Poems About Greed Seeking Honest Critique
#greed
Poems about greed seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 12:53pm
10th Feb 2025 12:53pm
Tropical Paradises
The aboriginal
is naked…
Ah! Oh!
We can see it
from north to south.
We can go around it
in a deep blue sky.
Devour his flesh
with gluttony.
cannibalize it!
cannibalize it!
Let's be quiet
let's do silence
with a full mouth of
the aboriginal's nudity
and our sour grapes.
Let's canibalize!
is naked…
Ah! Oh!
We can see it
from north to south.
We can go around it
in a deep blue sky.
Devour his flesh
with gluttony.
cannibalize it!
cannibalize it!
Let's be quiet
let's do silence
with a full mouth of
the aboriginal's nudity
and our sour grapes.
Let's canibalize!
#corruption
#greed
#politics
#poverty
#rebellion
81 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 11:16am
10th Feb 2025 11:16am
Fight
Your weakness is money in their bank!
#corruption
#greed
#minimalist #politics
#minimalist #politics
110 reads
19 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:07am
5th Feb 2025 11:07am
I am working my way back to you Father
I am working my way back to you Father
I am very sorry for all my bad behavior
But I was frustrated
With the poems I was writing for you
Because I was stuck
Writing poems for you
I started writing some poems for you
But I couldn't get right
So I had to erased it and started again
A few times
Because I wasn't satisfied with
The way it was coming out
Maybe I need to put my brain to rest
And start to vent a little
All day today
I am very sorry for all my bad behavior
But I was frustrated
With the poems I was writing for you
Because I was stuck
Writing poems for you
I started writing some poems for you
But I couldn't get right
So I had to erased it and started again
A few times
Because I wasn't satisfied with
The way it was coming out
Maybe I need to put my brain to rest
And start to vent a little
All day today
#anxiety
#fear
#greed
#loneliness
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 1:41am
1st Feb 2025 1:41am
Only myself
Only myself
Living in one bedroom
Apartment
Here in Toronto
That is all I need
Now the phone is ringing
Non stop
I will not bother to answer
Because it is late already
I have no Idea
Who is the craziest person
That is calling me
At this late hour
I am still praying for my Father
At the late hours of the
Night
Now is time to take my
Medication
I can't take my medication
On an empty stomach
I need to take with food
Now I am having some
Popcorn
That was microwaved
Yes I am...
Living in one bedroom
Apartment
Here in Toronto
That is all I need
Now the phone is ringing
Non stop
I will not bother to answer
Because it is late already
I have no Idea
Who is the craziest person
That is calling me
At this late hour
I am still praying for my Father
At the late hours of the
Night
Now is time to take my
Medication
I can't take my medication
On an empty stomach
I need to take with food
Now I am having some
Popcorn
That was microwaved
Yes I am...
#boredom
#fear
#greed
#grief
#hate
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 10:21am
22nd Jan 2025 10:21am
His Pet Antelope
Valentines Day Massacre cumming all over your pie
In the form of a girl with pins through her eyes
She came from the south with a dimes worth of gas
Money on her mind and some dope shoved up her ass
Outside of Memphis her car was broken down
She shot a white cracker in the head, immediately left town
She was a Jehovah's witness before she gave him head
She was selling on the street, her funky hair was red
She shat in his mouth, and threw him on the bed
That's when she cut off his balls and glued them on his head
She stole his car, which...
In the form of a girl with pins through her eyes
She came from the south with a dimes worth of gas
Money on her mind and some dope shoved up her ass
Outside of Memphis her car was broken down
She shot a white cracker in the head, immediately left town
She was a Jehovah's witness before she gave him head
She was selling on the street, her funky hair was red
She shat in his mouth, and threw him on the bed
That's when she cut off his balls and glued them on his head
She stole his car, which...
#addiction
#fiction
#greed
#sex
#violence
73 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 8:19am
13th Jan 2025 8:19am
Every hour I am thinking of you My father
Every hour
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
It is not too hot
It is a little cooler
With a little breeze
I am having no problem coping
With it
I just like it better that way
I hope it is going to stay like that
For a while
I don't like when it is...
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
It is not too hot
It is a little cooler
With a little breeze
I am having no problem coping
With it
I just like it better that way
I hope it is going to stay like that
For a while
I don't like when it is...
#bittersweet
#boredom
#fear
#greed
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
Marie
What a shame
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
#bittersweet
#fear
#greed
#regret
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 7:06pm
9th Jan 2025 7:06pm
I choose all of you people
I choose
All of you people
To be my friends
Also we have a lot
In common
I am a Christian
And you people
Are also Christian
From birth
To adult life
Also People I am
God’s poet
And you people
Are also a poet
I go to bed early every
Single night
And you people
Also go to bed early
The next day I wake
Up at 11:00 am
All of you people
Also wake up
At 11:00 am
Also I have my shower
First thing in the morning
I put some body wash
In my sponge
Then I rub my ...
All of you people
To be my friends
Also we have a lot
In common
I am a Christian
And you people
Are also Christian
From birth
To adult life
Also People I am
God’s poet
And you people
Are also a poet
I go to bed early every
Single night
And you people
Also go to bed early
The next day I wake
Up at 11:00 am
All of you people
Also wake up
At 11:00 am
Also I have my shower
First thing in the morning
I put some body wash
In my sponge
Then I rub my ...
#emptiness
#fear
#greed
#loneliness
#rejection
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 1:17am
8th Jan 2025 1:17am
Liquid Gold
In the mishmosh shop of slosh and slop
Chris crossed paths, his cash crop flop
Tick tock tick tock, ticks the ticking clock
Pickpocketed by schemes of government shock
Liquid gold in the cryptos gleam
A fools gold dream in a shadowy scheme
Bogus agendas in a masquerade
Where fortunes fade in this charade parade
Hush hush whispers in backroom deals
Sleight of hand tricks in this spinning wheel
A con man's grip in a tight lipped hold
Liquid gold fortunes turns stories untold
...
Chris crossed paths, his cash crop flop
Tick tock tick tock, ticks the ticking clock
Pickpocketed by schemes of government shock
Liquid gold in the cryptos gleam
A fools gold dream in a shadowy scheme
Bogus agendas in a masquerade
Where fortunes fade in this charade parade
Hush hush whispers in backroom deals
Sleight of hand tricks in this spinning wheel
A con man's grip in a tight lipped hold
Liquid gold fortunes turns stories untold
...
#greed
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0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
No me ama mais
No me ama mais
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#rejection
#shame
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 6:06am
4th Jan 2025 6:06am
How can a Vote (Mean more than the Truth)
How can a vote
Mean more than the truth
It’s what we teach our kids
To tell the truth
A bedrock belief
It’s what we all stand for
Truth will set you free
It’ll set us free
It’s all about power
Truth doesn’t matter
Try and tell my kids
To be on the up and up
And they see liars and thiefs
Not live up to us
What should they think
When it’s up to us
To not give in to the noise that’s all around
Facts are sound
Since when do we believe
In fantasies
And...
Mean more than the truth
It’s what we teach our kids
To tell the truth
A bedrock belief
It’s what we all stand for
Truth will set you free
It’ll set us free
It’s all about power
Truth doesn’t matter
Try and tell my kids
To be on the up and up
And they see liars and thiefs
Not live up to us
What should they think
When it’s up to us
To not give in to the noise that’s all around
Facts are sound
Since when do we believe
In fantasies
And...
#corruption
#deception
#greed #lies
#greed #lies
77 reads
2 Comments
Poet__2248
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
Block your ears
Do not look me when you cut
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
#anger
#apocalypse
#despair
#frustration
#greed
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