Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fairies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
17th Mar 2021 1:22am
17th Mar 2021 1:22am
rolling a cigarette fol de rol
my fingers aren't as manipulative as they used to be in control
#fairies
428 reads
2 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
15th Jan 2021 4:00am
15th Jan 2021 4:00am
Water Dripping Methodically In The Background
There were these words that longed
to be released, but the heart kept
them in a sinking ship near the
Bermuda Triangle part of the brain.
Actions aren't as loud as we
were lead to believe,
constant wondering is
actually quite maddening,
I guess there's something about
insanity that makes one want to
see if things might change.
The silence brings thoughts of
mechanical gears rotating slowly
in the mind, clicking into place
one notch, tinging tines,
more crazy, more of nothing. ...
to be released, but the heart kept
them in a sinking ship near the
Bermuda Triangle part of the brain.
Actions aren't as loud as we
were lead to believe,
constant wondering is
actually quite maddening,
I guess there's something about
insanity that makes one want to
see if things might change.
The silence brings thoughts of
mechanical gears rotating slowly
in the mind, clicking into place
one notch, tinging tines,
more crazy, more of nothing. ...
#water
#silence
#fairies #dawn
#fairies #dawn
493 reads
4 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
14th Jan 2021 2:18pm
14th Jan 2021 2:18pm
Me, My-Self, and Why? (The Lazy Guy Wins Again)
I,
eye blind'blind eye.
so 'ow wee gonna rectify
this throbbing eXhibition?
The witnesses have all gone
home, or maybe just away'
Maybe away, so far, so good, as is
said when the good be in time...
...with the going, with the gone
that'll raise hell 'til yr palms be red,
with a smoke of versimilitude, yet
to find a cooling water.
Given that no one is here anymore,
I suppose y'd be welcome to leave
of yr own accord, but no one believed
they would send you nn
either...
eye blind'blind eye.
so 'ow wee gonna rectify
this throbbing eXhibition?
The witnesses have all gone
home, or maybe just away'
Maybe away, so far, so good, as is
said when the good be in time...
...with the going, with the gone
that'll raise hell 'til yr palms be red,
with a smoke of versimilitude, yet
to find a cooling water.
Given that no one is here anymore,
I suppose y'd be welcome to leave
of yr own accord, but no one believed
they would send you nn
either...
#fairies
#honesty
#dialogue
#consumerism
#nonfiction
328 reads
0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
4th Jan 2021 9:37am
4th Jan 2021 9:37am
He Sensed Naught But Nonsense As Dada's Daddy Spoke
Loathe to behold, he was
a massive man, prone to
misinterpreting the missives
that were laid at his feet
for privileged approval at
the times of each fiscal year.
The little fishes dive outta the
the ocean in droves leading
one to deep credence of the
of the earth's origin(s) as an
AquaCircus side'show, before
the always inaccurate dawn
of time.
Daddy say "You should know
better than to speak to me like
that," and smacks the back'o
yo head, making all thy marbles
go clickity clack clickety clack....
a massive man, prone to
misinterpreting the missives
that were laid at his feet
for privileged approval at
the times of each fiscal year.
The little fishes dive outta the
the ocean in droves leading
one to deep credence of the
of the earth's origin(s) as an
AquaCircus side'show, before
the always inaccurate dawn
of time.
Daddy say "You should know
better than to speak to me like
that," and smacks the back'o
yo head, making all thy marbles
go clickity clack clickety clack....
#God
#ghosts
#fairies
#pagan
#magic
361 reads
1 Comment
nikkimoe
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2021 3:36pm
2nd Jan 2021 3:36pm
That Damn Chair That's Always There
Still just a chair
that's always there,
yet now, no one
sits because of
all the shit
that's all over it.
It, me, same fucking thing.
that's always there,
yet now, no one
sits because of
all the shit
that's all over it.
It, me, same fucking thing.
#stars
#fairies
#unicorns
491 reads
10 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
28th Dec 2020 1:13pm
28th Dec 2020 1:13pm
Shoemaker
A Silent Night village near a forest,
so faye, full of magic and dreams,
the shoemaker's house got effloresced,
a secret number of elves entered with gleams.
They started working silently
and childishly waggish
The next day, the craftsman privately
found artisan footwear; they had vanished.
This story repeated itself
the next days, and he knew
it was an elf on a shelf
and he started wanting to surprise them at dew.
But what was the horrific heart attack
of the tireless little fairytale curved...
so faye, full of magic and dreams,
the shoemaker's house got effloresced,
a secret number of elves entered with gleams.
They started working silently
and childishly waggish
The next day, the craftsman privately
found artisan footwear; they had vanished.
This story repeated itself
the next days, and he knew
it was an elf on a shelf
and he started wanting to surprise them at dew.
