Cinquain Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#cinquain
takis1917
Poem Published
6th Jul 2018 11:57pm
6th Jul 2018 11:57pm
Literary Construction Site
And, then,
it dawns on him...
What had been hitting him
over the head, weren't ideas,
but, bricks...
it dawns on him...
What had been hitting him
over the head, weren't ideas,
but, bricks...
#cinquain
#parody
#satirical
471 reads
7 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
4th Jul 2018 1:58pm
4th Jul 2018 1:58pm
Question Mark
She leaves,
or, so she thinks...
Space she occupies, same!
Distance proportionate to space,
or, thought?...
or, so she thinks...
Space she occupies, same!
Distance proportionate to space,
or, thought?...
#science
#cinquain
#philosophical
484 reads
0 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2018 12:15pm
3rd Jul 2018 12:15pm
Truthfully Speaking
Promise!
I'll stop lying
the exact moment, I
- if ever that moment comes - find
the truth!
I'll stop lying
the exact moment, I
- if ever that moment comes - find
the truth!
#cinquain
#parody
#satirical
500 reads
0 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
30th Jun 2018 2:35pm
30th Jun 2018 2:35pm
If Not Today, When?
Today,
my day starts in...
Five, four, three, two... Abort!
Abort!!! ABORT!!!... I'll try, again,
later...
my day starts in...
Five, four, three, two... Abort!
Abort!!! ABORT!!!... I'll try, again,
later...
#cinquain
#parody
#satirical #funny
#satirical #funny
554 reads
3 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2018 11:27am
23rd Jun 2018 11:27am
Moral Of The Story
Became
the metaphor
for mediocrity;
the spark that never lit a fire!
Human...
the metaphor
for mediocrity;
the spark that never lit a fire!
Human...
#cinquain
639 reads
6 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
20th May 2018 10:07pm
20th May 2018 10:07pm
Welcome!
Welcome
to the age where
you've got nothing to lose
and you've got nothing to salvage...
Relax...
to the age where
you've got nothing to lose
and you've got nothing to salvage...
Relax...
#cinquain
720 reads
11 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
20th May 2018 3:26pm
20th May 2018 3:26pm
Oh, Well...
And, now,
that the future
poets have envisioned,
keeps, bullheadedly, its distance,
welcome...
that the future
poets have envisioned,
keeps, bullheadedly, its distance,
welcome...
#cinquain
581 reads
5 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
18th May 2018 9:15pm
18th May 2018 9:15pm
Santa Fe, Texas, May 2018
didn't do
that much before
not doing much more now
I raise my glass in memory...
Enough!
that much before
not doing much more now
I raise my glass in memory...
Enough!
#cinquain
487 reads
2 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
13th May 2018 4:06pm
13th May 2018 4:06pm
1943
She grins:
"They say that when
you've nothing to live for,
you do not live; and, yet, I'm still
alive"...
"They say that when
you've nothing to live for,
you do not live; and, yet, I'm still
alive"...
#cinquain
703 reads
8 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
1st May 2018 4:13pm
1st May 2018 4:13pm
May Day, 2018
Strike... Not!
Workers' Day... Not!
A Reality Show.
Audience inside the mirror,
watching!
Workers' Day... Not!
A Reality Show.
Audience inside the mirror,
watching!
#cinquain
483 reads
4 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2018 11:16am
22nd Apr 2018 11:16am
She Is, Something
something
she is; something
that is never between
nothing and everything; something
other
she is; something
that is never between
nothing and everything; something
other
#cinquain
554 reads
3 Comments
takis1917
Poem Published
21st Apr 2018 2:13pm
21st Apr 2018 2:13pm
Property Owner
she asked
the police to
evacuate her heart
of all those who occupy it...
Squatters!
the police to
evacuate her heart
of all those who occupy it...
Squatters!
#cinquain
520 reads
5 Comments
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