Poems About a Crush Seeking Honest Critique
#crush
Poems about a crush seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Wannabe_batman
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 3:43pm
24th Feb 2025 3:43pm
Her
Skin as white as snow,
eyes with an uncanny glow,
hair made out of fresh silk,
oh! heaven may I have seen;
in her, love was like a mothers womb,
and pain was like when a fire blooms,
no garment could ever fit her beauty,
even the moon was jealous of her!!
with a heart that was only pure,
as the sun in the sky,
her smile shines bright,
got paralyzed by only her sight,
if that was love I wasn't sure,
lungs pumping with a sweet pain,
if it were, our love would have left a stain,
breath with a burning Passion,
but now...
eyes with an uncanny glow,
hair made out of fresh silk,
oh! heaven may I have seen;
in her, love was like a mothers womb,
and pain was like when a fire blooms,
no garment could ever fit her beauty,
even the moon was jealous of her!!
with a heart that was only pure,
as the sun in the sky,
her smile shines bright,
got paralyzed by only her sight,
if that was love I wasn't sure,
lungs pumping with a sweet pain,
if it were, our love would have left a stain,
breath with a burning Passion,
but now...
#beauty
#crush
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
97 reads
0 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:47pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:47pm
Season of Choice
It is the season of choice.
The season I find my love.
Where embers thaw and burn.
Bring me into your season.
Into warm nights of passion.
Where passion ignites senses.
Make me feel your season.
Into warm and sweaty embraces.
Where embracing smolders red hot.
Make me love and hate your season.
Love that summer of wet lips pressing.
Hate that winter of letting go.
The season I find my love.
Where embers thaw and burn.
Bring me into your season.
Into warm nights of passion.
Where passion ignites senses.
Make me feel your season.
Into warm and sweaty embraces.
Where embracing smolders red hot.
Make me love and hate your season.
Love that summer of wet lips pressing.
Hate that winter of letting go.
#crush
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
84 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 3:13pm
22nd Feb 2025 3:13pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #3
Through keyholes' glimpse a world unknown,
mirrors reflect, a love has grown,
barriers crossed, where flaws are shown.
Silent wishes through locked embrace,
mirrors' glance, a hidden place,
keyholes open love's own space.
Eyes that meet in secret views.
Mirrors join what time renews.
Keyholes whispers breaking through.
Through barriers, one love takes flight.
Mirrors dance in a starry night.
Keyholes hold all dreams so tight.
Boundaries fade, all hearts align,
mirrors shine with love's design, ...
mirrors reflect, a love has grown,
barriers crossed, where flaws are shown.
Silent wishes through locked embrace,
mirrors' glance, a hidden place,
keyholes open love's own space.
Eyes that meet in secret views.
Mirrors join what time renews.
Keyholes whispers breaking through.
Through barriers, one love takes flight.
Mirrors dance in a starry night.
Keyholes hold all dreams so tight.
Boundaries fade, all hearts align,
mirrors shine with love's design, ...
#crush
#erotic
#love
#lust
#passion
91 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 12:19pm
18th Feb 2025 12:19pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #1
In twilight waters jellyfish glide,
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights...
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights...
#crush
#love
#lust
#passion
#romantic
87 reads
14 Comments
jenny_way
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 5:32pm
8th Feb 2025 5:32pm
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
You might be not who I imagined
I’m aware, yet can’t help
Staring at you stealthily, while you pass through me with your friends
Oh god, you don’t even notice me
You care less to see
How fast I’m falling in love with you
Yeah, I know. I’m too naive
You’re probably a piece of shit,
But the thought of you fills me with zeal
If I’m as good as they say
Then why am I not the one for you?
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
I’m aware, yet can’t help
Staring at you stealthily, while you pass through me with your friends
Oh god, you don’t even notice me
You care less to see
How fast I’m falling in love with you
Yeah, I know. I’m too naive
You’re probably a piece of shit,
But the thought of you fills me with zeal
If I’m as good as they say
Then why am I not the one for you?
