Poems About Greed Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about greed seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 8:19am
13th Jan 2025 8:19am
Every hour I am thinking of you My father
Every hour
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
It is not too hot
It is a little cooler
With a little breeze
I am having no problem coping
With it
I just like it better that way
I hope it is going to stay like that
For a while
I don't like when it is...
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
It is not too hot
It is a little cooler
With a little breeze
I am having no problem coping
With it
I just like it better that way
I hope it is going to stay like that
For a while
I don't like when it is...
#bittersweet
#boredom
#fear
#greed
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
13th Jan 2025 00:00am
Marie
What a shame
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
Marie died
Of frost bite
At the bus shelter
At Coxwell Ave and Danforth Ave
She never ask for help
The temperature was -21
I don't know how could
Somebody survive in this cold
The warming centers
Is all the time closed
In Toronto
So the homeless have no where
To go
#bittersweet
#fear
#greed
#regret
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 7:06pm
9th Jan 2025 7:06pm
I choose all of you people
I choose
All of you people
To be my friends
Also we have a lot
In common
I am a Christian
And you people
Are also Christian
From birth
To adult life
Also People I am
God’s poet
And you people
Are also a poet
I go to bed early every
Single night
And you people
Also go to bed early
The next day I wake
Up at 11:00 am
All of you people
Also wake up
At 11:00 am
Also I have my shower
First thing in the morning
I put some body wash
In my sponge
Then I rub my ...
All of you people
To be my friends
Also we have a lot
In common
I am a Christian
And you people
Are also Christian
From birth
To adult life
Also People I am
God’s poet
And you people
Are also a poet
I go to bed early every
Single night
And you people
Also go to bed early
The next day I wake
Up at 11:00 am
All of you people
Also wake up
At 11:00 am
Also I have my shower
First thing in the morning
I put some body wash
In my sponge
Then I rub my ...
#emptiness
#fear
#greed
#loneliness
#rejection
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Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 1:17am
8th Jan 2025 1:17am
Liquid Gold
In the mishmosh shop of slosh and slop
Chris crossed paths, his cash crop flop
Tick tock tick tock, ticks the ticking clock
Pickpocketed by schemes of government shock
Liquid gold in the cryptos gleam
A fools gold dream in a shadowy scheme
Bogus agendas in a masquerade
Where fortunes fade in this charade parade
Hush hush whispers in backroom deals
Sleight of hand tricks in this spinning wheel
A con man's grip in a tight lipped hold
Liquid gold fortunes turns stories untold
...
Chris crossed paths, his cash crop flop
Tick tock tick tock, ticks the ticking clock
Pickpocketed by schemes of government shock
Liquid gold in the cryptos gleam
A fools gold dream in a shadowy scheme
Bogus agendas in a masquerade
Where fortunes fade in this charade parade
Hush hush whispers in backroom deals
Sleight of hand tricks in this spinning wheel
A con man's grip in a tight lipped hold
Liquid gold fortunes turns stories untold
...
#greed
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
No me ama mais
No me ama mais
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#rejection
#shame
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oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 6:06am
4th Jan 2025 6:06am
How can a Vote (Mean more than the Truth)
How can a vote
Mean more than the truth
It’s what we teach our kids
To tell the truth
A bedrock belief
It’s what we all stand for
Truth will set you free
It’ll set us free
It’s all about power
Truth doesn’t matter
Try and tell my kids
To be on the up and up
And they see liars and thiefs
Not live up to us
What should they think
When it’s up to us
To not give in to the noise that’s all around
Facts are sound
Since when do we believe
In fantasies
And...
Mean more than the truth
It’s what we teach our kids
To tell the truth
A bedrock belief
It’s what we all stand for
Truth will set you free
It’ll set us free
It’s all about power
Truth doesn’t matter
Try and tell my kids
To be on the up and up
And they see liars and thiefs
Not live up to us
What should they think
When it’s up to us
To not give in to the noise that’s all around
Facts are sound
Since when do we believe
In fantasies
And...
#corruption
#deception
#greed #lies
#greed #lies
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Poet__2248
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:59pm
Block your ears
Do not look me when you cut
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
When you scissor and saw my flesh
When you chisel my bones
and wrap my hair
Do not swap my flesh for plastic
Do not fill my cheeks with youth you've crafted from mulch
Or sculpt my teeth with metal
Do not force me to watch
Her mock her adult body
Or hear you sneer with hatred
At her crying
Do not inject my chest with sweetener
Or my bum with fat
Block her ears so she do not hear to your whining
Your insecure complaints
About appearance and age
As I did
#anger
#apocalypse
#despair
#frustration
#greed
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 3:39pm
3rd Jan 2025 3:39pm
Weh Yuh Tink Bout Dis?
