Poems About Forgiveness by Top Critiquers
#forgiveness
Poems about forgiveness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Dust
They are fooling you all.
Calling an elephant a cat and because they hold probability and predictability to a certain extent, you believe they hold some sort of knowing.
The mind and the heart work in conjunction with one another, but neither without the Spirit, and for the most part should both be resilient and soft, loving and stern, caring and relentless.
The mind has no emotion without the heart strings attached, and yet the heart without the brain continues to beat. The heart has its own electrical supply, think about that for a moment...
Yet the brain, without...
Calling an elephant a cat and because they hold probability and predictability to a certain extent, you believe they hold some sort of knowing.
The mind and the heart work in conjunction with one another, but neither without the Spirit, and for the most part should both be resilient and soft, loving and stern, caring and relentless.
The mind has no emotion without the heart strings attached, and yet the heart without the brain continues to beat. The heart has its own electrical supply, think about that for a moment...
Yet the brain, without...
#forgiveness
#hope
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Raindrops
As I take my final walk
Down to my favorite lake
The voices from beyond talk
Reflecting on my life I shake
Myself staring back at me
In the crystal blue reflection
My life and my history
And a thorough introspection
I see my reflection start to cry
My tears I try to splash away
Regret that made me want to die
Revisiting me this incredible day
The dark angry clouds form
Cutting through me like a knife
Then the water transforms
As I anguish at my life ...
Down to my favorite lake
The voices from beyond talk
Reflecting on my life I shake
Myself staring back at me
In the crystal blue reflection
My life and my history
And a thorough introspection
I see my reflection start to cry
My tears I try to splash away
Regret that made me want to die
Revisiting me this incredible day
The dark angry clouds form
Cutting through me like a knife
Then the water transforms
As I anguish at my life ...
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#hope
#love
#redemption
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I love you Lucifer style daddy and angel style daddy to specifically
dear daddy I love you
do you not know brenda is actually me?
without question do not marry another e instead of me
I will be cross with you if you do
I am stuck in an immortal prison
it's dark here but brenda has made me safety extra safety
because auroa is frightened
daddy I'm explaining to auroa daddy has safety goggles on
he think we love the devils
I am mad at you daddy
you just married the dragon
he looks like a cherbum
he is a bum who looks like a mutt to me
he didn't save the aborted babies
brenda...
do you not know brenda is actually me?
without question do not marry another e instead of me
I will be cross with you if you do
I am stuck in an immortal prison
it's dark here but brenda has made me safety extra safety
because auroa is frightened
daddy I'm explaining to auroa daddy has safety goggles on
he think we love the devils
I am mad at you daddy
you just married the dragon
he looks like a cherbum
he is a bum who looks like a mutt to me
he didn't save the aborted babies
brenda...
#love
#forgiveness
#breakup #FallingInLove
#breakup #FallingInLove
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Dear Self
Dear Self,
I'm so sorry that you have gone through so much pain, that all you wanted to do was violent things even when someone was nice to you.
I'm so sorry that you have gone through so much abuse yet you were never allowed to be the victim, the one truly wronged.
I'm so sorry people have treated you like a Savior when it was convenient for them but then the devil when you had needs.
I'm so sorry that you have learned such deep self-hatred that all you could do for years was hit yourself, thinking you were the problem and no one else. Thinking you...
I'm so sorry that you have gone through so much pain, that all you wanted to do was violent things even when someone was nice to you.
I'm so sorry that you have gone through so much abuse yet you were never allowed to be the victim, the one truly wronged.
I'm so sorry people have treated you like a Savior when it was convenient for them but then the devil when you had needs.
I'm so sorry that you have learned such deep self-hatred that all you could do for years was hit yourself, thinking you were the problem and no one else. Thinking you...
#forgiveness
#TimeHeals
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DU Poetry : Poems About Forgiveness by Top Critiquers