Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Pete_25
Poem Published
Today 8:10am
Today 8:10am
Me
I'm the kinda guy you can't deny
Through blue eyes I'll paint your sky
Yours sincerely, touch lit dark
Imps and fairies, makin' sparks
Pen and ink, I overthink
Smoke n' ice, one more drink
I keep it tight, shed some light
Mother fuck! Another write
Through blue eyes I'll paint your sky
Yours sincerely, touch lit dark
Imps and fairies, makin' sparks
Pen and ink, I overthink
Smoke n' ice, one more drink
I keep it tight, shed some light
Mother fuck! Another write
#emotions
#SelfWorth
#strength
26 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 5:47am
25th Jan 2025 5:47am
The Wolftrap Bar
A tall glass of water you are”
The words I had no control of
Marooned at Wolfstrap
Except I wasn’t trapped
The bar partially empty
I had drank a few
Before I met you
You helped me sober up
And got me home
Alone I had felt
Until you made me melt,
My cold heart thawed out
I might be thinking out loud
But I may have found
The one I’ve been waiting for
I sank to the floor
An interesting predicament
Do you wish to be friends?
Or will you possibly,
Hopefully, maybe
Be mine
I’ve lived a...
The words I had no control of
Marooned at Wolfstrap
Except I wasn’t trapped
The bar partially empty
I had drank a few
Before I met you
You helped me sober up
And got me home
Alone I had felt
Until you made me melt,
My cold heart thawed out
I might be thinking out loud
But I may have found
The one I’ve been waiting for
I sank to the floor
An interesting predicament
Do you wish to be friends?
Or will you possibly,
Hopefully, maybe
Be mine
I’ve lived a...
#alcohol
#emotions
#patience
17 reads
1 Comment
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 12:29pm
23rd Jan 2025 12:29pm
Sassenach
The green of spring a backdrop, as bare feet on dewy grass pound the earth, each stride sending lace and what was once white cotten, bouncing against legs that cannot keep up, if only I could fly.
Your ship, magnificent from bow to stern, floating through white, like a ghost from the past, as sails take rest, you linger in the heavens for a moment, I will always appreciate that moment. ❤️
Your ship, magnificent from bow to stern, floating through white, like a ghost from the past, as sails take rest, you linger in the heavens for a moment, I will always appreciate that moment. ❤️
#admiration
#emotions
#love #strength
#love #strength
53 reads
4 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
Walls
Take your
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
74 reads
12 Comments
Maya404
Maya545
Maya545
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 5:10am
22nd Jan 2025 5:10am
Woodpecker
Two woodpeckers on the same tree,
Both living how they wish to be.
A calm and cautious, a chaotic and turbulent,
A steady and clear, a wild without fear.
A house perfectly made,
Black and white.
A house made with grooves,
Filled with life.
"Can't you be quiet?"
"Can't you be loud?"
A question they both would ask,
While hiding behind a careful mask.
Both living how they wish to be.
A calm and cautious, a chaotic and turbulent,
A steady and clear, a wild without fear.
A house perfectly made,
Black and white.
A house made with grooves,
Filled with life.
"Can't you be quiet?"
"Can't you be loud?"
A question they both would ask,
While hiding behind a careful mask.
#emotions
24 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 1:41pm
20th Jan 2025 1:41pm
What I didn't see on TV
If this woman is bald
and that man does braids
stop shitting and join the dance.
The rhythm pulses, bodies move
eyes meet, smiles meet.
In the center of the track the energy grows
arms rise, feet glide,
the sound envelops, the soul is freed.
Every step is a story told
each turn is a moment lived.
Dance unites, transforms and transcends
and in the end we are all one.
Lights flicker, shadows lengthen,
fragmented moments in time,
the harmony of a silent symphony.
Feet that stumble, hearts...
and that man does braids
stop shitting and join the dance.
The rhythm pulses, bodies move
eyes meet, smiles meet.
In the center of the track the energy grows
arms rise, feet glide,
the sound envelops, the soul is freed.
Every step is a story told
each turn is a moment lived.
Dance unites, transforms and transcends
and in the end we are all one.
Lights flicker, shadows lengthen,
fragmented moments in time,
the harmony of a silent symphony.
