Poems About Fairies Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about fairies seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
nikkimoe
Poem Published
1st Sep 2021 4:35am
1st Sep 2021 4:35am
Use The Flintstone Brakes
Tripping on mushies
there's no rushie
for a speedy tomorrow.
Connecting with a higher vibration
this is how I take a vacation
on my own couch.
there's no rushie
for a speedy tomorrow.
Connecting with a higher vibration
this is how I take a vacation
on my own couch.
#fairies
#unicorns
337 reads
3 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
28th Aug 2021 12:49pm
28th Aug 2021 12:49pm
Parallel Universes
Dreamed in a magical mind -
Miasma into mist, dispersed,
Sent to self-same pieces,
Traveling in whirling trajectories,
Across interdimensional veils,
The pieces took their places
In each place as each piece,
Sent into sunshine like seeds,
Manifesting individuated realities
From unified fields of fields,
All along & across the veils,
Like a trillion-trillion autonomous shadows.
They say:
Molecules are measured
To facilitate perception,
Possibly they maneuver
In a state of...
Miasma into mist, dispersed,
Sent to self-same pieces,
Traveling in whirling trajectories,
Across interdimensional veils,
The pieces took their places
In each place as each piece,
Sent into sunshine like seeds,
Manifesting individuated realities
From unified fields of fields,
All along & across the veils,
Like a trillion-trillion autonomous shadows.
They say:
Molecules are measured
To facilitate perception,
Possibly they maneuver
In a state of...
#universe
#dragons
#fairies
#unicorns
#mermaids
510 reads
2 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
15th Aug 2021 2:46am
15th Aug 2021 2:46am
The peas that please
Late come warmth of springs. unfurling
promises, seedlings magic, reoccurring
for most have eyes that see them not
butterflies, for their escort
Well before midsummers heat
they sing with the pollinating bees
ballerina's as they dance sublime
in the thicket vines that climb
Close your eyes, reap that bouquet
let it transport and convey
rippling tinkles as they play
pastel shade, each cold grey day
Delicate as a snowflakes fall
disguised amongst the colours, free-for-all
fairy folk of fairy...
promises, seedlings magic, reoccurring
for most have eyes that see them not
butterflies, for their escort
Well before midsummers heat
they sing with the pollinating bees
ballerina's as they dance sublime
in the thicket vines that climb
Close your eyes, reap that bouquet
let it transport and convey
rippling tinkles as they play
pastel shade, each cold grey day
Delicate as a snowflakes fall
disguised amongst the colours, free-for-all
fairy folk of fairy...
#fairies
347 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
15th Jul 2021 11:57pm
15th Jul 2021 11:57pm
fairy mischief
dip the quill in the crimson ink
bleeding thoughts speak
peaking then receding
in the eternal knowledge
darkness talks to the unseelie
they frolic in ones mind
a constant reel of nonsense
rattles the psyche
with incessant chatter
I close off my soul
still I feel the mischief enter
raucous laughter and merry making
it's slightly sinister in the knowledge
the seelie are kin to me
little fairies of disarray
their name is chaos
to dispel any myths they are tricky
besotted by their siren...
bleeding thoughts speak
peaking then receding
in the eternal knowledge
darkness talks to the unseelie
they frolic in ones mind
a constant reel of nonsense
rattles the psyche
with incessant chatter
I close off my soul
still I feel the mischief enter
raucous laughter and merry making
it's slightly sinister in the knowledge
the seelie are kin to me
little fairies of disarray
their name is chaos
to dispel any myths they are tricky
besotted by their siren...
#fairies
#magic
502 reads
6 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
15th Jul 2021 10:25am
15th Jul 2021 10:25am
Sea Turtles & See Turtles
She has shape shifting eyes, meritorious mood rings.
Seeing things, from vantage points that are beyond
The mechanisms of sight, utilized by other beings,
Who only believe… They have seen.
She taught me how to read... Her emotions.
Maybe because I was curious, maybe because she liked me…
Maybe just because.
Grey=Worried
Really blue=Happy
Green/blue green=Sad
Green=Mystery
She taught me by allowing me to spend time with her.
And I was… Maybe studious, maybe curious.
*...
Seeing things, from vantage points that are beyond
The mechanisms of sight, utilized by other beings,
Who only believe… They have seen.
She taught me how to read... Her emotions.
Maybe because I was curious, maybe because she liked me…
Maybe just because.
Grey=Worried
Really blue=Happy
Green/blue green=Sad
Green=Mystery
She taught me by allowing me to spend time with her.
And I was… Maybe studious, maybe curious.
*...
#beauty
#universe
#water
#fairies
#mermaids
432 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
28th Jun 2021 3:25pm
28th Jun 2021 3:25pm
the blue garden
swivel, twist sadness comes in
inside the gates of mistrust...clouds gather
I hate feelings they get in the way
make clear days blur
a sunshiny afternoon shaded with regret
do you yet hunger?
do your eyes also seek what you desire?
mine ache with the pain to connect
my soul reaches out on the winds...to be denied
I pull away shyly...rejected
it hurts to be this open
knowing the chance of being understood is unlikely
melancholy sways her hips
she is beautiful blue...my eyes mist
sister of mine even...
inside the gates of mistrust...clouds gather
I hate feelings they get in the way
make clear days blur
a sunshiny afternoon shaded with regret
do you yet hunger?
do your eyes also seek what you desire?
mine ache with the pain to connect
my soul reaches out on the winds...to be denied
I pull away shyly...rejected
it hurts to be this open
knowing the chance of being understood is unlikely
melancholy sways her hips
she is beautiful blue...my eyes mist
sister of mine even...
