Confessional by Top Critiquers Poems
#confessional
confessional by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
On Life Journey I Keep Trying
Along with my ego side by side walking
Not ego driven on life journey I keep trying
Carried away by its powers soul losing
A risk of the infection of perfection attaining
A beauty in disguise my self I keep reminding
A challenging inner struggle worth leading
Delving into ego complexities soul transforming
In rivers of inner harmony how I long bathing
Not ego driven on life journey I keep trying
Carried away by its powers soul losing
A risk of the infection of perfection attaining
A beauty in disguise my self I keep reminding
A challenging inner struggle worth leading
Delving into ego complexities soul transforming
In rivers of inner harmony how I long bathing
#confessional
#learning
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
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List #8 Things That Are Wrong With Me
1. I have ADHD. Not like "Oh, ha ha, I forgot to do that, I'm so ADD", I mean I have it to the point of it being a clinically diagnosed noticeable disability. I've come to like my colorful, flashing LED lights mind, but ADHD has made my life difficult.
2. I have wildly warped corneas, a condition known as Keratoconus. I'm overdue for having my corneas replaced with a dead person's. I just haven't been in the mood to have it done, you know? Especially since I would have to be completely still for something like 48 hours and I can't be reasonably still for even one hour (see...
2. I have wildly warped corneas, a condition known as Keratoconus. I'm overdue for having my corneas replaced with a dead person's. I just haven't been in the mood to have it done, you know? Especially since I would have to be completely still for something like 48 hours and I can't be reasonably still for even one hour (see...
#confessional
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I Am Waiting For My Apology
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In shadows of the moonlight
Nell'ombra del chiaro di luna
We danced all night to acolytes
In hours of the belfry rung
As doves of summer cooed
Where apostles now rest
In shadows of the moonlight
Nell'ombra del chiaro di luna
Making love neath an olive tree
In gifted hours of the night
Kissing at daybreak
Baciare all'alba
...
Subject: Lush Stories - New message from Adagio
Please do not reply to this email.
A new message has been sent to you from Adagio.
In shadows of the moonlight
Nell'ombra del chiaro di luna
We danced all night to acolytes
In hours of the belfry rung
As doves of summer cooed
Where apostles now rest
In shadows of the moonlight
Nell'ombra del chiaro di luna
Making love neath an olive tree
In gifted hours of the night
Kissing at daybreak
Baciare all'alba
...
#confessional
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commitment issues
stairwell breathe concrete dust and regret
spiralin like my mood
up or down
dependin on the direction you’re goin
the steps know my weight by now
the drag
the heaviness
the purpose
third floor landin
where fluorescents stutter
I test the bottom rail with one foot
steel cold thru sole of my chucks
then ease myself up onto the edge
where certainty meets empty air
I pressed against the railin
metal singin into my palms
and I leaned into nothin
perfect negative space
shaped...
spiralin like my mood
up or down
dependin on the direction you’re goin
the steps know my weight by now
the drag
the heaviness
the purpose
third floor landin
where fluorescents stutter
I test the bottom rail with one foot
steel cold thru sole of my chucks
then ease myself up onto the edge
where certainty meets empty air
I pressed against the railin
metal singin into my palms
and I leaned into nothin
perfect negative space
shaped...
#bipolar
#confessional
#MentalHealth
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You
You are closer to my heart
than my
Darkest secrets are...
than my
Darkest secrets are...
#love
#confessional
#lover
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it's not my fault you're flammable
He says he loves me
like I'm awe inspiring
and some days the way
he looks at me
makes me want to punch myself
because I don't know how to accept
that level of adoration
and I'm sure I don't deserve it
I'm the instigator of all fights
I have a fire inside me that
once it's done burning me
it will light up anyone
unlucky enough to stand too close
maybe that's what it means
to be unlucky in love
not to be without love
but to love something that burns
Some days I wonder
if I...
like I'm awe inspiring
and some days the way
he looks at me
makes me want to punch myself
because I don't know how to accept
that level of adoration
and I'm sure I don't deserve it
I'm the instigator of all fights
I have a fire inside me that
once it's done burning me
it will light up anyone
unlucky enough to stand too close
maybe that's what it means
to be unlucky in love
not to be without love
but to love something that burns
Some days I wonder
if I...
#confessional
#conflict
#love #lover
#love #lover
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Ale for the Ail
Closing my eyes
as I savor this moment
with big gulps of treasure.