Feet that stumble, hearts...
#acceptance
#dance
#emotions
#healing
#relationships
36 reads
4 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 8:13am
20th Jan 2025 8:13am
In Session
Take a look inside my mind
The devil's got a hold on me
"Take a seat, try and relax
Have a sip of my herbal tea"
There's a place, there's a time
You possess the magic key
"Open up, look at me
Have a sip of my herbal tea"
Clean my mind, cleanse those thoughts
Set those little demons free
"You're discharged, demonic free
Did you like my funny tea?"
The devil's got a hold on me
"Take a seat, try and relax
Have a sip of my herbal tea"
There's a place, there's a time
You possess the magic key
"Open up, look at me
Have a sip of my herbal tea"
Clean my mind, cleanse those thoughts
Set those little demons free
"You're discharged, demonic free
Did you like my funny tea?"
#emotions
#funny
78 reads
8 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 9:19pm
17th Jan 2025 9:19pm
Little Gem
INSIDE ROARE
Little Gem
When you feel happy,
when your heart is a sheet.
Who holds a little gem,
who doesn't want to be alone anymore.
Who would like to hear "only you" again
Who was allowed to kiss your lips,
I thought I couldn't do it.
Your blue eyes like the sky
shine through my heart.
I would like to look into them forever,
Maybe I will find the answer why I don't want to.
A sudden meeting, just the touch of fingers.
I felt it was you.
I would like to scream into the darkness. ...
Little Gem
When you feel happy,
when your heart is a sheet.
Who holds a little gem,
who doesn't want to be alone anymore.
Who would like to hear "only you" again
Who was allowed to kiss your lips,
I thought I couldn't do it.
Your blue eyes like the sky
shine through my heart.
I would like to look into them forever,
Maybe I will find the answer why I don't want to.
A sudden meeting, just the touch of fingers.
I felt it was you.
I would like to scream into the darkness. ...
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
88 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 8:07am
17th Jan 2025 8:07am
Interlace
Souls interlace
Flowering shoots
Allow me to taste
Those hidden fruits
Your heart an oasis
Lies within
Body embraces
Delicate skin
Senses transmit
In too deep
A perfect fit
This love unique
Flowering shoots
Allow me to taste
Those hidden fruits
Your heart an oasis
Lies within
Body embraces
Delicate skin
Senses transmit
In too deep
A perfect fit
This love unique
#emotions
#love
91 reads
12 Comments
paige
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 6:01am
16th Jan 2025 6:01am
The Boy
#admiration
#emotions
103 reads
0 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 10:13am
14th Jan 2025 10:13am
Sweden tody
Sweden today
What happened to Sweden throwing off her neutrality like it was an old overcoat and to make matters worse joining old NATO, that is a moribund military organization.
I remember Ingrid Bergman, a great actress when I see her, I wonder, why Ricky had
a nightclub in Casablanca
There were many famous Swedes, such as Alfred Nobel, and Ingmar Bergman, and not forget Birgitte Nielsen married to an actor named Rocky Stalone, a screen hero
I remember Malmo where I bought coffee cups
With flowers on, now this town is full of angry belligerent Islamists...
What happened to Sweden throwing off her neutrality like it was an old overcoat and to make matters worse joining old NATO, that is a moribund military organization.
I remember Ingrid Bergman, a great actress when I see her, I wonder, why Ricky had
a nightclub in Casablanca
There were many famous Swedes, such as Alfred Nobel, and Ingmar Bergman, and not forget Birgitte Nielsen married to an actor named Rocky Stalone, a screen hero
I remember Malmo where I bought coffee cups
With flowers on, now this town is full of angry belligerent Islamists...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions #forgiveness
#emotions #forgiveness
17 reads
1 Comment
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:43am
12th Jan 2025 2:43am
The Enticement
Am I the Goddess to your God
Feeding you the fruit of life
When life has diminished in your eyes?
Open up to me
And I will take you on a journey
Where desires are fulfilled
And tears of passion are shed.
Feeding you the fruit of life
When life has diminished in your eyes?
Open up to me
And I will take you on a journey
Where desires are fulfilled
And tears of passion are shed.
#emotions
#passion
#sensual
187 reads
19 Comments
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