Fiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#fiction
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 3:22am
17th Jan 2025 3:22am
One Result Of Last Night's Party
Abigail woke up
and saw she has been part of
a huge naked daisy chain.
and saw she has been part of
a huge naked daisy chain.
#corruption
#culture
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
106 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 11:39am
16th Jan 2025 11:39am
A Sex Fantasy Set To Music
While listening to
some music by
Whitesnake, Julie
enjoyed watching
Kevin hump her.
But when the
music stopped,
Julie's alone.
some music by
Whitesnake, Julie
enjoyed watching
Kevin hump her.
But when the
music stopped,
Julie's alone.
#dreams
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
150 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 7:38pm
15th Jan 2025 7:38pm
Here We Are. Your Favorite Christmas Presents.
#Christmas
#fiction
#friendship
#senryu
#sex
104 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 2:57pm
15th Jan 2025 2:57pm
I Catch My Own Husband In There Cheating
How
could you?!
Here I am
stripped and ready
to enjoy a nice
warm shower with you and
I catch my own husband in
there cheating on me with a pair
of naked skanky sluts! I should have
divorced you when I had the chance! You jerk!
could you?!
Here I am
stripped and ready
to enjoy a nice
warm shower with you and
I catch my own husband in
there cheating on me with a pair
of naked skanky sluts! I should have
divorced you when I had the chance! You jerk!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
75 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 3:38am
14th Jan 2025 3:38am
We Should Stay In Here
I agree with you
that we should stay in here and
let it snow
outside as long as we're both
warm and humping on this bed.
that we should stay in here and
let it snow
outside as long as we're both
warm and humping on this bed.
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#tanka
#winter
166 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
13th Jan 2025 10:42am
Tired of your bullshit
I'm so sick and tired of hearing you
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
So much that I don't know what to do
I don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smart
I could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart
You think you're clever, funny, and kind
People like you make people like me lose our minds
I hate who you are, what you believe in, and stand what for
Being forced to be around you at any time is a chore
Everything you do, and everything you say
Makes me contemplate suicide every day
You do things so backwards, I don't even know where to start
I wish...
#anger
#CallToAction
#fiction
#frustration
#hate
90 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 8:35pm
12th Jan 2025 8:35pm
Got Room For One More?
Kelly spotted Catherine
humping Mark, stripped
down and joined them.
humping Mark, stripped
down and joined them.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#LGBT
#sex
120 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 11:26am
12th Jan 2025 11:26am
That's all your worth
Wretched but beautiful
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Hope your having a great weekend
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Hope your having a great weekend
#fiction
#hate
#manipulation
#SelfHarm
#TruthOfLife
79 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
Is He Cheating On Me Or Not?
Crystal felt something near her.
She saw Scott humping her friend Kirstie.
She woke up screaming "no".
She saw Scott humping her friend Kirstie.
She woke up screaming "no".
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#nightmares
#sex
93 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
I'm Sorry. But I'm Really Not Okay With It.
At first, Jennifer
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#LGBT
#sex
110 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:45am
11th Jan 2025 2:45am
Just To Make Sure A Divorce Does Not Happen
Camila lets herself get naked.
She allows Sasha to lick her hole.
Jennifer is keeping Mark busy.
She allows Sasha to lick her hole.
Jennifer is keeping Mark busy.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#lesbian
#sex
112 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
Like What You See?
Jeff was hiking in
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
#fiction
#love
#river
#sex
#tanka
105 reads
2 Comments
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