Poems About Determination by Top Critiquers
#determination
Poems about determination by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Cruelty is your middle name
Most people duck reality. Reality is a river with a fierce current. You can try & resist but the current won’t stop. It moves faster & stronger then you ever will. People give in. People have to many vices that blur their vision. Most people accept what it is and never go against the mainstream. Swim up the mainstream, go against what is the norm and what is being force fed to you. Living life this way takes perseverance and determination.
Society, civilization, language, just living day by day, people are tired. They don’t have the strength to make change. This is why so...
Society, civilization, language, just living day by day, people are tired. They don’t have the strength to make change. This is why so...
#courage
#determination
#TruthOfLife
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courage
there is dignity still. yes there is courage
sadness peaks and overpours it must be expressed
let notes of powerful beauty explain
bombs and guns can not silence the soul of the brave
the blood of humanity will cry out to the heavens, hear the Ukraine
rising on the winds to reach the hearts of others
yes, I'm still here, feel my pain
in the tall of my back I am speaking to the downtrodden and afraid
music soothing the frayed spirits
for a moment transported to better days
in an instant all the joyous days spent playing...
sadness peaks and overpours it must be expressed
let notes of powerful beauty explain
bombs and guns can not silence the soul of the brave
the blood of humanity will cry out to the heavens, hear the Ukraine
rising on the winds to reach the hearts of others
yes, I'm still here, feel my pain
in the tall of my back I am speaking to the downtrodden and afraid
music soothing the frayed spirits
for a moment transported to better days
in an instant all the joyous days spent playing...
#strength
#courage
#war #determination
#war #determination
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As a woman
As a woman who has been blessed with her own strength and courage and perseverance, where does your true strength come from, deep within you as you go through somethings that are out of your own control. As a woman that has been blessed, with the ability to adapt to your situations always, figuring a way out to make life better for those around you. 💗 FOR since the beginning of time, as a strong woman it was only you and your faith that held the family truly together as one. As a woman that sometimes, have to wear a mask as a disguise, to hide your weeping eyes when it seems...
#determination
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
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I'LL GET YOUR PECKER UP
I'll get your pecker up,
I'm giving you a cup
Of aphrodisiac.
You'll fire well in the sack!
When you have drunk it down
We'll be heard around town
When we've broken the bed
As you serve pencil lead.
I'm giving you a cup
Of aphrodisiac.
You'll fire well in the sack!
When you have drunk it down
We'll be heard around town
When we've broken the bed
As you serve pencil lead.
#sex
#passion
#determination
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box cutter in hand
23 of 30
I will no longer participate
...in the grand illusion
not going to walk someone else's definition
...of the right path
it's too monochromatic
their truth doesn't fit me
their idea of normal...
...invalid in my universe
I'm tired of being compartmentalized
boxed in
trying to squeeze myself into their ideals
attempting to shrink my dimensions
struggling to be big enough
unsuccessfully stretching
...attempting to reach their unrealistic shelves
I'm done
time for...
I will no longer participate
...in the grand illusion
not going to walk someone else's definition
...of the right path
it's too monochromatic
their truth doesn't fit me
their idea of normal...
...invalid in my universe
I'm tired of being compartmentalized
boxed in
trying to squeeze myself into their ideals
attempting to shrink my dimensions
struggling to be big enough
unsuccessfully stretching
...attempting to reach their unrealistic shelves
I'm done
time for...
#confessional
#determination
#LifeStruggles #PersonalGrowth
#LifeStruggles #PersonalGrowth
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There is No Password
Flying under the radar
Off course on purpose
Blackened wings
Off the grid
If you want to find me
There is no password
But there is a code
Remember what I told you
My protectors are none
My allies have faded
My course is clear
New frontiers await
Off course on purpose
Blackened wings
Off the grid
If you want to find me
There is no password
But there is a code
Remember what I told you
My protectors are none
My allies have faded
My course is clear
New frontiers await
#FreeVerse
#mystery
#escape #determination
#escape #determination
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and, when a gender is in it's tenacious transcendence~
visual
#women
#men
#spiritual
#masculinity
#determination
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The Forge of Thought
Every soul is a spectrum nexus
No matter who they are or where they are from
Even, God help us, from hapless Texas
Where a lone star glows for every bum.