But what was the horrific heart attack
of the tireless little fairytale curved...
#grief
#dreams
#fairies
#magic
#JRRTolkien
429 reads
1 Comment
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
16th Dec 2020 9:28am
16th Dec 2020 9:28am
Underfunded Fairy Tail
once
upon
a
time time a up on
a t i m e a time a t i m e once
time,
, time
, t i m e t i m e
up
on a a a ti me ti me
on
ce
a
t i m e..........up on 0n time one time o n c e upon up on
onceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonce onceonceonceonceonceonce
up on time ...
upon
a
time time a up on
a t i m e a time a t i m e once
time,
, time
, t i m e t i m e
up
on a a a ti me ti me
on
ce
a
t i m e..........up on 0n time one time o n c e upon up on
onceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonceonce onceonceonceonceonceonce
up on time ...
#father
#faith
#fate
#fairies
#fatherhood
440 reads
6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
8th Dec 2020 9:48am
8th Dec 2020 9:48am
Rare Raw Oats
same boat s o a t
puffy bloat g r o a t
goofy vote t o t e
turdlish float m o t e
emote! emote! Emote! (an oath / an oath)
That last/final note. ( B#minor ) = [Ab minor ]
It's over. over it
[But will it ever be done ?] ? everbedone ?
...
puffy bloat g r o a t
goofy vote t o t e
turdlish float m o t e
emote! emote! Emote! (an oath / an oath)
That last/final note. ( B#minor ) = [Ab minor ]
It's over. over it
[But will it ever be done ?] ? everbedone ?
...
#fate
#fairies
#magic
#emotional
#curse
443 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2020 8:01am
22nd Nov 2020 8:01am
The Fairy Whisperer
She meets with her little fairy friend
At the rock agreed upon
It's her favorite thing to do
Quite early before dawn
They discuss the ocean's secrets
As they sit side by side
They have their little tales to share
Of the seahorses, dolphins and whales
At the rock agreed upon
It's her favorite thing to do
Quite early before dawn
They discuss the ocean's secrets
As they sit side by side
They have their little tales to share
Of the seahorses, dolphins and whales
#secrets
#sea
#fairies
#fish
#mermaids
495 reads
3 Comments
EyeLikeMe
Poem Published
30th Oct 2020 10:20am
30th Oct 2020 10:20am
Before I leave, one last kiss to remember
Lipstick dreams and kisses
Empty midnight wishes
"Its lonely in this room,"she says.
....And, I was the one for you.
Empty midnight wishes
"Its lonely in this room,"she says.
....And, I was the one for you.
#friendship
#monsters
#fairies
#LongDistanceRelationship
#crush
540 reads
6 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2020 12:55pm
23rd Oct 2020 12:55pm
Nom De Plume
Wormwood pool lament
our lady upon high;
'came in a jar and went
jet-black in cherry pie.
Cherry children ferment
her moldy ass goodbye;
Pluri-lolita rennt
purple haze in her eyes.
Graping her dissent,
sherry clouds in her thighs
refrigerate repent, sharing
ergot shots on rye.
For nigh's the brackish hour
Hunger taps us in, undine,
luscious gent in lady towers
legging entrails drag the sky
with a punctuated scent;
absinthe laced them in fungi.
Arsenic casein chased in mint ...
our lady upon high;
'came in a jar and went
jet-black in cherry pie.
Cherry children ferment
her moldy ass goodbye;
Pluri-lolita rennt
purple haze in her eyes.
Graping her dissent,
sherry clouds in her thighs
refrigerate repent, sharing
ergot shots on rye.
For nigh's the brackish hour
Hunger taps us in, undine,
luscious gent in lady towers
legging entrails drag the sky
with a punctuated scent;
absinthe laced them in fungi.
Arsenic casein chased in mint ...
#fairies
528 reads
4 Comments
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
20th Oct 2020 5:36pm
20th Oct 2020 5:36pm
Magick
Witches Of The Underground page 4
Everyone hugged it out as they hadn’t seen each other since the funeral 2 years ago, but had been in touch via reading lists and what not...
Zazzles cleared her throat and said, I was feeling something weird approach my sense of peace as of late, and I’ve been getting no replies to any of my critiques and comments from the writers I follow.
Could it be Covid-19? Absolutely not said Daniel. Ever since the outbreak this castle has been under...
Everyone hugged it out as they hadn’t seen each other since the funeral 2 years ago, but had been in touch via reading lists and what not...
Zazzles cleared her throat and said, I was feeling something weird approach my sense of peace as of late, and I’ve been getting no replies to any of my critiques and comments from the writers I follow.
Could it be Covid-19? Absolutely not said Daniel. Ever since the outbreak this castle has been under...
#dragons
#fairies
#witches
693 reads
19 Comments
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