Poems About a Crush Seeking Honest Critique
#crush
Poems about a crush seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 6:41pm
16th Dec 2024 6:41pm
Celebrity Fantasy Crushes...
#crush
#PopCulture
#sex
73 reads
6 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 2:01pm
13th Dec 2024 2:01pm
Can I Kiss You Again?
#crush
#romantic
#passion
#dark
#BDSM
207 reads
18 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 4:31pm
11th Dec 2024 4:31pm
I know some of your secrets
I know enough
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
#crush
#despair
#lover
#lust
#temptation
119 reads
20 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 7:45pm
5th Dec 2024 7:45pm
Affair with your Mind ( Redux )
I want to have an affair with your mind
The secret places that fold into wetness
I want to gaze into your eyes
Your quiet reserve calling me home
On fire with desire
Until my combustion spills forth into ecstasy
The secret places that fold into wetness
I want to gaze into your eyes
Your quiet reserve calling me home
On fire with desire
Until my combustion spills forth into ecstasy
#crush
#erotic
#lover
#seductive
#ThrillSeeking
180 reads
33 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 4:03am
4th Dec 2024 4:03am
Butter
Beautiful long soft butter
Saw you sitting upon a steel shelf
Your leg raised so soft and perfect
Saw right into to you butter is upon
Glistening in beauty legs so long I can’t sleep
Without thinking about you I dream awake about
Your skin so close to me
Saw your soft long leg and I feel that I can be your butter
Saw you sitting upon a steel shelf
Your leg raised so soft and perfect
Saw right into to you butter is upon
Glistening in beauty legs so long I can’t sleep
Without thinking about you I dream awake about
Your skin so close to me
Saw your soft long leg and I feel that I can be your butter
#beauty
#crush
#sensual #sexy
#sensual #sexy
71 reads
0 Comments
BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 1:42am
4th Dec 2024 1:42am
Tragedy
a season of ripened fruit
no taste of sugar
to my tongue
did drip
no taste of sugar
to my tongue
did drip
#crush
#lust
113 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 6:05pm
22nd Nov 2024 6:05pm
Sometimes I Daydream
I want to sleep next to you
Want to watch you breathe
Want to put my arm around you
I know I'll get hard
But
Ignore that
This is platonic
Unless it's not
And
We'll know if that happens...
Want to watch you breathe
Want to put my arm around you
I know I'll get hard
But
Ignore that
This is platonic
Unless it's not
And
We'll know if that happens...
#confessional
#crush
#friendship
#LifeAsAWriter
#romantic
167 reads
23 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 4:42pm
18th Nov 2024 4:42pm
Love With Shut Eyes
Love lost in the light.
Lost with eyes wide open!
Even with the sun burning
the darkness of my shadow.
Love found in the dark.
Found with eyes shut!
Even with the sun’s descent
I gaze on with shut eyes.
Love lost and found
between light and dark.
The sight of beauty
with shut eyes so profound.
Lost with eyes wide open!
Even with the sun burning
the darkness of my shadow.
Love found in the dark.
Found with eyes shut!
Even with the sun’s descent
I gaze on with shut eyes.
Love lost and found
between light and dark.
The sight of beauty
with shut eyes so profound.
#crush
#FallingInLove
#love
#MentalHealth
#surreal
117 reads
1 Comment
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 4:55pm
17th Nov 2024 4:55pm
Gentle Thunderstorms Within
There is a soothing storm within.
Gently, thunder booms from my heart.
Gentle heartbeats make emotional waves
and I cannot stop my feelings for her.
There is a teary deluge within.
My tears, the wine of my loneliness,
which intoxicates me until I’m love-struck
and then I am inebriated with the red wine of love.
The cloudburst in the sky of my crimson eyes,
the drunkenness of being wanted,
the overwhelming desire to be loved,
as for the arctic reality, my heart thunders on.
Gently, thunder booms from my heart.
Gentle heartbeats make emotional waves
and I cannot stop my feelings for her.
There is a teary deluge within.
My tears, the wine of my loneliness,
which intoxicates me until I’m love-struck
and then I am inebriated with the red wine of love.
The cloudburst in the sky of my crimson eyes,
the drunkenness of being wanted,
the overwhelming desire to be loved,
as for the arctic reality, my heart thunders on.
#crush
#depression
#FallingInLove
#MentalHealth
#surreal
117 reads
4 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
Changes
I shuttered my eyes and plugged my ears.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#LookingForLove
#love
127 reads
0 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
9th Nov 2024 2:37pm
What Could’ve Been
Time has passed
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
We’ve both changed
From what, where, why and when
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We’re two different people
From those kids we knew
Even though we resemble them
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
It was a missed opportunity of yesteryear
When we labeled each other as,
Just a friend
There’s no way it could ever be
What it would’ve been, back then
We both have different lives
Other lovers...
#crush
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession
#respect
205 reads
8 Comments
Major_NorfsideTsu
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 8:37pm
3rd Nov 2024 8:37pm
Tonight's Private Menu
#crush
#dating
#erotic
#lust
#seductive
271 reads
1 Comment
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