#love
#fairies
455 reads
5 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
13th May 2021 3:16pm
13th May 2021 3:16pm
Killing the Catch
Asbestos kind of love.
Tiny particles
filling the heart
and lungs
destroying slowly
never really knowing
the actual long term
damage it will cause.
Tiny particles
filling the heart
and lungs
destroying slowly
never really knowing
the actual long term
damage it will cause.
#love
#rainbow
#fairies #honesty
#fairies #honesty
485 reads
4 Comments
BlueBeastGirl
Beasty
Beasty
Poem Published
4th May 2021 7:51am
4th May 2021 7:51am
Fairy God Cousin
Dear Little one, I'm thinking of you
Hoping the bed you're in is comfy
That you belly is full of good food
My mind is full of lists of what I'm wishing for you
Clothes that fit, toys that bring joy, a safe place to be
My dreams keep bringing you back to me
I've never wanted a baby, never wanted pregnancy or any of that
Instead I've always dreamt of a child
That just floated into my life like dandelion fluff on wind
The very idea of a child who needs me
Twists my stomach into hundreds knots
And this idea that I couldn't give what is...
Hoping the bed you're in is comfy
That you belly is full of good food
My mind is full of lists of what I'm wishing for you
Clothes that fit, toys that bring joy, a safe place to be
My dreams keep bringing you back to me
I've never wanted a baby, never wanted pregnancy or any of that
Instead I've always dreamt of a child
That just floated into my life like dandelion fluff on wind
The very idea of a child who needs me
Twists my stomach into hundreds knots
And this idea that I couldn't give what is...
#children
#fairies
#support
#luck
#witches
419 reads
6 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2021 1:26am
23rd Apr 2021 1:26am
The Buzzing From a Brain Scrubbing
The television truly loves you
and you truly love it back,
if it weren't for the T.V.
you wouldn't know
what to say and you
wouldn't know how to act.
Brain dead sheep dont bah
they fah la la la lalow.
Blinded with psy-ence.
and you truly love it back,
if it weren't for the T.V.
you wouldn't know
what to say and you
wouldn't know how to act.
Brain dead sheep dont bah
they fah la la la lalow.
Blinded with psy-ence.
#fairies
#unicorns
#witches
376 reads
6 Comments
VeronikaB
Poem Published
15th Apr 2021 10:42pm
15th Apr 2021 10:42pm
The Elfin Way
(A song by Poppy, accompanied on her fairy lute)
Beneath the trek to
Heaven and the highway to
Hell there is
The elfin way
Where no path leads
Catch it
Before dawn pales into light
Hold it
Where dusk snakes into dark
Follow no path
Where fairies dance and goblins grow their gold
We slither through wyld tangles
We vanish in wyrd mist
But you must
Feel wonder
Smell the sweet musk of awe
Taste enchantment on the tip
Of your tongue you must
For fear you will hear ...
Beneath the trek to
Heaven and the highway to
Hell there is
The elfin way
Where no path leads
Catch it
Before dawn pales into light
Hold it
Where dusk snakes into dark
Follow no path
Where fairies dance and goblins grow their gold
We slither through wyld tangles
We vanish in wyrd mist
But you must
Feel wonder
Smell the sweet musk of awe
Taste enchantment on the tip
Of your tongue you must
For fear you will hear ...
#LifeStruggles
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#fairies
#magic
852 reads
9 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
20th Mar 2021 00:32am
20th Mar 2021 00:32am
Shishentsi
Have you heard of Shishentsi,
a dankest village in the North-
West of Bulgaria, where every
soul feels the fays that short-
sighted make some neighbours,
as the samovili roam in sight,
amid wedding drummers that by tatar pillagers
were slaughtered in the blossom of the bride.
Oh... there's garlic in all houses,
In all pockets; people put
the safety measure in the children's blouses
without explanations; whispers be shut.
Some men at...
a dankest village in the North-
West of Bulgaria, where every
soul feels the fays that short-
sighted make some neighbours,
as the samovili roam in sight,
amid wedding drummers that by tatar pillagers
were slaughtered in the blossom of the bride.
Oh... there's garlic in all houses,
In all pockets; people put
the safety measure in the children's blouses
without explanations; whispers be shut.
Some men at...
#dark
#dreams
#vampires
#fairies
#mystery
776 reads
21 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
17th Mar 2021 4:43pm
17th Mar 2021 4:43pm
New Place, New Location, Same Person.
I watched someone move
a million miles away to escape,
themselves,
only to find themselves tangled inside
themselves again.
a million miles away to escape,
themselves,
only to find themselves tangled inside
themselves again.
#stars
#fairies
#unicorns
491 reads
12 Comments
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