Poems About Evil Seeking Honest Critique
#evil
Poems about evil seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Video Nasties
a horror story
1989
After he killed her, he returned her library books.
They were piled on a stand by Mary-Anne's armchair, which faced the walnut-encased television set. John liked to watch his videotapes on that, and now with her gone, he'd be able to more often.
If you get away with it...
I will, he snapped back in his thoughts. He shovelled the books into a bag, but not before one last disgusted grimace at them. The Sheikh's English Bride. The Millionaire's Harlot. Love on Ward 7. Kissing in the Common Room. She had no taste, no...
1989
After he killed her, he returned her library books.
They were piled on a stand by Mary-Anne's armchair, which faced the walnut-encased television set. John liked to watch his videotapes on that, and now with her gone, he'd be able to more often.
If you get away with it...
I will, he snapped back in his thoughts. He shovelled the books into a bag, but not before one last disgusted grimace at them. The Sheikh's English Bride. The Millionaire's Harlot. Love on Ward 7. Kissing in the Common Room. She had no taste, no...
#evil
#horror
#ShortStory #violence
#ShortStory #violence
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Do you think that’s air you’re breathing?
Convenience craves control
We are cogs in the mechanics enslaved
Blueprints for consciousness in the drafts of experimental AI
Past the point we can be saved
We are mastered by computers in the name of technological advance
Following algorithms to patterns after the network of digital romance
Minds undone as we plug in
Reworking perspectives of the news that’s sold
What do we believe in
Indoctrinated by the narrative of everything we’re told
What is the source behind it all
The collective coding, the programming of...
We are cogs in the mechanics enslaved
Blueprints for consciousness in the drafts of experimental AI
Past the point we can be saved
We are mastered by computers in the name of technological advance
Following algorithms to patterns after the network of digital romance
Minds undone as we plug in
Reworking perspectives of the news that’s sold
What do we believe in
Indoctrinated by the narrative of everything we’re told
What is the source behind it all
The collective coding, the programming of...
#corruption
#evil
#NaPoWriMo2024
#philosophical
#technology
76 reads
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RICHARD'S FINAL MOMENTS
#evil
#horror
#scary
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Predictions
The author foretells the imminent and total annihilation of all wicked human beings.
Crime and violence will not end as long as unfair and contemptuous laws exist.
The author fearlessly previses NATO of the serious consequences of its evil, inhumane actions.
As long as the Israeli occupation of the Golan Heights continues, wars will not cease.
The author makes a prediction that no oppressor will be safe anywhere in the world.
There will be uprisings as long as the heartless authorities continue to oppress the poor.
The author foresees the...
Crime and violence will not end as long as unfair and contemptuous laws exist.
The author fearlessly previses NATO of the serious consequences of its evil, inhumane actions.
As long as the Israeli occupation of the Golan Heights continues, wars will not cease.
The author makes a prediction that no oppressor will be safe anywhere in the world.
There will be uprisings as long as the heartless authorities continue to oppress the poor.
The author foresees the...
#war
#evil
#humankind #oppression
#humankind #oppression
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0 Comments
Cannibal Consummation
I peel your layers
Undress the skin clothing you
Caress your dripping flesh
Lick nerve sensations
Cleanse you in dirty breath
Devour raw vitality
Pleasure permeates
Don't just cry in release
Scream in painful pleasure!
Lose yourself in my body
As I eat parts of yours for dinner
The object of my affection
Serve me forever
In death we do not part
But spill our putrescent life
For the earth...
Undress the skin clothing you
Caress your dripping flesh
Lick nerve sensations
Cleanse you in dirty breath
Devour raw vitality
Pleasure permeates
Don't just cry in release
Scream in painful pleasure!
Lose yourself in my body
As I eat parts of yours for dinner
The object of my affection
Serve me forever
In death we do not part
But spill our putrescent life
For the earth...
#dark
#evil
#earth #horror
#earth #horror
81 reads
3 Comments
The True Root Of Christendom Fraud
God,
they said
that you are
truly able
to protect those who
are good and destroy those
who are evil. If so, then
why did you not save a poor young
woman from getting raped by savage
thugs? That's easy. You're not real at all!
they said
that you are
truly able
to protect those who
are good and destroy those
who are evil. If so, then
why did you not save a poor young
woman from getting raped by savage
thugs? That's easy. You're not real at all!
#abuse
#evil
#dialogue
#dirty
#nonfiction
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My Most Failed Possession
Drunk skunk, wish you weren't the one
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, You are worthless like an animal
Labeled "rejected" on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything...
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, You are worthless like an animal
Labeled "rejected" on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything...
#kindness
#murder
#evil
#rhyming
#metaphor
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Funereality
Broken people reside at the mutant village
Ravenous freaks, fiend for your blood
Human genocide, horrific obsession
A different kind of mindfuck
Squeal like a pig as your mauled to death
Feast of the maggots thrown into a dead hole
Tomorrow’s funeral is your life sentence
Ravenous freaks, fiend for your blood
Human genocide, horrific obsession
A different kind of mindfuck
Squeal like a pig as your mauled to death
Feast of the maggots thrown into a dead hole
Tomorrow’s funeral is your life sentence
#dark
#death
#evil
#horror
#funeral
144 reads
12 Comments
Orgy of Death
For those I hate
Fucking hell
Beneath the skin
An open wound
Thirsty for blood, hunger for flesh
Scattered carnage
Wriggling torsos
Pungent, infested disease
Brain candy for dessert
Vomiting repugnance
To die again
Fucking hell
Beneath the skin
An open wound
Thirsty for blood, hunger for flesh
Scattered carnage
Wriggling torsos
Pungent, infested disease
Brain candy for dessert
Vomiting repugnance
To die again
#violence
#death
#evil
#fiction
#horror
119 reads
10 Comments
Morbid Tales
When fire leaps from the northern mountain
roaring hellfire awaits
servants of sorcery
diabolical
rage on the heavens
the rites of their crosses
smashed down
the pentagram burns bright
darkness shall be eternal
roaring hellfire awaits
servants of sorcery
diabolical
rage on the heavens
the rites of their crosses
smashed down
the pentagram burns bright
darkness shall be eternal
#dark
#evil
#night
#fire
#devil
122 reads
8 Comments
Not A Good Idea To Walk Alone At Night
Rachel was walking home
from night school only to
bump into a street gang.
The next day, her sexually
abused body was found
in a nearby vacant lot.
from night school only to
bump into a street gang.
The next day, her sexually
abused body was found
in a nearby vacant lot.
#abuse
#evil
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sensual
75 reads
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Were All Mislead
Don't judge Satanists
Politicians are evil
Priests are guilty too
Politicians are evil
Priests are guilty too
#corruption
#evil
#haiku #TruthOfLife
#haiku #TruthOfLife
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DU Poetry : Poems About Evil Seeking Honest Critique