Poems About Cats Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about cats seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
2nd Jun 2024 2:44am
2nd Jun 2024 2:44am
WAKING UP TO ANOTHER RAVEN POEM (3-7-2001; Galveston Island, Texas)
still asleep
i sensed his close
silent stare
i heard his comforting
steadily rumbling inner
purr r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r
as i felt his fine
double coated manx fur
on his warm
loving paw pad
gently touching my shoulder
then the rough dry lick
of his sandpaper tongue s
sweet tender cat kiss
upon my lower lip
to let me know he was there
so delicately trying to wake me
i slowly awaken
whereupon first opening my eyes
I looked up
into his close up loving gaze
only four inches...
i sensed his close
silent stare
i heard his comforting
steadily rumbling inner
purr r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r
as i felt his fine
double coated manx fur
on his warm
loving paw pad
gently touching my shoulder
then the rough dry lick
of his sandpaper tongue s
sweet tender cat kiss
upon my lower lip
to let me know he was there
so delicately trying to wake me
i slowly awaken
whereupon first opening my eyes
I looked up
into his close up loving gaze
only four inches...
#angels
#BestFriend
#cats
#gratitude
#happiness
102 reads
0 Comments
Northern1
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 10:20pm
22nd May 2024 10:20pm
Pussy Power
I must not move too much while he lingers
He treats me like furniture with fingers
Before jumping down he will arch his back
Glances at me like I'm his favorite snack
Today he caught a fly then he ate her
As an appetizer for what he'll get later
He cries so sweet if he doesn't get fish
Am played like a fool for his every wish
If I call his name he simply ignores me
Wanting something he coyly implores me
With a purr and a soft rub against my leg
Makes me feel guilty for having him beg
He owns himself but...
He treats me like furniture with fingers
Before jumping down he will arch his back
Glances at me like I'm his favorite snack
Today he caught a fly then he ate her
As an appetizer for what he'll get later
He cries so sweet if he doesn't get fish
Am played like a fool for his every wish
If I call his name he simply ignores me
Wanting something he coyly implores me
With a purr and a soft rub against my leg
Makes me feel guilty for having him beg
He owns himself but...
#acceptance
#cats
#vulnerability
200 reads
9 Comments
Orc_Pirate_68
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 7:25am
13th Mar 2024 7:25am
My Cat Every Time I Eat Anything
You had food
But you didn't share,
Because you weren't in the mood,
How fuckin' dare!
But you didn't share,
Because you weren't in the mood,
How fuckin' dare!
#cats
#food
#funny #StreamOfConsciousness
#funny #StreamOfConsciousness
244 reads
5 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 11:13am
8th Feb 2024 11:13am
My Cat Is Richard Ramirez
My cat was born in 2013, the year that Richard died. He popped his clogs through natural causes instead of getting fried.
He had been on Deathrow for a long, long time, missing all the bloodshed. Known as the nightstalker during his rein, a bartender that makes the rum red!
But Dust-man Rusty, my jet-black cat, so loves to maul the mice. If he had hands to hold a knife, I'm sure he would stab and slice.
Every day, when we walk in, getting home and close that door, Rusty sits there whirling his tale, while there is a laid out carcass on the floor.
...
He had been on Deathrow for a long, long time, missing all the bloodshed. Known as the nightstalker during his rein, a bartender that makes the rum red!
But Dust-man Rusty, my jet-black cat, so loves to maul the mice. If he had hands to hold a knife, I'm sure he would stab and slice.
Every day, when we walk in, getting home and close that door, Rusty sits there whirling his tale, while there is a laid out carcass on the floor.
...
#murder
#cats
#animals
223 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Dec 2023 12:54pm
18th Dec 2023 12:54pm
Unlike Other Kittens
I don't know about you guys
but I really do
feel stupid standing
in
front
of
the fireplace with this
stupid Christmas sweater
on unlike other kittens.
but I really do
feel stupid standing
in
front
of
the fireplace with this
stupid Christmas sweater
on unlike other kittens.
#home
#cats
#Christmas
#fiction
#dialogue
145 reads
2 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
16th Dec 2023 00:33am
16th Dec 2023 00:33am
For My Mate’s Cat
Goodnight, sweet Ming,
you were a splash of marmalade
on this our dry and toasty world.
Some olive garden outside space
is now seeing your tail unfurled.
We’ll miss you this coming Christmas,
but know, that cats like you
make inside fires glow.
you were a splash of marmalade
on this our dry and toasty world.
Some olive garden outside space
is now seeing your tail unfurled.
We’ll miss you this coming Christmas,
but know, that cats like you
make inside fires glow.
#love
#death
#cats #animals
#cats #animals
134 reads
0 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
13th Aug 2023 8:58pm
13th Aug 2023 8:58pm
Pants
The Humane Society named her Honeysuckle
I kept that as her middle name
cats don't need middle names
so that might not make sense
but it doesn't have to
I renamed her Annabelle
which often morphs to Bell Bell
sometimes she's just Kitten
even though she's 13
I like calling her Kitten
it may not make sense
but it doesn't have to
my strangest nickname for her
is Pants
if you must know
Its short for Kittenpants
but even I
have enough dignity
to not call her that
I'm sure you'll agree ...
I kept that as her middle name
cats don't need middle names
so that might not make sense
but it doesn't have to
I renamed her Annabelle
which often morphs to Bell Bell
sometimes she's just Kitten
even though she's 13
I like calling her Kitten
it may not make sense
but it doesn't have to
my strangest nickname for her
is Pants
if you must know
Its short for Kittenpants
but even I
have enough dignity
to not call her that
I'm sure you'll agree ...
#love
#cats
#confessional
328 reads
11 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Jul 2023 12:26pm
6th Jul 2023 12:26pm
Haiku #6
cat lying in a corner
crystal clear blue eyes
to the west nothing new.
PAR
crystal clear blue eyes
to the west nothing new.
PAR
#cats
#mirror
#haiku
#myself
#WritingPoetry
117 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Jun 2023 2:30pm
15th Jun 2023 2:30pm
The One We Chose To Lead The Mission
This is Colonel
John Adam
MacTabby who
will lead a starship with
his fellow catstronauts
to a new planet our
sensors located which is called Earth.
John Adam
MacTabby who
will lead a starship with
his fellow catstronauts
to a new planet our
sensors located which is called Earth.
#earth
#cats
#fiction
#dialogue
#scifi
150 reads
2 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
9th Apr 2023 8:25pm
9th Apr 2023 8:25pm
Haiku on one of my cats
Motor in your throat
a small sawmill burring wood
lulling me to sleep
a small sawmill burring wood
lulling me to sleep
#cats
207 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2023 12:09pm
7th Apr 2023 12:09pm
Gotta Get Some Sleep
Gotta get some sleep.
This little kitten's gotta
go work tomorrow.
This little kitten's gotta
go work tomorrow.
#cats
#fiction
#dialogue
#sleep
#senryu
228 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 2:32pm
6th Apr 2023 2:32pm
Those Two Little Kittens Are Auditioning
As you could see, those
two little kittens are
auditioning for Vince
McMahon to become
the newest tag team
superstars in the whole
WWE Universe.
two little kittens are
auditioning for Vince
McMahon to become
the newest tag team
superstars in the whole
WWE Universe.
#cats
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#PopCulture
#sports
165 reads
0 Comments
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