Poems About Drugs by Top Critiquers
#drugs
Poems about drugs by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Jun 2024 12:26pm
8th Jun 2024 12:26pm
Do Not Take Relief Upon Innocent People's Grief
Do not take relief upon innocent people's grief
Addiction is not only being slave to drugs, under cocaine control, or beneath a boss's hand kowtowing like a meek sheep, enslaved to their swaying stick, to their whims and extravagant desires, to look like a tamed animal,, you may also fall into slavery being a dependently addicted user, when those drugs, those psychedelics like LSD or mescaline, assail your whole attention, play on your real optical visions, give you a negative feedback on the world around you, affect your life for the worst, make of you an object of...
Addiction is not only being slave to drugs, under cocaine control, or beneath a boss's hand kowtowing like a meek sheep, enslaved to their swaying stick, to their whims and extravagant desires, to look like a tamed animal,, you may also fall into slavery being a dependently addicted user, when those drugs, those psychedelics like LSD or mescaline, assail your whole attention, play on your real optical visions, give you a negative feedback on the world around you, affect your life for the worst, make of you an object of...
#addiction
#confessional
#drugs
#emotional
#uplifting
201 reads
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PAR
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 8:20pm
1st Nov 2024 8:20pm
Dilemmhaiku
Very cold Vodka
An after sex dilemma
Just refill the glass
An after sex dilemma
Just refill the glass
#alcohol
#drugs
#haiku #WritingPoetry
#haiku #WritingPoetry
62 reads
6 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
17th Jun 2020 5:31am
17th Jun 2020 5:31am
Serpent's Work
We get poisoned by
the black mamba
snake to succumb
to his way of evil
by doing his dirty
work like killing
drug dealers who
sell their shit
to innocent kids
because kids our the future
the black mamba
snake to succumb
to his way of evil
by doing his dirty
work like killing
drug dealers who
sell their shit
to innocent kids
because kids our the future
#dark
#children
#evil
#drugs
#dirty
476 reads
3 Comments
Everavalon
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 10:18pm
17th Oct 2024 10:18pm
Affixed with fire— with Adagio
Faded quips of the wanton liar
Swelling lines affixed with fire
Gone to ashes of cooling char
From a distance spreading far
Bated breath, alas to be
Until he sipped catastrophe
You splayed the spool of tethers line
And made the fool drink poisoned wine
From the flesh of tainted brine
As the dark permits decline
Under, at last, the tailors spell
Distressed and cruel; a lot like hell
Tasting the silent Methamphetamine
Of the dark's mescaline
Swelling lines affixed with fire
Gone to ashes of cooling char
From a distance spreading far
Bated breath, alas to be
Until he sipped catastrophe
You splayed the spool of tethers line
And made the fool drink poisoned wine
From the flesh of tainted brine
As the dark permits decline
Under, at last, the tailors spell
Distressed and cruel; a lot like hell
Tasting the silent Methamphetamine
Of the dark's mescaline
#dark
#drugs
123 reads
6 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 9:05pm
9th Sep 2024 9:05pm
Pin cushion
Success is drawing blood.
Follow in my tracks.
There's no rush.
I'm not missing.
Just off the straight and narrow.
Open to facilitate.
Steadfast to invigorate.
There are drawbacks
But I take the plunge.
Time passed as pastime.
Days blend differently.
Its not my daily grind.
But it helps to get by.
Follow in my tracks.
There's no rush.
I'm not missing.
Just off the straight and narrow.
Open to facilitate.
Steadfast to invigorate.
There are drawbacks
But I take the plunge.
Time passed as pastime.
Days blend differently.
Its not my daily grind.
But it helps to get by.
#drugs
185 reads
8 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
18th Jul 2019 9:08am
18th Jul 2019 9:08am
Jonesin'
....so where was i?
ahhh yeah
i was in a juke joint
Miles away from the city blues
smokin her ether rolled up in a tight joint
takin puffs of my favorite heroin{e}
cuz she be that dope...
that he's gotta have it..pure...un-cut..
never stepped on
got me filled with graffiti sentiments
on some 1983 wild-style
type shit...mind wandering...
wondering 'bout girl 6
ridin dolo on the 6 train
walkin 'round Soho in a sundress...
enjoying the summer breeze
panty-less...of course
easy access..if granted
low...
ahhh yeah
i was in a juke joint
Miles away from the city blues
smokin her ether rolled up in a tight joint
takin puffs of my favorite heroin{e}
cuz she be that dope...
that he's gotta have it..pure...un-cut..
never stepped on
got me filled with graffiti sentiments
on some 1983 wild-style
type shit...mind wandering...
wondering 'bout girl 6
ridin dolo on the 6 train
walkin 'round Soho in a sundress...
enjoying the summer breeze
panty-less...of course
easy access..if granted
low...
