Poems About Greed Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about greed seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
If I didn't had your love
If I didn't had your love
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#greed
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 8:48pm
21st Dec 2024 8:48pm
Now that the long night is over
Now that the long night is over
We had a long sleep
Now my Father
Brought the morning for us
First thing in the morning
Now it is time to say good morning to each other
It is finally a beautiful day
Outside
We just got up now
We are ready to enjoy this beautiful sunny day
That our Father gave to us
We are lucky to have a beautiful morning
With lots of sun
We are glad that there is no sign of rain
Also we are getting lots of vitamin d
This morning
We had a long sleep
Now my Father
Brought the morning for us
First thing in the morning
Now it is time to say good morning to each other
It is finally a beautiful day
Outside
We just got up now
We are ready to enjoy this beautiful sunny day
That our Father gave to us
We are lucky to have a beautiful morning
With lots of sun
We are glad that there is no sign of rain
Also we are getting lots of vitamin d
This morning
#confusion
#denial
#greed
#heartbroken
#sadness
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Academic
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 7:31am
20th Dec 2024 7:31am
Royal warrants scattered like confetti and rather honestly actually, about as useful really!
By Stanley Collymore
Royal warrants aren't recognized
worldwide as anything literally
significant except in the UK.
So why would anyone, who is not a UK
resident or a monarchical sycophant
be so impressed, by them? Because
someone was literally employed, by
a really laughably, so-caled royal, in
their chosen profession? And, thus,
are more likely really to specifically
financially, support these allegedly
stated monarchs and their familial
kin in situ,...
Royal warrants aren't recognized
worldwide as anything literally
significant except in the UK.
So why would anyone, who is not a UK
resident or a monarchical sycophant
be so impressed, by them? Because
someone was literally employed, by
a really laughably, so-caled royal, in
their chosen profession? And, thus,
are more likely really to specifically
financially, support these allegedly
stated monarchs and their familial
kin in situ,...
#apathy
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
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oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:28pm
18th Dec 2024 10:28pm
Maga Hats made in China
Maga hats made in China
How about I grab you by the pussy(cat)
But you’re all in you swallow my bullshit
I tried insurrection but now I’m in the Election
Cries and screams from the outer rings
Now I’m a Liar back in the West Wing
Tell you he’ll fight for you but look out
Turn around it’s no one but billionaires
Yes u wake up early to feed the family
Something so foreign but it comes up Orange
How about I grab you by the pussy(cat)
But you’re all in you swallow my bullshit
I tried insurrection but now I’m in the Election
Cries and screams from the outer rings
Now I’m a Liar back in the West Wing
Tell you he’ll fight for you but look out
Turn around it’s no one but billionaires
Yes u wake up early to feed the family
Something so foreign but it comes up Orange
#deception
#greed
#lies
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oldmanG
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 10:31am
18th Dec 2024 10:31am
Orange Jesus
Orange Jesus will save us
From what I don’t know but he’ll tell you
Immigrants like our forefathers that made
The Great Green Lady hold a torch
Give me your poor your tired your hungry
That’s been our Brand way before trump
But Orange Jesus will save us from what I don’t know
Get to the punch bowl at the party
Buts it’s only Orange Kool Aid
Make you feel above them but it’s just nightmare
How many friendships and families broken
Because some worship the Orange king ...
From what I don’t know but he’ll tell you
Immigrants like our forefathers that made
The Great Green Lady hold a torch
Give me your poor your tired your hungry
That’s been our Brand way before trump
But Orange Jesus will save us from what I don’t know
Get to the punch bowl at the party
Buts it’s only Orange Kool Aid
Make you feel above them but it’s just nightmare
How many friendships and families broken
Because some worship the Orange king ...
#greed
#lies
#politics
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 3:47pm
14th Dec 2024 3:47pm
i Want to treat you right
My father
I want to treat you right
I am telling you the truth
My father
i will not mistreat you
My father
Because I know that
You will hate that
My father
I also will show my respect to you
Because I just need to do that
For you
My father
I am so happy that you are my father
And I am one of you children
I am not a teenager anymore
I am one adult now
And I am you oldest child
Also father we have a good
Relationship like father and son
My father
I will not destroy our relationship
I...
I want to treat you right
I am telling you the truth
My father
i will not mistreat you
My father
Because I know that
You will hate that
My father
I also will show my respect to you
Because I just need to do that
For you
My father
I am so happy that you are my father
And I am one of you children
I am not a teenager anymore
I am one adult now
And I am you oldest child
Also father we have a good
Relationship like father and son
My father
I will not destroy our relationship
I...
#emptiness
#greed
#grief
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Academic
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 3:11pm
13th Dec 2024 3:11pm
Catherine Meyer - typical of the white racist c**ts who infest Britain and the genocidally acquired overseas lands!
By Stanley Collymore
No doubt it didn't even occur to
Catherine Meyer that calling
an Asian gentleman, Lord
Dhobka: a bona fide peer of this United
Kingdom realm, where rather evidently
she herself is discernibly ensconced in
and whose lawful name she obviously
actually, also simply and categorically
rather callously, couldn't bother to find
out but simply specifically, did choose
basically, to patronizingly, and racially,
because he's distinctly from, a British
racial minority,...
