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haiku seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 12:42pm
28th Jul 2024 12:42pm
Wrong side of the street
Paradise is here
Two blocks down you won't go near
Most avoid with fear
Two blocks down you won't go near
Most avoid with fear
#haiku
#money
#poverty #rhyming
#poverty #rhyming
153 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 12:31pm
28th Jul 2024 12:31pm
A Downward Spiral
So many need help
A downward spiral happened
Whose to blame for this?
A downward spiral happened
Whose to blame for this?
#addiction
#choices
#haiku
#homelessness
#poverty
110 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 00:36am
28th Jul 2024 00:36am
Drifting Thoughts
Ocean in motion
Waves crash as I drift afar
Let my thoughts take me
Waves crash as I drift afar
Let my thoughts take me
#dreams
#haiku
#sea #SelfDiscovery
#sea #SelfDiscovery
158 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jul 2024 00:32am
28th Jul 2024 00:32am
Sandy Beach
Hot sand, Hot woman
Wandering eyes, can't control
Don't get caught, or else
Wandering eyes, can't control
Don't get caught, or else
#beach
#sexy
#summer
#women
#haiku
156 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jul 2024 11:28am
25th Jul 2024 11:28am
You Lose & You'll Come Back Again
The one arm bandit
Temptation lures you closer
Man versus machine
You know who will win
We humans come back for more
The house will prevail
Wallet getting thin
Lady luck please help me out
She's never around
I lost everything
Should I jump off this building
Nah, I'll be back again
Temptation lures you closer
Man versus machine
You know who will win
We humans come back for more
The house will prevail
Wallet getting thin
Lady luck please help me out
She's never around
I lost everything
Should I jump off this building
Nah, I'll be back again
#addiction
#haiku
#LifeStruggles
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
138 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jul 2024 11:25am
25th Jul 2024 11:25am
No Such Luck
This is their motto
"Bet with your head not over it"
I didn't listen
"Bet with your head not over it"
I didn't listen
#addiction
#haiku
#temptation
122 reads
11 Comments
VictorDLopez
Poem Published
18th Jul 2024 11:55pm
18th Jul 2024 11:55pm
Poem announcing free eBooks through July 31
As my thanks to all,
I've made all of my eBooks,
On sale for July.
Single stories free,
Full books 25 percent off,
Through end of July.
Includes poetry,
Also fiction collections,
And my novel too.
Not all retailers,
Will honor the sale this month,
A number, though, will.
Smashwords honors all,
Includes law-related books,
Check out all below.
Thank you in advance,
For your support, dear readers,
Hope you'll view the sale.
Smashwords link to my eBooks...
I've made all of my eBooks,
On sale for July.
Single stories free,
Full books 25 percent off,
Through end of July.
Includes poetry,
Also fiction collections,
And my novel too.
Not all retailers,
Will honor the sale this month,
A number, though, will.
Smashwords honors all,
Includes law-related books,
Check out all below.
Thank you in advance,
For your support, dear readers,
Hope you'll view the sale.
Smashwords link to my eBooks...
#books
#gratitude
#haiku #reading
#haiku #reading
126 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 11:46am
10th Jul 2024 11:46am
Stop The Madness
Nothing will stop me
Addiction is killing her
Determination
Addiction is killing her
Determination
#addiction
#haiku
#support
162 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 11:41am
10th Jul 2024 11:41am
Mirror Image
Shattered dreams look back
I use to believe myself
The mirror don't lie
I use to believe myself
The mirror don't lie
#haiku
#SelfReflection
101 reads
10 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 2:14pm
9th Jul 2024 2:14pm
First Kiss
Eyes hyper-focused
Lip's part anticipating
Stop, hold, every breath
Lip's part anticipating
Stop, hold, every breath
#erotic
#haiku
#sensual
58 reads
26 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 11:12am
9th Jul 2024 11:12am
Silence
Words fail miserably
Silent treatment more abstruse
Cryptic thoughts exposed.
Silent treatment more abstruse
Cryptic thoughts exposed.
#haiku
#silence
121 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Jul 2024 11:58pm
5th Jul 2024 11:58pm
Finger or Two
Finger yourself here
I don't care who's watching you
Did you get the snot?
I don't care who's watching you
Did you get the snot?
#haiku
#scary
#TruthOfLife
119 reads
4 Comments
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