There as here one can never tell
If it's to heaven the spectrum leads
Or if it's a nexus link to hell
Where only glorified horror proceeds
And psychic entropy soon sets in
To devastate all the hope you had
With retrogressing labels of sin
And omens evermore ironclad
By a forge of thought in endless fetters...
Unencumbered...by the realm of letters!
No matter who they are or where they are from
Even, God help us, from hapless Texas
Where a lone star glows for every bum.
There as here one can never tell
If it's to heaven the spectrum leads
Or if it's a nexus link to hell
Where only glorified horror proceeds
And psychic entropy soon sets in
To devastate all the hope you had
With retrogressing labels of sin
And omens evermore ironclad
By a forge of thought in endless fetters...
Unencumbered...by the realm of letters!
#inspirational
#acceptance
#determination
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Lasso the Sun
The rider rides
With rage and passion in his heart
Over golden hills and across the plains
Across the great breath of land
Through realms and domains
Ready
To capture the sun
His untamed spirit and will
Has no time for menial things
There is a flame to catch and a force wield
As he gallops into the distance
Willing to conquer the day
Ready
To seize the sun
He chases the fire in the sky
Without wings or propellors he flies
Hi horse racing against time
Leaving a plume of smoke and dust...
With rage and passion in his heart
Over golden hills and across the plains
Across the great breath of land
Through realms and domains
Ready
To capture the sun
His untamed spirit and will
Has no time for menial things
There is a flame to catch and a force wield
As he gallops into the distance
Willing to conquer the day
Ready
To seize the sun
He chases the fire in the sky
Without wings or propellors he flies
Hi horse racing against time
Leaving a plume of smoke and dust...
#courage
#determination
#dreams
#hope
#strength
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Muse-aholics Anonymous
Hi, my name is K,
and I almost slipped today.
There’s just so much I want to share
when I convince myself that you might care…
Alcoholics have sponsors when they’re under attack
but I have to find ways to have my own back.
So I pick off the scabs, I watch the blood bubble,
reread the silences, relive the trouble.
I let the hurt choke me like hands on my neck;
it’s not masochism – it’s reality check.
Then anger steps up to take over the fight,
beating back shame, setting boundaries right.
As tears flood my spirit, my...
and I almost slipped today.
There’s just so much I want to share
when I convince myself that you might care…
Alcoholics have sponsors when they’re under attack
but I have to find ways to have my own back.
So I pick off the scabs, I watch the blood bubble,
reread the silences, relive the trouble.
I let the hurt choke me like hands on my neck;
it’s not masochism – it’s reality check.
Then anger steps up to take over the fight,
beating back shame, setting boundaries right.
As tears flood my spirit, my...
#determination
#hurt
#relationships
#SelfWorth
#healing
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Mel44
Visual Expression IX
#admiration
#courage
#determination
#inspirational
#strength
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Kneel Unto Heaven Stand Upon Faith (The Book of Esther)
Lord, I'm going to hold steady on to You and You've got to see me through.
Harriet Tubman
Heritage to Queens and Kings to proclaim battles with written declarations of one's sovereignty with unspoken philosophical weapons
Twisted tongues in life, adaption of its feeble scorn
In the hereafter, I have glimpsed mortality to give hearts reprisal upon reborn
To the keepers of the wind, fire, air, and of the sea
The fourscore entwined, defined of mouths when...
Harriet Tubman
Heritage to Queens and Kings to proclaim battles with written declarations of one's sovereignty with unspoken philosophical weapons
Twisted tongues in life, adaption of its feeble scorn
In the hereafter, I have glimpsed mortality to give hearts reprisal upon reborn
To the keepers of the wind, fire, air, and of the sea
The fourscore entwined, defined of mouths when...
#philosophical
#wisdom
#courage
#determination
#spiritual
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DU Poetry : Poems About Determination by Top Critiquers