
asked why it was always
black coffee, it boiled down
to gi geography. with even
the take-for-granted withheld
during wartime, grounds were
always plentiful even if
their decorations were sparse.
it became a near-universal
greeting among homefronters;
sit down, fret and pour it
whilst fresh.
i do not bond with humans over
java as much as i do with ...
acridity of
blonde roast (laugh it up.
brunettes have proven
tasteless)
my grandmother's lecture
on staples replays. when
asked why it was always
black coffee, it boiled down
to gi geography. with even
the take-for-granted withheld
during wartime, grounds were
always plentiful even if
their decorations were sparse.
it became a near-universal
greeting among homefronters;
sit down, fret and pour it
whilst fresh.
i do not bond with humans over
java as much as i do with ...
#cats
#food
#happiness #home
#happiness #home
85 reads
1 Comment
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 10:45am
14th Mar 2025 10:45am
Double Entendre
The garden's ripe
The soil rich and deep
A secret is buried
With promises to keep
The plowshare gleams
Its thrusting shining blade
Turning the earth
Where seeds were just laid
A heavy rain
A soaking welcome flood
Quenching the thirst
Of burgeoning green wood
The tender shoots
So fragile and so small
Reach for the sun
Responding to its call
A gentle hand
Knows just where to press
Unlock the blooms
In sweet responsiveness
The petals part
A sweet fragrance...
The soil rich and deep
A secret is buried
With promises to keep
The plowshare gleams
Its thrusting shining blade
Turning the earth
Where seeds were just laid
A heavy rain
A soaking welcome flood
Quenching the thirst
Of burgeoning green wood
The tender shoots
So fragile and so small
Reach for the sun
Responding to its call
A gentle hand
Knows just where to press
Unlock the blooms
In sweet responsiveness
The petals part
A sweet fragrance...
#happiness
#love
64 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 9:27am
14th Mar 2025 9:27am
Don't think about it, do it!
The weekend is here
Let's get out, and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
Let's get out, and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#senryu
#uplifting
85 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
My Beautiful Butterfly
From the deepness of my thoughts to the very deepness of my heart, for it's true that you have become that very Beautiful Butterfly. THAT I saw upon at a time, when I notice that a change is about to come into my life. For sure that was a sign, from up above to really change my world around. For the very betterment of amazing things to come to fulfill my dreams. Come true to finally have what I've been looking for all my life as it was you. That beautiful butterfly 🦋 a beautiful butterfly as a disguise, to bring the deepness of my thoughts of love and happiness come alive. AS I've...
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#redemption
#TimeHeals
99 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 2:48am
13th Mar 2025 2:48am
Special Birthday Message For PoetSpeak...
Stop acting the slut
Wantin' plenty of smut
You might be in luck
If you fancy a fuck
Don't be a schmuck
Rolling in muck
Ending up stuck
Cos you might wanna suck
Hickory dickory dock
The mouse needed some cock
The clock struck twelve
Oh what the hell
Are you up for that fuck?
Happy Birthday Spunky!
Wantin' plenty of smut
You might be in luck
If you fancy a fuck
Don't be a schmuck
Rolling in muck
Ending up stuck
Cos you might wanna suck
Hickory dickory dock
The mouse needed some cock
The clock struck twelve
Oh what the hell
Are you up for that fuck?
Happy Birthday Spunky!
#admiration
#happiness
#gratitude #respect
#gratitude #respect
160 reads
21 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 1:55am
13th Mar 2025 1:55am
Ode to the Doggies
Bow Wow...
Ruff Ruff...
tell me to sit
i will
tell me to roll over
i will
tell me to stay...i will
throw my ball here or there
i will fetch it for you
a thousand times
pet me,rub my belly,kiss my head
i will follow you anywhere,
sit and wait for you everyday,
jump up and down
whenever i see you
tail wag and butt shake
and go round and round
i will love you forever
Bow Wow,
Ruff Ruff...
Ruff Ruff...
tell me to sit
i will
tell me to roll over
i will
tell me to stay...i will
throw my ball here or there
i will fetch it for you
a thousand times
pet me,rub my belly,kiss my head
i will follow you anywhere,
sit and wait for you everyday,
jump up and down
whenever i see you
tail wag and butt shake
and go round and round
i will love you forever
Bow Wow,
Ruff Ruff...
#happiness
#love
56 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 1:47am
12th Mar 2025 1:47am
We got each other
I GOT YOU AND YOU GOT ME 👏Through the process of us being able to share our thoughts and insight, and spiritual subconsciousness of our love and awareness of the awakening, what is happening between us. I regret nothing of our paths crossing through this journey of us, for sure it's necessary to understand that, it's you who has changed my life, for the betterment of my own life. For just when I thought that I would never meet someone like you, and find the love of my own life there you appeared in plain seeth of my life and eyes 👁️👁️ YET I wonder, about...
#happiness
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#uplifting
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