No doubt it didn't even occur to
Catherine Meyer that calling
an Asian gentleman, Lord
Dhobka: a bona fide peer of this United
Kingdom realm, where rather evidently
she herself is discernibly ensconced in
and whose lawful name she obviously
actually, also simply and categorically
rather callously, couldn't bother to find
out but simply specifically, did choose
basically, to patronizingly, and racially,
because he's distinctly from, a British
racial minority,...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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Academic
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 3:53pm
10th Dec 2024 3:53pm
Why are politicians always in the news for the wrong reasons?
By Stanley Collymore
Benjamin Netanyahu has served
as Israel's incumbent Prime
Minister exactly three
times, so's the longest serving PM since
that country's independence. Therefore,
it's not surprising then, that he is up on
criminal charges. Very unquestionably
and principally so, because familiarity
and self-entitlement quite specifically
undoubtedly, clearly breed contempt!
Consequently crudely breaking rules,
discernibly cutting corners and quite
undeniably engaging in such like, do
become quite...
Benjamin Netanyahu has served
as Israel's incumbent Prime
Minister exactly three
times, so's the longest serving PM since
that country's independence. Therefore,
it's not surprising then, that he is up on
criminal charges. Very unquestionably
and principally so, because familiarity
and self-entitlement quite specifically
undoubtedly, clearly breed contempt!
Consequently crudely breaking rules,
discernibly cutting corners and quite
undeniably engaging in such like, do
become quite...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
10th Dec 2024 10:37am
Maxed Out & Defeated
Advertising temptation
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
A credit possession driven nation
So determined, so obsessed
With having only the best
Swipe away what isn’t yours
To compare and compete
Take out another loan
Beg, borrow, steal
Fancy car, you’re in debt
House on show, not your asset
Immaterial, material
Death by debt
Blinded by greed
Termination damnation
They got everything to lose
It’s all taken by the bank
Drowning in booze
Society fueled by greed
Just know your children watch you
And they will follow your...
#CallToAction
#greed
#LifeStruggles #money
#LifeStruggles #money
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11 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:08pm
9th Dec 2024 3:08pm
Remind me again; which Century we're in!
By Stanley Collymore
I doubt very much if Liz Windsor ever
bathed any of her children; and
much less so literally with
the state crown on! So simply give over, you gullible, and distinctly sycophantic morons,
as your elitist, self-entitled and discernibly perceived as by you, as aptly undoubtedly
your societal betters; are basically taking
the piss and, rather distinctly, having you
on surely! Can't you see? As Liz Windsor
in actuality basically never saw much of
her children who were crucially brought ...
I doubt very much if Liz Windsor ever
bathed any of her children; and
much less so literally with
the state crown on! So simply give over, you gullible, and distinctly sycophantic morons,
as your elitist, self-entitled and discernibly perceived as by you, as aptly undoubtedly
your societal betters; are basically taking
the piss and, rather distinctly, having you
on surely! Can't you see? As Liz Windsor
in actuality basically never saw much of
her children who were crucially brought ...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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Academic
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 9:31pm
8th Dec 2024 9:31pm
The valorous Kate Middleton - defeating the perilous cancer that she never had!
By Stanley Collymore
Why are you sycophantic morons
so wanting evidently intelligent
and clearly astutely mentally
liberated persons to quite unreservedly have
any sympathy whatever, for Kate Middleton,
when you're clearly not that bothered about
all those other British citizens with genuine
not fictional cancers, that really couldn't be
treated, even for the actual said amount of
money, because they simply obviously just
don't have it, crucially required to deal with
Charles, and also his...
Why are you sycophantic morons
so wanting evidently intelligent
and clearly astutely mentally
liberated persons to quite unreservedly have
any sympathy whatever, for Kate Middleton,
when you're clearly not that bothered about
all those other British citizens with genuine
not fictional cancers, that really couldn't be
treated, even for the actual said amount of
money, because they simply obviously just
don't have it, crucially required to deal with
Charles, and also his...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 6:57pm
7th Dec 2024 6:57pm
Vomiting Up
Vomiting up
Swallowing down
Walking on this blue ball
Trying not to feel small
As I hear clamoring
On the horizon
Balance of nature
Wanting to nurture
Finding things that diminish me
Slings and arrows penetrate my soul
Funerals and petals
Processions and marching bands
Having to stand up not to stand down
Involved in the righteousness
Of snakes and serpents
Involved in the righteousness of false prophets
Spiritualized proselytized
They vomit it up
As...
Swallowing down
Walking on this blue ball
Trying not to feel small
As I hear clamoring
On the horizon
Balance of nature
Wanting to nurture
Finding things that diminish me
Slings and arrows penetrate my soul
Funerals and petals
Processions and marching bands
Having to stand up not to stand down
Involved in the righteousness
Of snakes and serpents
Involved in the righteousness of false prophets
Spiritualized proselytized
They vomit it up
As...
#anger
#apathy
#greed
#lyrics
#music
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