Dark by Top Critiquers Poems
#dark
dark by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
rape
the
gardener
juz
touched
a flower
even though
that
flower
didn't
want
to be...
gardener
juz
touched
a flower
even though
that
flower
didn't
want
to be...
#dark
#flowers
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18 Comments
No Light
black is black
dark is dark
these days
those days
everyday
no sunshine
black is black
no lights on
all dark
shadows in shadows
can't see
where i'm going
where we're going
no sunshine
no light
it's all dark...
dark is dark
these days
those days
everyday
no sunshine
black is black
no lights on
all dark
shadows in shadows
can't see
where i'm going
where we're going
no sunshine
no light
it's all dark...
#dark
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just to think
left the house every night
at eleven
and walked around the city
no one knew him
that was the point
at which he wallowed in the dark
at eleven
and walked around the city
no one knew him
that was the point
at which he wallowed in the dark
#dark
74 reads
3 Comments
gravel in the grave (with Adagio)
Romancing the craters potholes
of wishing wells and tar pits
another bump in the road
and not just a mirage
fading to black
through the asphalt of pain
deep in the cobblestones
and the gravel in the grave
You're easy to love
when you're lying
I paint these prison walls
with murals of freedom
and dream just to hallucinate
remembering the taste you
before you spit burning asphalt
into my mouth
and burned my voice to black
of wishing wells and tar pits
another bump in the road
and not just a mirage
fading to black
through the asphalt of pain
deep in the cobblestones
and the gravel in the grave
You're easy to love
when you're lying
I paint these prison walls
with murals of freedom
and dream just to hallucinate
remembering the taste you
before you spit burning asphalt
into my mouth
and burned my voice to black
#dark
#loneliness
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0 Comments
Streets of Manga
With a fragrance of schizophrenia from the therapist's
lace and garter oozing from the Shiba, brushwood,
tasting the breath of my psychosis dripping insanity
listening to voices hanging by strings like crickets
calling my name from a cello, numbing my senses,
arousing my clone in the streets of Manga
lace and garter oozing from the Shiba, brushwood,
tasting the breath of my psychosis dripping insanity
listening to voices hanging by strings like crickets
calling my name from a cello, numbing my senses,
arousing my clone in the streets of Manga
#dark
#erotic
58 reads
2 Comments
One of Them
Cold shadows collected, strewn through the night
Like a dark trousseau full of mourning and grief
As the remnants of ghosts and specters past
Gather around like a den of thieves
But my eyes could not distinguish life from death
The very fabric of reality has been lost to memory
With an emptiness that seems to weigh a ton
Where the silence feels quite deafening
There, secrets are whispered in frayed threads
Fractured and broken in mnemonic tones
Lost forever in the echoes of time
Knowing I’ll become one of them
Like a dark trousseau full of mourning and grief
As the remnants of ghosts and specters past
Gather around like a den of thieves
But my eyes could not distinguish life from death
The very fabric of reality has been lost to memory
With an emptiness that seems to weigh a ton
Where the silence feels quite deafening
There, secrets are whispered in frayed threads
Fractured and broken in mnemonic tones
Lost forever in the echoes of time
Knowing I’ll become one of them
#dark
#depression
127 reads
2 Comments
Into The Darkness
Mm…you like the feeling of my poetic songs when I sing
Proverbs, pronouns, adjectives, never expresses a melanin Queen
Melodies of being under my possession floating around in your head
No sips of wine, what, yet, you trying to seduce me in your mental bed
Tsk tsk…don’t do the hunt if you can’t deal with the worth of the treasure
Fucking you with my finger and then my strap on for the extra measure
Dreams of licking over my butter rum favor
The fragrance of twisted cunts, never has been my nature to eat...
Proverbs, pronouns, adjectives, never expresses a melanin Queen
Melodies of being under my possession floating around in your head
No sips of wine, what, yet, you trying to seduce me in your mental bed
Tsk tsk…don’t do the hunt if you can’t deal with the worth of the treasure
Fucking you with my finger and then my strap on for the extra measure
Dreams of licking over my butter rum favor
The fragrance of twisted cunts, never has been my nature to eat...