Pretty soon, my mind is buh-bye,
drowning the torment.
Looking forward to the pleasure.
Tilting the bottle
to get those drops of goodness
that I need in my life.
Emotions at full throttle,
I must confess
I am riddled with strife.
Looking for satisfaction
in this cylindrical phenomenon
where my worries are diminished.
I enjoy the distraction.
Yes, I am gone.
I need another; I am not finished.
as I savor this moment
with big gulps of treasure.
Pretty soon, my mind is buh-bye,
drowning the torment.
Looking forward to the pleasure.
Tilting the bottle
to get those drops of goodness
that I need in my life.
Emotions at full throttle,
I must confess
I am riddled with strife.
Looking for satisfaction
in this cylindrical phenomenon
where my worries are diminished.
I enjoy the distraction.
Yes, I am gone.
I need another; I am not finished.
#alcohol
#rhyming
#confessional
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Foxes & Wolves
I wondered back then
A long time ago
At fourteen in middle school
A year before the quinceanera I never had
Where I’d be later in life
Everyone my age left middle school
and their teens early
My girlz grew up way too fast
String bikinis
Hickeys on tummies
Laughing in detention
Fights in the restroom
at school or the movie theater
Wasn’t my thing though, never was
I wasn’t scared of fighting
but my mother was a different story
And my friends knew it
They didn’t have to answer to her ...
A long time ago
At fourteen in middle school
A year before the quinceanera I never had
Where I’d be later in life
Everyone my age left middle school
and their teens early
My girlz grew up way too fast
String bikinis
Hickeys on tummies
Laughing in detention
Fights in the restroom
at school or the movie theater
Wasn’t my thing though, never was
I wasn’t scared of fighting
but my mother was a different story
And my friends knew it
They didn’t have to answer to her ...
#confessional
#SelfReflection
#memories #nostalgia
#memories #nostalgia
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Misty Harbinger
misty harbinger
A few days before the fall, and it's already chilling, the sun too much shy, blinking pallid winks to my eye; it's fading heat, showing a morose, pale appearance. i know autumn will surely make me sickly melancholic, as usual, listening to that slowly, sadly dropping rain from the gutter, like a sad sonata of autumn, tripping silently along the lane, and its evening will even send my thoughts wandering in an unlived past....
This morning, i left the marker earlier than i used to do on Thursdays, as i heard the call of the mountain, from the...
A few days before the fall, and it's already chilling, the sun too much shy, blinking pallid winks to my eye; it's fading heat, showing a morose, pale appearance. i know autumn will surely make me sickly melancholic, as usual, listening to that slowly, sadly dropping rain from the gutter, like a sad sonata of autumn, tripping silently along the lane, and its evening will even send my thoughts wandering in an unlived past....
This morning, i left the marker earlier than i used to do on Thursdays, as i heard the call of the mountain, from the...
#confessional
#confusion
#emptiness
#mirror
#SelfDiscovery
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Our cock whacking and why
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#confessional
#myself
#SelfReflection
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My only wish
..
And if my life should end tomorrow
and I sink into dust and dirt,
My only wish is that you'd know
I never meant to make you hurt.
If I could make the time go backwards
If granting wishes was my skill,
I'd put together what has fractured
and we'd laugh together still.
.
And if my life should end tomorrow
and I sink into dust and dirt,
My only wish is that you'd know
I never meant to make you hurt.
If I could make the time go backwards
If granting wishes was my skill,
I'd put together what has fractured
and we'd laugh together still.
.
#confessional
#forgiveness
#love #regret
#love #regret
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Web browser
A lot of history in my web browser
I am looking for things these days
Among them 'how to seduce an AI'
I was trying to seduce my lover
And how it makes sense in your head
If you press turn off on the screen of your computer
In order to start it
It will not
And you just do it
You never ask why
Or if you went for a date with a machine
How would it feel if they told you
In order to conquer it
For it to turn on
You had to wear green
How would it feel.
I am looking for things these days
Among them 'how to seduce an AI'
I was trying to seduce my lover
And how it makes sense in your head
If you press turn off on the screen of your computer
In order to start it
It will not
And you just do it
You never ask why
Or if you went for a date with a machine
How would it feel if they told you
In order to conquer it
For it to turn on
You had to wear green
How would it feel.
#confessional
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