#summer
#drugs
#memories #crush
#memories #crush
455 reads
3 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 2:01am
18th Aug 2024 2:01am
Stash Snatched
#drugs
#rhyming
#ShortStory
88 reads
10 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2017 11:30pm
22nd Dec 2017 11:30pm
silly thing ...
and poetry is a pretty
silly thing
is he wouldn't do this
if only
she'd ring ..
silly thing
is he wouldn't do this
if only
she'd ring ..
#alcohol
#drugs
#confessional
#WritersBlock
#addiction
465 reads
3 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
27th Mar 2024 11:28am
27th Mar 2024 11:28am
Memories Of Love
You were my one true love
But you never knew it
Your boyish grin
Was more than cherished
Your long looks at me
Got me all stirred up
It was your voice
That made my heart go wild
It's funny how
I never have stopped
Thinking of you
How I was the only
Women you asked to dance
And did we ever dance
Strange how I've
Never stopped wanting you
Even though you are
Now unattainable
Too bad the drugs stole
Your handsome good looks
And God knows what else
I'll never stop loving...
But you never knew it
Your boyish grin
Was more than cherished
Your long looks at me
Got me all stirred up
It was your voice
That made my heart go wild
It's funny how
I never have stopped
Thinking of you
How I was the only
Women you asked to dance
And did we ever dance
Strange how I've
Never stopped wanting you
Even though you are
Now unattainable
Too bad the drugs stole
Your handsome good looks
And God knows what else
I'll never stop loving...
#heartbroken
#drugs
204 reads
12 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
16th Jan 2021 1:55pm
16th Jan 2021 1:55pm
feel
my emptiness speaks from deep inside me
I deny the truth because it hurts too much
I run from my feelings taking refuge inside the numbness
comfort found in the arms of substances
I can't seem to cope without my dope
truth be told I never have
damn it I feel too much
pacing the perimeter of my life
wanting to escape if just for a moment
fake it till you make it class what bullshit
I'm happy for those of you it works for
reliving my past just makes me want to get high
in anguish, I pasted a smile to my face
in agony,...
I deny the truth because it hurts too much
I run from my feelings taking refuge inside the numbness
comfort found in the arms of substances
I can't seem to cope without my dope
truth be told I never have
damn it I feel too much
pacing the perimeter of my life
wanting to escape if just for a moment
fake it till you make it class what bullshit
I'm happy for those of you it works for
reliving my past just makes me want to get high
in anguish, I pasted a smile to my face
in agony,...
#drugs
451 reads
8 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 6:31pm
27th Feb 2024 6:31pm
On My Shaggy Shit
Here we go again traveling to another so-called haunted place
While I blow chronic smoke in my home dog’s face,
“We have been dealing with this creepy shit for so long
Sometimes I think about turning my crew to ghost-am I wrong,
“Little do they know I carry a gun I nicknamed the ‘Ghostmaker’
For those fools at the end who are spiritual fakers,
“Because a long time ago my ass stopped all that running
I’m not trying to lose weight so a motherfucka started gunning,
“Let Daphne and Fred Karen asses...
While I blow chronic smoke in my home dog’s face,
“We have been dealing with this creepy shit for so long
Sometimes I think about turning my crew to ghost-am I wrong,
“Little do they know I carry a gun I nicknamed the ‘Ghostmaker’
For those fools at the end who are spiritual fakers,
“Because a long time ago my ass stopped all that running
I’m not trying to lose weight so a motherfucka started gunning,
“Let Daphne and Fred Karen asses...
#sex
#drugs
251 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 3:21am
7th Oct 2024 3:21am
Love on the point of a needle
It’s like love on the tip of a needle
I look at you you are gone you drift away
Firming up your arm look for a vein I can connect to
I connect to you you drift away from me
It’s like looking for love on a point of a needle
We dream and string out long it’s ephemeral
How come you can’t treat me like I’m love in a needle
We connect and it’s like I’m in a carnival
But after a few minutes I can’t speak
Looking for love on the point of a needle
I look at you you are gone you drift away
Firming up your arm look for a vein I can connect to
I connect to you you drift away from me
It’s like looking for love on a point of a needle
We dream and string out long it’s ephemeral
How come you can’t treat me like I’m love in a needle
We connect and it’s like I’m in a carnival
But after a few minutes I can’t speak
Looking for love on the point of a needle
#addiction
#drugs
#heroin #temptation
#heroin #temptation
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