I guess I’m doomed for unrequited love
#crush
#dreams
#FallingInLove #UnrequitedLove
#FallingInLove #UnrequitedLove
64 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 10:49am
2nd Feb 2025 10:49am
Foreplay Haiku
Just come here and play with me
I'll give you an arm
You'll give me the tighter hug
I'll give you an arm
You'll give me the tighter hug
#crush
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#identity
#relationships
162 reads
11 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 4:44am
1st Feb 2025 4:44am
Wading Pool White Picket Fence.
I've given up on.
Love.
Everyone's the same.
And, I don't know where to
meet anyone.
Least alone someone.
I would
like.
Smart women who like art.
Bad poetry.
Good fashion sense.
Won't
go for.
Holy renunciates like me.
Trance states and hallucinogens.
Metaphorical symbolic mythology and ranting.
About God and a malplaced accident.
And, baby, I don't like basic bitches.
Unless I'm horny.
But, love?
It's a foreign thing that women throw...
Love.
Everyone's the same.
And, I don't know where to
meet anyone.
Least alone someone.
I would
like.
Smart women who like art.
Bad poetry.
Good fashion sense.
Won't
go for.
Holy renunciates like me.
Trance states and hallucinogens.
Metaphorical symbolic mythology and ranting.
About God and a malplaced accident.
And, baby, I don't like basic bitches.
Unless I'm horny.
But, love?
It's a foreign thing that women throw...
#crush
#FallingInLove
120 reads
2 Comments
Pratik
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 1:08am
1st Feb 2025 1:08am
Too close too tight
Crammed together, no space to flee,
Your thigh so warm, pressed into me.
A tiny bench, a crowded class,
Yet all I feel is you—so close, so fast.
A white shirt loose, a tie untamed,
A skirt so short, it plays a game.
A careless shift, a brush, a tease,
Stirring fire with such ease.
No room to move, no space to hide,
My pulse is racing, hands clenched tight.
The scent of you, the heat so near,
My self-control just disappears.
You lean in close, lips near my ear,
A playful whisper, low and clear. ...
Your thigh so warm, pressed into me.
A tiny bench, a crowded class,
Yet all I feel is you—so close, so fast.
A white shirt loose, a tie untamed,
A skirt so short, it plays a game.
A careless shift, a brush, a tease,
Stirring fire with such ease.
No room to move, no space to hide,
My pulse is racing, hands clenched tight.
The scent of you, the heat so near,
My self-control just disappears.
You lean in close, lips near my ear,
A playful whisper, low and clear. ...
#crush
#dating
#romantic
168 reads
0 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 3:27pm
28th Jan 2025 3:27pm
Thighfold Crease
#crush
#lust
#sex
206 reads
2 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 00:14am
23rd Jan 2025 00:14am
Smart-throb
I crush on the smart ones,
who show ease because of effort,
who laugh through the math and thestory
because they get the joke.
who show ease because of effort,
who laugh through the math and thestory
because they get the joke.
#crush
84 reads
5 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 7:08am
17th Jan 2025 7:08am
A Suzy Fantasy...what if?
#crush
#sex
#women
157 reads
2 Comments
fallen_stardust
galaxia
galaxia
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 1:42pm
7th Jan 2025 1:42pm
Look At Me
What Desperation Looks Like]
Glass shards traced
Something worse
Than these scars on my wrist.
I chose to draw blue hearts over those
Other caramel skins,
To prove that something tainted by me
Still had the potential to look beautiful.
When I spoke to the moon,
I didn’t complain.
I asked it to send someone my way
That would look at me like I wished you would.
I wanted someone.
Someone to look.
Look at me like God took time to sculpt me,
Look at me like no boy had ever done.
Look at...
Glass shards traced
Something worse
Than these scars on my wrist.
I chose to draw blue hearts over those
Other caramel skins,
To prove that something tainted by me
Still had the potential to look beautiful.
When I spoke to the moon,
I didn’t complain.
I asked it to send someone my way
That would look at me like I wished you would.
I wanted someone.
Someone to look.
Look at me like God took time to sculpt me,
Look at me like no boy had ever done.
Look at...
#crush
#disappointment
#FallingInLove
#love
#sadness
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