#dark
301 reads
Don’t Mess With Her
Don’t Mess With Her
She dares you to even try
To give her a bad hair day
Because she has the 80s girl moxie
Whose feathers you may ruffle
At your own risk
When she scrawls your name
In her scarlet lipstick
On the misty mirror of your heart
Telling you to get lost clown
And your puny male ego
Turns to ashes
Under the blue flame
Of her eyes
She dares you to even try
To give her a bad hair day
Because she has the 80s girl moxie
Whose feathers you may ruffle
At your own risk
When she scrawls your name
In her scarlet lipstick
On the misty mirror of your heart
Telling you to get lost clown
And your puny male ego
Turns to ashes
Under the blue flame
Of her eyes
#anger
#dark
#gothic
#risk
#women
238 reads
10 Comments
Itch and scratch
I have an itch
will you love
to scratch it?
The more you scratch
the more it will itch
rub it rough rub it slow,
then fast
faster and faster you go
with your calloused hands
and feet
Oh i love the friction-
the heat
Baby please
graze with your nails
as hard as you...
will you love
to scratch it?
The more you scratch
the more it will itch
rub it rough rub it slow,
then fast
faster and faster you go
with your calloused hands
and feet
Oh i love the friction-
the heat
Baby please
graze with your nails
as hard as you...
#dark
#erotic
#lust
365 reads
18 Comments
cemetery in bloom
yearning for the embrace of her lost lover
his stench is still fresh
she felt them pad over her, rude yet beautiful
she heard a voice state where he would forever lay
in silence and penance
she slithers her once sexy bones
over to the depths of his newly found home
finally together
she glides softly her dead soul over him
his eyes open
his flesh still the same
hers gone
he is wakened by her scent
a cemetery in bloom
they tightly embrace
bound by their own eternity
his stench is still fresh
she felt them pad over her, rude yet beautiful
she heard a voice state where he would forever lay
in silence and penance
she slithers her once sexy bones
over to the depths of his newly found home
finally together
she glides softly her dead soul over him
his eyes open
his flesh still the same
hers gone
he is wakened by her scent
a cemetery in bloom
they tightly embrace
bound by their own eternity
#dark
#love
251 reads
2 Comments
A Caress in Darkness
Not something you hear
Or see as an omen
More of a feeling
Being pulled in directions
Instincts in the dark
Guiding you around
Cracked sidewalks
Avoiding dead ends
Whispers that breathe
As a warning breeze
Of comfort through
The winding tunnel
Unafraid of the night
Knowing I’ll be alright
And Angeless
A Caress in Darkness
Or see as an omen
More of a feeling
Being pulled in directions
Instincts in the dark
Guiding you around
Cracked sidewalks
Avoiding dead ends
Whispers that breathe
As a warning breeze
Of comfort through
The winding tunnel
Unafraid of the night
Knowing I’ll be alright
And Angeless
A Caress in Darkness
#dark
#night
546 reads
18 Comments
Silent Battles
I don't want to battle with myself today,
with harsh emotions tangled within.
Disappointment in my eyes,
disasters in my mind,
the light at the end of the tunnel always dim.
I don't want to battle with myself today,
my darkness may win.
The echoes of doubt grow louder,
pulling me to a place I've already been.
I’ve wrestled with shadows, fought to stand,
weary day's start to cave.
If I let go, will silence greet me,
or will I drown beneath the waves?
I don't want to battle with myself today, ...
with harsh emotions tangled within.
Disappointment in my eyes,
disasters in my mind,
the light at the end of the tunnel always dim.
I don't want to battle with myself today,
my darkness may win.
The echoes of doubt grow louder,
pulling me to a place I've already been.
I’ve wrestled with shadows, fought to stand,
weary day's start to cave.
If I let go, will silence greet me,
or will I drown beneath the waves?
I don't want to battle with myself today, ...
#dark
#LifeStruggles
102 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Dark by Top Critiquers Poems