(Patois)
Peeple oo cyarry news pahn addaz fi get pozishan wok a noh gud werka.
A yuh skill mek yuh get pozishan wok, nat news cyarryin.
Nobaddi cyahn wok aad inof fi impress di wickid baas dem.
If di baas dem nuo sey yuh cyahn wok aad, dem wi kill yuh wid wok.
Some a unu love fi gamble caw unu red yai ahn bad mine.
Unu wahn fi win adda peeple mony ahn live eezy life.
Unu fi tap gamble weh unu mony pahn rieshawse ahn Latto.
Buy gud food wid unu mony ahn tek kier a unu bady.
As a matta a fak, di peeple dem oo...
Peeple oo cyarry news pahn addaz fi get pozishan wok a noh gud werka.
A yuh skill mek yuh get pozishan wok, nat news cyarryin.
Nobaddi cyahn wok aad inof fi impress di wickid baas dem.
If di baas dem nuo sey yuh cyahn wok aad, dem wi kill yuh wid wok.
Some a unu love fi gamble caw unu red yai ahn bad mine.
Unu wahn fi win adda peeple mony ahn live eezy life.
Unu fi tap gamble weh unu mony pahn rieshawse ahn Latto.
Buy gud food wid unu mony ahn tek kier a unu bady.
As a matta a fak, di peeple dem oo...
#Christian
#greed
#job
#marijuana
#money
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 7:45am
3rd Jan 2025 7:45am
Razor-Blades
Slippery like a serpent with an agenda for war
Born on third base and believes he hit a triple
Empty vessel on lease to some corporate whore
Emotional ignorance hides an intellectual cripple
Words are razor-blades irritating his fragile soul
Constant reminders that he doesn’t measure up
Heavy handed hypocrite is prone to lose control
Only brand that matters is plastered on his cup
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Born on third base and believes he hit a triple
Empty vessel on lease to some corporate whore
Emotional ignorance hides an intellectual cripple
Words are razor-blades irritating his fragile soul
Constant reminders that he doesn’t measure up
Heavy handed hypocrite is prone to lose control
Only brand that matters is plastered on his cup
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
#greed
#satirical
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 8:36am
28th Dec 2024 8:36am
Pig In A Suit
Pig in a suit grizzly stench of death
Spewing a lie never blinking twice
Muttering insults under vile breath
Teflon soul with a heart cold as ice
Evidence denied video has a flaw
Conveniently it wasn’t working that day
Projection is nine tenths of the law
Turns out that’s enough to simply walk away
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Spewing a lie never blinking twice
Muttering insults under vile breath
Teflon soul with a heart cold as ice
Evidence denied video has a flaw
Conveniently it wasn’t working that day
Projection is nine tenths of the law
Turns out that’s enough to simply walk away
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
#evil
#greed
#satirical
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
If I didn't had your love
If I didn't had your love
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
My father
I would not be able to live
Without your love
Please father give me
Some love
Because I know that
You have lots of love to spare
You are the one made love
With your holy hands
AIso it is love that reals
My broken heart
That is in pain
I already took lots of pain killers
And nothing worked
Yes I overdose on pain killers
That is something that is very dangerous to do
But I also was getting desperate
Yes father lots of people broke my heart again
I also don't know...
#emptiness
#fear
#frustration
#greed
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 8:48pm
21st Dec 2024 8:48pm
Now that the long night is over
Now that the long night is over
We had a long sleep
Now my Father
Brought the morning for us
First thing in the morning
Now it is time to say good morning to each other
It is finally a beautiful day
Outside
We just got up now
We are ready to enjoy this beautiful sunny day
That our Father gave to us
We are lucky to have a beautiful morning
With lots of sun
We are glad that there is no sign of rain
Also we are getting lots of vitamin d
This morning
We had a long sleep
Now my Father
Brought the morning for us
First thing in the morning
Now it is time to say good morning to each other
It is finally a beautiful day
Outside
We just got up now
We are ready to enjoy this beautiful sunny day
That our Father gave to us
We are lucky to have a beautiful morning
With lots of sun
We are glad that there is no sign of rain
Also we are getting lots of vitamin d
This morning
#confusion
#denial
#greed
#heartbroken
#sadness
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